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Old 2008-10-15, 17:57   Link #9981
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I can think of no other person more deserving of the claim. Way to go mascot of the FFC and happy 500 to everyone else!

by the way, im working on some crack at this moment: Vivio starts become interested in having her own familiar.
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Old 2008-10-15, 18:02   Link #9982
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Well, wan deserves it after so much teasing at the chat :3

Ah 500 pages and I have been only in 13X where X= messy memory.

Anyway, to make this post "official" let see.

A Chained Life pt 3 = 30%
The wolf and the girl pt2 = 0%
From the Past 2.1 = 10%
and Crossroads 16 = 2%
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Old 2008-10-15, 18:24   Link #9983
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Spoiler for Fanfic Chapter 1:


[B]What is your verdict? Should they choose
a) Let the military top brass do the talking
b) Meet the negotiator themselves, or
c) Kill him

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Old 2008-10-15, 18:29   Link #9984
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I advice to put that in a spoiler tag since it is pretty big.

Spoiler:


Too tired to read now, might read it later.

EDIT: As per request in FFC, the banner for the 500th post has been completed and PM'ed to our mascot.
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Old 2008-10-15, 19:54   Link #9985
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Just a little help... (Part 1)
Just a little help... please? (Part 2)

Spoiler for Just a little help... 3:


To be continued!
Nice, thanks for continuing this fic Sa-nyan ^^
So next time is for plan B? It would be better for Fate-chan if Hayate is not behind it again, but I kind of want to see more of her marvelous ideas xD

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Old 2008-10-15, 20:21   Link #9986
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Hi.... hummm, just wanted to post something on page 500

Anyway, here comes a short fic, very short

Spoiler for Battle Nanoha -vs- Fate:
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Old 2008-10-15, 20:36   Link #9987
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Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Fanfic

Hope this is worth reading

Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha StrikerS: Alpha Outbreak
Chapter 1: First Contact
Nanoha gave Subaru a sour look after she said she quit. It was unlike her to do that but then again, Nanoha did push her to the brink during training that Subaru almost attempted to hit her. Unacceptable.

“Okay, Subaru, go get some rest. Perhaps you can think it over clearly after that.” said Nanoha.

“Yeah yeah, I know.” Subaru said while she gave Nanoha a sarcastic salute. Nanoha wanted to rebuke her for insubordinance when Subaru turned around and walked away. Maybe she was too harsh on her. Maybe she’ll go talk to Subaru about it later.

Later that evening, Nanoha sat down at the cafeteria to watch the news. Lately, there were reports of TSAB ships being destroyed near the Solar System. Nanoha wondered if Chrono Harlaown had the right mind to explore there because besides Earth and Mars, there were no other hospitable places suitable for colonization. Speaking of Earth-

“Nanoha, can you turn around for a moment?” Nanoha turned around to find Fate standing behind her with a few pictures. “I want you to look at this” said Fate. There was a tone of confusion in her voice. Nanoha took the pictures and looked at it. It showed a blurry outline of a large object, most likely man-made. It was kind of blockish yet intimidating to look at. “What are these suppose to be, Fate? Boxes?” she asked. “That is what I want to know too. One of the ships sent to scout the Solar System took this before being destroyed.”

“That is certainly wrong. Our ships could survive firefights but this is an exception. Could it be that humans have mastered space superiority?”

“I doubt it, Nanoha. No race could just advance like that without going through decades of trial and error.Then again, only one race lives in the Solar System and that is your race.”

Nanoha winced. Humans mastering space superiority in just years, not decades? She has been absent too long from Earth so she was not updated. It’s impossible, astronomical in fact, which this could happen. “So what is Chrono’s next course of action?” Nanoha asked? “He decided to stop scouting Solar System for now. I’m still wondering though. If Chrono knew there were inhabitants there, why did he bother going there in the first place?”

“Perhaps he thinks he could bully the humans because they are weak.” Nanoha joked. The two gave false laughs and stopped. Chrono came in and stared at them.

“What was this bully thing I heard?” he said with a sarcastic tone. Nanoha laughed nervously and said “Well, we were just…uhh…joking! Yeah, we were just joking that you love to bully the uh…new mages!” Fate noded her head and grinned. “New mages? But I don’t train them. You do.” said Chrono. “Anyway, I’m just pondering over a few things I want answering as soon as possible. How did the inhabitants on Non-goverened Planet 97 get so advanced and what kind of weapon are they using? Do you girls know?” Fate scratched her head and sighed “Your guess is just as good as ours, sir.”

Chrono shook his head and left.
That night, Subaru took a stroll near the water edge. Cool night wind blew in her face and it felt soothing. She took a stone and threw it into the sea when Nanoha came behind her.

“Subaru, can we have a talk?” “Leave me alone” muttered Subaru but Nanoha came up to her anyway. “Listen, have you ever felt my pain before?” asked Nanoha. “I’ve seen it through the vids months ago before Jail Scaglietti’s attack. I know it is invading your privacy but I’ve seen it anyway. I know my pain does not match yours but that does not mean you can push me around, Captain Nanoha.” said Subaru bitterly. “Yes I know but it is my duty. If I just let you go on willy nilly, what can you succeed? Think about it, Subaru, if it were not for the vigorous trainings I’ve put myself through when I was younger, I would not be so succeesful. I am who I am now because of that and I intend to teach my trainees the value of hardwork. Get what I mean? I have taught Teana that lesson before so I’m teaching you now.” Subaru wiped a tear away from her eyes. Nanoha patted her shoulder and smiled.

“So I assume you’re alright with it?” asked Nanoha smilingly. Subaru gave a slight nod and smiled back. She saluted. “Good, go get some rest then. Our next training will begin tomorrow. Remember, even if we were disbanded, that does not mean we don’t look out for each other anymore.” Nanoha said. The next morning, Nanoha trained a group of new trainees when Fate contacted her. “Nanoha, come to Saint Church now. Chrono says that it is urgent.”

“How urgent?”

“Code Red urgent. It might, I repeat, just might lead to an open war.”

Nanoha shuddered. Cold sweat ran down her head and felt tingles in her spine. Open war was the worst thing the Mid-Childans were ill-prepared for since the tight military budget was discouraging anyone from joining the military, coupled with the number of mages KIAed during the attack Jail Scaglietti launched. Military power wasn’t sufficient.

“I’m on my way.” said Nanoha as she closed the holocom. “Okay, trainees, you are dismissed for now. I have an urgent meeting to attend.”

At Saint Church, Chrono paced in his office while watching a video transmission sent by one Fleet Admiral Kiethon Marshall. It originated from Non-governed Planet 97. He was older than Chrono by 5 years but he looked like he had 20 years of battle experience. The dangerous look on his face suggested that.

“This is Fleet Admiral Kiethon Marshall of Terran Space Force Command located in Okinawa, Japan. To whoever intruded our territory, we have traced a signal to your homeworld and we have our sights on you. You have violated Terran Space Protocol by intruding without official permission. We have the authority to use force against you for your intentions are unknown. However, we will send a negotiator to hear your explanation for your intrusion as we try not to risk war. But if I find my negotiator killed or your explanation is unable to convince us, you better prepare yourself. Kiethon signing out.”

Chrono tapped his foot and scratched his head. “What say you, Fate?”

Fate looked down and replyed “Lets wait for Nanoha, then we decide whether to discuss this with the top brass or take things into our hands.”


[B]What is your verdict? Should they choose
a) Let the military top brass do the talking
b) Meet the negotiator themselves, or
c) Kill him
Could you clarify choice C... As I am unsure whether "him" refers to the person who sent the "message" or "intruder".
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Old 2008-10-15, 20:44   Link #9988
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Well, after going back and reading the responses I got (anyone can feel free to chime after this, though...), it seems option 2 is the most popular. I was really leaning that way anyway; saves me the trouble of having to figure out how the heck Raising Heart could be converted into a gun.
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Old 2008-10-15, 20:53   Link #9989
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GO 500!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And for fun here's a short

Spoiler for ???!Hayate:
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Old 2008-10-15, 20:56   Link #9990
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Hayate the ghost hunter?

That's actually a very original idea. And I like the bickering between Vita, Hayate, and Zafira (even if Zafira is only a dog, you get the feeling he can bicker back). It's very original and very funny. Are you planning to write more, Sword?
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Old 2008-10-15, 21:09   Link #9991
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Hayate the ghost hunter?

That's actually a very original idea. And I like the bickering between Vita, Hayate, and Zafira (even if Zafira is only a dog, you get the feeling he can bicker back). It's very original and very funny. Are you planning to write more, Sword?
When I get ideas I have one I might play with at the moment but I have a bunch of things going on atm
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Old 2008-10-15, 22:53   Link #9992
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Spoiler for From 400 to 500 there are too many worlds:


Do YOU remember?

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Old 2008-10-15, 22:54   Link #9993
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Now then! I need a vote.

I was discussing some aspects of my AU over with Satashi, and an old idea of mine was brought up again. Major thanks to Satashi, BTW, for going over it with me and helping out. ^__^

Now, then...

The idea is that Nanoha, while still frail and only able to handle a gun, is still capable of using some form of magic, just to keep a connection between her canon persona and her AU persona. This can be done one of two ways:

Option 1: My original idea, in which Raising Heart is somehow attached to the gun/reconfigured into a gun. Nanoha is capable of channeling magic through her body and into the gun, thus firing bullets loaded with magic; a kind of mini version of Divine Buster or Starlight Breaker without the major kick. The downside is doing this leaves her weak and shaky, so she can't do it too often.

Option 2: Satashi's suggestion, in which Nanoha creates sets of magic bullets for her gun. However, she can only create one set at a time and can only fire at least two of them before she starts to get worn out. Kind of like what Shamal does with the catridges for A's, actually.

...

Anyway, I can't decide which to go with. >__>

What do you guys think?
Well you're already going with option two, and I agree. I don't know as much at it would be cool to see raising heart in a gun form, I don't really see how it would work.
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Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Fanfic

Hope this is worth reading

Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha StrikerS: Alpha Outbreak
Spoiler for Long Text:


[B]What is your verdict? Should they choose
a) Let the military top brass do the talking
b) Meet the negotiator themselves, or
c) Kill him
You should pick a color for us to vote with that way it's easier to tell. I don't even know if there is any color left, with all these choose your own path stories. B although C is tempting (just for the lolz), I think it'd be too extreme. Also while I was reading, your story seemed a bit rushed and choppy. You might want to add in some transitions. I also find the way that Nanoha talks a little too formal. Some grammar mistakes but not a lot. The plot generally catches my attention because I'm wondering where this story is heading.

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Hi.... hummm, just wanted to post something on page 500

Anyway, here comes a short fic, very short

Spoiler for Battle Nanoha -vs- Fate:
Lol. That's pretty great.

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GO 500!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And for fun here's a short

Spoiler for ???!Hayate:
That was really sad, but sweet, but sad. Poor Yuuno, and Vita. But I do like GH!Hayate.

GO 500!!

Spoiler for Idea:
That's what me and my sister did a couple days ago.

@Laith: That is win! I remember all of that.
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Old 2008-10-15, 23:28   Link #9994
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Spoiler for From 400 to 500 there are too many worlds:


Do YOU remember?
Yep. XD
Yay for 500 pages!
Though activity is getting slow again. XD
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Old 2008-10-16, 00:01   Link #9995
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Now then! I need a vote.

I was discussing some aspects of my AU over with Satashi, and an old idea of mine was brought up again. Major thanks to Satashi, BTW, for going over it with me and helping out. ^__^

Now, then...

The idea is that Nanoha, while still frail and only able to handle a gun, is still capable of using some form of magic, just to keep a connection between her canon persona and her AU persona. This can be done one of two ways:

Option 1: My original idea, in which Raising Heart is somehow attached to the gun/reconfigured into a gun. Nanoha is capable of channeling magic through her body and into the gun, thus firing bullets loaded with magic; a kind of mini version of Divine Buster or Starlight Breaker without the major kick. The downside is doing this leaves her weak and shaky, so she can't do it too often.

Option 2: Satashi's suggestion, in which Nanoha creates sets of magic bullets for her gun. However, she can only create one set at a time and can only fire at least two of them before she starts to get worn out. Kind of like what Shamal does with the catridges for A's, actually.

...

Anyway, I can't decide which to go with. >__>

What do you guys think?
Any particular reason for choosing a gun, as the weapon type as... Staff -> Gun is quite a major shift...
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Old 2008-10-16, 00:04   Link #9996
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Page 500!?
Hmmm. Maybe in honor of this I'll actually write up that short I posted ages ago. That Etrian Odyssey one.
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Maybe. I am incredibly lazy after all... I'll see about doing it though. No promises.
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Old 2008-10-16, 00:42   Link #9997
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Happy 500 Nanoha Fanfiction Discussion Thread!


I, wanwan, resident perv and FFC mascot, hereby claim this page in honor of FFT and FFC!!!! To all the authors, readers, lurkers: Happy 500th page! woooo!!!


*laith wrote a very nice short about our thread's 500th page get.
*image courtesy of AtomicoX. thank you AX. ^^
G-job Wan!

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Old 2008-10-16, 01:05   Link #9998
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Happy 500 Nanoha Fanfiction Discussion Thread!


I, wanwan, resident perv and FFC mascot, hereby claim this page in honor of FFT and FFC!!!! To all the authors, readers, lurkers: Happy 500th page! woooo!!!


*laith wrote a very nice short about our thread's 500th page get.
*image courtesy of AtomicoX. thank you AX. ^^
Nice logo AtomicoX, my 2 favourite characters of the MSLN series, Vita and Vivio

@Thread:

I have something planed, is not a fic, but is something big, the thing is that I need some of your creations guys, if you want of course

I need from:

AtomicoX: Silence Johansen and a Reaper

TSS: Hou, Nyu and Mr. Long

Satashi: Vampire Fate

Kha: Kha

Keroko: Deathwing Keroko and Syn

Kai the Reaper: Medieval Nanoha

I have your aprobation?
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500 is a pretty big number.

But 10000 is even better :3
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Congratulations on the 500th page!

I'll try to write... something... but between a lack of time and my recently born love for Strike Witches... things are going even slower then usual.

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Nice logo AtomicoX, my 2 favourite characters of the MSLN series, Vita and Vivio

@Thread:

I have something planed, is not a fic, but is something big, the thing is that I need some of your creations guys, if you want of course

I need from:

AtomicoX: Silence Johansen and a Reaper

TSS: Hou, Nyu and Mr. Long

Satashi: Vampire Fate

Kha: Kha

Keroko: Deathwing Keroko and Syn

Kai the Reaper: Medieval Nanoha

I have your aprobation?
As always, you have my permission.
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