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Old 2008-11-28, 22:13   Link #11241
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This is an odd plotbunny. I recently realized that DezoPenguin and I both made Vivio ultimately be 15 in our stories, and so this was born. I use the other Vivio with DezoPenguin's permission, and this is short; I'm just highlighting on the most obvious difference between the two of 'em, despite the fact that they're the same age.

Spoiler for Alternate Realities FTW:


*runs far, far away*
LOl. XDXDXD
I <3 Alternate Realities
Alternate Realities FTW indeed!
nice work, radiantbeam. ^-^
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Old 2008-11-29, 04:02   Link #11242
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The True Lies short is complete and I tried something new. First-Person PoV.
Spoiler for Despair and horror:
D: That virus is truly terrifying.
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This is an odd plotbunny. I recently realized that DezoPenguin and I both made Vivio ultimately be 15 in our stories, and so this was born. I use the other Vivio with DezoPenguin's permission, and this is short; I'm just highlighting on the most obvious difference between the two of 'em, despite the fact that they're the same age.

Spoiler for Alternate Realities FTW:


*runs far, far away*
Lol. That's great, I think one of you guys mentioned that before. I like the part about Vivio and Lutecia. Too bad nothing happened with the alternate version of Vita, it would have been hilarious.

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That's cool, making a cameo at the very end.
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Old 2008-11-29, 12:15   Link #11243
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This is an odd plotbunny. I recently realized that DezoPenguin and I both made Vivio ultimately be 15 in our stories, and so this was born. I use the other Vivio with DezoPenguin's permission, and this is short; I'm just highlighting on the most obvious difference between the two of 'em, despite the fact that they're the same age.

Spoiler for Alternate Realities FTW:


*runs far, far away*
Vita angry! lol

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Old 2008-11-29, 12:51   Link #11244
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This is an odd plotbunny. I recently realized that DezoPenguin and I both made Vivio ultimately be 15 in our stories, and so this was born. I use the other Vivio with DezoPenguin's permission, and this is short; I'm just highlighting on the most obvious difference between the two of 'em, despite the fact that they're the same age.

Spoiler for Alternate Realities FTW:


*runs far, far away*
*chortle* You certainly got that out quickly! It's cute, too! Though...Hayate and Verossa? Damn, somebody moves fast.

The bit about Mariel was cute. I'm glad Vita and Vivio had the smarts to keep quiet about the fact that their Mariel had actually made Parsifal, or else there'd have been no stopping this Mariel to find out what was what.

(Ah, well, at least Parsifal wouldn't have complained. I think he takes personality lessons from Signum...well, except in omakes, where he's a smartass, but all Devices are smartasses in omakes. It's a rule, I think. I just wish that I knew enough...er, any...German to give him some genuine dialogue.)

Vita is evil.

But you missed on one thing. You should have had Lutecia...who can't reasonably be expected to be aware of random parallel-reality travelers stopping by...grab the wrong Vivio!
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Old 2008-11-29, 13:10   Link #11245
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But you missed on one thing. You should have had Lutecia...who can't reasonably be expected to be aware of random parallel-reality travelers stopping by...grab the wrong Vivio!
Now that would have been just plain damn Funny
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Old 2008-11-29, 14:34   Link #11246
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Now that would have been just plain damn Funny
That actually happened, originally.

But then it made the whole thing too long, and I was too lazy to write something that exceeded a page.
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Old 2008-11-29, 17:08   Link #11247
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There's just not enough CarimXHayate crackfluff here.

Disclaimer: The young people may not get this one.

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Old 2008-11-29, 17:40   Link #11248
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There's just not enough CarimXHayate crackfluff here.

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*chortle* Sometimes it's good to be old. I'm flashing back to 80s music videos here. And the image of Carim headbanging with a shampoo bottle in the tub has me hunting for a "rofl" smiley!

But why did Hayate get demoted?
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Old 2008-11-29, 17:55   Link #11249
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There's just not enough CarimXHayate crackfluff here.

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I lol'd so hard. Just the image of Carim and Hayate headbanging is enough, but naked in the tub? Too much. Fleetwood Mac ftw! You know what would be funny, if Welcome to the Jungle played because that's a song to sing to.
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Old 2008-11-29, 18:39   Link #11250
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There's just not enough CarimXHayate crackfluff here.

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yay! A hayatexcarim fic!!! I love this pairing! X3
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Old 2008-11-29, 18:48   Link #11251
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Another True Lies short, on the request of wanwan. Contains information regarding HAVOC, at least a certain aspect of it.

Spoiler for False Fear:
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Old 2008-11-29, 22:54   Link #11252
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A new idea I have been tossing around. Something a little different than what I normally write, more serious. A focus on using literary devices actively in writing.

On Mid Childa a black market exsists, a black market that specializes in magical items. As it's popularity grows, so does the use of magic in crimes across the planet...

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I like it so far, the black market idea is neat and i look forward to more of your writting ^^
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Old 2008-11-29, 23:23   Link #11253
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There's just not enough CarimXHayate crackfluff here.

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Allquall BANZAIIIIIII~~

lol that's very enjoyably crackful. Would hate to see what hayate's bathroom is normally like though
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Old 2008-11-29, 23:50   Link #11254
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There's just not enough CarimXHayate crackfluff here.

Disclaimer: The young people may not get this one.

Spoiler for Sweet Child of Mine:
The music I grew up on and still great to listen to
And Yes the morning after Burrito (hot wings for me) night are always embarrassing


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I lol'd so hard. Just the image of Carim and Hayate headbanging is enough, but naked in the tub? Too much. Fleetwood Mac ftw! You know what would be funny, if Welcome to the Jungle played because that's a song to sing to.
I agree with this statement

*In the jungle
Welcome to the jungle
Watch it bring you to your shun n,n,n,n,,n,n,,n,n,n,,n,n,,n knees, knees
I wanna watch you bleed*
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Old 2008-11-30, 01:13   Link #11255
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Here have a (Zaffoha) fic.
Spoiler for ;.;:

What happened to me today IRL, my dog died.
T_T I'm sorry to hear about your dog. It was a really sad to read this.
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=hugs markesellus= ;_; Poor doggy.

*attempts to cheer you up, even tho its just a distraction*

Spoiler for Q!F Epilogue: WARNING: Implied Bestiality, Entails Excessive Suspension of Disbelief, and involves TALKING DUCKS and references to Mai Hime, StrikerS, and Shugo Chara:


And for your convenience, here's that picture again: Q!F Epic-logue-ness!

Page CLAIM for... love for underloved animals of Nanohaverse?
That was... weird...

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Final Chapter



Yes, here it is, the final chapter, after a year of work, my saga of Nanoha, Rise of Techno - Union is complete, I will not bore you with words, there is a "Words of the Author" page along with this last chapter

Spoiler for Intro:


Full download link

http://rapidshare.com/files/16775769...eddon.zip.html

Extra full download link (just in case)

http://www.badongo.com/file/12249602

Enjoy!

PD: You are not expecting the ending I created so don't be tricky, don't see the pages before start reading

Thanks for Reading!
It's hard to believe that it's over... Final chapter sounds so sad. It was epic. Completely epic! It was everything I was expecting to see and even more. It was really sad what happened to Zaeta, but the epilogue showing everybody being happy together showed that it wasn't in vain. Nanoha's new mode was quite awesome. I liked the epilogue-like letter the most. Because of everything they have been through, they really deserved a happy ending. I'll admit I was almost crying when Nanoha and Vivio got to Zaeta's grave and the man's words in the last page really hit. I'd take off my hat to you and all the effort you put in NROTU. Thank you for making such a great story.

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The True Lies short is complete and I tried something new. First-Person PoV.
Spoiler for Despair and horror:
The first person pov quite changed the way this story feels. This is probably the reason it isn't as schoking as the other ones. Nonetheless, I really like these shorts. It really manages to give a feel about what will happen in True Lies.

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Another True Lies short, on the request of wanwan. Contains information regarding HAVOC, at least a certain aspect of it.

Spoiler for False Fear:
That was good. More info on HAVOC is always good to receive. And this is quite some valuable piece of information.
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Old 2008-11-30, 02:18   Link #11256
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It's hard to believe that it's over... Final chapter sounds so sad. It was epic. Completely epic! It was everything I was expecting to see and even more. It was really sad what happened to Zaeta, but the epilogue showing everybody being happy together showed that it wasn't in vain. Nanoha's new mode was quite awesome. I liked the epilogue-like letter the most. Because of everything they have been through, they really deserved a happy ending. I'll admit I was almost crying when Nanoha and Vivio got to Zaeta's grave and the man's words in the last page really hit. I'd take off my hat to you and all the effort you put in NROTU. Thank you for making such a great story.
Thankyou Kai and everyone for reading it, I put all my efort on this comic, I'm happy to see that you people liked it, thankyou very much

I'm really happy for how this story ended, I must admit, I didn't liked StrikerS and for the desillution on that season, is that I decided to make this I'm a bit sad yeah, is not the same to turn on my computer witouth imaginating how to wrok on the next page... but this isn't the last of Evil Rick's comics

Thankyou everyone for reading!

@Kai the Reaper: Oh, btw, the guy on the last page, the opne who said "One just person can make the diference"... it was me
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Old 2008-11-30, 15:17   Link #11257
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today is december first *takes a deep breath in*

HAPPY BIRTHDAY FON FILIA!!!!!!!!

6 months since it started!

Laff you guys |3
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Old 2008-11-30, 20:35   Link #11258
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I... I finished it... FINALLY!!!

Chapter 2 of Bless the Broken Road!

I should be working on a paper for my Lit & Lore class, but I wanted desperately to finish this and get it up...

Spoiler for Bless the Broken Road: The Grand Illusion:
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Old 2008-11-30, 20:53   Link #11259
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Sorry for LONG LONG delay, but I finally got around to writing more of my BoD Nanoha fic idea (that I came up like a year or two ago, going through like 3-4 different plot rewrites before I finally settled on something that felt doable to me ^_^;; ). The first chapter is complete and I've already made some progress on the 2nd chapter. The question I want to ask, though, is how should I present it here? The first chapter is about 3k words in length. Would posting it here using spoiler tags for length be fine, or should I post it on FF.net and link it here?
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Old 2008-11-30, 20:56   Link #11260
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Spoiler for Chapter 9:


It has been quite a delay but here is Chapter 9.
Spoiler for KOTR Chapter 1:


Here is the first chapter of a different story.
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