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Old 2008-11-30, 22:25   Link #11261
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I... I finished it... FINALLY!!!

Chapter 2 of Bless the Broken Road!

I should be working on a paper for my Lit & Lore class, but I wanted desperately to finish this and get it up...

Spoiler for Bless the Broken Road: The Grand Illusion:
Woohoo! Great stuff and glad to see it! Evil rears its head! Fiasse has an ongoing feud with the TSAB! Fate, Nanoha, and Elise in an incipient love triangle! Great line with the "an evil little boy who'd had his favorite toy taken away."

And thanks for the shout-out, giving Miyuki my ongoing problem with Kyon Kuon's name.

Edit: Page claim for finding a deeply anticipated new chapter; a great way to wrap up an otherwise mediocre day (and for the Dolphins picking up a game on the entire division! That was good, too. ).

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Old 2008-12-01, 01:19   Link #11262
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today is december first *takes a deep breath in*

HAPPY BIRTHDAY FON FILIA!!!!!!!!

6 months since it started!

Laff you guys |3


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Spoiler for KOTR Chapter 1:


Here is the first chapter of a different story.
Good luck with your new fic

The intro was quite beautifull, very well planted

Shamal can't cook LMAO, and the triangle heart you presented is quite funny

On a random note:

"Evil Rick grabs a shootgun and puts a bullet between the eyes of Lieutenant Altier"

Sorry budy, Vita is MY girlfriend

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Old 2008-12-01, 02:25   Link #11263
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Sorry budy, Vita is MY girlfriend



Vita's only got one true love... her mistress.
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Old 2008-12-01, 04:20   Link #11264
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Another True Lies short, on the request of wanwan. Contains information regarding HAVOC, at least a certain aspect of it.

Spoiler for False Fear:
D: Havoc is truly something to be afraid of.
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today is december first *takes a deep breath in*

HAPPY BIRTHDAY FON FILIA!!!!!!!!

6 months since it started!

Laff you guys |3
It's not Dec. 1 yet for me but what the hay. Let's have a party!
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I... I finished it... FINALLY!!!

Chapter 2 of Bless the Broken Road!

I should be working on a paper for my Lit & Lore class, but I wanted desperately to finish this and get it up...

Spoiler for Bless the Broken Road: The Grand Illusion:
So good, I love that part with Kyouya and Miyuki in the beginning. Lol, Kyon. Elise and Nanoha's relationship is really realistic and cute. I like that part about Fiasse sticking up her middle finger. It's too funny to imagine. Wait...so WHO does Miyuki like? Ah the appearance of the enemy! Go go Nanoha! OMG, it's Chrno Chrono, Hayate and....FATE!! Things are going to get very interesting. Elise = T.T

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Sorry for LONG LONG delay, but I finally got around to writing more of my BoD Nanoha fic idea (that I came up like a year or two ago, going through like 3-4 different plot rewrites before I finally settled on something that felt doable to me ^_^;; ). The first chapter is complete and I've already made some progress on the 2nd chapter. The question I want to ask, though, is how should I present it here? The first chapter is about 3k words in length. Would posting it here using spoiler tags for length be fine, or should I post it on FF.net and link it here?
You can do whichever one you prefer really, though it's easier to keep track of previous parts and chapters on FF.net and there is no word limit.

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Spoiler for Chapter 9:


It has been quite a delay but here is Chapter 9.
Spoiler for KOTR Chapter 1:


Here is the first chapter of a different story.
Yay for Hawaii! Let's see how Nanoha will train those newbies. KOTR was pretty great. I like the conversation between Vita and Shamal. Lol, Shamal is pretty hilarious with her cooking and that soap opera line. Love triangle! Alright let the drama begin.
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Old 2008-12-01, 05:53   Link #11265
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Good luck with your new fic

The intro was quite beautifull, very well planted

Shamal can't cook LMAO, and the triangle heart you presented is quite funny

On a random note:

"Evil Rick grabs a shootgun and puts a bullet between the eyes of Lieutenant Altier"

Sorry budy, Vita is MY girlfriend

Ouch, I think you just condemned him to two yrs in the local hospital . By the way...

Merry Christmas, Mid-Childa!
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Old 2008-12-01, 11:50   Link #11266
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Posting from an IIT classroom during break time :3 thirty minute break, wow @_@

So far it's pretty fun. I havn't done anything but set up my student account and whatnot, but still it's neat. I'm not sure if I'll be able to write any while here but I'll see how it works. Maybe I can do it on Lappy-chan and then upload later when I get home. This'll slow down PS!Vivio a lot but it's allllmost done anyway.

Oh, and thanks Evil rick for the picture I'll see if I can work it on soon for the story Can't PM now 'cause I'm in class

Nanoha looked over Fate's shoulder and read the words on the screen. "What are you writing?"

"a small short to make it stay on topic on my forums."

Nanoha blinked. "Will that work?"

"Has to." fate smiled and clicked the post button.

@Quail: Loved the short :3
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Old 2008-12-01, 12:49   Link #11267
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I've done NanoFate crack, I've done Vivio crack, and I've even done crack-fics based on someone else's fics. But as yet, I haven't written any crack-fics for my third major series. Time for that to change.

Spoiler for Birthday Heart:

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Old 2008-12-01, 17:29   Link #11268
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I've done NanoFate crack, I've done Vivio crack, and I've even done crack-fics based on someone else's fics. But as yet, I haven't written any crack-fics for my third major series. Time for that to change.

Spoiler for Birthday Heart:
lol. XDDDD

I lol'd so loud at this!!!

nice crack fic dezopenguin!

XDXDXD.
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Old 2008-12-02, 19:14   Link #11269
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Spoiler for Chapter 10:


KOTR comes later .
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Old 2008-12-03, 00:42   Link #11270
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I've done NanoFate crack, I've done Vivio crack, and I've even done crack-fics based on someone else's fics. But as yet, I haven't written any crack-fics for my third major series. Time for that to change.

Spoiler for Birthday Heart:
LOL. Poor Yuuno, Chrono has it easy. But then if he's married to Nanoha and Nanoha is married to Fate then isn't Fate still his wife...technically?
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Spoiler for Chapter 10:


KOTR comes later .
What happened to Hayate is so gross. Poor Fried...I liked him, but what about Voltaire?

@Thread: Wow the thread is dying. It's been two days and there are only 5 posts since my last.
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Old 2008-12-03, 01:00   Link #11271
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Before the Strom

Spoiler for Chapter 25:


Renders:

Spoiler for The Silver Queen:


Note:

This chapter is named "Before the Storm" for one reason, the REAL battles will star on the next chapter and the way to World War Vita will begin >:3
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Old 2008-12-03, 01:18   Link #11272
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@Thread: Wow the thread is dying. It's been two days and there are only 5 posts since my last.
BRAAAAAINS, BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAINS

Anyway

Spoiler for Another random shot brought to you by angst :3:


*Returns to school related things~*
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Old 2008-12-03, 02:41   Link #11273
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@Thread: Wow the thread is dying. It's been two days and there are only 5 posts since my last.
It won't totally die...though I have a feeling that most people are busy preparing for X-mas. BTW, Merry Christmas to all of you .
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Old 2008-12-03, 03:44   Link #11274
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It won't totally die...though I have a feeling that most people are busy preparing for X-mas. BTW, Merry Christmas to all of you .
If you consider "working" as preparation then yes. Damn Xmas....
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Old 2008-12-03, 05:02   Link #11275
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Spoiler for KOTR Chapter 2:


Pick a name for Vivio's friend:
A)Karyl
B)Arin
C)Sana

Or if you have a better name, do tell. Oh yes, I have two characters making a cameo appearance. Guess who .
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Old 2008-12-03, 05:29   Link #11276
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I... I finished it... FINALLY!!!

Chapter 2 of Bless the Broken Road!

I should be working on a paper for my Lit & Lore class, but I wanted desperately to finish this and get it up...

Spoiler for Bless the Broken Road: The Grand Illusion:
Oh! I can't believe I missed this chapter. >.<
This chapter is so good!
Elise and Nanoha's relationship soooo cool.
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Old 2008-12-03, 08:06   Link #11277
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Happy Birthday Wanwan (since it's the third in my timezone now :P )

I'll try my best to post some shorts soon XD
Spoiler for short short!:
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Old 2008-12-03, 11:51   Link #11278
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I... I finished it... FINALLY!!!

Chapter 2 of Bless the Broken Road!

I should be working on a paper for my Lit & Lore class, but I wanted desperately to finish this and get it up...

Spoiler for Bless the Broken Road: The Grand Illusion:
OMG, Fate?! The plot thickens. And now we see some of the enemy... It's getting better and better.
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I've done NanoFate crack, I've done Vivio crack, and I've even done crack-fics based on someone else's fics. But as yet, I haven't written any crack-fics for my third major series. Time for that to change.

Spoiler for Birthday Heart:
That's a new word. Wife-in-law. Brilliant!

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Spoiler for Chapter 10:


KOTR comes later .
What happened to Hayate is so wrong... I can't even begin typing what the person who did that deserves... Nanoha's training seemed way too rough even for the so called White Devil. Really, killing your soldiers isn't going to make them ready for the battlefield.
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Before the Strom

Spoiler for Chapter 25:


Renders:

Spoiler for The Silver Queen:


Note:

This chapter is named "Before the Storm" for one reason, the REAL battles will star on the next chapter and the way to World War Vita will begin >:3
A... refrigerator? That part just made me laugh. Poor Hayate, Signum and Shamal... they really seem to be having a hard time. Can't wait for the battles!

Silver Queen was sort of a surprise. Whenever I hear Silver next to Queen I though about somebody literarly shiny. This lady looks outright dead. Oh well, it helps to be scary looking, that's not a face I'd like to meet in a dark alley.
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BRAAAAAINS, BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAINS

Anyway

Spoiler for Another random shot brought to you by angst :3:


*Returns to school related things~*
T___T Too sad. Just too sad.
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Spoiler for KOTR Chapter 1:


Here is the first chapter of a different story.
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Spoiler for KOTR Chapter 2:


Pick a name for Vivio's friend:
A)Karyl
B)Arin
C)Sana

Or if you have a better name, do tell. Oh yes, I have two characters making a cameo appearance. Guess who .
Hmm... so we this universe also has Terrans in it? At the first reading it feels slightly confusing what's going on in this universe because of scarce background knowledge. The Terrans still seem all-mighty and powerful. The red line about smoking seemed a bit of an unnecessary extra. Signum ought to learn from it. But what's wrong with her? She seems to act weird.
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Old 2008-12-03, 11:55   Link #11279
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Happy Birthday Wanwan (since it's the third in my timezone now :P )

I'll try my best to post some shorts soon XD
Spoiler for short short!:
@.@ thanks satashi ^^ *huggles* and yeah, update silly as for the spoiler: LOL yay!

@thread: slow thread *poke pokes* our authors are busy maybe...or they may be writing epic stuff *o*... or the plot bunnies are being shot down by some unknown force..must be that elmer fudd guy. oO!!!

but whatever it is, i hope all of you are ok. i will happily wait for stories.

also...

*gives a big hug to ffc* thanks guys. ^^

p.s i still think the sailormoon x nanoha crack must be written *flails*
*pokes blue-phoenix, tss, allquall, and the others* *fleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees*
X3!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 2008-12-03, 18:08   Link #11280
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Only for you wanwan

Spoiler for ...:


Spoiler for Extra:


What? You can't have a crack parody and base it on the original .

Though since it is the english version I guess everyone needs new names

Nancy, Haley, Vivian, Simone and Barbara it is Yes... Zaffy is now Barbara *giggle*
Fate can stay the same I guess
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