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Old 2008-11-17, 23:14   Link #11061
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This is my rooster >:3
...rick I know it's just your English, but I lol'd.

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Old 2008-11-17, 23:17   Link #11062
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...rick I know it's just your English, but I lol'd.

Rooster. Rooooooooster :3
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What was the name of the guy who was friend of Hank Solo? The original owner of Solo's ship?

That could be Chrono
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Old 2008-11-17, 23:45   Link #11063
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Some NanoFate fluff, post her injury so they're only 11... but hey, I thought it was cute. My first attempt at actual "romance", debating whether or not to put it on FF.net...

Inspired by Nickelback's song "I'd Come For You" from their new album Dark Horse.

Spoiler for Get High:


So, my friends and comrades... what's your ruling?
That was lovely, Nanoha and Fate flying together was so sweet~
I think you should post it on ff.net, there are a lot of new nanofate fics there lately, but I'm sure the people won't want to miss your sweet fluff.

Also, I think you should try writing NanoFate more often ^^

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Old 2008-11-18, 00:13   Link #11064
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Some NanoFate fluff, post her injury so they're only 11... but hey, I thought it was cute. My first attempt at actual "romance", debating whether or not to put it on FF.net...

Inspired by Nickelback's song "I'd Come For You" from their new album Dark Horse.

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So, my friends and comrades... what's your ruling?
That was a very nice story, quite touching
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Old 2008-11-18, 03:21   Link #11065
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What was the name of the guy who was friend of Hank Solo? The original owner of Solo's ship?

That could be Chrono
*snicker* Hank Solo...

The Falcon's original owner, and Han's friend, is Lando Calrissian.

Also, your roster could use some edits:

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Fate- Luke Skywalker
Alicia: Princess Amidala
Nanoha: Hank Solo -> Han Solo
Vita: Master Yoda
Shamal: Master Windu
Signum: Master Obi Wan Kenobi
Reinforce1: Master Qui Gon Ji -> Qui Gon Jin
Zaphira: Chewbaka -> Chewbacca
Reinforce2: R2D2
Agito:C3PO
Precia: Darth Vader
Jail: Lord Palpatine
Quattro: General Grevious -> Grievous
Uno: Lord Duku -> Dooku
Duo: Darth Maul
Subaru: Ja Jar Binx -> Jar Jar Binks
Admiral Lindy: Admiral Akabar -> Ackbar
I don't really agree with Subaru being Jar Jar though. She's not a scardy-cat like Jar Jar. And Vita being Master Yoda does not compute at all.

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Old 2008-11-18, 05:36   Link #11066
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Spoiler for Previously:
Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.41:
Elene is so wise. ^^ the dress part is funny.

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Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.42 (this one is very NSFW. STill AS safe, but NSFW.:
LOL. I <3 this part! especially when Vivio saw Syn. nice work. (:

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Some NanoFate fluff, post her injury so they're only 11... but hey, I thought it was cute. My first attempt at actual "romance", debating whether or not to put it on FF.net...

Inspired by Nickelback's song "I'd Come For You" from their new album Dark Horse.

Spoiler for Get High:


So, my friends and comrades... what's your ruling?
awww.. Fluffy! ^^ good job, radiantbeam. <3 this.
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Old 2008-11-18, 06:37   Link #11067
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I've never heard the song, but will probably have to now
Cute fic by the way, I liked it

Also your tittle made me think of something else
I think I know what you were thinking of.

But the title was spur of the moment, and it kind of just stuck.

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I'm not sure that I understand the connection to the song, but the story is a giant ball of cuddly, sweet fluff. Well-done, too; I especially like the snowfall imagery at the end and the conversation between Shamal and Fate at the beginning. Honestly, that opening Shamal/Fate sequence is one of the few times I've seen the "kid" version of Fate or Nanoha act like a kid, with the lack of perspective someone that age would actually have. So I like it.
I worried constantly about Fate. I wanted her to come off as being more open than she was when Nanoha first met her, but I was deathly afraid that she'd be too OOC. Thankfully I think I pulled it off well.

Oh, and, that snowflakes bit was actually a nod to you, Dezo.

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Aww, Fate is so cute, too bad she didn't think to do that in the actual show. I like that part about Shamal insulting Fate, lol. One reason I find this really good is because it has some good NanoFate vibes coming off of it but there isn't a direct way it's shown. It's all indirect, so if you really didn't like NanoFate you could brush it off as a really cute friendship fic. Either way, I felt the romance. Especially since every time Fate said, "Do you trust me?" I thought OMG! Aladdin asking Jasmin if she trusts him before they go on the magic carpet. Yeah...I'm a dork.
"A whole new world..."

*shot*

Don't worry, I was thinking Aladdin the whole time I was writing that little bit. And I'm glad you felt the romance. I meant it both ways, but I'm glad the romance came through for the NanoFate fans.

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That was lovely, Nanoha and Fate flying together was so sweet~
I think you should post it on ff.net, there are a lot of new nanofate fics there lately, but I'm sure the people won't want to miss your sweet fluff.

Also, I think you should try writing NanoFate more often ^^

Take care and keep smiling
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4662671/1/



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That was a very nice story, quite touching
Thank you very much.

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awww.. Fluffy! ^^ good job, radiantbeam. <3 this.
I don't usually write fluff, either... I'm more angst and tragedy. I think all of you are starting to rub off on me.
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Old 2008-11-18, 09:36   Link #11068
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After looking at all the comments my first list got, I have revised the list along with who I think Grievous, Dooku, Qui gon jinn and Obi wan should be.

Jail = Emperor
Precia = Vader
Alicia = Leia
Fate = Luke
Nanoha = Mara Jade
Arissa = Han Solo
Suzuka = Lando
Regius = Grand Moff Tarkin
Most Numbers = Imperial Guard
Chrono = Admiral Ackbar
Rein II = C-3PO
Agito = R2-D2
Hayate = Wedge Antilies
Zafira = Chewbacca
Wolkenrimitter + Forwards = Rogue Squadron Members
Uno = Grand Admiral Thrawn
Deed = Grievous
Zest = Count Dooku
Kyōya = Obi wan
Shiro = Qui gon jinn
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Old 2008-11-18, 11:31   Link #11069
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*snicker* Hank Solo...

The Falcon's original owner, and Han's friend, is Lando Calrissian.

Also, your roster could use some edits:
Star Wars character names are quite complicated


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I don't really agree with Subaru being Jar Jar though. She's not a scardy-cat like Jar Jar. And Vita being Master Yoda does not compute at all.
Why not? Vita and Yoda are both very similars











Well at least they are both smalls O.o
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Old 2008-11-18, 13:32   Link #11070
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Current standings for Divided Destiny:

A) IIII
B)
C) III

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And where's Boba Fett on the roster?
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Old 2008-11-18, 16:38   Link #11071
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Why not? Vita and Yoda are both very similars











Well at least they are both smalls O.o
To be fair on the Yoda front we only have like... five characters that could work (height wise)
Vita
Caro
Erio
Vivio
Lutecia

and Vita's the only one who will actually stay small so...
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Old 2008-11-18, 17:18   Link #11072
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@thread, re: PS!V

Here's a thought that hit me on the way home from work today (semi-in response to Allquall's most recent comment): thus far it seems we've all (myself included) been discussing the effects of the relationship on Syn as if Vivio was a fixed point of personality. This is, after all, her first real relationship, and I'm wondering what might happen with her. For example, coming to have a more "normal," loving relationship, how will this affect her ability to maintain a professional distance from her work. We've already seen her put a little extra something into her pole dancing with Syn there in Chapter 42, but where does the line get crossed? If she's thinking about her girlfriend watching her while she's performing with a third person, will that affect her performance? And if she keeps on combining the two attitudes as we see in this most recent chapter, will this eventually end up squicking her out?

...just a random comment to think about, really.
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Old 2008-11-18, 17:35   Link #11073
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@thread, re: PS!V

Here's a thought that hit me on the way home from work today (semi-in response to Allquall's most recent comment): thus far it seems we've all (myself included) been discussing the effects of the relationship on Syn as if Vivio was a fixed point of personality. This is, after all, her first real relationship, and I'm wondering what might happen with her. For example, coming to have a more "normal," loving relationship, how will this affect her ability to maintain a professional distance from her work. We've already seen her put a little extra something into her pole dancing with Syn there in Chapter 42, but where does the line get crossed? If she's thinking about her girlfriend watching her while she's performing with a third person, will that affect her performance? And if she keeps on combining the two attitudes as we see in this most recent chapter, will this eventually end up squicking her out?

...just a random comment to think about, really.
I think that it would be impossible to have no effect on Vivio's performance, I'd imagine she'd be looking at thing's more from Syn's point of veiw now.
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Old 2008-11-18, 19:03   Link #11074
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And the polls are now closed :3

The final count for Divided Destiny:

A) IIII
B)
C) III

I need to warn the others...
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Old 2008-11-18, 22:32   Link #11075
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To be fair on the Yoda front we only have like... five characters that could work (height wise)
Vita
Caro
Erio
Vivio
Lutecia

and Vita's the only one who will actually stay small so...
Vita will be Chibi-cute for always!

Hey, I think that Erio could be the Army of clones, FTW!

And who could be Jaba the Hut?
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Old 2008-11-18, 22:47   Link #11076
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Vita will be Chibi-cute for always!

Hey, I think that Erio could be the Army of clones, FTW!

And who could be Jaba the Hut?
I'm still going for Regius the Hut.
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Old 2008-11-18, 22:47   Link #11077
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Time for plugging and blatant self-promotion! Just this minute I posted Chapter 1 of my new two-part Vivio story, so...go check it out. Pretty please? With cherries on top?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4664010/1/

"Steel Wings"
Vivio finds that her greatest magical weakness is causing burdens both in battle and in her relationship with her mother.

I'm kind of fond of Vivio's "White Devil" moment from the opening scene, myself...it's weird, really; I'm really not that fond of Nanoha the character (my favorites are Fate, Vivio, and Vita, followed by a giant ball of "everybody else"), but I felt surprisingly kind towards her while writing this story.

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Old 2008-11-18, 22:54   Link #11078
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Time for plugging and blatant self-promotion! Just this minute I posted Chapter 1 of my new two-part Vivio story, so...go check it out. Pretty please? With cherries on top?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4664010/1/

"Steel Wings"
Vivio finds that her greatest magical weakness is causing burdens both in battle and in her relationship with her mother.
There is no Fate in this fic, DezoPenguin?
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Old 2008-11-18, 23:02   Link #11079
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There is no Fate in this fic, DezoPenguin?
Nope; this is strictly a fic about Vivio, the next stage in her magical development, and her relationship with Nanoha. The closest thing to romance are some Nanoha-Yuuno friendship moments in Chapter 2. Fate's annoyingly off-world, as Nanoha laments near the end of the second chapter (well, okay, mostly she's missing Fate's cooking... ).
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Nope; this is strictly a fic about Vivio, the next stage in her magical development, and her relationship with Nanoha. The closest thing to romance are some Nanoha-Yuuno friendship moments in Chapter 2. Fate's annoyingly off-world, as Nanoha laments near the end of the second chapter (well, okay, mostly she's missing Fate's cooking... ).
'cause as we know Nanoha burns water (okay that's shamal but I imagine Vivio has had some burned cookies in her life time )
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