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Old 2008-01-28, 11:56   Link #681
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The up coming dance, Nanoha's tennis, Hayate's cooking, Yuuno's TA job, ect.
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...Keroko-chan abusing of her position and making Nanoha run ten laps around the court
...Kha-chan discovering the meaning of Unlimited Lyrical Works...
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Old 2008-01-28, 12:16   Link #682
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Spoiler for Present day.... Present time!.... AHAHAHAHA:
Cute moment is CUTE~~

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anyway, i went around and read the next batch of fics, this time by Evangelion Xgouki...

I'll try to avoid spoilers, and i remind again that this is merely a sort of commentary/summary with a bit of opinions thrown in for good measure

Oh, and anyone who's about to read them, i suggest that you start with the last one in satashis list: "A magical christmas" and then the other two in what ever order you want

So...
Spoiler for A magical christmas:


Spoiler for My master:


Spoiler for And she smiles:


It's really hard to think up anything negative of the fics: the characters seem in character, the plot's easy to follow, descriptions are clear and abundant so you're never confused as to what's going on and there's just about no grammatical errors and only 2 typos that i found (but forgot by now )...
...so, in one word: Solid.

Only thing that i've got against these fics is the length, as a fan of stories of truly EPIC proportions (in fanfiction, it would be daishi primes Deva serie, satashi's 6th div books, and nightengales saga of Saga), i was a bit disappointed at the short length of these fics... Especially considering the solid storytelling found in these fics. Well, my preferences can hardly be thought as a fault of the author

Anyways, hope to see more from you, Evangelion Xgouki

Oh man, thanks for the reviews . I'm glad you enjoyed them since it's been over 5 years since I wrote a wrote a fanfic . I think My Master was the one I enjoyed the most writing since it's, currently, a one-of-a-kind fic. I honestly don't know how I came up with the concept, but I did and started typing away.

I know that they are a bit short, but I wrote these on some ideas that materialized in my possibly-sane brain. Personally I do wish I could make them longer, but they just turn out they way they do as I type away. I hope I actually get in a decent-sized fic at some point, but I just haven't have had any ideas for something of sufficient length .

*as urge to write another fic suddenly...*

Oh, and as much as I like RH in A's Nano, I don't think I'd be using that version in my fics...only in the omakes

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Wootsauce!
Now I can post this~

Spoiler for Fate's shower-view...NSFW:


0: D
Wow...nice drawing . Wish I could draw like that so I could create a scene or two from my fics
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Old 2008-01-28, 12:21   Link #683
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ghazghkull, your story, its nice Nanoha X Fate fluff. I like how its written, the time period, and its feel. Is it a one shot, or are you planning to write more
this is chapter 4 or 5 from the story Road of Love

you find it, when you look at satashi-samas post at the first page and look for ghazghkull's name
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Old 2008-01-28, 12:42   Link #684
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Double post for chapter 9 of SbtB

Enjoy ^_^

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/9/
Truth or dare is merciless And so is modeling business...

Spoiler for Kwestions:


It seems that Nanoha's in denial has reached next level: Rambling Thoughts. I just can't get enough of this

And this just makes me feel more happy.

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Hey it was you guys who said to give them time to fall in love >: D you've raited 9 chapters, a few more won't kill you
Kill me? This is Love.


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Well, the name of the story is Saved by the Bell, a high school fic. Now that Nanoha's career is moving along, I'm going to try and swap back to them being in school and school activities. The up coming dance, Nanoha's tennis, Hayate's cooking, Yuuno's TA job, ect. Try and give a little notice to the other couples as well.
I'm actually waiting anxiously for more Arisa x Suzuka action Althought Hayate x Yuuno is lovely as well...

Lets see...
NxF, Fantastic in denial action. Loveble by default
HxY, 6th D is clearly influencing my reactions towards this relationship. Loveable by Satashi-sama's influence
AxS, Never gave this pairing much notice but Satashi-sama is once again creating very plausible mind images. To be loveable by Satashi-sama's influence.

You can never get enough of this but, to be honest, I'd like some shuffling in future fics just to see how different things would mix together. Althought those pairings is the best way for those characters. Might be because it's 5:1 female-male, so maybe adding extra males woudn't be too bad.

Speaking of extra males, I can't remember if there's Chrono in this fic? Is he coming or just left out. (Not complaining. He'd be the 7th wheel in a 6 wheel car... Uh... Or something...)


And some updates from here.
I finally managed to spank my beta-reader to marathon through Nanoha and I should be getting initial feedback shortly. But having four grand scale school projects at the same time will slow us both down. (And I mean GRAND!)


Last but not least is a small sign of appreciation for mercurianangel.


Keep it up, your drawings make SbtB even more enjoyable than it is now.
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Old 2008-01-28, 13:42   Link #685
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woot, a Satashi Lunch Time Short!

Now presenting, a plotline that will never become a full fanfic!

6th division: Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha StrikerS Z!
Spoiler for Nanoha Z! yay cheap rip offs!:
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Old 2008-01-28, 14:09   Link #686
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6th division: Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha StrikerS Z!
Spoiler for Nanoha Z! yay cheap rip offs!:

Oh God! That brings back so much memories ...
Spoiler for thoughs : ):
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Old 2008-01-28, 14:36   Link #687
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woot, a Satashi Lunch Time Short!

Now presenting, a plotline that will never become a full fanfic!

6th division: Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha StrikerS Z!
Spoiler for Nanoha Z! yay cheap rip offs!:


Oh you....

You evil, EVIL woman!(/man)

Now I want to know the end

Argh! You impossible tease!
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Old 2008-01-28, 14:51   Link #688
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Oh you....

You evil, EVIL woman!(/man)

Now I want to know the end

Argh! You impossible tease!
Well we already know what will happen.

Spoiler for Story in a nutshell:


On a more serious note.
I chuckled from start to finish, mostly because of the, oh so, obvious rip-off. Planning to create more crack on lunch breaks?
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Old 2008-01-28, 15:02   Link #689
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Well we already know what will happen.

Spoiler for Story in a nutshell:
I thought everyone knew by now that Her/His Evilness over there is known for her/his original stories (and rip-offs? ). She/he's bound to make it completely different just so it can be original

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Planning to create more crack on lunch breaks?
It's good so we can't complain, can we?
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Old 2008-01-28, 15:07   Link #690
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I thought everyone knew by now that Her/His Evilness over there is known for her/his original stories (and rip-offs? ). She/he's bound to make it completely different just so it can be original
What are you talking about? That was purely speculation


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It's good so we can't complain, can we?
Not at all. I was hoping that we'd get one on each lunch break. (even better if Satashi-sama has two lunches a day )
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Old 2008-01-28, 15:10   Link #691
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What are you talking about? That was purely speculation
Respond to crack with a little bit of joky-seriousness and it gets a bit more....

......spicy

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Not at all. I was hoping that we'd get one on each lunch break. (even better if Satashi-sama has two lunches a day )
How about we make a petition for Sata-chan to get THREE lunch breaks?
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Old 2008-01-28, 15:15   Link #692
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How about we make a petition for Sata-chan to get THREE lunch breaks?
And name breakfast lunch as well!


Something to make this post on-topic.

It seems that my beta-reader has forgotten everything about Nanoha (He watched it last week...), so once I'm finished I'll start posting it.
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Old 2008-01-28, 15:29   Link #693
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I got some pages in SoL but didn't finish it. We had a party on Saturday then a family meeting on Sunday Think I can finish it in another few days... Gomen.
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Old 2008-01-28, 16:34   Link #694
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woot, a Satashi Lunch Time Short!

Now presenting, a plotline that will never become a full fanfic!

6th division: Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha StrikerS Z!
Spoiler for Nanoha Z! yay cheap rip offs!:
I think, I missed something in my bio class^^
*two female-->child*
Spoiler for edit:


even so, I'm now more confused than before, good story
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Old 2008-01-28, 16:39   Link #695
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I think, I missed something in my bio class^^
*two female-->child*
Spoiler for edit:


even so, I'm now more confused than before, good story
That answer is such an easy one!

Spoiler for The Answer:
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Old 2008-01-28, 16:43   Link #696
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I think, I missed something in my bio class^^
*two female-->child*
Spoiler for edit:


even so, I'm now more confused than before, good story
Magic, or technology. You've got to consider the fact that since Midchilda is so advanced in technology, I wouldn't be surprised if they could take DNA samples of one, and inseminate said sample with the egg of the other. So either way, Nanoha or Fate could easily bear children, with both of them being biological mothers of their children.

Plus if you read Satashi's Riot Force 6 stories - yes I know it's not RF6 but that's how I view it since that's the official unit designation - Fate or Nanoha does mention that it is possible for either of them to bear each other's child.
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Old 2008-01-28, 16:49   Link #697
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I think, I missed something in my bio class^^
*two female-->child*
Spoiler for edit:


even so, I'm now more confused than before, good story
Don't be so sure about fate

here's how it went down:

Spoiler for pic:


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Old 2008-01-28, 16:53   Link #698
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Magic, or technology. You've got to consider the fact that since Midchilda is so advanced in technology, I wouldn't be surprised if they could take DNA samples of one, and inseminate said sample with the egg of the other. So either way, Nanoha or Fate could easily bear children, with both of them being biological mothers of their children.
Quoted for truth.

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Plus if you read Satashi's Riot Force 6 stories - yes I know it's not RF6 but that's how I view it since that's the official unit designation - Fate or Nanoha does mention that it is possible for either of them to bear each other's child.
6th Mobile Division Book Two: Reminisce : Chapter 7. Last part before the quotes.

AKA: True story.
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Old 2008-01-28, 18:03   Link #699
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here's how it went down:

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Oh my goodness! You're my new hero! <3
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