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Old 2008-09-20, 03:29   Link #9281
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Blue, you made me laugh hard on this one. This idea and the execution are pure gold. My sides hurt from taking in that much Krrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrack!

Spoiler for I'll Take the Kids, and You Take My Heart: part 7:
Very nice chapter, probably my favorite so far

It's good that this time you dedicated half of the chapter to the girls, so you don't rush the things with their moms. You really know how to write both to write both adults and kids characters, the moments at the school were nicely done and pretty enjoyable. The scene with Hayate and the girls, and then Yuuno breaking Zafira while Fate and Nanoha tried to face him, transmitted a lot of emotions, even if they are just kids their feelings are strong... seeing the little Zafira broken almost moved me to tears ;_;

Good job, Allquall. I'll be looking forward to your next update. You need to upload this to ff.net, the people can't be missing this wonderful fic.

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Old 2008-09-20, 05:26   Link #9282
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I like it. You should write some more, it seems like it has potential.

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Aww cute! Waiting is usually worth it.

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Hmm...crack...crack... >_>

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Kekekeke

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Lol, nice crack. Poor Nanoha stunted growth from now on.

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Karil Lightstar

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I doubt this draws >.<

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Spoiler for Gary Love:


Note: Mr. Long is from TSS
Not Burger King but McDonalds! Lol, jk. It seems like Karil and Vivio are becoming friends.
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Well, ending to Life Goes On is going to have to wait a little bit, because I ended up writing the first chapter to Moving On instead (I just realized how similar the two names are...completely unintentional). A few parts feel a little jumpy, so I'll probably edit it later when I can look at it with a fresh eye...

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EDIT:

"Mou" means "Geez". It just sounds infinitely cuter as "Mou".
Aww, this is great. I love reinforce (I). A cute scene at lunchtime. I can't wait for either Moving on or Life goes on.

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This is for Keroko cause it's all his fault this crack came about

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Ahh yes, I remember seeing this in the image thread. I like it. Continue please?
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Also, upload ch.4 of SC2, and I've made up my mind that other than ignoring/pretending-it-never-happened SakuTomo, it is pretty much a direct continuation from SC1. But it is also fairly readable on its own. *links*

SC2: Hayate's Magical "What If"
Stop Not TBC-ing things! Because I want a continuation you little teaser! I want to go kill the guy on the bus.

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Maligno

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The famous red or blue wire question. Yay, Gary saves his girlfriend and Maligno is dead. But what happened to Vita at the end!?
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So I've had lots of interesting things happen today ^^ Ranging from my aunt calling and singing happy bday to me, to several text messages and emails. My favourite, by far, is below (thanks angel~)

Also, thanks a bunch to all the people who sent me PMs and visitor messages! @_@ I didn't even know you guys KNEW what today was! I am really really happy ^_^

Spoiler for Vivio's Birthday~:

Spoiler for Angel's text message to me that inspired all of this :P:
Aww cute. Happy B'day! Even though it just turned 12:00 (in my timezone)
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This is exciting! The first part, of the primer of The Chat Device! With letters from such known members: EvaXGouki, Satashi, Black_Wolf, Vivio Testarossa. And one person who wished to remain 'secert...'

Lots of Khrack! Lots of Laughs! Lots of Oddities!

Hello and welcome to The Chat Device!

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Lol! I love the khrack. I like Vita and the futa pills. Nice commercial at the end. Poor Subaru.

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Lol, yours is so much better than mine of this song. I really do love Electric six though. Milly and Yuuna! Alright!
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I was bored so...

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Highly metaphoric, not at all sensical. Ah well.
Wow....WTF? It's cute, in a confusing, weird way.

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Aww Momoko and Lindy in the bed! Hayate is the epitome of cute sad child! Her dolls of the Wolkenritter! So cute. But what was with Kyoya working all by himself?
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Crossroads


Adding "desu" at the end of Rein speaking its optional but highly recomendable

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Spoiler for decision 9:


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I told you the R/S was important. Big and green.
~Desu power! Make up! If you know what reference that is you'll get a cookie. I read all the other parts and since I can't vote on them I'll just vote on this. C

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First part of Snapple, Grackle, Pop

>.>_<.< Continuing cuz I said TBC... And I only said TBC cuz I knew it was short and nonsensical, esp the end...

Spoiler for Nanoha/Vita ness:
Aww NanoVita! So cute and random at the same time.

@TSS: SA is getting really exciting, I still want my Fate points. I can't remember if voting is closed or not so I'll wait for next chapter. I love it!
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Old 2008-09-20, 07:13   Link #9283
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So I've had lots of interesting things happen today ^^ Ranging from my aunt calling and singing happy bday to me, to several text messages and emails. My favourite, by far, is below (thanks angel~)

Also, thanks a bunch to all the people who sent me PMs and visitor messages! @_@ I didn't even know you guys KNEW what today was! I am really really happy ^_^

Spoiler for Vivio's Birthday~:

Spoiler for Angel's text message to me that inspired all of this :P:
aww. it's cute. ^^

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worksexual huh...

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Blue, you made me laugh hard on this one. This idea and the execution are pure gold. My sides hurt from taking in that much Krrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrack!

Spoiler for I'll Take the Kids, and You Take My Heart: part 7:
aww.. sweet.

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Crossroads


Adding "desu" at the end of Rein speaking its optional but highly recomendable

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Spoiler for decision 9:


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I told you the R/S was important. Big and green.
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Old 2008-09-20, 07:44   Link #9284
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Blue, you made me laugh hard on this one. This idea and the execution are pure gold. My sides hurt from taking in that much Krrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrack!

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I love it, i can't wait for more update.

I wonder what will happen next, well i guess i have to wait.
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Old 2008-09-20, 09:09   Link #9285
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Oh LOL. Everyone is gay except for asexual Nanoha. XD Actually, I think asexual!Nanoha is probably canon so far. >_>
Yes another Nanoha is asexual person *Highfives Sassy_beard*
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First part of Snapple, Grackle, Pop

>.>_<.< Continuing cuz I said TBC... And I only said TBC cuz I knew it was short and nonsensical, esp the end...

Spoiler for Nanoha/Vita ness:
ewww snapple (>.> that's all they sell here and I don't like the taste ) but Yay Vita~
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NO! ZAFFY! TT-TT Don't worry Hayate we'll get him fixed up. *glares at Allquall for letting Bully!Yuuno (laughs at the sheer absurdity of Yuuno being a bully) break Zaffy*

oh and B
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Old 2008-09-20, 09:47   Link #9286
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:O Why is Kyoya working? Does he not want to hang out with his girly-friend like a normal HS boy? And why do I get this odd sensation that Bully!Yuuno is going to do a 360 and fall into the category of "I only teased you cuz I like you. I'll play nice, I promise!"

And the poo-poo head part was a nice touch. :3 Fate is the best dirty talker ever. <3

And.... more LindyxMomoko ftw~~~~ please?

<.<
>.>
Backwards Non-TBC breaker!

Spoiler for Coffee Shop Revisited (pt 2):


Actually, rather than really continuing, it's more like providing the other half of a one-shot ^.^;;

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Old 2008-09-20, 13:11   Link #9287
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Votes so far

A= 1
B= 2
C= 3

Vote closes in two hours... i know i normally dont do this, but i posted the chapter late so...
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Old 2008-09-20, 13:43   Link #9288
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C Dee dee dur.
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Old 2008-09-20, 13:56   Link #9289
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*snorts and rolls*

Adorable as always Ow...those cavities...
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Old 2008-09-20, 14:56   Link #9290
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A shiny freudian substitute for the manly snake told me to vote


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Old 2008-09-20, 14:57   Link #9291
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Short update: Since I got the net back, writing has taken a step back for school work and ...*cough* chatting.
FotR's idea is worked out and contains a long dialog between two key characters...MOAHAHA.
Death Rage I have ideas to too. Just a matter of writing them down.

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Old 2008-09-20, 15:00   Link #9292
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Final results

BW and Tempest voted

A=1
B=5
C=5

Still is my choice.

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Old 2008-09-20, 15:58   Link #9293
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:O Why is Kyoya working? Does he not want to hang out with his girly-friend like a normal HS boy? And why do I get this odd sensation that Bully!Yuuno is going to do a 360 and fall into the category of "I only teased you cuz I like you. I'll play nice, I promise!"

And the poo-poo head part was a nice touch. :3 Fate is the best dirty talker ever. <3

And.... more LindyxMomoko ftw~~~~ please?

<.<
>.>
Backwards Non-TBC breaker!

Spoiler for Coffee Shop Revisited (pt 2):


Actually, rather than really continuing, it's more like providing the other half of a one-shot ^.^;;
Lol, Nanoha hyped up on caffeine. Makes me wonder what Vivio could do on a caffeine high. Yay for hugs! and confessions! Though I still wanted more. >.>
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Old 2008-09-20, 16:34   Link #9294
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Hijacking this thread for a promo of a coming stalker fic featuring some forum members active in this thread. Will be posted in my Fan Creations thread but I will link to it from here so you don't miss anything.

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Into the Zone - Introduction
More characters coming soon~


=======

Also a small preview of FotR Chapter 9. This excerpt almost spoils but...meh

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Old 2008-09-20, 18:44   Link #9295
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<.<
>.>
Backwards Non-TBC breaker!

Spoiler for Coffee Shop Revisited (pt 2):


Actually, rather than really continuing, it's more like providing the other half of a one-shot ^.^;;
Nice way to end this story, I lol'd at how Nanoha confessed, and the hug was unexpected xD
Thanks a lot for deciding finishing this fic, Knight of L-sama-sama ^^

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Let me guess... we just missed our chance to get a C?
;_;

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Old 2008-09-20, 18:55   Link #9296
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... (subject cant respond, the cuteness has made him die)

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Originally Posted by Knight of L-sama View Post
First part of Snapple, Grackle, Pop

>.>_<.< Continuing cuz I said TBC... And I only said TBC cuz I knew it was short and nonsensical, esp the end...

Spoiler for Nanoha/Vita ness:
You spoiled the ending at the beginning, otherwise its goods

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:O Why is Kyoya working? Does he not want to hang out with his girly-friend like a normal HS boy? And why do I get this odd sensation that Bully!Yuuno is going to do a 360 and fall into the category of "I only teased you cuz I like you. I'll play nice, I promise!"

And the poo-poo head part was a nice touch. :3 Fate is the best dirty talker ever. <3

And.... more LindyxMomoko ftw~~~~ please?

<.<
>.>
Backwards Non-TBC breaker!

Spoiler for Coffee Shop Revisited (pt 2):


Actually, rather than really continuing, it's more like providing the other half of a one-shot ^.^;;
...I might steal your hyperactive nanoha. Just saying

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Hijacking this thread for a promo of a coming stalker fic featuring some forum members active in this thread. Will be posted in my Fan Creations thread but I will link to it from here so you don't miss anything.

Spoiler for Text:

Into the Zone - Introduction
More characters coming soon~


=======

Also a small preview of FotR Chapter 9. This excerpt almost spoils but...meh

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...And the inmortality motivation strikes again

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Let me guess... we just missed our chance to get a C?
;_;

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Depends on what i decide

Though i am writting a NanoFate short in apology to VT
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Old 2008-09-20, 21:16   Link #9297
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First part of Snapple, Grackle, Pop

>.>_<.< Continuing cuz I said TBC... And I only said TBC cuz I knew it was short and nonsensical, esp the end...

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That was a cute and funny story.
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Old 2008-09-20, 21:35   Link #9298
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Crossroads


Adding "desu" at the end of Rein speaking its optional but highly recomendable

Spoiler for part 9:


Spoiler for decision 9:


Spoiler for Zwei corner:


I told you the R/S was important. Big and green.
Aww, why won't anyone give Rein some love? A.

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First part of Snapple, Grackle, Pop

>.>_<.< Continuing cuz I said TBC... And I only said TBC cuz I knew it was short and nonsensical, esp the end...

Spoiler for Nanoha/Vita ness:
Awww....that's very cute. I was kinda confuzzled about who was Grazzle and Pop, so thanks to clarifying. But...(I hope I don't sound stupid in asking about this)...but...what's a Grazzle? Is it actually a sound effect?
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Old 2008-09-20, 21:43   Link #9299
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Aww, why won't anyone give Rein some love? A.

Awww....that's very cute. I was kinda confuzzled about who was Grazzle and Pop, so thanks to clarifying. But...(I hope I don't sound stupid in asking about this)...but...what's a Grazzle? Is it actually a sound effect?
A grackle is a type of bird really common where I live. It's about the equivalent of a crow (color and size and shape wise) and a pigeon (in prevalence and annoyingwise)

Not that that's why I paired it with Nanoha... I was just going for a variation pun of "Snap, Crackle, Pop" or whatever that slogan is for Pops cereal I think...
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Old 2008-09-20, 21:52   Link #9300
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Not that that's why I paired it with Nanoha... I was just going for a variation pun of "Snap, Crackle, Pop" or whatever that slogan is for Pops cereal I think...
Actually, it's for that Rice Krispies cereal.

EDIT: Wait a minute...did I just start a page? Do I do a page claim or something? >.<;;;

EDIT AGAIN: Late page claim for...
Spoiler for The most unloved pairing in Nanoha...:

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