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Old 2008-10-24, 17:45   Link #10281
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It's a tie, but B was ahead when I wrote this so tacobell it is :P

Laith Cameo this time :P

Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt. 12:

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Old 2008-10-24, 18:40   Link #10282
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It's a tie, but B was ahead when I wrote this so tacobell it is :P

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...I demand a change. I can´t be working under that do... errh wolf.

/me goes to the emo corner
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Old 2008-10-24, 19:22   Link #10283
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It's a tie, but B was ahead when I wrote this so tacobell it is :P

Laith Cameo this time :P

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nya-hahah XD Sata-chan... i love this >_<!!!

hmm... if they go to a restraunt... or a cafe waitress!kokoro might make an appearance! lol

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Old 2008-10-24, 19:31   Link #10284
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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 16:


Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13
-Chapter 14
-Chapter 15
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Okay, I need to ask you guys something. I was thinking over chapter one of my fic, and for some reason this little detail has been bugging the heck out of me all day.

Originally I planned to have Nanoha be fifteen when she meets up with Fate, Yuuno, and Hayate again, to keep true to the timeskip in A's. However, lately I've been wondering if maybe I should push her age up to seventeen, since that seems to be a common age for her in AU fics and fics focused on her pre-StrikerS anyway.

I'm not totally sure. Fifteen would be easier to write in accordance to canon, I think, but seventeen seems really popular by fanfiction standards. What do you guys have to say?
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Old 2008-10-24, 19:48   Link #10286
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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 16:


Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13
-Chapter 14
-Chapter 15
A, please and thank you...
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Old 2008-10-24, 19:51   Link #10287
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Okay, I need to ask you guys something. I was thinking over chapter one of my fic, and for some reason this little detail has been bugging the heck out of me all day.

Originally I planned to have Nanoha be fifteen when she meets up with Fate, Yuuno, and Hayate again, to keep true to the timeskip in A's. However, lately I've been wondering if maybe I should push her age up to seventeen, since that seems to be a common age for her in AU fics and fics focused on her pre-StrikerS anyway.

I'm not totally sure. Fifteen would be easier to write in accordance to canon, I think, but seventeen seems really popular by fanfiction standards. What do you guys have to say?
This is strictly my own opinion and even then I diverge from it at times: It essentially boils down to yourself.
If the fic itself sticks to canon for most situations (timeline-wise) then I would recommend going with canon. However, if any other age suits you better, go for it, I don't think most people in FFT would see that as a problem.
However, choosing an age due to popularity might not be the best solution. You are the writer, not popularity in itself.
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Old 2008-10-24, 20:01   Link #10288
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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 16:


Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13
-Chapter 14
-Chapter 15
According to my expirience in this situation game-wise, shoot the mobile enemies first. They are a nuisance. so B

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Okay, I need to ask you guys something. I was thinking over chapter one of my fic, and for some reason this little detail has been bugging the heck out of me all day.

Originally I planned to have Nanoha be fifteen when she meets up with Fate, Yuuno, and Hayate again, to keep true to the timeskip in A's. However, lately I've been wondering if maybe I should push her age up to seventeen, since that seems to be a common age for her in AU fics and fics focused on her pre-StrikerS anyway.

I'm not totally sure. Fifteen would be easier to write in accordance to canon, I think, but seventeen seems really popular by fanfiction standards. What do you guys have to say?
Well, you can always go rebel and put them at 16 XD. Talking seriously, depends on the direction and ypur preference. Dont make decisions out of popularity.
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Old 2008-10-24, 20:18   Link #10289
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This is strictly my own opinion and even then I diverge from it at times: It essentially boils down to yourself.
If the fic itself sticks to canon for most situations (timeline-wise) then I would recommend going with canon. However, if any other age suits you better, go for it, I don't think most people in FFT would see that as a problem.
However, choosing an age due to popularity might not be the best solution. You are the writer, not popularity in itself.
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Well, you can always go rebel and put them at 16 XD. Talking seriously, depends on the direction and ypur preference. Dont make decisions out of popularity.
Thanks. ^__^

I don't know why it's bothering me so much. I originally wanted to keep her at fifteen since it's easier on me canon-wise and serves, in a way, as an alternate ending to the events of A's. I guess I've been reading too many fanfics.

Still, I wanna see what other people say before I decide for sure...
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Old 2008-10-24, 20:33   Link #10290
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Just don't write the age. In anime, the age range 13-20 or so more or less overlap in terms of what you can do with them anyway.

The real decision point is, are they still living on Earth or Mid? Just decide on one, don't write the age, and let them speculate.
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Old 2008-10-24, 21:08   Link #10291
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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 16:


Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13
-Chapter 14
-Chapter 15

I am going for C.
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Old 2008-10-24, 21:33   Link #10292
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Tired. Bored. Wanted to write something. And Voltaire don't get enough love.
I like it, there isn't anything about Voltaire in the thread, and it was really sweet.
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It's a tie, but B was ahead when I wrote this so tacobell it is :P

Laith Cameo this time :P

Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt. 12:
Hmmm, almost got Vivio to talk about her job, but of course timely interruptions.

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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 16:


Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13
-Chapter 14
-Chapter 15
I say....A The guard could warn people or ask for reinforcements.
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Okay, I need to ask you guys something. I was thinking over chapter one of my fic, and for some reason this little detail has been bugging the heck out of me all day.

Originally I planned to have Nanoha be fifteen when she meets up with Fate, Yuuno, and Hayate again, to keep true to the timeskip in A's. However, lately I've been wondering if maybe I should push her age up to seventeen, since that seems to be a common age for her in AU fics and fics focused on her pre-StrikerS anyway.

I'm not totally sure. Fifteen would be easier to write in accordance to canon, I think, but seventeen seems really popular by fanfiction standards. What do you guys have to say?
Which is easier for you? I doesn't matter to me personally. It's your story. Remember WWYD (what would you do) not WWUD (what would a unicorn do).
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Old 2008-10-24, 22:38   Link #10293
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OMG poor Vivio lol

Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt.8:


Pageclaim for frantic hiding of items!
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Yay, Saharet Cameo!

Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.9:

multiple choice, why not? Should Syn pick...

A.) Modest, cute clothes
B.) Gothic, punk clothes
C.) Revealing, sexy clothes


Um....... Let's go with pink again, it'll be my color ^^
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Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt 10 section 1:


A.) Watch a movie
B.) get ice cream
C.) browse more stores
D.) End date here

Chat room votes only here!

Spoiler for section 2 (B):


A.) Feed ice cream to Vivio
B.) Take turns eating it

chatroom votes!

Spoiler for section three (B):


A.) Go into the toy store
B.) Go into the music store
C.) Go into the jewelry store
D.) End your date here.

Chatroom votes

Spoiler for section 4 (D):


A.) Try and kiss Vivio
B.) Try and hug Vivio
C.) Smile and wave
D.) Hint that Syn wants to go inside

Chatroom votes

Spoiler for Section 5 (D):


Interactive date over, returning to regular PS!V now ^_^
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Spacebrotha cameo this time!

@Ghaz: A Vivio/Syn lemon? hmmm..... Okay, I'll do it in this story, when it's time to do it. A nice respectful,tastefully done lemon ^^

This PS!V is a little more mature. No hentai or lemons, but more so than my normal stuff. AKA Vivio at her job and speaking about it a little. Why I chose to put this in is because it shows how Vivio thinks about her job and her confusion about real emotion.

Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt.11:

A.) Get Syn something spicy
B.) Get Syn some fast food
C.) get Syn something nice from a restaurant, to-go.
D.) Get Syn some snacks, something sweet.
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It's a tie, but B was ahead when I wrote this so tacobell it is :P

Laith Cameo this time :P

Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt. 12:

awww. vivio and syn ftw!!! i likw syn veeeeery much.
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Old 2008-10-24, 23:31   Link #10294
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Old 2008-10-24, 23:47   Link #10295
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Thanks. ^__^

I don't know why it's bothering me so much. I originally wanted to keep her at fifteen since it's easier on me canon-wise and serves, in a way, as an alternate ending to the events of A's. I guess I've been reading too many fanfics.

Still, I wanna see what other people say before I decide for sure...
I'm wondering how canon affects this story? By which I mean, Nanoha's had a very different life between the end of A's and the start of your story than canon Nanoha did. By definition that's going to affect the course of her life, what she's done in her career, the kind of bonds she formed with her friends, the kind of growing-up she did. It may very well affect the course of other people's lives as well (Fate's especially--given how emotionally dependent she was on Nanoha at that age, having Nanoha not be the always-strong Ace and having to cope with serious life-changing problems of her own is going to inevitably affect what Fate did, though probably tightening her family bonds with Lindy, Chrono, etc.).

So unless you're going to bring in elements of the StrikerS plot which occur at a certain time based on the actions of third parties unconcerned with Nanoha (i.e. Jail's not likely to change his schedule just because one girl lost her ability to cast magic) and you feel really uncomfortable with changing that, then anything that happened in-series after you insert your major changes is irrelevant.

Therefore, what you should do is consider what your plotline requires. Is there a scene where Nanoha or one of the main cast needs to be driving a car? Better make them sixteen or older. Is it important that they NOT be worried about college entrance exams (or TSAB career-path examinations?)? Make them younger. My preference as a reader is that the story be as consistent and internally logical as possible, so if you're asking for reader votes, I'd have to go with "whatever best suits your story and your personal tastes." Sounds corny, I know, but there it is.

Unless, of course, I'm commenting about the wrong fic entirely.
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Old 2008-10-24, 23:54   Link #10296
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And... ironic i make an update of wolves.
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Old 2008-10-24, 23:55   Link #10297
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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 16:


Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13
-Chapter 14
-Chapter 15
B, seems to be the "correct" choice?
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Old 2008-10-25, 00:33   Link #10298
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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 16:


Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13
-Chapter 14
-Chapter 15
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Old 2008-10-25, 01:14   Link #10299
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I'm wondering how canon affects this story? By which I mean, Nanoha's had a very different life between the end of A's and the start of your story than canon Nanoha did. By definition that's going to affect the course of her life, what she's done in her career, the kind of bonds she formed with her friends, the kind of growing-up she did. It may very well affect the course of other people's lives as well (Fate's especially--given how emotionally dependent she was on Nanoha at that age, having Nanoha not be the always-strong Ace and having to cope with serious life-changing problems of her own is going to inevitably affect what Fate did, though probably tightening her family bonds with Lindy, Chrono, etc.).

So unless you're going to bring in elements of the StrikerS plot which occur at a certain time based on the actions of third parties unconcerned with Nanoha (i.e. Jail's not likely to change his schedule just because one girl lost her ability to cast magic) and you feel really uncomfortable with changing that, then anything that happened in-series after you insert your major changes is irrelevant.

Therefore, what you should do is consider what your plotline requires. Is there a scene where Nanoha or one of the main cast needs to be driving a car? Better make them sixteen or older. Is it important that they NOT be worried about college entrance exams (or TSAB career-path examinations?)? Make them younger. My preference as a reader is that the story be as consistent and internally logical as possible, so if you're asking for reader votes, I'd have to go with "whatever best suits your story and your personal tastes." Sounds corny, I know, but there it is.

Unless, of course, I'm commenting about the wrong fic entirely.
I pretty much agree with Dezo here. (Especially the part about Fate. XD *hints*)
Although, I must say I'd like 15 after A's more, because of the bigger impacts made on Fate and Yuuno and the rest of the cast.
^Which is pretty much the whole reason I like the idea other than Nanoha using guns LOL.
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Old 2008-10-25, 02:30   Link #10300
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I like Charlotte she's so cute/funny when she forgets to be formal or when she scolds Ashcroft. That whole conversation about the random gunner was interesting. Important? Maybe. I like how he's called old fruit. So I wonder who this apprentice is? The first person who comes to mind is Hayate, but who knows?
OMG ITS NOT A FOOTNOTE!
Eck-hem, yes, marke, it isn't a footnote, thanks

Charlotte and Ashcroft have a dysfunctional relationship, much like his relationships with everyone else in general. 4% he doesn't like them, 95% mutual dislike, and 1% mutual acceptance or further. And as to the gunner, if he/she/whatever was mentioned, it's either important, or related. I try not to dilate too much on things that aren't of any future importance

I think I know why Hayate came to mind first...but let's wait a bit, eh?

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This PS!V is a little more mature. No hentai or lemons, but more so than my normal stuff. AKA Vivio at her job and speaking about it a little. Why I chose to put this in is because it shows how Vivio thinks about her job and her confusion about real emotion.

Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt.11:

A.) Get Syn something spicy
B.) Get Syn some fast food
C.) get Syn something nice from a restaurant, to-go.
D.) Get Syn some snacks, something sweet.
A was my choice, but heck that really. Damn the difference between time zones

My vote always goes to the more spicy choice. Spicy is good...makes the taste of lemon better...

(Now I really wish I had posted earlier! ) *flails*



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Tired. Bored. Wanted to write something. And Voltaire don't get enough love.
Hahaha. Sounds like him, even though I thought Caro and Voltaire had a more PriestessXDragonGod relationship if anything...

Still, it's FIERY.

Poetic AX much?

To be honest, though, it still needs a little improvement...I could only feel his kingliness part of the time.

For one important thing, "That does not mean" isn't exactly very fitting someone of his stature...and so on. In short: it's mostly the tone. He doesn't sound very great, or not as great and majestic as he's supposed to be.

If you might want a bit more comments, I'll reserve that for a PM!

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It's a tie, but B was ahead when I wrote this so tacobell it is :P

Laith Cameo this time :P

Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt. 12:
Damn...you left us hanging on the VivSyn issue...damn it.

Nevermind, taco breath scene was especially hilarious...can't believe that they'd say it that way. Looking forward to more Sata VxS lemon.

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And after my last little outing, here's another segment, a little more active than the last one.

Here goes nothing again!

@wanwan1203: And yes, this is the continuation.
@markesellus: And no, it isn't Hayate, but she'll have her turn...

The ZENITH Project

Spoiler for Second Segment:


It's a bit shorter than the last one, since I can't hold action very long...Comments on how to improve would be most appreciated

And as I said before, Character Guides will come out later...

Spoiler for Ehem! Ehem!:


Xena, away.
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