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Old 2013-04-26, 01:54   Link #38301
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You know, after sleeping over this I realized a thing, I have a terrible headache.

Anyway for Fate adoption, if Lindy can get away with having all her family live on Earth, why can't Shirou just adopt a girl that more or less came out from nowhere. And yes, there is Raiga around, and if my plan actually starts producing something more than headaches, there's gonna be an eventual LindyXShirou pairing (Other possibilites being Signum and Reinforce, but Lindy being the most probale one), so I guess that she can take care of things too.

Ya know, mybe I should just dig back my old DenYuuDen crossover attempt and start translating and expanding it, that looks way easier, if it wasn't that my knowledge is limited to the anime and the damned thing started spawning OCs like a plague.
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Old 2013-04-26, 02:26   Link #38302
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You know, after sleeping over this I realized a thing, I have a terrible headache.

Anyway for Fate adoption, if Lindy can get away with having all her family live on Earth, why can't Shirou just adopt a girl that more or less came out from nowhere. And yes, there is Raiga around, and if my plan actually starts producing something more than headaches, there's gonna be an eventual LindyXShirou pairing (Other possibilites being Signum and Reinforce, but Lindy being the most probale one), so I guess that she can take care of things too.

Ya know, mybe I should just dig back my old DenYuuDen crossover attempt and start translating and expanding it, that looks way easier, if it wasn't that my knowledge is limited to the anime and the damned thing started spawning OCs like a plague.
Well the key issues are that

a) Lindy is a person with lots of authority (Admiral)

b) Fate is a convicted criminal

c) Shirou is just Some Guy who popped up out of nowhere and got involved.

If Shirou got Lindy's support then it might work out, particularly if he gives something to TSAB like information or his services. Also you'd need to build up the Fate/Shirou relationship to the point where Fate would feel comfortable with Shirou and would want to stay with him.
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Old 2013-04-26, 03:22   Link #38303
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Well the key issues are that

a) Lindy is a person with lots of authority (Admiral)

b) Fate is a convicted criminal

c) Shirou is just Some Guy who popped up out of nowhere and got involved.

If Shirou got Lindy's support then it might work out, particularly if he gives something to TSAB like information or his services. Also you'd need to build up the Fate/Shirou relationship to the point where Fate would feel comfortable with Shirou and would want to stay with him.
What the tentacle abomination said. You can't just put to people together and say that it works. That's a crappy relationship there. Fate needs to trust Shirou and Lindy is not only older than him, but has a son and is a widower. There is a mountain load of baggage there. Put more thought into it rather than using a relationship to solve a problem that can be fixed without pairing anyone up. Maybe Shirou is better off single.

Also, what happened with Rin in the story? Are they on bad terms or what?
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Old 2013-04-26, 03:35   Link #38304
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First, the Shirou of my story is around the same age as Lindy, second, the two of them have few things in common, they booth lost their loved one because of a powerful magical artifact, the differece is that one had to watch without being able to do a thing and the other was the one that gave the killer blow, they both have baggage, and i plan to use that to bring them closer, it's not an istantaneous thing.

The main purpose of the pairing was to have a resemblance of a 'normal family' for Fate.

As for Rin, she's at the Clock Tower busy being troll... err...taught by the old vampire bastard, and they are still in good terms.
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Old 2013-04-26, 09:24   Link #38305
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What Kireen said made me remember one thing I wanted to ask.

What is TSAB's standing regarding fraternity and similar stuff? I mean if I understand it right in normal military a situation where one member of family is a superior and the other subordinate wouldn't be allowed to avoid preferential treatment. But we have Chrono and Lindy on Asura and there Might have been Clyde and Lindy during the previous Book of Darkness incident (if we are using Movie continuity).
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Old 2013-04-26, 11:09   Link #38306
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Well, guess I'll continue this...

Spoiler for Fire Emblem: Aces:


Spoiler for Current party:


I'm ignoring the level prospect since except for GIl, all of them would be at least.
Large and medium scale battle aren't my forte it seems. Ah well.

Edit: Oh yeah, almost forgot. This is what the continent looks like to me.


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Old 2013-04-26, 14:29   Link #38307
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A bit on the short side, and maybe you should expand the Thoma joins the party scene a bit, it felt a bit rushed. It's not bad, but you should expand it a little.

Also new reports, I feel that my already low quality has dropped again, but I'm still posting them. I feel that it's going to be difficult to top the Jail son in law one.

Spoiler for Report 09&10:
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Old 2013-04-26, 16:27   Link #38308
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A bit on the short side, and maybe you should expand the Thoma joins the party scene a bit, it felt a bit rushed. It's not bad, but you should expand it a little.

Also new reports, I feel that my already low quality has dropped again, but I'm still posting them. I feel that it's going to be difficult to top the Jail son in law one.

Spoiler for Report 09&10:
Don't forget Reinforce Alter.

And it looks like the harem multiplied by 5, adding everyone in the family who sleeps in the same bed as Yuuno.

Yuuno: Zafira, help me!
Zafira: ..... pass. -_-
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Old 2013-04-26, 22:38   Link #38309
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Report 09 was absolutely, completely unexpected. YOU GOT ME GOOD THERE!

Report 10, well... SO SERIOUS! I CAN'T EVEN LAUGH AT HOW SERIOUS THINGS WERE WRITTEN!
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Old 2013-04-26, 22:48   Link #38310
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Reinforce has a yandere side too xD
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Old 2013-04-26, 23:40   Link #38311
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What Kireen said made me remember one thing I wanted to ask.

What is TSAB's standing regarding fraternity and similar stuff? I mean if I understand it right in normal military a situation where one member of family is a superior and the other subordinate wouldn't be allowed to avoid preferential treatment. But we have Chrono and Lindy on Asura and there Might have been Clyde and Lindy during the previous Book of Darkness incident (if we are using Movie continuity).
It looks like they don't have any issue with (possible) nepotism, at least from what I know.
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Old 2013-04-27, 00:01   Link #38312
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I predicted Rule 63 would come xD
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Old 2013-04-27, 04:26   Link #38313
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Report 09 was absolutely, completely unexpected. YOU GOT ME GOOD THERE!

Report 10, well... SO SERIOUS! I CAN'T EVEN LAUGH AT HOW SERIOUS THINGS WERE WRITTEN!
09: Hehe, glad you liked it.

10: Uhm...Sorry?
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Old 2013-04-27, 05:49   Link #38314
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As in the tone is completely different from the other 9 reports. =3
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Old 2013-04-27, 06:08   Link #38315
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Eh, I know, but nothing better came to mind at the time, I just finished writing the aftermath of a huge action sequence when i wrote it, the mood was not the best one fot hat kind of story.
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Old 2013-04-27, 09:07   Link #38316
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Spoiler for Support Conversation: Chrono & Yuuno:
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Old 2013-04-27, 10:10   Link #38317
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Spoiler for Support Conversation: Chrono & Yuuno:
Kind sir, you made my day.
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Old 2013-04-27, 11:41   Link #38318
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Kind sir, you made my day.
Thanks. Chrono still have 5-6 supports to go, considering he's the Lord of the game. I'm planning for Amy (his wife in Nanoha), Nanoha (his GF in Triangle Hearts), Carim (My choice ), Vice, Gilliam and Lindy. Yup, Chrono's mom'll join the game later. She, Amy and Nanoha makes up the Pegasus Trio.
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Old 2013-04-27, 12:33   Link #38319
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XD can you use other characters like Levi?
Levi: Original's Onii-chan?
Chrono: HNGHH!

Or
Kyrie: Iya-n~ Chrono-kun is a perve-
Chrono: Am not! >o<
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Old 2013-04-27, 12:36   Link #38320
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Levi would have one with Fate, Alicia, Precia, Yuuno (referencing Material Days) and Chrono. Chrono would be on the lowest priority due to the fact that he find her over-activeness a bit much.

Kyrie... would probably have the largest number of male supports.
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