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Old 2008-11-01, 16:17   Link #10461
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@Keroko: I'm re-reading your last post, but I can't find a reason to argue with you yet... that's a bad thing, if we agree with something bad things will happen. Let's hope we find that reason so we don't delay our weekend quarrel more than this ^^
Hmm, I'm currently a bit tightly booked. Playing WAR, arguing with Ark, writing fanmail to Eyes, and it was a busy week too...

I think we can take a weekend off.

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What a relief! I found it! I don't agree with that "e"!
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Told you I wouldn't be able to get rid of that habit. I think I'm gonna go ahead and call it a quirk.
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Old 2008-11-01, 16:26   Link #10462
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Hmm, I'm currently a bit tightly booked. Playing WAR, arguing with Ark, writing fanmail to Eyes, and it was a busy week too...

I think we can take a weekend off.

Told you I wouldn't be able to get rid of that habit. I think I'm gonna go ahead and call it a quirk.
LOL, you made me smile
Make the best of your peaceful weekend xD

Cuídense y sigan sonriendo
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Old 2008-11-01, 18:32   Link #10463
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PornStar!Vivio parts 1-12
PornStar!Vivio parts 13-20

Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.21:
Yay for Allquall! Who hasn't been around lately. Angel too, who also is very rare to see. Of course Wan is a fan being resident perv and all. It will be interesting since Syn's working for them. I sense evilness ahead.
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Old 2008-11-01, 19:00   Link #10464
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She may regret that I said yes. I mean, this can't possibly help her bunny problems...

Spoiler for Nostalgic!Fate:
Thank you! Thank you! A thousand times, thank you!

And you're right... this doesn't help my bunnies in the least. XD But it's still adorable to read. I'm so glad I followed my gut instinct and had Vivio go for the tongue instead of Lutecia. But poor Nanoha. Lutecia's lucky Fate was there, otherwise she'd be on the wrong end of Raising Heart.

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@RadiantBeam I read your previous Vivio/Lutecia story... while it was good, the emotional aspects seemed a bit weak...
That might be because I wasn't exactly aiming for an emotional aspect. Really, Never Been Kissed was just supposed to be a light, funny little story about Vivio wanting her first kiss and Lutecia being hesitant about the idea. Any emotional aspects between the two occur after Lutecia kisses Vivio.
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Old 2008-11-01, 21:00   Link #10465
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[/SPOILER]
Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.20:


What do you think? I liked this part
I like it too!!! Its so cute! ^^

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PornStar!Vivio parts 1-12
PornStar!Vivio parts 13-20

Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.21:
Syn is so lucky. She's dating a pornstar! lol! and yay for Wan here!!! :P
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Old 2008-11-01, 22:09   Link #10466
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Chapter 22 is chatroom votes.
Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.22:

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Old 2008-11-01, 23:41   Link #10467
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@Thread Why does NanoFate seem to prevent all the other yuri from surfacing (HayaVita, Fatenum, NanoVita, etc)?
I'd have to largely agree with Satashi and Keroko on this one. Simply put, Fate and Nanoha are the most popular characters in the franchise, so they're likely to be the ones people want to write about. Likewise, the original source material is heavy on the NanoFate ship-tease, and not so much for other pairings (plus, for the pairings that involve Nanoha or Fate, the fact that there's much more support for NanoFate makes it harder to imagine the characters in a particular situation--i.e. Fate and Signum are set up in A's as rivals who grow to respect one another, which is a traditional set-up for shameless shipping, but not while one-half of the ship is actually sleeping in the same bed with a different woman and raising a daughter with her.

So I'd just say it's the natural order of things within the franchise that there'd be more NanoFate shipping fics than fics with other characters, that's all.

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Haha, that was good. Nanoha was sure bold back in the day. Though four years isn't that much of an age difference. My sister is dating some 10 years older to her....
Favorite line? Go Fate!
Glad you liked it! Heh, Nanoha is always bold; I can never imagine her being passive about her feelings.

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PornStar!Vivio parts 1-12
PornStar!Vivio parts 13-20

Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.21:
All right! I was hoping that a condensed version would come along; chapters have been getting difficult to find when I wanted to go back and look at them...as for Chapter 21, I'd have to say that Wan's guest appearance was pricelessly cute. Vivio has a fan at Syn's workplace!

I bet the waterproof camera idea would generate a fair number of e-mails...

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Nice, DezoPenguin, that was cute, I always love how you portray your adult and motherly Fate and Nanoha, they seem very... adult? Well, maybe it's the voice of the experience speaking there ^^
Thanks. I kind of have to wing it on "motherly" since I don't have kids, but yes, it's a little easier for me to identify with adult-and-holding-down-a-full-time-job StrikerS NanoFate than I can with elementary-school-age NanoFate.

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Thank you! Thank you! A thousand times, thank you!

And you're right... this doesn't help my bunnies in the least. XD But it's still adorable to read. I'm so glad I followed my gut instinct and had Vivio go for the tongue instead of Lutecia. But poor Nanoha. Lutecia's lucky Fate was there, otherwise she'd be on the wrong end of Raising Heart.
You're welcome! *hands out carrots* Besides, I owed you one for letting me use that line from "Winter," anyway...I think "Snowflakes" turned out really well for a fluff fic, so I'm glad to return the favor.

Lutecia's lucky? Heh, given the end line, I'd say it's Nanoha who's lucky Fate was there.

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Spoiler for Previously...:


Chapter 22 is chatroom votes.
Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.22:
Vivio's hellbent on sharing her cold, isn't she? I'm getting nervous thoughts about her unwillingness to take care of herself (though I'm also getting flashbacks to "Onyx Days" and "Diamond Dust)...but in the end I figure it's going to be Syn who gets really sick in the end, because...well, this is a Satashi fic and it's Syn we're talking about. She always gets it in the neck in your fics!

(Of course, having her start the fic unemployed and a whisper away from ending up homeless might have been this story's The Universe Hoses Syn moment...so maybe she gets to take care of a sick Vivio instead? We can always hope!)
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Old 2008-11-02, 00:38   Link #10468
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Why did it seem weak? Authors can't improve on things unless people give specific examples of why readers were displeased.
It just felt like something wasn't right... that it seemed a bit too rushed, in establishing the scene. Pephaps maybe a longer intro(?) that established that Vivio had long held feelings towards Lutecia, and this was why Vivio choose Lutecia, instead of some other girl... then maybe I would have felt more of the emotional impact of the story...

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It doesn't really, there just arn't that many shippers of them. I really don't think people won't post just because there are N/F stories. Just look a few pages back where everyone was begging for other pairings. That's why I'm doing so much Syn/Vivio now. I'm a little burnt on N/F
I guess too much of a good thing applies even to NanoFate, then...
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Old 2008-11-02, 04:37   Link #10469
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Chapter 22 is chatroom votes.
Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.22:
Well the options are, get Syn sick, get Syn sick, or not get Syn sick. Well maybe she'll get sick anyway. Vivio should really take her medicine, its important! The cute snuggly scene makes me all warm inside.

@Vivio Testarossa:
Well I guess some people get tired of reading/writing the same pairing (at least that's how it is here). But at the same time a great many read NanoFate and other pairings. NanoFate is more obvious in the shows giving it a lot of base. I like reading all pairings (and I mean all) as long as it's a good story. It's always refreshing to read all the different stories and parings on this thread.
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Old 2008-11-02, 08:24   Link #10470
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Chapter 22 is chatroom votes.
Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.22:

i LOVE IT Satashi, i love the last part, keep going.

i pick up BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB.
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Old 2008-11-02, 08:42   Link #10471
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Ah Onyx Days! That was the fiction that made me write my first, successful fiction project The name eluded me...
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Well between my new found WoW addiction and Touhou addiction... Think I need to take up the pencil (metaphorically speaking since I don't write most of my stuff by hand anymore...) again and write something. Currently considering either doing that strip poker crack (Of Vivio, Keroko, and Rune... Though maybe a fourth could be added if someone had an idea? ) or doing the Etrian Odyssey crack.

Though I'll probably end up doing both at some point... I'm leaning to doing the strip poker crack first, since it's just a oneshot where as the EO is a series... What do you all think?
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Old 2008-11-02, 10:29   Link #10472
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Old 2008-11-02, 13:13   Link #10473
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Chapter 22 is chatroom votes.
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B, plz ok thankz?
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Old 2008-11-02, 13:38   Link #10474
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Well.

Between my latest fixation with Chrono Crusade and the vicious Lutecia/Vivio plotbunnies attacking me, I might just be able to dish out another one-shot on these two. Though they'll be older than they were in Never Been Kissed...
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Old 2008-11-02, 13:48   Link #10475
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Well.

Between my latest fixation with Chrono Crusade and the vicious Lutecia/Vivio plotbunnies attacking me, I might just be able to dish out another one-shot on these two. Though they'll be older than they were in Never Been Kissed...
With those two things bugging you...We'll get a Lutio(any other ideas for a name) tragedy ><
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Old 2008-11-02, 14:12   Link #10476
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With those two things bugging you...We'll get a Lutio(any other ideas for a name) tragedy ><
Oh yeah, definitely.

Or at the least, a chapter fic focused on the two of 'em.
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Old 2008-11-02, 14:52   Link #10477
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The Name of War
Chapter Ten: Reaping the Whirlwind
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Old 2008-11-02, 15:45   Link #10478
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Old 2008-11-02, 17:56   Link #10479
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Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.22:
Isn't this Part 23?

Anyway, this was interesting...I'm not sure where you're going to take this, but Vivio's starting to wander into that dangerous territory where she's being inviting and repelling at the same time and Syn's having trouble figuring out where the lines are (actually, it's a lot like Nanoha and Fate in Saved by the Bell, but they were teenagers while Vivio and Syn are adults and that means a completely different set of default assumptions). Of course, as far as I can tell from the backstory, this is basically Vivio's first real romantic relationship, so she's probably not quite aware of what she's doing (y'know, it's entirely possible that she's got a few odd assumptions about how relationships work because of her job, even though she knows that what she's presenting is artifical for the viewing of the audience there's still the issue that she knows that this is the kind of thing that her audience--i.e. "the people out there in the world"--want to see).

I have no idea if you're actually setting it up to go there, but if Syn finds out Vivio's career on her own before they sleep together (as opposed to Vivio telling her because she wants them to sleep together and wants to offer full disclosure as an honest girlfriend) then there's a chance for a really, really huge fight given how in the last few chapters Vi's been willing to tease Syn up to a point then suddenly draw a line in the sand (rather than tell Syn up front that she's not comfortable going past a certain point). I can see Syn utterly exploding at the idea that Vi's willing to perform sexual acts on camera with fellow professionals but keeps cutting her girlfriend off at the pass (okay, bad pun...); indeed, if Syn wants to see Vivio walk around topless (and bottomless, and...) she can hop onto the Internet and see it 24/7.

Of course, Vivio's reasoning for holding off on sex is completely understandable; to her it's a job and basically devoid of any emotional content, so she wants to build emotional intimacy between the two of them to give the act meaning, because she doesn't want sex with Syn to be just another mechanical act. That, too, is probably part of why she's getting so involved in the buildup. But if Syn doesn't recognize that at first, then...yeah, it could get very bad before it gets good. If it gets good; that's the kind of fight which could end things, since Syn would also have a solid chunk of "you didn't tell me something this important?!?" as a trust issue on top of everything else. The line, "What did you do, pick me up so you could pretend to be normal?" springs to mind...

Anyway, the fact that all these thoughts keep coming to mind is definitely a good thing for the story! Please keep it coming!
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Old 2008-11-02, 17:59   Link #10480
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Oh dear, hows Hayate going to recover from that.

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Their relationship seem's to be going well.
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