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Old 2008-10-31, 17:19   Link #10441
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@Knight of L you know better than to read something with 'pornstar' in the title at school
For real!

And this world's Syn is a tomboy "Back street" type of girl. :3
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Old 2008-10-31, 20:15   Link #10442
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But it's more fun that wayyyyyyy I did have the decency to close the screen by the time I offered the seat on my other side to a classmate. :3

^^ Besides, I live on campus. Which means I'm never away from school. And as if I'd pass up installments of PS!Vivio just cuz of a measly setback like getting caught with it... :3

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Old 2008-10-31, 23:05   Link #10443
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Well, this has certainly been a long time coming . At least a month since I wrote the last chapter? Should probably link to the first two chapters...

Moving On
Prologue
First Impressions

Spoiler for Good Mornings and Goodbyes:


On a sidenote, does anyone have some advice for getting a Beta-Reader? I think my self-checking is only getting me so far .
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Old 2008-11-01, 04:24   Link #10444
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Spoiler for MGLN Second Part Chapter 1:


I have a picture of that hole in the sky but can't upload the pic. Can anyone tell me how? Anyway, the Belkan facts are made up.

What possible explanation is there for Hayate's feeling of giddiness?
A)She is tired
B)Selective AMF ?
C)Who cares
Well this is pretty cool, it'd be cooler if some of the Belkan facts were true, but meh. Anyway to post an image in here its [IMG]insert the url of the picture.[/IMG] or just press the button at the top (that kind of looks like mountains). B?

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...Did you just call me lazy?!

I will ignore that fact. Anyways in response to The Chat Device, sadly it hasn't gotten the feedback I expected (Which wasn't even that much to being with haha) and the questions I have to work with are just a few.

I should have enough written to meet my personal mim. word limit soon.
Well, that's good to hear, I was just wondering. When I think of a good question I'll PM you.
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Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.20:


What do you think? I liked this part
I liked this part, albeit slightly evil. I love how Vivio talks to her mom. She has the greatest timing.
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We've got FANFIC SIIIIIIGN!


I'm going to post up a link to the first six chapters I've completed of MSLN Test Dummies. These are the more or less cleaned up variation. (Most fo <----(Lol, typo talking about fixing typos... how lame is that?) the grammar and spelling is fixed... might be some switched letter words hiding in it the spellchecker can't find.)


I suggest, in advance, that if you're going to power through this in a Marathon, it's six chapters spanning exactly 140 pages. So you are warned.

For chapter by chapter breakdown and estimations: (Except the sheezyart link won't have page numbers...)

T = reading time: At 2 minutes a page

C1: Pages 1 - 12 (12) T: 24m
C2: Pages 12 - 25 (13) T: 26m
C4: Pages 25 - 75 (50) T: 1h 40m *
C5: Pages 75 - 99 (24) T: 48m
C6 Pages 99 - 140 (41) T: 1h 22m

Total Estimated T: 4 hr 20m
This may help you.

(*I should split Chapter 4 into two parts. It has two sections, roughly equal size.)


And now the link.

MSLN Test Dummies: Chapters 1 - 6
http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1924754/
Wow...I'll definitely read that...when I have the time.
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Well, this has certainly been a long time coming . At least a month since I wrote the last chapter? Should probably link to the first two chapters...

Moving On
Prologue
First Impressions

Spoiler for Good Mornings and Goodbyes:


On a sidenote, does anyone have some advice for getting a Beta-Reader? I think my self-checking is only getting me so far .
An update? Yay! God, Reinforce I is the best (not that I don't like zwei). Mmm, she's so mysterious. I love that reading part, that was classy. Looks like Reinforce needs to stop getting so close to Hayate, not the other way around. As for Beta-Reading...I'd take up that offer, I mean I'm already Beta-ing another story that doesn't update too often so I would be happy to help you.

@Knight of L: Nice XD. That's happened to me but worse...it was the image thread. Yay for tabbed browsing?

@Thread: HAPPY HALLOWEEN a.k.a free candy day.
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Old 2008-11-01, 05:09   Link #10445
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Spoiler for previously...:
Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.20:


What do you think? I liked this part
wow, that was wow, to tell you the truth, it well written, Satashi my favo Hero.

i can't wait till part 21.
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Old 2008-11-01, 05:21   Link #10446
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I'm trying to develop the Reapers a bit more. This is one part of their history and I will try to develop them some more when, IF, the series end.
Chapter 11 is still being written and is nowhere near completition. Hopefully, what I've learned will come in handy and I'm trying to make the best chapter to date.
Spoiler for Reaper Models and Versions Information:
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Old 2008-11-01, 10:06   Link #10447
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PornStar!Vivio parts 1-12

Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio parts 13-20:

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Old 2008-11-01, 10:43   Link #10448
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...

I'm being mauled by Lutecia/Vivio plotbunnies. Somebody get them off of me.
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Old 2008-11-01, 10:58   Link #10449
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*Throws on another one*

...

What?
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Old 2008-11-01, 11:02   Link #10450
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>__>

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Not helping.

*contemplates writing a short Lutecia/Vivio story to appease the plotbunnies*
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Old 2008-11-01, 11:59   Link #10451
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I know I'm double-posting, and I apologize... but it's for a good reason! I have something new for you guys, especially for all of you from chat...

A Lutecia/Vivio one-shot! Post StrikerS, Vivio is 13 and Lutecia is 17. They might be OOC, but I'm not sure. I think they're good.

Spoiler for Never Been Kissed:


I might try putting it on FF.net... just to see the reviews I'd get.
RadiantBeam, who, bless her, is a fan of my "Vivio's Magical Omake Theater!" segments that I tack on to the end of my longer Nanoha fics, requested that I write an omake segment for "Never Been Kissed," showing Nanoha and Fate spying on Vivio during this story.

She may regret that I said yes. I mean, this can't possibly help her bunny problems...

Spoiler for Nostalgic!Fate:


Incidentally, if you're wondering why Nanoha picked "thirty-six" and "forty," well, take a glance at my age...then remind yourselves that my wife is four years older than I am.

Last edited by DezoPenguin; 2008-11-01 at 12:23. Reason: Frag, missed an italic...
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Old 2008-11-01, 12:32   Link #10452
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@Laith Was your CYOA type story finished?

@Knight of L-sama What happened to Shard Card 2 and the NanoVita story?

@RadiantBeam I read your previous Vivio/Lutecia story... while it was good, the emotional aspects seemed a bit weak...

@Thread Why does NanoFate seem to prevent all the other yuri from surfacing (HayaVita, Fatenum, NanoVita, etc)?
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Old 2008-11-01, 12:38   Link #10453
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@Laith Was your CYOA type story finished?
No there are three factors that prevent me to write it.

1.- Real life... ya same excuse.
2.- Hit a plot wall, so i have to start thinking about that
3.- My beta was having a hellish week so i decided to give it a break.

But i havent forgot it, its being written and... should be updated soon


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@Thread Why does NanoFate seem to prevent all the other yuri from surfacing (HayaVita, Fatenum, NanoVita, etc)?
...Ask the legion, they know the answer. (Though i try to bring new flavor to the fandom in here)
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Old 2008-11-01, 13:55   Link #10454
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@RadiantBeam I read your previous Vivio/Lutecia story... while it was good, the emotional aspects seemed a bit weak...
Why did it seem weak? Authors can't improve on things unless people give specific examples of why readers were displeased.

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@Thread Why does NanoFate seem to prevent all the other yuri from surfacing (HayaVita, Fatenum, NanoVita, etc)?
It doesn't really, there just arn't that many shippers of them. I really don't think people won't post just because there are N/F stories. Just look a few pages back where everyone was begging for other pairings. That's why I'm doing so much Syn/Vivio now. I'm a little burnt on N/F
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Old 2008-11-01, 14:52   Link #10455
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RadiantBeam, who, bless her, is a fan of my "Vivio's Magical Omake Theater!" segments that I tack on to the end of my longer Nanoha fics, requested that I write an omake segment for "Never Been Kissed," showing Nanoha and Fate spying on Vivio during this story.

She may regret that I said yes. I mean, this can't possibly help her bunny problems...

Spoiler for Nostalgic!Fate:


Incidentally, if you're wondering why Nanoha picked "thirty-six" and "forty," well, take a glance at my age...then remind yourselves that my wife is four years older than I am.
Haha, that was good. Nanoha was sure bold back in the day. Though four years isn't that much of an age difference. My sister is dating some 10 years older to her....
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It can wait. Besides, by the time they're done talking, I'll have worked you up an appetite.
Go Fate!

@Satashi: Condensed PS!Vivio ftw.
@AX: Interesting. Nice to remind myself of the reapers. BTW, I love your new avatar. It's really cute.
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Old 2008-11-01, 15:16   Link #10456
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@Thread Why does NanoFate seem to prevent all the other yuri from surfacing (HayaVita, Fatenum, NanoVita, etc)?
Do you mean in total, or just in this thread?

In this thread I'll say its because those who write, while they may like the other pairings, like NanoFate the best. Other writers write to entertain others, and since NanoFate is without argument the most popular pairing, they'll write that.

In total... that gets a bit risque. For one, NanoFate is the most popular, mostly because it is also the most obvious. The other pairings are there, as there were several NanoVita scenes I greatly enjoyed in StrikerS and one or two NanoTea, NanoSuba and Fatenum scenes too, but they're not as obvious as NanoFate. SubaTea is a close runnerup in popularity, also because it is the more obvious.

Just watch, if Seven Arcs ever releases some official NanoVita or Fatenum art, the fanart and fanfic circles will explode with art and fics.

On this side of the ocean, a certain amount of rabidness of the more extreme NanoFate fans can't also be denied. There are some purists out there who will flame you to pieces if you even so much as dare suggest a pairing other then NanoFate. And when you get Yuuno involved.... hoo boy. <_<

Anyway, as this thread shows, very few dislike the fresh pairings. All NanoVita ficklets, small or big, were well received, and the same goes for the other pairings.

It's just that most of the writers like NanoFate better, so obviously they'll spend their time writing that.
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Old 2008-11-01, 15:43   Link #10457
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PornStar!Vivio parts 1-12
PornStar!Vivio parts 13-20

Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.21:

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Old 2008-11-01, 16:08   Link #10458
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RadiantBeam, who, bless her, is a fan of my "Vivio's Magical Omake Theater!" segments that I tack on to the end of my longer Nanoha fics, requested that I write an omake segment for "Never Been Kissed," showing Nanoha and Fate spying on Vivio during this story.

She may regret that I said yes. I mean, this can't possibly help her bunny problems...

Spoiler for Nostalgic!Fate:


Incidentally, if you're wondering why Nanoha picked "thirty-six" and "forty," well, take a glance at my age...then remind yourselves that my wife is four years older than I am.
Nice, DezoPenguin, that was cute, I always love how you portray your adult and motherly Fate and Nanoha, they seem very... adult? Well, maybe it's the voice of the experience speaking there ^^

@Keroko: I'm re-reading your last post, but I can't find a reason to argue with you yet... that's a bad thing, if we agree with something bad things will happen. Let's hope we find that reason so we don't delay our weekend quarrel more than this ^^

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if you even so much as dare suggest a pairing other then NanoFate.
What a relief! I found it! I don't agree with that "e"!
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Old 2008-11-01, 16:09   Link #10459
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PornStar!Vivio parts 1-12
PornStar!Vivio parts 13-20

Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.21:
It'd be awkward if Syn came to visit while Vivio was doing a video diary.
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Old 2008-11-01, 16:16   Link #10460
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As for Beta-Reading...I'd take up that offer, I mean I'm already Beta-ing another story that doesn't update too often so I would be happy to help you.
I'll be more than happy to take you up on that offer .
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