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Old 2008-06-20, 22:07   Link #6581
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ALERT! ALERT!

New Challenger Aproaching!

Upcoming OC for Vita, Shadows of the Past

( I think that Teh Shiny Sword and Black Wolf are going to like it ^.^)

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Ohhhh that looks fun Rick !!! *wonders how its going to turn out*
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Old 2008-06-20, 22:43   Link #6582
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(Takes a deep breath)
Ok, here's my first attempt at Nanoha Fan fiction. This goes back to The Shiny Sword's challenge to turn a song into a Fanfic. NanoFate.

It's All Coming Back to Me Now by Celine Dion

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Last edited by Allquall; 2008-06-21 at 20:38. Reason: I get to say words that rhyme with "Luck!"
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Old 2008-06-20, 22:54   Link #6583
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Urgh, been a week since I finished writing something. Signum's finally here. I have to admit, writing an introspective on a closed character is hard.

Of course...now I have Erio and Zafira left...ouch.

Spoiler for Regrets:


And for anyone who actually reads FLN, I'm halfway done the next chapter...it's going a little slower than I want .
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Old 2008-06-20, 23:33   Link #6584
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(Takes a deep breath)
Ok, here's my first attempt at Nanoha Fan fiction. This goes back to The Shiny Sword's challenge to turn a song into a Fanfic. NanoFate.

It's All Coming Back to Me Now by Celine Dion

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I really loved this piece of yours. It is beautifully written
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Old 2008-06-20, 23:53   Link #6585
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This looks like so much fun! I'm done lurking; I want in.
Hello! Welcome to the thread! *throws confetti* Please enjoy your stay here. ^^
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Old 2008-06-21, 00:06   Link #6586
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Hmm....Jasper is actually being helpful, but maybe he's just leading Vivio into a trap. *gasp* That would be so evil. Where did Black Wolfness go? I'm worried about that. 20 centurions!?! How are they supposed to defeat them all?? Things are looking quite bad. I hope Karil is doing ok. You know what would be cool? If you wrote a chapter in Karil's POV about whats happening to her while Vivio and Jasper are fighting.
For reasons that I can't reveal, it's imposible for me to make a Karil's point of view

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This looks like so much fun! I'm done lurking; I want in.
Welcome!
BTW: Nice fic

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Ohhhh that looks fun Rick !!! *wonders how its going to turn out*
Thanks Nikki ^.^
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Old 2008-06-21, 01:52   Link #6587
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I can't think enough to do a Vampire!Fate soooo, have a Dream Wing snip I made up

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I had started missing Dream Wing. Can't wait to see what's going to happen.

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ALERT! ALERT!

New Challenger Aproaching!

Upcoming OC for Vita, Shadows of the Past

( I think that Teh Shiny Sword and Black Wolf are going to like it ^.^)

Spoiler for ???:


@Kagerou & Raging Heart: He, he. Thanks guys
K-9 looks awesome! This is getting more promising by the day!
BTW: What does W.P.A. stand for? *has probably asked a question where the answer was obvious*

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Chapter 63
Vatican Knights

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Trouble! Trouble! How will they escape this time? I still think Jasper is up to something...

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(Takes a deep breath)
Ok, here's my first attempt at Nanoha Fan fiction. This goes back to The Shiny Sword's challenge to turn a song into a Fanfic. NanoFate.

It's All Coming Back to Me Now by Celine Dion

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Welcome to the thread!
I really liked the fic, it really captured the emotion of the story and the writing style was particularly fitting.
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Old 2008-06-21, 02:18   Link #6588
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K-9 looks awesome! This is getting more promising by the day!
BTW: What does W.P.A. stand for? *has probably asked a question where the answer was obvious*
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Old 2008-06-21, 02:26   Link #6589
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Old 2008-06-21, 03:56   Link #6590
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(Takes a deep breath)
Ok, here's my first attempt at Nanoha Fan fiction. This goes back to The Shiny Sword's challenge to turn a song into a Fanfic. NanoFate.

It's All Coming Back to Me Now by Celine Dion

Spoiler for It's All Coming Back to Me Now:
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That hurt. It hit me on a very personal level. For the first time in almost half a year, hurts that I had thought I had repressed rose up to the surface.

You wrote that perfectly. You captured it all. Even though I just spent the last half hour sobbing, I loved it.

And to be honest.....some of the pain has lifted, after reading it here. Seeing someone else go through something similar, even a fictional character, really helps.

Very well done. I look forward to more of your work.
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Old 2008-06-21, 04:09   Link #6591
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I did wrote a fiction called 'Fate and Neko Nanoha.' hope you like the frist chapter.

here is the link: http://blade83.deviantart.com/art/Fa...a-Ch1-89304774


tell me what you think.

oh and Allquall nicely done (thumps up)
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Old 2008-06-21, 04:55   Link #6592
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Fate of the Reapers (FotR)

Chapter 1 – ”Uprising”

For OC's: Reaper Profile
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FotR Chapter 2 - "Defeat"
Spoiler for Chapter 2:


FotR Chapter 3 - "Observation"

Spoiler for Ch 3:



Spoiler for text:


To continue reading this series, please look at this my fanfiction profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1588572/
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Old 2008-06-21, 05:08   Link #6593
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(Takes a deep breath)
Ok, here's my first attempt at Nanoha Fan fiction. This goes back to The Shiny Sword's challenge to turn a song into a Fanfic. NanoFate.

It's All Coming Back to Me Now by Celine Dion

Spoiler for It's All Coming Back to Me Now:
Wow, that was...I don't even have a word to describe it. It was so angsty in the beginning and the fights between Nanoha and Fate were so sad. Then Hayate's party was so exciting and nerve racking. At the end its all happy. So baisically I loved it. That's a really good song. BTW, welcome to the thread!

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Urgh, been a week since I finished writing something. Signum's finally here. I have to admit, writing an introspective on a closed character is hard.

Of course...now I have Erio and Zafira left...ouch.

Spoiler for Regrets:


And for anyone who actually reads FLN, I'm halfway done the next chapter...it's going a little slower than I want .
Aww too bad Signum's was short. But still very good, I liked having Agito in there. Zest! I still miss him!

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Woah, the infinite library is quite useful. I like how other characters appear in this chapter . I wonder what the wolkenritter plan to do with the jewel seeds.
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I did wrote a fiction called 'Fate and Neko Nanoha.' hope you like the frist chapter.

here is the link: http://blade83.deviantart.com/art/Fa...a-Ch1-89304774


tell me what you think.

oh and Allquall nicely done (thumbs up)
A couple of typos but nothing too major. I would get a beta, it would help the flow of the story. Maybe you should add in more of your own story because ai feel, its the same thing as the manga except with words. ButI love Neko!Nanoha, its so cute! Are you going to do a continuation with the next part?
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Old 2008-06-21, 05:40   Link #6594
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it has more if i stuck with manga only it won't be long.

this chapter took 5 pages, don't worry i will spice up the thing a little bit, but also use the manga a basic only to take line and go one on it mixing it with writing.

you will find there are lines i took from manga put i made some adding, there still more things i get in my sleeves ^_^

just tell me if it's good or not, if i need to add more then tell me, i am glad of any help to get my writing improve.
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Old 2008-06-21, 09:05   Link #6595
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(Takes a deep breath)
Ok, here's my first attempt at Nanoha Fan fiction. This goes back to The Shiny Sword's challenge to turn a song into a Fanfic. NanoFate.

It's All Coming Back to Me Now by Celine Dion

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Wow... Wow... That was just... Beautiful... D:
So beautiful I was moved to tears... This is something very nice to read before a day at work~
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Old 2008-06-21, 10:55   Link #6596
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Ok here is something.

what do you think should i change the title of fiction 'Fate and Neko Nanoha.' To 'Love Forms.' instead?
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Old 2008-06-21, 11:55   Link #6597
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Originally Posted by Allquall View Post
(Takes a deep breath)
Ok, here's my first attempt at Nanoha Fan fiction. This goes back to The Shiny Sword's challenge to turn a song into a Fanfic. NanoFate.

It's All Coming Back to Me Now by Celine Dion

Spoiler for It's All Coming Back to Me Now:
Wow... just wow... That was so beautiful. I can't even find any words. Good job!
An welcome to the thred. Hope you enjoy your stay here.
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Old 2008-06-21, 12:18   Link #6598
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(Takes a deep breath)
Ok, here's my first attempt at Nanoha Fan fiction. This goes back to The Shiny Sword's challenge to turn a song into a Fanfic. NanoFate.

It's All Coming Back to Me Now by Celine Dion

Spoiler for It's All Coming Back to Me Now:
Many points for angst and whatnot. I'm personally not a big fan of the song, but whatever.
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Old 2008-06-21, 12:36   Link #6599
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Urgh, been a week since I finished writing something. Signum's finally here. I have to admit, writing an introspective on a closed character is hard.

Of course...now I have Erio and Zafira left...ouch.

Spoiler for Regrets:


And for anyone who actually reads FLN, I'm halfway done the next chapter...it's going a little slower than I want .
Nice one, I like your series of these views of life.
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(Takes a deep breath)
Ok, here's my first attempt at Nanoha Fan fiction. This goes back to The Shiny Sword's challenge to turn a song into a Fanfic. NanoFate.

It's All Coming Back to Me Now by Celine Dion

Spoiler for It's All Coming Back to Me Now:
Wow that was great. It reminded me 16th chapter of Beyond the Sea (my favorite chapter). Welcome. And I'm glad it has good end.
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I did wrote a fiction called 'Fate and Neko Nanoha.' hope you like the frist chapter.

here is the link: http://blade83.deviantart.com/art/Fa...a-Ch1-89304774


tell me what you think.
Hmm... well I think first half is like transformation of that manga to text so I like latter part more. My overall opinion is that you sometimes uses more words than it's necessary. It's not bad and I feel like you have space for improvement. So please continue.
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Old 2008-06-21, 12:44   Link #6600
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Nice one, I like your series of these views of life.

Wow that was great. It reminded me 16th chapter of Beyond the Sea (my favorite chapter). Welcome. And I'm glad it has good end.


Hmm... well I think first half is like transformation of that manga to text so I like latter part more. My overall opinion is that you sometimes uses more words than it's necessary. It's not bad and I feel like you have space for improvement. So please continue.

thank you, and i will do my best, i will start writing chapter two.
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