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Old 2008-12-03, 19:00   Link #11281
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Only for you wanwan

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What? You can't have a crack parody and base it on the original .

Though since it is the english version I guess everyone needs new names

Nancy, Haley, Vivian, Simone and Barbara it is Yes... Zaffy is now Barbara *giggle*
Fate can stay the same I guess
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*dies from laughter*

*glomps* thank you that was funny X3!

edit: page claim.. hmm claimed for my FFC friends who make me happy. ^^ thanks guys
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Old 2008-12-03, 19:05   Link #11282
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Only for you wanwan

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What? You can't have a crack parody and base it on the original .

Though since it is the english version I guess everyone needs new names

Nancy, Haley, Vivian, Simone and Barbara it is Yes... Zaffy is now Barbara *giggle*
Fate can stay the same I guess
Hahahaha!! lol that's just to damn funny!
and Barbara please god no
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Old 2008-12-03, 19:13   Link #11283
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Only for you wanwan

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That was hilarious. Good stuff, ShinySword. ROFL

lol @ Sailor Jupiter, Mercury, and Mars
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Old 2008-12-03, 20:05   Link #11284
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Silor Moon...haven't seen that series in years. Then again I never really saw the original, only whatever they were showing on TV (dub) at the time . Let's see...Sailor Moon...Sailor Moo- Hey, what's that smell? It smells like...crack?

Spoiler for Encounters of the Magical Kind:


Spoiler for omake:


*skips away*
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Old 2008-12-03, 21:18   Link #11285
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I've done NanoFate crack, I've done Vivio crack, and I've even done crack-fics based on someone else's fics. But as yet, I haven't written any crack-fics for my third major series. Time for that to change.

Spoiler for Birthday Heart:
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Wife-in-law.

Somehow, I can totally see Chrono coming up with this kind of term. So I take it this means all pans out well for Nanoha, Yuuno, and Fate in your Heart series, or will we get a third one to seal the deal?
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Old 2008-12-03, 21:53   Link #11286
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Silor Moon...haven't seen that series in years. Then again I never really saw the original, only whatever they were showing on TV (dub) at the time . Let's see...Sailor Moon...Sailor Moo- Hey, what's that smell? It smells like...crack?

Spoiler for Encounters of the Magical Kind:


Spoiler for omake:


*skips away*
omake is win! yay more crack! *glomps eva too* :3
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Old 2008-12-03, 23:33   Link #11287
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Spoiler for KOTR Chapter 3:


I'm gonna go cook up more ideas *run away in a blink of an eye*
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Old 2008-12-03, 23:39   Link #11288
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Before the Strom

Spoiler for Chapter 25:


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Spoiler for The Silver Queen:


Note:

This chapter is named "Before the Storm" for one reason, the REAL battles will star on the next chapter and the way to World War Vita will begin >:3
I feel bad for making Signum look all crazy. XD Well it looks like the Wolkenritter are going to go on an adventure!

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BRAAAAAINS, BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAINS

Anyway

Spoiler for Another random shot brought to you by angst :3:


*Returns to school related things~*
That's some depressing angst.

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Pick a name for Vivio's friend:
A)Karyl
B)Arin
C)Sana

Or if you have a better name, do tell. Oh yes, I have two characters making a cameo appearance. Guess who .
Hmm, I wonder what was with Altier. EDITED BELOW! It would be nice to have some background though...I'm a little confused. Maybe saying who Big Al is and all your OC's having some sort of a profile.
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I'm gonna go cook up more ideas *run away in a blink of an eye*
Background history was interesting, but I want to know about the characters.
Woah, some mean Nanoha and Fate in there. Man Vivio was soo girlish it was freaky. Random Yuunoha...moves quickly. I like how they were spying on them though.

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Happy Birthday Wanwan (since it's the third in my timezone now :P )

I'll try my best to post some shorts soon XD
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Niiice short. I'm still waiting for that thanksgiving update on PS!V.
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Only for you wanwan

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What? You can't have a crack parody and base it on the original .

Though since it is the english version I guess everyone needs new names

Nancy, Haley, Vivian, Simone and Barbara it is Yes... Zaffy is now Barbara *giggle*
Fate can stay the same I guess
ROTFL. Too good, TuxedoMask!Fate sounds hot. I can't believe Zaffy is sailor mercury, was not expecting it. I hated that they changed the names in the english dub! You should just keep their real names. But who are the outer senshi?
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Silor Moon...haven't seen that series in years. Then again I never really saw the original, only whatever they were showing on TV (dub) at the time . Let's see...Sailor Moon...Sailor Moo- Hey, what's that smell? It smells like...crack?

Spoiler for Encounters of the Magical Kind:


Spoiler for omake:


*skips away*
LOL, I love the omake. Stupid dubbed censoring. Cousins are totally that close.
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We never did figure out who was Luna and Artemis.
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Old 2008-12-04, 00:02   Link #11289
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Well, Nanoha noob here. I've written fanfiction on and off for a few yuri series. I've been a fan of Nanoha for sometime, but recently I have had the itch to write for it.

I got attacked by a plot bunny in Fon Filia when I made a typo. This was the result. I guess it'd be considered crack. 25 tomorrow x_x;

Spoiler for Granny Christmas Carol:
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Old 2008-12-04, 00:28   Link #11290
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Misterious attackers


Spoiler for Chapter 26:


Renders

Spoiler for Positron:


Question: Did I alredy posted Positron's render?
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Old 2008-12-04, 07:45   Link #11291
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Well, Nanoha noob here. I've written fanfiction on and off for a few yuri series. I've been a fan of Nanoha for sometime, but recently I have had the itch to write for it.

I got attacked by a plot bunny in Fon Filia when I made a typo. This was the result. I guess it'd be considered crack. 25 tomorrow x_x;

Spoiler for Granny Christmas Carol:
Beautiful short, it's a good thing that I didn't miss it. I love it, It's so heartwarming to see them living their later years so happy and together ^^ We don't see this kind of scenario too often.

I hope to read more NanoFate from you.

Cuídense y sigan sonriendo
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Old 2008-12-04, 09:02   Link #11292
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Well, Nanoha noob here. I've written fanfiction on and off for a few yuri series. I've been a fan of Nanoha for sometime, but recently I have had the itch to write for it.

I got attacked by a plot bunny in Fon Filia when I made a typo. This was the result. I guess it'd be considered crack. 25 tomorrow x_x;

Spoiler for Granny Christmas Carol:
Was a nice short. Although amusing, it seemed like it was missing a little something... I can't place my finger on it. but it was a fun read
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Old 2008-12-04, 10:00   Link #11293
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ROTFL. Too good, TuxedoMask!Fate sounds hot. I can't believe Zaffy is sailor mercury, was not expecting it. I hated that they changed the names in the english dub! You should just keep their real names. But who are the outer senshi?
Isn't it obvious? Suzuka and Arisa, the fandom's third-most-favorite lesbian couple, are secretly Uranus and Neptune, Lutecia is Saturn, and....

....um....

*Jail steps out from behind a curtain holding a giant key-shaped staff and laughing evilly. Comar kicks him back out of sight*

Pay no attention to the crossdresser behind the curtain!

....I know! Carim is Pluto! Vague, inscrutable, always on top of things, and obsessed with the future to boot!
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Old 2008-12-04, 11:19   Link #11294
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Old 2008-12-04, 11:28   Link #11295
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Satashi, you've been using "manor" instead of "manner" for quite a few chapters now. Please do something about it.
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Old 2008-12-04, 11:45   Link #11296
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Lina is cute and Kriss is funny

The Joke of Vivio at the begining was really funny

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Satashi, you've been using "manor" instead of "manner" for quite a few chapters now. Please do something about it.
Please, avoid waste space and posts just to point out a Typo, better use PMs or the Profile's chat (Unless you do it just to call atention, of course)

@TerreanReaper: KOTR is turning very interesting (specially for the rol Vita's having
Keep goping
BTW: Arin sounds really cool
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Old 2008-12-04, 12:17   Link #11297
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It's not a waste of space Rick, it's an error that needs pointing out to improve the quality of the fic. You may not care about spelling and grammar, but other people certainly do, particularly the readers.
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Old 2008-12-04, 13:11   Link #11298
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It's a shock to see a kid run around inside an Adult Video studio. Even if you've made arrangements to isolate the shooting stage from the rest of the building, there's probably all kinds of stuff you wouldn't want kids to see in the offices and such. You should proceed very carefully here. Because one of the possible explainations is that they don't care if kids see that stuff, and you totally do not want to go there.
This is the guy from chapter 1, isn't he? The one that Vivio had just wrapped up a shoot with at the start of the chapter. I always thought it would be a good idea for Syn to talk to his wife, find out how she copes with being married to a pornstar.
How much did Vivio blab about Syn to her colleagues? It's a wonder that her being Vivio's girlfriend hasn't been leaked yet if she mentioned Syn's name to anyone at all. Or has it already?
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Old 2008-12-04, 14:42   Link #11299
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It's a shock to see a kid run around inside an Adult Video studio. Even if you've made arrangements to isolate the shooting stage from the rest of the building, there's probably all kinds of stuff you wouldn't want kids to see in the offices and such. You should proceed very carefully here. Because one of the possible explainations is that they don't care if kids see that stuff, and you totally do not want to go there.
... But it's not said that the child sees that stuff ... Is not it?

@Satashi : Great new chapter ^^ !
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Old 2008-12-04, 16:09   Link #11300
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BRAAAAAINS, BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAINS

Anyway

Spoiler for Another random shot brought to you by angst :3:
*sniffle* That's so sad. Short-term memory failure is even worse in some ways that having her be comatose or something, since Fate has to watch Nanoha forget her over and over.


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Only for you wanwan

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What? You can't have a crack parody and base it on the original .

Though since it is the english version I guess everyone needs new names

Nancy, Haley, Vivian, Simone and Barbara it is Yes... Zaffy is now Barbara *giggle*
Fate can stay the same I guess
*snicker* That's all I can say! Especially the extra! Chrono and Yuuno need some (boys') love, too!

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Silor Moon...haven't seen that series in years. Then again I never really saw the original, only whatever they were showing on TV (dub) at the time . Let's see...Sailor Moon...Sailor Moo- Hey, what's that smell? It smells like...crack?

Spoiler for Encounters of the Magical Kind:


Spoiler for omake:


*skips away*
BWAHAHAHAHA! And yet...it seems like I just read something similar somewhere...

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...

Wife-in-law.

Somehow, I can totally see Chrono coming up with this kind of term. So I take it this means all pans out well for Nanoha, Yuuno, and Fate in your Heart series, or will we get a third one to seal the deal?
This was just a gag (though I admit, I had actually thought up the spouse-in-law bit for use in the real fics), so I'm committing myself to nothing. But I do fully intend to write more...it's just that the Vivio fics kept pushing at me to get written!

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Well, Nanoha noob here. I've written fanfiction on and off for a few yuri series. I've been a fan of Nanoha for sometime, but recently I have had the itch to write for it.

I got attacked by a plot bunny in Fon Filia when I made a typo. This was the result. I guess it'd be considered crack. 25 tomorrow x_x;

Spoiler for Granny Christmas Carol:
*pounds head on nearby wall at the punchline*

You're trying to kill me, aren't you? (another Fate-as-dad reference...)

Actually, I think I know what Satashi was talking about--most of the fic is a funny story about an aging Fate and Nanoha and the jokes that go along with that, then the final gag heads off in a completely different direction, so it's not set up quite right. But it's still funny, and quite cute.

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Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio Pt.52:
Heh, Vivio sounded just like Nanoha in the opening few paragraphs. I liked the scenes with Lina, Krissy, and Mark--it's fun to see Syn getting to interact with Vivio's co-workers and families on a "normal person" kind of basis, and getting to see how they're able to keep their family lives together is valuable information for her to absorb.

I have to say, though, that this isn't the best-written of chapters overall; it reads kind of first-drafty. There's the manor/manner thing; and Vivio's use of "friend" to refer to Syn rather than something more intimate like "girlfriend" or "lover" or "sweetheart"; and there's the phrase "higher ranked" to refer to the stars with more status...it just seems excessively formal; and Mark's "Hey, everyone," should be "Hey, everyone." instead since a separate sentence follows. Things like that...it just reads a little roughly, like you were trying to finish it quickly and get it posted.

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Satashi, you've been using "manor" instead of "manner" for quite a few chapters now. Please do something about it.
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It's not a waste of space Rick, it's an error that needs pointing out to improve the quality of the fic. You may not care about spelling and grammar, but other people certainly do, particularly the readers.
I certainly care, speaking as an author--I may not like to hear it, but if I've been making a recurrent error I definitely want to be told.

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It's a shock to see a kid run around inside an Adult Video studio. Even if you've made arrangements to isolate the shooting stage from the rest of the building, there's probably all kinds of stuff you wouldn't want kids to see in the offices and such. You should proceed very carefully here. Because one of the possible explainations is that they don't care if kids see that stuff, and you totally do not want to go there.
That's a good point...while it's clear that Lina was under Krissy's supervision and had just broken away from her for a moment, if I was a parent taking my child with me to that environment, I'd want to keep a tight hold on her to make sure that she didn't accidentally blunder somewhere she shouldn't go.

And...yesterday, I posted the crack-fic "What's in a Name, Anyway?" (that's the one where Nanoha realizes that Fate's job title, uniform, weapon, and general appearance don't really suit the whole concept of "good guy"...) as the third chapter of "Vivio's Happy Family Magical Theater" and promptly racked more hits for a single story in a 24-hour period than I've ever before received at fanfiction.net...within the first twelve hours. It's crazy. So in celebration, I wrote an equally cracky sequel!

Or maybe it's just the medication from my wisdom-tooth surgery Tuesday talking. That's possible too.

Spoiler for Dating Evil!Fate (wanders into semi-NSFW territory):
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