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Old 2008-10-22, 00:07   Link #10201
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Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt....um...5?6 maybe?:
Yeah... Syn looking for job, I know were is this leading

By the way, I do write because I want to catch and Impress people with my stories, I feel if like each one of my creations have a part of me, like If I draw and write with my soul... uh... I better stop now before start boring you guys

I have an idea... Syn having Karil as rival to earn the heart of Vivio... Na! Forget I said that
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Old 2008-10-22, 00:55   Link #10202
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Yeah... Syn looking for job, I know were is this leading

By the way, I do write because I want to catch and Impress people with my stories, I feel if like each one of my creations have a part of me, like If I draw and write with my soul... uh... I better stop now before start boring you guys
WAHAHAHAHA!!!!

So there's someone who agrees with me here on Vivio/Syn PS TwinAction Double-bill? Interesting Sa-ta(nic) Storyline? Yay.

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Old 2008-10-22, 01:28   Link #10203
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Omake: Hayate's Acceptance
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Faces are fuuuuuuuunnnnn
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Automatic doors can actually slam
The one at my local Kroger slams quit a bit
Funny that it has slammed on a few people too :
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Old 2008-10-22, 02:50   Link #10204
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YOU CLOWN! I THOUGHT YOU SAID YOU WERE BUSY?!!!!

...heh. Pardon my surprise, I had to let off some steam.

Anyway, AX, if you need a beta-reader, I'm always available, man. Helping people takes my mind off the fact that I've been stuck on the same Act in my fic for the last two months anyway
'Is ok. The reason I said I was busy is because I can't juggle too many writing projects atm. I need to concentrate on FotR and DR, not also SW/SWOC's.

And another beta-reader is highly appreciated. As a matter of fact I was looking for a beta by your caliber. It will take a while until the next chapter is done though. I'm looking through most of it with a critical eye, trying to make it work better.
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Old 2008-10-22, 03:02   Link #10205
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'Is ok. The reason I said I was busy is because I can't juggle too many writing projects atm. I need to concentrate on FotR and DR, not also SW/SWOC's.

And another beta-reader is highly appreciated. As a matter of fact I was looking for a beta by your caliber. It will take a while until the next chapter is done though. I'm looking through most of it with a critical eye, trying to make it work better.
Unyaaaa~ *flails* You deceived me!



Anyway, nice to know someone thinks well of me (in spite of the fact that I've written next to nothing )...just send me the next chapter when you're done, or part of it if that's your style. I'll take it from there and give some comments where necessary
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Old 2008-10-22, 05:04   Link #10206
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Spoiler for Chapter 4: Infectious Mess:


Spoiler for Chapter 5: Terran Intervention:


Two chapters here. Hope you like it.
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Old 2008-10-22, 06:24   Link #10207
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'Is ok. The reason I said I was busy is because I can't juggle too many writing projects atm. I need to concentrate on FotR and DR, not also SW/SWOC's.

And another beta-reader is highly appreciated. As a matter of fact I was looking for a beta by your caliber. It will take a while until the next chapter is done though. I'm looking through most of it with a critical eye, trying to make it work better.
D: I'm a perfect fine be- ... on second thought... getting a beta who isn't as busy as I've been is probably a good idea ^^;; I approve
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Old 2008-10-22, 06:53   Link #10208
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D: I'm a perfect fine be- ... on second thought... getting a beta who isn't as busy as I've been is probably a good idea ^^;; I approve
*cough*

You're not the only one who's been busy...

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Old 2008-10-22, 07:39   Link #10209
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D: I'm a perfect fine be- ... on second thought... getting a beta who isn't as busy as I've been is probably a good idea ^^;; I approve
It's not that I doubt your abilities or that you are busy, but having more than one beta is better for the story itself.
Also, two betas deliver different views and perhaps opinions that might provide me with more ideas.

I will explain better in FFC, I don't want to put it up here.
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Old 2008-10-22, 10:42   Link #10210
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Wow, I really like this series :3

Spoiler for pornstar!Vivio pt. 6:
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Old 2008-10-22, 11:52   Link #10211
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Spoiler for Chapter 4: Infectious Mess:


Spoiler for Chapter 5: Terran Intervention:


Two chapters here. Hope you like it.
I like em! Really I have no problems with these chapters like I did the last one. Just spell check your chapters. Oh and it's Shari not Shario. So it looks like Jake is the evil one not the Terrans, except they don't believe Nanoha that Jake is evil, just that they have the same virus. I think something bad is going to happen to Vivio.

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Wow, I really like this series :3

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All right a date! Fanmail... I wonder what Syn's job is?
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Old 2008-10-22, 12:06   Link #10212
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Hi! As some of you know, I've recently been posting MGLN fics over at ff.net, and more than one person (markesellus and RadiantBeam among them) mentioned that I should take a look over here. So I did. And after I picked my jaw up off the floor at the sheer amount of Nanoha fiction here (and all the familiar names...), I decided to sign up. So here I am!

*ducks*

Um, and since it's customary to bring gifts or something...at least in some cultures...some of which I may have heard of...here's a little something. It started out being one of the "Vivio's Magical Omake Theater!" bits that I clip onto the end of my Nanoha fics, but it got kind of out of hand until it was a story of its own. So...um, it's a good way to see if I've managed to figure out how to make these spoiler tags work?

Anyway, it takes place in, sort of, my own future-Vivio continuity, now on its second story.

Spoiler for How Reputations Are Made:


Anyway, so, hi!
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Old 2008-10-22, 12:14   Link #10213
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Spoiler for pornstar!Vivio pt. 6:
Funny and sweet. I think the notion that what's happened to Vivio should be tragic but somehow (to her) isn't gives the story a kind of underlying poignancy. Makes me wonder if Syn and Vivio will meet up again when Vivio shows up on the set for work...
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Old 2008-10-22, 12:31   Link #10214
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Hi! As some of you know, I've recently been posting MGLN fics over at ff.net, and more than one person (markesellus and RadiantBeam among them) mentioned that I should take a look over here. So I did. And after I picked my jaw up off the floor at the sheer amount of Nanoha fiction here (and all the familiar names...), I decided to sign up. So here I am!

*ducks*

Um, and since it's customary to bring gifts or something...at least in some cultures...some of which I may have heard of...here's a little something. It started out being one of the "Vivio's Magical Omake Theater!" bits that I clip onto the end of my Nanoha fics, but it got kind of out of hand until it was a story of its own. So...um, it's a good way to see if I've managed to figure out how to make these spoiler tags work?

Anyway, it takes place in, sort of, my own future-Vivio continuity, now on its second story.

Spoiler for How Reputations Are Made:
Welcome to the thread! Take your shoes off and stay a while...

The gift, while unnecessary, was very nice. I believe you just gave me more things to distract myself with.

Your next step, if you chose to accept, should be to head over to the Fan Fiction chat on IRC... (see satashi's signature for details) Though be forewarned, its more of a social gathering than strict Nanoha fanfiction discussion.
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Old 2008-10-22, 12:34   Link #10215
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Wow, I really like this series :3

Spoiler for pornstar!Vivio pt. 6:

Nice one as usual Satashi
Syn's working at Vivio's place isn't she



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Hi! As some of you know, I've recently been posting MGLN fics over at ff.net, and more than one person (markesellus and RadiantBeam among them) mentioned that I should take a look over here. So I did. And after I picked my jaw up off the floor at the sheer amount of Nanoha fiction here (and all the familiar names...), I decided to sign up. So here I am!

*ducks*

Um, and since it's customary to bring gifts or something...at least in some cultures...some of which I may have heard of...here's a little something. It started out being one of the "Vivio's Magical Omake Theater!" bits that I clip onto the end of my Nanoha fics, but it got kind of out of hand until it was a story of its own. So...um, it's a good way to see if I've managed to figure out how to make these spoiler tags work?

Anyway, it takes place in, sort of, my own future-Vivio continuity, now on its second story.

Spoiler for How Reputations Are Made:


Anyway, so, hi!
So you finally made over here DezoPenguin, been reading a few of your stories on ff.net
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Old 2008-10-22, 13:22   Link #10216
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Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.7:
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Old 2008-10-22, 14:16   Link #10217
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Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.7:
I am waiting for someone to come up to Vivio when shes in public and start saying all kinds of obscene things to her and possibly Syn.

"Hey girls, want to have a three-way? I know you like that kind of stuff Eyes the way you...."

and so on and so on...

Be a real eye opener for Syn of what Vivio does for a living. But since this is fluffish/crackish i don't expect any problems to come up.
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Old 2008-10-22, 15:01   Link #10218
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Yes, I hate you. And you know why? Because it does end HERE!

No seriously. It was great and I was hoping for this outcome. Maybe because there are probably only three fics (AFAIK) featuring Nanoha x Fate x Hayate treesome. And when I think about it, creators of this anime are probably serving this treesome too. Do you remember where Hayate asked Nanoha and Fate whether they will help her with her own unit?
three fics? mind telling where to find those? it's hard enough to see a F and H fic, any suggestion for that as well?
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Old 2008-10-22, 15:10   Link #10219
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Originally Posted by DezoPenguin View Post
Hi! As some of you know, I've recently been posting MGLN fics over at ff.net, and more than one person (markesellus and RadiantBeam among them) mentioned that I should take a look over here. So I did. And after I picked my jaw up off the floor at the sheer amount of Nanoha fiction here (and all the familiar names...), I decided to sign up. So here I am!

*ducks*

Um, and since it's customary to bring gifts or something...at least in some cultures...some of which I may have heard of...here's a little something. It started out being one of the "Vivio's Magical Omake Theater!" bits that I clip onto the end of my Nanoha fics, but it got kind of out of hand until it was a story of its own. So...um, it's a good way to see if I've managed to figure out how to make these spoiler tags work?

Anyway, it takes place in, sort of, my own future-Vivio continuity, now on its second story.

Spoiler for How Reputations Are Made:


Anyway, so, hi!
Welcome! Glad to have you aboard :3 Enjoy your stay, pull up a chair, and chat your brains out. I don't read fanfiction so I'm not familiar with your name, but I gave that little present of yours a read and I must say, it's not that bad. Vita and Vivio were cute, and the ending made me giggle.

As our local cat told you, feel free to come to our chatroom, the link is under my signature. Don't be scared, it's just a social gathering spot that we all hang out in ^_^

Once again, welcome ^_^
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Old 2008-10-22, 16:02   Link #10220
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Hi! As some of you know, I've recently been posting MGLN fics over at ff.net, and more than one person (markesellus and RadiantBeam among them) mentioned that I should take a look over here. So I did. And after I picked my jaw up off the floor at the sheer amount of Nanoha fiction here (and all the familiar names...), I decided to sign up. So here I am!

*ducks*

Um, and since it's customary to bring gifts or something...at least in some cultures...some of which I may have heard of...here's a little something. It started out being one of the "Vivio's Magical Omake Theater!" bits that I clip onto the end of my Nanoha fics, but it got kind of out of hand until it was a story of its own. So...um, it's a good way to see if I've managed to figure out how to make these spoiler tags work?

Anyway, it takes place in, sort of, my own future-Vivio continuity, now on its second story.

Spoiler for How Reputations Are Made:


Anyway, so, hi!
DEZO! *tackle*

Hey buddy! Long time no talk.

And your omake... I've said it before and I'll say it again, how do you come up with this stuff? It gets me everytime. Poor Nanoha. I can just imagine the look on her face after walking in on the destruction Vivio caused. XD

Speaking of Vivio, I saw your new fic on FF.net and plan to review it as soon as I can. I apologize for the delay; I've been very busy. Sorry about that... but I'm definitely reviewing it.

*goes to edit Stars and Thunder again because of Verossa's damn name.*
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