Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Fate/Signum?

Sounds sexy :3

lol I posted my last part just as you posted and I saw your page claim post and freaked out 'cause I thought I lost all my text!

But it was posted on the page before this lol. talk about timing!

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

lol I posted my last part just as you posted and I saw your page claim post and freaked out 'cause I thought I lost all my text!

But it was posted on the page before this lol. talk about timing!

And I....HAVE NO FREAKING CLUE WHICH CHOICE TO MAKE!!!!!!!!!!! T.T

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

And I....HAVE NO FREAKING CLUE WHICH CHOICE TO MAKE!!!!!!!!!!! T.T

XD yay, my plan worked!

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

XD yay, my plan worked!

You planned this all along?!

*Grabs Satashi and starts strangling and shaking Satashi around*

CURSE YOU!!! CURSE YOU!!!

[Thesinwithin]

Originally Posted by Satashi

[Shameless plug] Because blond hair foxy ladies were meant to be babysitters. [/shameless plug]

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.2a:

I was a little annoyed that Nanoha refused to talk to me about what was bothering her in the car, and even more so when she simply waved when I dropped her off at college. I didn't mind taking Caro home, as I still had Nanoha's spare key, but the least she could do would be to explain her situation to me.

I treated Caro and Erio to a kid's meal at the local (insert popular fast food chain here) and put my cheek against my palm while thinking as they ate. I couldn't tell at first, but in the back of my mind I knew that Nanoha wasn't perfectly healthy. When I discovered her cabinet full of medicine I began to worry, but now I was really concerned. After all these years of being lonely, why did I have to fall for a human who was sick? Life just wasn't fair.

After our meal I made due on my promise to Erio and bought the kids and myself ice cream to snack on before finally taking the pink haired one home. She politely asked if I would like to visit a while and my boy quickly took her up on the offer. Although I didn't mind, I felt a little weird when she started baking. An hour later the front door was opened and the smell of several baked goods wafted around, drawing in customers.

Acting on impulse, I started catering to them, taking request and ringing up the sales. Caro seemed to know a lot despite being so young and even Erio started helping out, much to my delight. It seemed as if he had a crush on the short little thing. Not that I blame him, she just screamed 'cute' with that floppy hat of hers.

After almost three hours I finally got a text message from Nanoha saying she was coming back. I called quickly to tell her to wait for me to pick her up but she was already at the bus stop. With a sigh I reluctantly agreed to stay put and continued to watch the store. Not surprisingly, almost everything that Nanoha pre-made was almost sold out and Caro's own rolls and buns were starting to take the shelves as well.

Of course I snatched a cinnamon roll as payment for working.

When Nanoha arrived she gave me a surprised look at the apron I was wearing and glanced around the shop happily at the few customers. She prolonged our conversation further by making small talk with each of them and finding out that I already took the one special request that Caro was currently working on.

Finally she stood in front of me and smiled shyly, rubbing her hands together. "So," She spoke softly. "how was your day?"

"Go tell Caro you're back," I stated in a commanding but still requesting way. "And them come to me so we can talk... okay sweetie?" She sighed and looked down. "If you don't want to tell me, you don't have to," I offered to her gently. "But I'm going to worry over lots of different things until I find out on my own."

"Figures..." She walked by me and into the back room, leaving me to tend to the customers once again. They left soon enough and Nanoha returned to me, taking my hand and leading me back to the kitchen and up the stairs. "Caro can watch the store by herself for a few moments, she's been doing it since she could walk."

"Okay," I sat on her couch and, to my surprise, she sat right next to me so our sides were touching. I guess she wanted to be close to me but not have to look me in the eyes. "So," I encouraged her gently. "Just tell me straight up, be blunt and it will be over with really fast?"

"Right." She nodded. "I have Systemic lupus erythematosus."

"...What?" A disease I didn't know about? I really was behind on my studies...

"It's... a little hard to explain." Nanoha rubbed her hands together. "Um... Do you want me to get technical?"

"I'd understand it, but right now just please tell me what it is?"

Nanoha looked at her lap and smiled lightly when I reached over to take her hand. "I guess you could sum it up with 'a little bit of everything'. I have joint pain sometimes... rashes sometimes get on my skin... get sick... a little anemic... it... kind of affects my insides too.... as you saw today."

"Is it really bad?"

"Painful." She admitted softly. "Sometimes... it hurts really bad." She turned to look at me and I saw a little bit of fear in her eyes mixed with a lot of courage. "It can't be cured but... the survival rate has gone up dramatically lately. There's a ninety percent chance that I won't die from it. My body sometimes gives me trouble.. Like some days I can't seem to move properly, other times I just get so weak I can barely get out of bed. I have missed a lot of school but since I study non-stop my grades were never affected. It comes and it goes but they can't make it stay away."

"You'll just... keep getting the symptoms?"

"Mm..." She looked away again. "I take medicine for it, but even that is bad sometimes. there's another side-effect of it from taking too much. My body is fighting it, but its... not doing a good job. It over compensates, like... it's killing me trying to save me."

I felt my chest tighten. "What... if you could be cured?"

"To ease this pain?" She asked softly, eyes closed. "Anything."

I moved over to hug her and got one back. Gently my hand stroked down through her hair while I thought. My blood... could cure her. If it was treatable by pills... if the survival rate was that high... if it didn't have to be removed from her body... but...

I would have to turn her.

A.)Nanoha
B.)Fate

First off.

Spoiler for Reaction:

HOWSE EM DEE APPROVES OF THIS POST. AND WOULD LIKE TO POINT OUT THAT NANOHA MOST LIKELY DOES NOT HAVE LUPUS AND HER DOCTORS AND WIKIPEDIA ARE PROBABLY WRONG. BECAUSE IT IS NEVER LUPUS

/house nerd.

Do not take that seriously.

:-DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I vote A

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Satashi

[Shameless plug] Because blond hair foxy ladies were meant to be babysitters. [/shameless plug]

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.2a:

I was a little annoyed that Nanoha refused to talk to me about what was bothering her in the car, and even more so when she simply waved when I dropped her off at college. I didn't mind taking Caro home, as I still had Nanoha's spare key, but the least she could do would be to explain her situation to me.

I treated Caro and Erio to a kid's meal at the local (insert popular fast food chain here) and put my cheek against my palm while thinking as they ate. I couldn't tell at first, but in the back of my mind I knew that Nanoha wasn't perfectly healthy. When I discovered her cabinet full of medicine I began to worry, but now I was really concerned. After all these years of being lonely, why did I have to fall for a human who was sick? Life just wasn't fair.

After our meal I made due on my promise to Erio and bought the kids and myself ice cream to snack on before finally taking the pink haired one home. She politely asked if I would like to visit a while and my boy quickly took her up on the offer. Although I didn't mind, I felt a little weird when she started baking. An hour later the front door was opened and the smell of several baked goods wafted around, drawing in customers.

Acting on impulse, I started catering to them, taking request and ringing up the sales. Caro seemed to know a lot despite being so young and even Erio started helping out, much to my delight. It seemed as if he had a crush on the short little thing. Not that I blame him, she just screamed 'cute' with that floppy hat of hers.

After almost three hours I finally got a text message from Nanoha saying she was coming back. I called quickly to tell her to wait for me to pick her up but she was already at the bus stop. With a sigh I reluctantly agreed to stay put and continued to watch the store. Not surprisingly, almost everything that Nanoha pre-made was almost sold out and Caro's own rolls and buns were starting to take the shelves as well.

Of course I snatched a cinnamon roll as payment for working.

When Nanoha arrived she gave me a surprised look at the apron I was wearing and glanced around the shop happily at the few customers. She prolonged our conversation further by making small talk with each of them and finding out that I already took the one special request that Caro was currently working on.

Finally she stood in front of me and smiled shyly, rubbing her hands together. "So," She spoke softly. "how was your day?"

"Go tell Caro you're back," I stated in a commanding but still requesting way. "And them come to me so we can talk... okay sweetie?" She sighed and looked down. "If you don't want to tell me, you don't have to," I offered to her gently. "But I'm going to worry over lots of different things until I find out on my own."

"Figures..." She walked by me and into the back room, leaving me to tend to the customers once again. They left soon enough and Nanoha returned to me, taking my hand and leading me back to the kitchen and up the stairs. "Caro can watch the store by herself for a few moments, she's been doing it since she could walk."

"Okay," I sat on her couch and, to my surprise, she sat right next to me so our sides were touching. I guess she wanted to be close to me but not have to look me in the eyes. "So," I encouraged her gently. "Just tell me straight up, be blunt and it will be over with really fast?"

"Right." She nodded. "I have Systemic lupus erythematosus."

"...What?" A disease I didn't know about? I really was behind on my studies...

"It's... a little hard to explain." Nanoha rubbed her hands together. "Um... Do you want me to get technical?"

"I'd understand it, but right now just please tell me what it is?"

Nanoha looked at her lap and smiled lightly when I reached over to take her hand. "I guess you could sum it up with 'a little bit of everything'. I have joint pain sometimes... rashes sometimes get on my skin... get sick... a little anemic... it... kind of affects my insides too.... as you saw today."

"Is it really bad?"

"Painful." She admitted softly. "Sometimes... it hurts really bad." She turned to look at me and I saw a little bit of fear in her eyes mixed with a lot of courage. "It can't be cured but... the survival rate has gone up dramatically lately. There's a ninety percent chance that I won't die from it. My body sometimes gives me trouble.. Like some days I can't seem to move properly, other times I just get so weak I can barely get out of bed. I have missed a lot of school but since I study non-stop my grades were never affected. It comes and it goes but they can't make it stay away."

"You'll just... keep getting the symptoms?"

"Mm..." She looked away again. "I take medicine for it, but even that is bad sometimes. there's another side-effect of it from taking too much. My body is fighting it, but its... not doing a good job. It over compensates, like... it's killing me trying to save me."

I felt my chest tighten. "What... if you could be cured?"

"To ease this pain?" She asked softly, eyes closed. "Anything."

I moved over to hug her and got one back. Gently my hand stroked down through her hair while I thought. My blood... could cure her. If it was treatable by pills... if the survival rate was that high... if it didn't have to be removed from her body... but...

I would have to turn her.

A.)Nanoha
B.)Fate

poor Nanoha

I wonder how Nanoha will react, when Fate really say that

B
I want to hear more about Fate's thought about the issue of turning Nanoha^^

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by Satashi

[Shameless plug] Because blond hair foxy ladies were meant to be babysitters. [/shameless plug]

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.2a:

I was a little annoyed that Nanoha refused to talk to me about what was bothering her in the car, and even more so when she simply waved when I dropped her off at college. I didn't mind taking Caro home, as I still had Nanoha's spare key, but the least she could do would be to explain her situation to me.

I treated Caro and Erio to a kid's meal at the local (insert popular fast food chain here) and put my cheek against my palm while thinking as they ate. I couldn't tell at first, but in the back of my mind I knew that Nanoha wasn't perfectly healthy. When I discovered her cabinet full of medicine I began to worry, but now I was really concerned. After all these years of being lonely, why did I have to fall for a human who was sick? Life just wasn't fair.

After our meal I made due on my promise to Erio and bought the kids and myself ice cream to snack on before finally taking the pink haired one home. She politely asked if I would like to visit a while and my boy quickly took her up on the offer. Although I didn't mind, I felt a little weird when she started baking. An hour later the front door was opened and the smell of several baked goods wafted around, drawing in customers.

Acting on impulse, I started catering to them, taking request and ringing up the sales. Caro seemed to know a lot despite being so young and even Erio started helping out, much to my delight. It seemed as if he had a crush on the short little thing. Not that I blame him, she just screamed 'cute' with that floppy hat of hers.

After almost three hours I finally got a text message from Nanoha saying she was coming back. I called quickly to tell her to wait for me to pick her up but she was already at the bus stop. With a sigh I reluctantly agreed to stay put and continued to watch the store. Not surprisingly, almost everything that Nanoha pre-made was almost sold out and Caro's own rolls and buns were starting to take the shelves as well.

Of course I snatched a cinnamon roll as payment for working.

When Nanoha arrived she gave me a surprised look at the apron I was wearing and glanced around the shop happily at the few customers. She prolonged our conversation further by making small talk with each of them and finding out that I already took the one special request that Caro was currently working on.

Finally she stood in front of me and smiled shyly, rubbing her hands together. "So," She spoke softly. "how was your day?"

"Go tell Caro you're back," I stated in a commanding but still requesting way. "And them come to me so we can talk... okay sweetie?" She sighed and looked down. "If you don't want to tell me, you don't have to," I offered to her gently. "But I'm going to worry over lots of different things until I find out on my own."

"Figures..." She walked by me and into the back room, leaving me to tend to the customers once again. They left soon enough and Nanoha returned to me, taking my hand and leading me back to the kitchen and up the stairs. "Caro can watch the store by herself for a few moments, she's been doing it since she could walk."

"Okay," I sat on her couch and, to my surprise, she sat right next to me so our sides were touching. I guess she wanted to be close to me but not have to look me in the eyes. "So," I encouraged her gently. "Just tell me straight up, be blunt and it will be over with really fast?"

"Right." She nodded. "I have Systemic lupus erythematosus."

"...What?" A disease I didn't know about? I really was behind on my studies...

"It's... a little hard to explain." Nanoha rubbed her hands together. "Um... Do you want me to get technical?"

"I'd understand it, but right now just please tell me what it is?"

Nanoha looked at her lap and smiled lightly when I reached over to take her hand. "I guess you could sum it up with 'a little bit of everything'. I have joint pain sometimes... rashes sometimes get on my skin... get sick... a little anemic... it... kind of affects my insides too.... as you saw today."

"Is it really bad?"

"Painful." She admitted softly. "Sometimes... it hurts really bad." She turned to look at me and I saw a little bit of fear in her eyes mixed with a lot of courage. "It can't be cured but... the survival rate has gone up dramatically lately. There's a ninety percent chance that I won't die from it. My body sometimes gives me trouble.. Like some days I can't seem to move properly, other times I just get so weak I can barely get out of bed. I have missed a lot of school but since I study non-stop my grades were never affected. It comes and it goes but they can't make it stay away."

"You'll just... keep getting the symptoms?"

"Mm..." She looked away again. "I take medicine for it, but even that is bad sometimes. there's another side-effect of it from taking too much. My body is fighting it, but its... not doing a good job. It over compensates, like... it's killing me trying to save me."

I felt my chest tighten. "What... if you could be cured?"

"To ease this pain?" She asked softly, eyes closed. "Anything."

I moved over to hug her and got one back. Gently my hand stroked down through her hair while I thought. My blood... could cure her. If it was treatable by pills... if the survival rate was that high... if it didn't have to be removed from her body... but...

I would have to turn her.

A.)Nanoha
B.)Fate

You make me sad .
Voting B too. Would like to hear more about it.

[KoSSa]

Originally Posted by Satashi

[Shameless plug] Because blond hair foxy ladies were meant to be babysitters. [/shameless plug]

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.2a:

I was a little annoyed that Nanoha refused to talk to me about what was bothering her in the car, and even more so when she simply waved when I dropped her off at college. I didn't mind taking Caro home, as I still had Nanoha's spare key, but the least she could do would be to explain her situation to me.

I treated Caro and Erio to a kid's meal at the local (insert popular fast food chain here) and put my cheek against my palm while thinking as they ate. I couldn't tell at first, but in the back of my mind I knew that Nanoha wasn't perfectly healthy. When I discovered her cabinet full of medicine I began to worry, but now I was really concerned. After all these years of being lonely, why did I have to fall for a human who was sick? Life just wasn't fair.

After our meal I made due on my promise to Erio and bought the kids and myself ice cream to snack on before finally taking the pink haired one home. She politely asked if I would like to visit a while and my boy quickly took her up on the offer. Although I didn't mind, I felt a little weird when she started baking. An hour later the front door was opened and the smell of several baked goods wafted around, drawing in customers.

Acting on impulse, I started catering to them, taking request and ringing up the sales. Caro seemed to know a lot despite being so young and even Erio started helping out, much to my delight. It seemed as if he had a crush on the short little thing. Not that I blame him, she just screamed 'cute' with that floppy hat of hers.

After almost three hours I finally got a text message from Nanoha saying she was coming back. I called quickly to tell her to wait for me to pick her up but she was already at the bus stop. With a sigh I reluctantly agreed to stay put and continued to watch the store. Not surprisingly, almost everything that Nanoha pre-made was almost sold out and Caro's own rolls and buns were starting to take the shelves as well.

Of course I snatched a cinnamon roll as payment for working.

When Nanoha arrived she gave me a surprised look at the apron I was wearing and glanced around the shop happily at the few customers. She prolonged our conversation further by making small talk with each of them and finding out that I already took the one special request that Caro was currently working on.

Finally she stood in front of me and smiled shyly, rubbing her hands together. "So," She spoke softly. "how was your day?"

"Go tell Caro you're back," I stated in a commanding but still requesting way. "And them come to me so we can talk... okay sweetie?" She sighed and looked down. "If you don't want to tell me, you don't have to," I offered to her gently. "But I'm going to worry over lots of different things until I find out on my own."

"Figures..." She walked by me and into the back room, leaving me to tend to the customers once again. They left soon enough and Nanoha returned to me, taking my hand and leading me back to the kitchen and up the stairs. "Caro can watch the store by herself for a few moments, she's been doing it since she could walk."

"Okay," I sat on her couch and, to my surprise, she sat right next to me so our sides were touching. I guess she wanted to be close to me but not have to look me in the eyes. "So," I encouraged her gently. "Just tell me straight up, be blunt and it will be over with really fast?"

"Right." She nodded. "I have Systemic lupus erythematosus."

"...What?" A disease I didn't know about? I really was behind on my studies...

"It's... a little hard to explain." Nanoha rubbed her hands together. "Um... Do you want me to get technical?"

"I'd understand it, but right now just please tell me what it is?"

Nanoha looked at her lap and smiled lightly when I reached over to take her hand. "I guess you could sum it up with 'a little bit of everything'. I have joint pain sometimes... rashes sometimes get on my skin... get sick... a little anemic... it... kind of affects my insides too.... as you saw today."

"Is it really bad?"

"Painful." She admitted softly. "Sometimes... it hurts really bad." She turned to look at me and I saw a little bit of fear in her eyes mixed with a lot of courage. "It can't be cured but... the survival rate has gone up dramatically lately. There's a ninety percent chance that I won't die from it. My body sometimes gives me trouble.. Like some days I can't seem to move properly, other times I just get so weak I can barely get out of bed. I have missed a lot of school but since I study non-stop my grades were never affected. It comes and it goes but they can't make it stay away."

"You'll just... keep getting the symptoms?"

"Mm..." She looked away again. "I take medicine for it, but even that is bad sometimes. there's another side-effect of it from taking too much. My body is fighting it, but its... not doing a good job. It over compensates, like... it's killing me trying to save me."

I felt my chest tighten. "What... if you could be cured?"

"To ease this pain?" She asked softly, eyes closed. "Anything."

I moved over to hug her and got one back. Gently my hand stroked down through her hair while I thought. My blood... could cure her. If it was treatable by pills... if the survival rate was that high... if it didn't have to be removed from her body... but...

I would have to turn her.

A.)Nanoha
B.)Fate

Well and we are where I wanted to be. I wote for Nanoha cause I wan't read what hse will think about it.
A

[Thesinwithin]

-feels like she's the only one amused by the Lupus thing-

Guys, question. I want to start work on my new Nanoha fic idea, but I want to finish this other fic that I'm working on first. What do you think? Should I just do both, or should I push myself to finish Passages before I start work on this new Nanoha piece?

[nictory]

Oh my god! A
I want to know what Nanoha will say if Fate asks her to turn her.

[Advent000]

Originally Posted by Satashi

[Shameless plug] Because blond hair foxy ladies were meant to be babysitters. [/shameless plug]

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.2a:

I was a little annoyed that Nanoha refused to talk to me about what was bothering her in the car, and even more so when she simply waved when I dropped her off at college. I didn't mind taking Caro home, as I still had Nanoha's spare key, but the least she could do would be to explain her situation to me.

I treated Caro and Erio to a kid's meal at the local (insert popular fast food chain here) and put my cheek against my palm while thinking as they ate. I couldn't tell at first, but in the back of my mind I knew that Nanoha wasn't perfectly healthy. When I discovered her cabinet full of medicine I began to worry, but now I was really concerned. After all these years of being lonely, why did I have to fall for a human who was sick? Life just wasn't fair.

After our meal I made due on my promise to Erio and bought the kids and myself ice cream to snack on before finally taking the pink haired one home. She politely asked if I would like to visit a while and my boy quickly took her up on the offer. Although I didn't mind, I felt a little weird when she started baking. An hour later the front door was opened and the smell of several baked goods wafted around, drawing in customers.

Acting on impulse, I started catering to them, taking request and ringing up the sales. Caro seemed to know a lot despite being so young and even Erio started helping out, much to my delight. It seemed as if he had a crush on the short little thing. Not that I blame him, she just screamed 'cute' with that floppy hat of hers.

After almost three hours I finally got a text message from Nanoha saying she was coming back. I called quickly to tell her to wait for me to pick her up but she was already at the bus stop. With a sigh I reluctantly agreed to stay put and continued to watch the store. Not surprisingly, almost everything that Nanoha pre-made was almost sold out and Caro's own rolls and buns were starting to take the shelves as well.

Of course I snatched a cinnamon roll as payment for working.

When Nanoha arrived she gave me a surprised look at the apron I was wearing and glanced around the shop happily at the few customers. She prolonged our conversation further by making small talk with each of them and finding out that I already took the one special request that Caro was currently working on.

Finally she stood in front of me and smiled shyly, rubbing her hands together. "So," She spoke softly. "how was your day?"

"Go tell Caro you're back," I stated in a commanding but still requesting way. "And them come to me so we can talk... okay sweetie?" She sighed and looked down. "If you don't want to tell me, you don't have to," I offered to her gently. "But I'm going to worry over lots of different things until I find out on my own."

"Figures..." She walked by me and into the back room, leaving me to tend to the customers once again. They left soon enough and Nanoha returned to me, taking my hand and leading me back to the kitchen and up the stairs. "Caro can watch the store by herself for a few moments, she's been doing it since she could walk."

"Okay," I sat on her couch and, to my surprise, she sat right next to me so our sides were touching. I guess she wanted to be close to me but not have to look me in the eyes. "So," I encouraged her gently. "Just tell me straight up, be blunt and it will be over with really fast?"

"Right." She nodded. "I have Systemic lupus erythematosus."

"...What?" A disease I didn't know about? I really was behind on my studies...

"It's... a little hard to explain." Nanoha rubbed her hands together. "Um... Do you want me to get technical?"

"I'd understand it, but right now just please tell me what it is?"

Nanoha looked at her lap and smiled lightly when I reached over to take her hand. "I guess you could sum it up with 'a little bit of everything'. I have joint pain sometimes... rashes sometimes get on my skin... get sick... a little anemic... it... kind of affects my insides too.... as you saw today."

"Is it really bad?"

"Painful." She admitted softly. "Sometimes... it hurts really bad." She turned to look at me and I saw a little bit of fear in her eyes mixed with a lot of courage. "It can't be cured but... the survival rate has gone up dramatically lately. There's a ninety percent chance that I won't die from it. My body sometimes gives me trouble.. Like some days I can't seem to move properly, other times I just get so weak I can barely get out of bed. I have missed a lot of school but since I study non-stop my grades were never affected. It comes and it goes but they can't make it stay away."

"You'll just... keep getting the symptoms?"

"Mm..." She looked away again. "I take medicine for it, but even that is bad sometimes. there's another side-effect of it from taking too much. My body is fighting it, but its... not doing a good job. It over compensates, like... it's killing me trying to save me."

I felt my chest tighten. "What... if you could be cured?"

"To ease this pain?" She asked softly, eyes closed. "Anything."

I moved over to hug her and got one back. Gently my hand stroked down through her hair while I thought. My blood... could cure her. If it was treatable by pills... if the survival rate was that high... if it didn't have to be removed from her body... but...

I would have to turn her.

A.)Nanoha
B.)Fate

Nanoha's gonna get turned, excelent.

A

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

-feels like she's the only one amused by the Lupus thing-

Guys, question. I want to start work on my new Nanoha fic idea, but I want to finish this other fic that I'm working on first. What do you think? Should I just do both, or should I push myself to finish Passages before I start work on this new Nanoha piece?

Depends, how much longer will Passages be, and approximately how long will it take you to finish it.

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

Guys, question. I want to start work on my new Nanoha fic idea, but I want to finish this other fic that I'm working on first. What do you think? Should I just do both, or should I push myself to finish Passages before I start work on this new Nanoha piece?

My advice is to finish Passages first and then begin on something new. There is a risk Passages will never be completed or the quality goes down if you do both at the same time. (Experience)

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

-feels like she's the only one amused by the Lupus thing-

Guys, question. I want to start work on my new Nanoha fic idea, but I want to finish this other fic that I'm working on first. What do you think? Should I just do both, or should I push myself to finish Passages before I start work on this new Nanoha piece?

hm, maybe you should work where the flow is
when it's easier for you to start a new Nanoha fic, maybe you get some ideas fore passages

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

-feels like she's the only one amused by the Lupus thing-

Guys, question. I want to start work on my new Nanoha fic idea, but I want to finish this other fic that I'm working on first. What do you think? Should I just do both, or should I push myself to finish Passages before I start work on this new Nanoha piece?

If you can handle two at once then I say go for it. Sometimes it doesn't work very well, though *looks at Dream Wing*

Maybe you should stick with just one, but pick the one you want to do. If you want to do your Nanoha one but your current one is holding you down, you won't write well on it/won't write at all because you just want the Nanoha one.

That make Sense?

[Evangelion Xgouki]

I...have...RETURNED!!

*trips and epic faceplants*

Urg...need more sleep after the con

Glad to see some people enjoyed the not-planned continuation of 18 . I may or may not continue depending on if I get more inspiration or not . As for where I was all weekend...I'll just copy-paste from my OC post to spare the non-Outer Cadians from venturing in the OC thread

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After a weekend of about 3-4 hours of sleep a night, staffing the Karaoke room into the late evening (and listening to some songs over and over and over again ), helping out at Yaoi Con sponsored events, lightening my wallet in the Dealers Room, and many cosplays over the 4-day con I must now return to being 'normal' . But first to show off some pics from the con

Spoiler for Fanime 2008:

My Staff and Pre-reg badge



Various cosplay pics I got



What's a Haruhi Gathering without some genderbending?



And for all you Touhou fans



And yes, I did manage to somehow finish my cosplay



Thanks to a friend who was also on Fanime staff I was able to get into the Meet Gianax event (ticket only) to meet the last-minute guest addition which consisted of 50 TTGL staff members including Gianax CEO, TTGL assistant director (the director was unable to come due to being busy making the movie), and numerous animators. Didn't get a chance to talk to them all, but I did get to talk to some...and come away with some sketches :3



Oh, and did you know the Revoltech Gurren-Lagann just came out?

[illidan182]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

Guys, question. I want to start work on my new Nanoha fic idea, but I want to finish this other fic that I'm working on first. What do you think? Should I just do both, or should I push myself to finish Passages before I start work on this new Nanoha piece?

finish. the.passage.first.

Don't be like me and write multiple storys (now at 7 diffrent ones T_T) at the same time, its draining, and you get so confused it feels like your going to die from it all!

And i choose.... this is way tough but I think I'll go with good ol' A

[Sam the Onion]

Lazy man's backlog between VN spree

Originally Posted by Kha

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Originally Posted by Satashi

[Shameless plug] Because blond hair foxy ladies were meant to be babysitters. [/shameless plug]

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.2a:

*snip*

A.)Nanoha
B.)Fate

I want a hat like Caro (new emoticon :O ) Also I will ignore every question about my sexual orientation because of wanting a pink baggy hat

When I read that Nanoha has lupus I though she's a warewolf I'm a bit disappointed that it wasn't it

B

Also, happy to see that Momo-chan's corruption has gone this far

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

[Shameless plug] Because blond hair foxy ladies were meant to be babysitters. [/shameless plug]

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.2a:

I was a little annoyed that Nanoha refused to talk to me about what was bothering her in the car, and even more so when she simply waved when I dropped her off at college. I didn't mind taking Caro home, as I still had Nanoha's spare key, but the least she could do would be to explain her situation to me.

I treated Caro and Erio to a kid's meal at the local (insert popular fast food chain here) and put my cheek against my palm while thinking as they ate. I couldn't tell at first, but in the back of my mind I knew that Nanoha wasn't perfectly healthy. When I discovered her cabinet full of medicine I began to worry, but now I was really concerned. After all these years of being lonely, why did I have to fall for a human who was sick? Life just wasn't fair.

After our meal I made due on my promise to Erio and bought the kids and myself ice cream to snack on before finally taking the pink haired one home. She politely asked if I would like to visit a while and my boy quickly took her up on the offer. Although I didn't mind, I felt a little weird when she started baking. An hour later the front door was opened and the smell of several baked goods wafted around, drawing in customers.

Acting on impulse, I started catering to them, taking request and ringing up the sales. Caro seemed to know a lot despite being so young and even Erio started helping out, much to my delight. It seemed as if he had a crush on the short little thing. Not that I blame him, she just screamed 'cute' with that floppy hat of hers.

After almost three hours I finally got a text message from Nanoha saying she was coming back. I called quickly to tell her to wait for me to pick her up but she was already at the bus stop. With a sigh I reluctantly agreed to stay put and continued to watch the store. Not surprisingly, almost everything that Nanoha pre-made was almost sold out and Caro's own rolls and buns were starting to take the shelves as well.

Of course I snatched a cinnamon roll as payment for working.

When Nanoha arrived she gave me a surprised look at the apron I was wearing and glanced around the shop happily at the few customers. She prolonged our conversation further by making small talk with each of them and finding out that I already took the one special request that Caro was currently working on.

Finally she stood in front of me and smiled shyly, rubbing her hands together. "So," She spoke softly. "how was your day?"

"Go tell Caro you're back," I stated in a commanding but still requesting way. "And them come to me so we can talk... okay sweetie?" She sighed and looked down. "If you don't want to tell me, you don't have to," I offered to her gently. "But I'm going to worry over lots of different things until I find out on my own."

"Figures..." She walked by me and into the back room, leaving me to tend to the customers once again. They left soon enough and Nanoha returned to me, taking my hand and leading me back to the kitchen and up the stairs. "Caro can watch the store by herself for a few moments, she's been doing it since she could walk."

"Okay," I sat on her couch and, to my surprise, she sat right next to me so our sides were touching. I guess she wanted to be close to me but not have to look me in the eyes. "So," I encouraged her gently. "Just tell me straight up, be blunt and it will be over with really fast?"

"Right." She nodded. "I have Systemic lupus erythematosus."

"...What?" A disease I didn't know about? I really was behind on my studies...

"It's... a little hard to explain." Nanoha rubbed her hands together. "Um... Do you want me to get technical?"

"I'd understand it, but right now just please tell me what it is?"

Nanoha looked at her lap and smiled lightly when I reached over to take her hand. "I guess you could sum it up with 'a little bit of everything'. I have joint pain sometimes... rashes sometimes get on my skin... get sick... a little anemic... it... kind of affects my insides too.... as you saw today."

"Is it really bad?"

"Painful." She admitted softly. "Sometimes... it hurts really bad." She turned to look at me and I saw a little bit of fear in her eyes mixed with a lot of courage. "It can't be cured but... the survival rate has gone up dramatically lately. There's a ninety percent chance that I won't die from it. My body sometimes gives me trouble.. Like some days I can't seem to move properly, other times I just get so weak I can barely get out of bed. I have missed a lot of school but since I study non-stop my grades were never affected. It comes and it goes but they can't make it stay away."

"You'll just... keep getting the symptoms?"

"Mm..." She looked away again. "I take medicine for it, but even that is bad sometimes. there's another side-effect of it from taking too much. My body is fighting it, but its... not doing a good job. It over compensates, like... it's killing me trying to save me."

I felt my chest tighten. "What... if you could be cured?"

"To ease this pain?" She asked softly, eyes closed. "Anything."

I moved over to hug her and got one back. Gently my hand stroked down through her hair while I thought. My blood... could cure her. If it was treatable by pills... if the survival rate was that high... if it didn't have to be removed from her body... but...

I would have to turn her.

A.)Nanoha
B.)Fate

*Reads the line above the spoiler box and chokes on ice cream* EVEN FATE!?!

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

-feels like she's the only one amused by the Lupus thing-

Guys, question. I want to start work on my new Nanoha fic idea, but I want to finish this other fic that I'm working on first. What do you think? Should I just do both, or should I push myself to finish Passages before I start work on this new Nanoha piece?

You're not alone I laughed at the Lupus thing to *is also a giant House nerd*

Also I say write the new piece. If you force yourself to write it won't come out as good as it could be. Though you could be like me and juggle five things at once ^^;

B


Edit: Yay for writing in the wrong word. While working on MBLZ I meant to write this: Yuuno offered to make food.
Instead I wrote: "Yuuno offered to make babies."
This is why I shouldn't watch tv and write at the same time.

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*Reads the line above the spoiler box and chokes on ice cream* EVEN FATE!?!

I'd say so.

[illidan182]

Originally Posted by Keroko

I'd say so.

Curse you Keroko! As if I didn't need images of Kitsune!Fate already xD

EDIT: Pageclaim for kitsune!Fate haha