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Old 2008-02-05, 22:21   Link #1001
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Very interesting Satashi. You can't help but look forward to the rest of it .

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Old 2008-02-05, 22:24   Link #1002
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Can't wait to read Fate's reaction XD Great work everyone.
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Old 2008-02-05, 22:55   Link #1003
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Rating is going to be changed to M?

Anyway it looks that this chapter will be better than previous. Can't wait....
Actually there is a lemon planned already
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Old 2008-02-05, 23:07   Link #1004
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Thankies for the drawing encouragement everyone ^__^

Here's another for Evangelion Xgouki's My Master

Spoiler for <3 quick fic pics:
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Old 2008-02-05, 23:23   Link #1005
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Good pic as usual

I'm not sure if this is a good place to post feedback it seem off topic...

But man you're a fast worker
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Old 2008-02-06, 00:53   Link #1006
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I never thought that Nanoha would be so aggressive when it came to kissing. I found myself laying on my side with Nanoha against me, mouth fluttering against mine in butterfly kisses. Her tongue was so soft and fast, lapping at my lips and against my tongue quickly. I'll admit that I am a little embarrassed by the suddenness of it all but I wasn't going to complain. My arm looped over her waist and the licking came faster, rolling over my cheek and to my ear, where she nibbled my earlobe. Moaning out, I felt her tongue not only lick around my ear but in it as well. Although odd, I felt strangely turned on by it. As she moved over my face, she started licking my cheek again and then over my closed eye and nose. When she stayed there a moment before going back to my cheek with the constant licking I shivered a little. This was getting a little weird...

Saved by the Bell XII
By: Satashi


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and a good morning to the rest of you as well
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Old 2008-02-06, 01:45   Link #1007
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@ghazghkull: prisoner tied up? I did that scenario once, it was fun
That's all you have to say?! ><

I'm hurt!

@Thread: No one else has made any comment to my latest addition to my little Nano/Fate/Haya trilogy? I'm hurt. XD
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Old 2008-02-06, 03:10   Link #1008
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Well here's the 2nd addition to my little 3-way trilogy XD

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I like this chapter better than Hayate's POV
good work
looking forward to Fate's POV

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I never thought that Nanoha would be so aggressive when it came to kissing. I found myself laying on my side with Nanoha against me, mouth fluttering against mine in butterfly kisses. Her tongue was so soft and fast, lapping at my lips and against my tongue quickly. I'll admit that I am a little embarrassed by the suddenness of it all but I wasn't going to complain. My arm looped over her waist and the licking came faster, rolling over my cheek and to my ear, where she nibbled my earlobe. Moaning out, I felt her tongue not only lick around my ear but in it as well. Although odd, I felt strangely turned on by it. As she moved over my face, she started licking my cheek again and then over my closed eye and nose. When she stayed there a moment before going back to my cheek with the constant licking I shivered a little. This was getting a little weird...

Saved by the Bell XII
By: Satashi
nice little dream

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Thankies for the drawing encouragement everyone ^__^

Here's another for Evangelion Xgouki's My Master

Spoiler for <3 quick fic pics:
can agree with everyone
a wonderful pic again
but a sad story, very sad

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and a good morning to the rest of you as well
oh, that's very possible, nothing with my thought about a good dream

edit: combination your thought + dream

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Old 2008-02-06, 03:13   Link #1009
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and a good morning to the rest of you as well
I think the same ... Poor Fate XD !!!!
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Old 2008-02-06, 08:32   Link #1010
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and a good morning to the rest of you as well
Another Fate's embarrassing moment? It might be really funny. But I hope that's not dream.

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@Thread: No one else has made any comment to my latest addition to my little Nano/Fate/Haya trilogy? I'm hurt. XD
Don't be, that trilogy is quite good. Looking forward for Fate's POV.

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Old 2008-02-06, 08:59   Link #1011
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Well here's the 2nd addition to my little 3-way trilogy XD

Spoiler for Nanoha's POV:

Mmm... another nice piece to the triangle. We have Hayate's POV focusing on just the concept of their love triangle and the little things that makes it tick (as well as the naughty bits) and Nanoha's focus on family. These two have really been Point of Views and i can't wait to read Fate's take on their little love nest. Maybe she wouln't be as shy (but not explicit) about their little run in with the pervy captors....

Again i can't wait to see the full picture of this family...

....Family huh.... This could get quite interesting, but I'll keep that train boarding at the station until we hear Fate's side.
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Old 2008-02-06, 11:06   Link #1012
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That's all you have to say?! ><

I'm hurt!

@Thread: No one else has made any comment to my latest addition to my little Nano/Fate/Haya trilogy? I'm hurt. XD
I liked it. Hayate's was a little better I think. but it was still good. Looking forward to Fate's

Edit: Sorry, no time for short today >.< Work is hectic.

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Old 2008-02-06, 20:23   Link #1013
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Now or Never Final Chapter
Signum/Shamal

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4012124/3/Now_or_never/

This was hard to write...

any comments and/or criticisms appreciated

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Old 2008-02-06, 22:12   Link #1014
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Now or Never Final Chapter
Signum/Shamal

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4012124/3/Now_or_never/

This was hard to write...

any comments and/or criticisms appreciated
Although I always prefered stories focused on main couple (mainly because there is only a few focused on other), I enjoyed really yours. Are you planning 4th chapter or sequel (something from "present time"?

One thing: Is there mistake in my tired eyes or you sometimes forget to close quotation marks (or how this >> " " << is called, dictionary offered me 6 words)? It's quite difficult to puzzke out where is character's speech and where is regular text.
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Old 2008-02-06, 22:54   Link #1015
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Although I always prefered stories focused on main couple (mainly because there is only a few focused on other), I enjoyed really yours. Are you planning 4th chapter or sequel (something from "present time"?

One thing: Is there mistake in my tired eyes or you sometimes forget to close quotation marks (or how this >> " " << is called, dictionary offered me 6 words)? It's quite difficult to puzzke out where is character's speech and where is regular text.
oops. I thought it was allowed when the stuff in the quotations was long. but it is distracting so i fixed it. thanks for reading and glad you liked it.
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Old 2008-02-07, 11:31   Link #1016
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Lemon! (This is like my Fate/Yuuno one that was okay to post here, so I'm guessing this one is okay as well. )
Spoiler for NSFW:
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Old 2008-02-07, 12:01   Link #1017
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Lemon! (This is like my Fate/Yuuno one that was okay to post here, so I'm guessing this one is okay as well. )
Spoiler for NSFW:


I didn't know that I could like a lemon this much.
Beautiful, and here we have my new favorite from Satashi's shorts

Saludos, Haru
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Old 2008-02-07, 13:27   Link #1018
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Now or Never Final Chapter
Signum/Shamal

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4012124/3/Now_or_never/

This was hard to write...

any comments and/or criticisms appreciated
I finally decided to take a look at this and I'm glad I did. I think you did a really good job on this fic. It felt... full. You put in events and thoughts into the story to make Signum and Shamal a couple. I didn't get the feeling that it "just happened" that their feelings developed over time (though those just happen moments are good if one justs adds more support to them). And what ever difficulty you had writing that last chapter had to serve to make the story better.

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Lemon! (This is like my Fate/Yuuno one that was okay to post here, so I'm guessing this one is okay as well. )
Spoiler for NSFW:
Soft lemon is soft. Nice to see a gentler of their relationship. Never really though that their relationship would revolve around being rowdy...
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Old 2008-02-07, 13:41   Link #1019
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Lemon! (This is like my Fate/Yuuno one that was okay to post here, so I'm guessing this one is okay as well. )
Spoiler for NSFW:
I must add my .
* don't know what else to say*

EDIT: Are you able to acces www.fanfiction.net? I'm trying it nearly 2h.
EDIT 2: Accesable only throught some free proxy... I'm gonna kill my ISP.
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Old 2008-02-07, 16:01   Link #1020
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EDIT: Are you able to acces www.fanfiction.net? I'm trying it nearly 2h.
Works fine for me
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