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Old 2008-06-25, 21:22   Link #6701
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Old 2008-06-25, 22:31   Link #6702
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Hey all.

Just finished doing this chapter. I would say its steamier than the last. Although thats my thoughts as it felt like it as i wrote it XD I will probably end the fic with this chapter unless theres an appeal for more as i like the ending. But going with the interactive fan fiction tag i figured i would leave the option open!


enjoy!
Nice, nice! Revenge can be so fulfilling (Signum seems to be really enjoying it).

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FotR Chapter 2 - "Defeat"
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Reapers are awesome. The Belkan troops got pwned good.
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Old 2008-06-25, 22:57   Link #6703
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Slashed in two O.o! That got to hurt >.<!

Mmm... exactly how tall are the reapers?
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Old 2008-06-26, 04:53   Link #6704
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And here is the promised final segment of my now completed fanfiction Transitions with a little NSFW-ness. Just a little. Anyway, I set out originally to fill the gap between A's and StrikerS in such a way Nanoha and Fate stopped edging around the issue of their relationship, in a manner that would fit with the overall official continuity, and I quite like how things turned out - consider absolutely nil planning went into the story, and it was written impulsively on and off while listening to the fantastically inspirational (for me at least ) music genre of Drum and Bass. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I have enjoyed writing it - and I would like to truly thank everyone who has read - and I'm especially grateful to those that commented - you kept me going. Judging from how this first one went, you can bet I won't be able to stay away from a word processor, nor avoid jotting NanoFate centric fiction ideas on a notepad in the middle of the night (it's quite interesting to decipher once you are fully awake) for very long. But first I believe I should give back to the fanfic community by commenting on other's works.

Transitions: End

Spoiler for Part V: End. Semi-NSFW:


Oh, and as it turns out, I do infact have a FF.net account - someone got the username 'Preston' so I had to go with 'CPreston'. Cleric... nya~. Here's the entire story on FF.net. Any and all updates and edits will happen there - but my new work will be seen here, in this thread, first.
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Old 2008-06-26, 05:55   Link #6705
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Old 2008-06-26, 09:43   Link #6706
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And here is the promised final segment of my now completed fanfiction Transitions with a little NSFW-ness. Just a little. Anyway, I set out originally to fill the gap between A's and StrikerS in such a way Nanoha and Fate stopped edging around the issue of their relationship, in a manner that would fit with the overall official continuity, and I quite like how things turned out - consider absolutely nil planning went into the story, and it was written impulsively on and off while listening to the fantastically inspirational (for me at least ) music genre of Drum and Bass. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I have enjoyed writing it - and I would like to truly thank everyone who has read - and I'm especially grateful to those that commented - you kept me going. Judging from how this first one went, you can bet I won't be able to stay away from a word processor, nor avoid jotting NanoFate centric fiction ideas on a notepad in the middle of the night (it's quite interesting to decipher once you are fully awake) for very long. But first I believe I should give back to the fanfic community by commenting on other's works.

Transitions: End

Spoiler for Part V: End. Semi-NSFW:


Oh, and as it turns out, I do infact have a FF.net account - someone got the username 'Preston' so I had to go with 'CPreston'. Cleric... nya~. Here's the entire story on FF.net. Any and all updates and edits will happen there - but my new work will be seen here, in this thread, first.
This was a good story Preston. Maybe you can do a lemon continuation on it? *ruuuuuuuuns*
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Old 2008-06-26, 10:08   Link #6707
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And here is the promised final segment of my now completed fanfiction Transitions with a little NSFW-ness. Just a little. Anyway, I set out originally to fill the gap between A's and StrikerS in such a way Nanoha and Fate stopped edging around the issue of their relationship, in a manner that would fit with the overall official continuity, and I quite like how things turned out - consider absolutely nil planning went into the story, and it was written impulsively on and off while listening to the fantastically inspirational (for me at least ) music genre of Drum and Bass. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I have enjoyed writing it - and I would like to truly thank everyone who has read - and I'm especially grateful to those that commented - you kept me going. Judging from how this first one went, you can bet I won't be able to stay away from a word processor, nor avoid jotting NanoFate centric fiction ideas on a notepad in the middle of the night (it's quite interesting to decipher once you are fully awake) for very long. But first I believe I should give back to the fanfic community by commenting on other's works.

Transitions: End

Spoiler for Part V: End. Semi-NSFW:


Oh, and as it turns out, I do infact have a FF.net account - someone got the username 'Preston' so I had to go with 'CPreston'. Cleric... nya~. Here's the entire story on FF.net. Any and all updates and edits will happen there - but my new work will be seen here, in this thread, first.

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This was a good story Preston. Maybe you can do a lemon continuation on it? *ruuuuuuuuns*
+1 ! *runs too*
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Old 2008-06-26, 10:32   Link #6708
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And here is the promised final segment of my now completed fanfiction Transitions with a little NSFW-ness. Just a little. Anyway, I set out originally to fill the gap between A's and StrikerS in such a way Nanoha and Fate stopped edging around the issue of their relationship, in a manner that would fit with the overall official continuity, and I quite like how things turned out - consider absolutely nil planning went into the story, and it was written impulsively on and off while listening to the fantastically inspirational (for me at least ) music genre of Drum and Bass. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I have enjoyed writing it - and I would like to truly thank everyone who has read - and I'm especially grateful to those that commented - you kept me going. Judging from how this first one went, you can bet I won't be able to stay away from a word processor, nor avoid jotting NanoFate centric fiction ideas on a notepad in the middle of the night (it's quite interesting to decipher once you are fully awake) for very long. But first I believe I should give back to the fanfic community by commenting on other's works.

Transitions: End

Spoiler for Part V: End. Semi-NSFW:


Oh, and as it turns out, I do infact have a FF.net account - someone got the username 'Preston' so I had to go with 'CPreston'. Cleric... nya~. Here's the entire story on FF.net. Any and all updates and edits will happen there - but my new work will be seen here, in this thread, first.
I want to start stating my opinions about this fic by being sincere: When I read the first part I had doubts about the story and all, thinking at first that it would just be a 'Fate confesses to Nanoha and so on' then the plot would go in two possible direction, either lovelove!NanoFate or angst!Fate. Not wanting to judge the story by its cover, I kept reading as new parts came out (although I never felt as if there was much to comment on each individual part), reading in hopes that something would appear that would change my initial thoughts about it.

After reading the fifth part and skimming through the whole story on FF.net, I think I've finally found something to comment about it, although a very subjective comment. The story feels very complete, although I've come to realize that there is no jaw dropping world-saving action, fall of the chair laughing scenes, over teary drama, stereotypical villains that everybody wants to see dead, [...], not even a facepalm session, it was simply... a story. It has a clear goal in mind and follows it entirely, without straying through other random ideas or plot devices, everything being in a right quantity. That being said, I found that very realistic and liked the way it doesn't go through unnecessary details to reach its end. (am I making any sense here? ) Although it went in the direction I was somewhat hoping it not to go, going like that is what actually made it so likeable. The non addition of anything actually perverted at the end made the story even more likeable. The last line was a great way to finish the fic.

It left me with a smile at the end, and for that I certainly don't regret reading it.
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Old 2008-06-26, 10:38   Link #6709
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And here is the promised final segment of my now completed fanfiction Transitions with a little NSFW-ness. Just a little. Anyway, I set out originally to fill the gap between A's and StrikerS in such a way Nanoha and Fate stopped edging around the issue of their relationship, in a manner that would fit with the overall official continuity, and I quite like how things turned out - consider absolutely nil planning went into the story, and it was written impulsively on and off while listening to the fantastically inspirational (for me at least ) music genre of Drum and Bass. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I have enjoyed writing it - and I would like to truly thank everyone who has read - and I'm especially grateful to those that commented - you kept me going. Judging from how this first one went, you can bet I won't be able to stay away from a word processor, nor avoid jotting NanoFate centric fiction ideas on a notepad in the middle of the night (it's quite interesting to decipher once you are fully awake) for very long. But first I believe I should give back to the fanfic community by commenting on other's works.

Transitions: End

Spoiler for Part V: End. Semi-NSFW:


Oh, and as it turns out, I do infact have a FF.net account - someone got the username 'Preston' so I had to go with 'CPreston'. Cleric... nya~. Here's the entire story on FF.net. Any and all updates and edits will happen there - but my new work will be seen here, in this thread, first.
*pumps fist into the air!* YES! Reverse psychology works. Fluffy Ending! *Cackles Madly*

*cough* ahem, anyway. Really nice end to the story. Lots of little perks that really made me smile. Fates yuri manga addiction and Nanoha's investigation of her brothers magazines. XD

I could easily see how this heads into strikers. With Fates lack of pajamas etc XD really good fic all in all.

Continuation for embarrassing Lindy motherly moment in the morning XD

Lindy: "Ohio Fate-cha..... Ara-Ara whats this?"
*Fate sits up in bed abruptly*
Fate: "Okaa-san its not what it-"
Lindy: "No Pajamas Fate?"
*Blush*
*Nanoha pulls Fate back down*
Nanoha: "My pillow is not allowed to move until i let it"
*Nanoha cuddles into Fate*
Lindy: "I'll come back later Fate, try to keep the noise down"
Fate: "Mouuuuuuuu!"

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This was a good story Preston. Maybe you can do a lemon continuation on it? *ruuuuuuuuns*
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+1 ! *runs too*
+42

*Ruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuns, catches up with Nictory and Kirikia*

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Old 2008-06-26, 12:07   Link #6710
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Been in a bit of a funk lately, so in the spirit of Angst Thursday, here's a teaser for the new chapter of Scars of Fate, in which new characters are introduced, and important plot points will be revealed. Lemme know thoughts and comments for this part or whatever's been written so far--your feedback means a lot to me, and would help lift my mood and get me motivated.

Spoiler for Scars ch 2 tease:


Hoping to get the whole chapter up on FF.net fridayish, as soon as I get a spot of free time. Reviews are love!
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Old 2008-06-26, 12:24   Link #6711
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I got a moment online and I thought I ought to reply to the feedback - which, uh, is wow, and thanks much!

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Maybe you can do a lemon continuation on it? *ruuuuuuuuns*
Hmm... if evil mode and writing time coincide with just the right D&B track... maybe...

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+1 ! *runs too*
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+42

*Ruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuns, catches up with Nictory and Kirikia*
Noted.

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Thank you for the sincere and in-depth comment. I appreciate all feedback, and this was particularly constructive. I knew all were certainly not into NanoFate, and I'm glad you didn't dislike it too much for my choice of theme.

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Ya, reverse psychology rules as a plot device. And I like your continuation!
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Old 2008-06-26, 12:38   Link #6712
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Have a short about NanoFate having just a casual night time conversation :3 that's it, just casual fun ^^

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Old 2008-06-26, 13:01   Link #6713
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And here is the promised final segment of my now completed fanfiction Transitions with a little NSFW-ness. Just a little. Anyway, I set out originally to fill the gap between A's and StrikerS in such a way Nanoha and Fate stopped edging around the issue of their relationship, in a manner that would fit with the overall official continuity, and I quite like how things turned out - consider absolutely nil planning went into the story, and it was written impulsively on and off while listening to the fantastically inspirational (for me at least ) music genre of Drum and Bass. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I have enjoyed writing it - and I would like to truly thank everyone who has read - and I'm especially grateful to those that commented - you kept me going. Judging from how this first one went, you can bet I won't be able to stay away from a word processor, nor avoid jotting NanoFate centric fiction ideas on a notepad in the middle of the night (it's quite interesting to decipher once you are fully awake) for very long. But first I believe I should give back to the fanfic community by commenting on other's works.

Transitions: End

Spoiler for Part V: End. Semi-NSFW:


Oh, and as it turns out, I do infact have a FF.net account - someone got the username 'Preston' so I had to go with 'CPreston'. Cleric... nya~. Here's the entire story on FF.net. Any and all updates and edits will happen there - but my new work will be seen here, in this thread, first.
Well written, and enjoyable, I thought that Fate was going to be rejected by the way you ended the last chapter and began this one.

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Been in a bit of a funk lately, so in the spirit of Angst Thursday, here's a teaser for the new chapter of Scars of Fate, in which new characters are introduced, and important plot points will be revealed. Lemme know thoughts and comments for this part or whatever's been written so far--your feedback means a lot to me, and would help lift my mood and get me motivated.

Spoiler for Scars ch 2 tease:


Hoping to get the whole chapter up on FF.net fridayish, as soon as I get a spot of free time. Reviews are love!
Looking forward to the whole chapter, but where's the first chapter?
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Old 2008-06-26, 14:12   Link #6714
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Looking forward to the whole chapter, but where's the first chapter?
I think it's this fiction

scars on ff.net
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Old 2008-06-26, 14:55   Link #6715
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I think it's this fiction

scars on ff.net
Thanks a lot,
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Old 2008-06-26, 15:43   Link #6716
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Anyone up to doing some odd pairings to spice things up and make us laugh?

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Old 2008-06-26, 15:57   Link #6717
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Anyone up to doing some odd pairings to spice things up and make us laugh?

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HAHA My god not laughed that hard in a while. Nice!
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Old 2008-06-26, 16:05   Link #6718
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Anyone up to doing some odd pairings to spice things up and make us laugh?

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Nice

Reminds me that I should try to finish that Vita short I started... in February =-=
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Old 2008-06-26, 16:08   Link #6719
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Reminds me that I should try to finish that Vita short I started... in February =-=
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Old 2008-06-26, 16:09   Link #6720
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*laughs up a lung*

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