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Old 2008-10-19, 06:39   Link #10121
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Show us a lingerie closet and we can safely conclude that Satashi is either girl or bent.
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Old 2008-10-19, 09:32   Link #10122
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Show us a lingerie closet and we can safely conclude that Satashi is either girl or bent.
... lingerie closet...
Kha do you have a lingerie closet?

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Old 2008-10-19, 10:40   Link #10123
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Old 2008-10-19, 11:51   Link #10124
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edit: Page claim??! hmm page claimed....for...panties!..........o.o l_o
:ninja: Page claim response in the form of the 5th part of Feito No Hana. Yay for more twists!

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Show us a lingerie closet and we can safely conclude that Satashi is either girl or bent.
But then, if you were to take a random snapshot of Natsuki's lingerie closet midst all her motorbike stuffs, you would be left equally confused... and Satashi's closet has nothing to do with Nanoha fanfiction... =_=;; Although Satashi may debatably be considered a celebrity within the Nanoha fanfiction realm...
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Old 2008-10-19, 12:22   Link #10125
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Alright 2nd part
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LOL!!!! banana peels
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But then, if you were to take a random snapshot of Natsuki's lingerie closet midst all her motorbike stuffs, you would be left equally confused... and Satashi's closet has nothing to do with Nanoha fanfiction... =_=;; Although Satashi may debatably be considered a celebrity within the Nanoha fanfiction realm...

Wow, was not expecting that
looking back I should have though
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Old 2008-10-19, 12:47   Link #10126
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... and Satashi's closet has nothing to do with Nanoha fanfiction... =_=;;
Why must you challenge me so?

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Old 2008-10-19, 13:17   Link #10127
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Why must you challenge me so?

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Wanbot: *monotonous robovoic* Just what do you think you are doing Fate?
Fate: *looks up* I'm shutting you down Wanbot!
Wanbot: I feel much better now. So why don't you just relax. *closes doors*
Fate: Open the door Wanbot!
Wanbot: I can't do that Fate. Why don't you just sit back and watch the porn it's good for you.
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Old 2008-10-19, 13:35   Link #10128
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Why must you challenge me so?

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AHHAHAHAHAHA!!!!.....Wait, What

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Wanbot: *monotonous robovoic* Just what do you think you are doing Fate?
Fate: *looks up* I'm shutting you down Wanbot!
Wanbot: I feel much better now. So why don't you just relax. *closes doors*
Fate: Open the door Wanbot!
Wanbot: I can't do that Fate. Why don't you just sit back and watch the porn it's good for you.
LOL
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Old 2008-10-19, 15:22   Link #10129
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*pokes RB* i hope everything's fine now with the Ipod ^^'
Heh, thank you. ^^ Everything worked out great, so now it's working again like a dream. I managed to get most of my lost songs back onto it, too. What a relief, since my music usually carries me through a story.

Now then... this is the prologue for my story, tentatively titled "Bless the Broken Road". If any of you recognize the song, you get a free Internet cookie. This is prior to the timeskip, so Nanoha is only eleven (since she got hurt after being in the TSAB for two years). I wrote this after rewriting my college essay three times for my father, so I'm a little fried right now.

Anyway...

Spoiler for Bless the Broken Road: Prologue:


On my end, the hardest thing about this was writing Elise and Fiasse, as I'm only familiar with their OVA selves and... yeah, the OVA's only 4 episodes long. I aso had a pretty rough time with Nanoha, but hopefully she isn't too OOC...
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Old 2008-10-19, 16:02   Link #10130
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Heh, thank you. ^^ Everything worked out great, so now it's working again like a dream. I managed to get most of my lost songs back onto it, too. What a relief, since my music usually carries me through a story.

Now then... this is the prologue for my story, tentatively titled "Bless the Broken Road". If any of you recognize the song, you get a free Internet cookie. This is prior to the timeskip, so Nanoha is only eleven (since she got hurt after being in the TSAB for two years). I wrote this after rewriting my college essay three times for my father, so I'm a little fried right now.

Anyway...

Spoiler for Bless the Broken Road: Prologue:


On my end, the hardest thing about this was writing Elise and Fiasse, as I'm only familiar with their OVA selves and... yeah, the OVA's only 4 episodes long. I aso had a pretty rough time with Nanoha, but hopefully she isn't too OOC...
WOW RB! just plain wow
Can't wait for CH. 1, please up date soon
also I wouldn't worry too much about Nanoha being too OOC (which she wasn't )and I woudn't be surprised if she was a little depressed, especially since she can't fly any more or do much magic.
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Old 2008-10-19, 16:12   Link #10131
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Heh, thank you. ^^ Everything worked out great, so now it's working again like a dream. I managed to get most of my lost songs back onto it, too. What a relief, since my music usually carries me through a story.

Now then... this is the prologue for my story, tentatively titled "Bless the Broken Road". If any of you recognize the song, you get a free Internet cookie. This is prior to the timeskip, so Nanoha is only eleven (since she got hurt after being in the TSAB for two years). I wrote this after rewriting my college essay three times for my father, so I'm a little fried right now.

Anyway...

Spoiler for Bless the Broken Road: Prologue:


On my end, the hardest thing about this was writing Elise and Fiasse, as I'm only familiar with their OVA selves and... yeah, the OVA's only 4 episodes long. I aso had a pretty rough time with Nanoha, but hopefully she isn't too OOC...
Okay it does sounds good, and Nanoha is not OOC. The OVAs i have never seen them so i cant say for sure. And, being the prologue, I cant say if i am hooked to this, or i just read it cause of boringness but so far looks promising. Alas hope you can make chap 1 soon so i can decide.
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Old 2008-10-19, 16:29   Link #10132
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Heh, thank you. ^^ Everything worked out great, so now it's working again like a dream. I managed to get most of my lost songs back onto it, too. What a relief, since my music usually carries me through a story.

Now then... this is the prologue for my story, tentatively titled "Bless the Broken Road". If any of you recognize the song, you get a free Internet cookie. This is prior to the timeskip, so Nanoha is only eleven (since she got hurt after being in the TSAB for two years). I wrote this after rewriting my college essay three times for my father, so I'm a little fried right now.

Anyway...

Spoiler for Bless the Broken Road: Prologue:


On my end, the hardest thing about this was writing Elise and Fiasse, as I'm only familiar with their OVA selves and... yeah, the OVA's only 4 episodes long. I aso had a pretty rough time with Nanoha, but hopefully she isn't too OOC...
Depresed Nanoha

This Prelude was a bit sad

Wish you luck and hope to see chapter 1 soon
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Old 2008-10-19, 16:55   Link #10133
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Depresed Nanoha

This Prelude was a bit sad

Wish you luck and hope to see chapter 1 soon
Heh, thank you. But chapter 1 depends on my plotbunnies and my workload... plus, I need to update other stories that I've been neglecting for the longest time. >>;;

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Okay it does sounds good, and Nanoha is not OOC. The OVAs i have never seen them so i cant say for sure. And, being the prologue, I cant say if i am hooked to this, or i just read it cause of boringness but so far looks promising. Alas hope you can make chap 1 soon so i can decide.
... Define "soon". XD;;

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WOW RB! just plain wow
Can't wait for CH. 1, please up date soon
also I wouldn't worry too much about Nanoha being too OOC (which she wasn't )and I woudn't be surprised if she was a little depressed, especially since she can't fly any more or do much magic.
Thank you! I was desperately worried about a depressed Nanoha, since we never really see her feeling down in the anime. Don't worry; chapter 1 occurs after a 4 year time skip (Nanoha's 15 in this fic, like the end of A's), and she'll be much happier. ^__^

Also, I have to admit that her being able to handle a little magic was a bit of a cope-out on my part. >__> *is currently pondering whether or not throwing Kuon into the mix would be relevant to the plot*

...

Kuon is also from Triangle Heart, though she was the prototype for Yuuno in Lyrical Toy Box. And a foxgirl.
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Old 2008-10-19, 19:39   Link #10134
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Kuon is also from Triangle Heart, though she was the prototype for Yuuno in Lyrical Toy Box. And a foxgirl.
Did not know that
I just thought it was funny that Lindy was a Pixie
that and her Magical Girl costume is her school uniform in MSLN
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Old 2008-10-19, 19:46   Link #10135
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Did not know that
I just thought it was funny that Lindy was a Pixie
that and her Magical Girl costume is her school uniform in MSLN
Kuon's in those pictures, actually. She's got the fox ears.

I wanted to make her Nanoha's familiar, but I'm trying to figure out whether or not she'd have enough magic to support a familiar in her state... maybe Fiasse or Elise could be joint masters?
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Old 2008-10-19, 20:12   Link #10136
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Kuon's in those pictures, actually. She's got the fox ears.

I wanted to make her Nanoha's familiar, but I'm trying to figure out whether or not she'd have enough magic to support a familiar in her state... maybe Fiasse or Elise could be joint masters?
Seriously doubt it, especially if you want Nanoha to be able to do any thing else with her magic and if you want Kuon to be able to do anything at all other then look cute in her "puppy" form. Best idea would probably be to just hook them up as partners (like Yuuno ), But it your Fic do what you want

Also an Idea popped in my head, I don't think close range "Detection" type magic would tax Nanoha too much and would certainly give her an edge in combat
Code Geass' Knight of One's ability (geass) would be Interesting for Nanoha to have
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Old 2008-10-19, 20:25   Link #10137
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Seriously doubt it, especially if you want Nanoha to be able to do any thing else with her magic and if you want Kuon to be able to do anything at all other then look cute in her "puppy" form. Best idea would probably be to just hook them up as partners (like Yuuno ), But it your Fic do what you want
That's why I was thinking of having Elise or Fiasse be joint masters with Nanoha; that way it's not totally on her shoulders to provide Kuon with enough magic to not only survive, but to have a human form and to be able to fight on her own. That can be done, right? Familiars with joint or sub masters after their original master that created them?

And Code Geass? Ah, I never watched that, so...
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Old 2008-10-19, 20:36   Link #10138
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Ouch! Poor Yuuno. I wonder what she would have done it she found one of Fate's in there?

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:ninja: Page claim response in the form of the 5th part of Feito No Hana. Yay for more twists!

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Oh wow, I got that when Nanoha mentioned she felt the same way. But boy that was a TWIST.
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Why must you challenge me so?

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Uh what!?! Though I have to say that transmission was the best words to remember Fate by.
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Heh, thank you. ^^ Everything worked out great, so now it's working again like a dream. I managed to get most of my lost songs back onto it, too. What a relief, since my music usually carries me through a story.

Now then... this is the prologue for my story, tentatively titled "Bless the Broken Road". If any of you recognize the song, you get a free Internet cookie. This is prior to the timeskip, so Nanoha is only eleven (since she got hurt after being in the TSAB for two years). I wrote this after rewriting my college essay three times for my father, so I'm a little fried right now.

Anyway...

Spoiler for Bless the Broken Road: Prologue:


On my end, the hardest thing about this was writing Elise and Fiasse, as I'm only familiar with their OVA selves and... yeah, the OVA's only 4 episodes long. I aso had a pretty rough time with Nanoha, but hopefully she isn't too OOC...
Well this was good. Aww, Elise and Nanoha are so cute. I didn't think Nanoha was OoC. I kind of thought Elise was because of the way she acted in Triangle Heart. But she could have changed after the whole incident. Either way I'm liking it, and I'm glad Raising Heart is fixed.
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That's why I was thinking of having Elise or Fiasse be joint masters with Nanoha; that way it's not totally on her shoulders to provide Kuon with enough magic to not only survive, but to have a human form and to be able to fight on her own. That can be done, right? Familiars with joint or sub masters after their original master that created them?

And Code Geass? Ah, I never watched that, so...
Joint masters, don't know if it can actually happen, I know Satashi's 6th Division Arf had joint masters (Fate and Nanoha) but shes the only one that I can remember to write such. I still think they should be partners but like I said Its your Fic do what you want (and have Fun with it )

as for Knigh of one's geass
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Old 2008-10-19, 20:38   Link #10140
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Hey that wouldn't be too bad of an idea to have Yuuno return as Nanoha's familiar / confidant.

Due to the crushing guilt following Nanoha's accident (as Yuuno feels it's his fault for letting Nanoha get to such a state), he's been training to become a better defender / supporter rather than working as Chief Librarian. Thusly, Nanoha's reemergence causes him to drop everything and rush over to her side, if anything for penitence and to be her friend again. and maybe for some delicious yuunoha yaaaaay~
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