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Old 2009-01-25, 05:50   Link #12081
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That's right, she most certainly was.
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Old 2009-01-25, 10:36   Link #12082
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Spoiler for Visitors, pt. 6:


Part 01
Part 02
Part 03
Part 04
Part 05
Eva you bastard! You went and started writing a SG/Nanoha cross and didn't tell me?! I Have half a mind to kill you where you stand! But since it's acutally good and doing so would mean I wouldn't get more you'll be allowed to live, for now!
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Old 2009-01-25, 10:40   Link #12083
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Yare yare. I always felt Tk was yandere, but I didn't expect to have proof handed to me.
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Old 2009-01-25, 11:56   Link #12084
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Yep. Another double post.

Spoiler for Act 4:
Here's a play by play of my reactions.
Spoiler for the reaction:


Spoiler for confusion:


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Old 2009-01-25, 12:44   Link #12085
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not sure if it's supposed to be clear to us whether the evens of the last 4 parts were indeed real or just a story Vivio was reading.
And those "books" were actually doujins created by Hayate and drawn by Shamal for sale at Comiket.
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Old 2009-01-25, 13:15   Link #12086
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And those "books" were actually doujins created by Hayate and drawn by Shamal for sale at Comiket.
Don't be silly. No matter how mature Vivio is she's not allowed to read the 18+ ChronoxYuuno doujins Hayate and Shamal produce (She tried but Zafira ate them to spare her eyes)
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Old 2009-01-25, 13:26   Link #12087
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That's not the only stuff the "HaSha" circle makes. Heh heh.
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Old 2009-01-25, 13:37   Link #12088
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Correct they also make VerossaxChrono, GriffithxVice, SignumxVita, and everyonexEveryone else.

Hayate: Yaoi, Yuri, Het! As long is there's porn it doesn't matter who's doing it!
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Old 2009-01-25, 13:38   Link #12089
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Hmm, IIRC Amy was still shown alive in the first StrikerS Sound Stage, during RF 6's visit back to Earth.

And The Machinator, please .
OC fic = AU = anything goes If I worry too much about canon. I'd never get anything done worrying excessively over details. Besides, this isn't StrikerS. It's three years prior.
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Old 2009-01-25, 13:42   Link #12090
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Spoiler for Chapter 4: The Bag:
Spoiler for chapter 4 typos:
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Old 2009-01-25, 15:51   Link #12091
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My opinions on slang :3

When writing things like "going to" or "want to", my personal rule is that it needs to be typed out fully unless it is spoken by a character. Such as The Shiny Meido pointed out:

Syn: "We gonna go then?"
Syn: "You wanna do that?"

but if it wasn't in a quote:

Syn was going to go...
Syn really wanted to...


.............this little tidbit was brought to you by the letter three.
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Old 2009-01-25, 15:55   Link #12092
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My opinions on slang :3

When writing things like "going to" or "want to", my personal rule is that it needs to be typed out fully unless it is spoken by a character. Such as The Shiny Meido pointed out:

Syn: "We gonna go then?"
Syn: "You wanna do that?"

but if it wasn't in a quote:

Syn was going to go...
Syn really wanted to...


.............this little tidbit was brought to you by the letter three.
The only exception to the narration rule is 1st person but that is an entirely different beast where one must find a balance between dialog and narration. And I am not a meido... except on weekends.
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Old 2009-01-25, 16:22   Link #12093
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Spoiler for Visitors, pt. 6:


Part 01
Part 02
Part 03
Part 04
Part 05
Stop putting SG-1 and Nanoverse together, it works too well. Nice little shorts, but the timing is odd, but I like it. You have got to get the plot moving, it is getting a bit too much explanation heavy for my tastes.
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Old 2009-01-25, 16:25   Link #12094
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Thanks Kai, chapter 4 is now fixed
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Old 2009-01-25, 17:28   Link #12095
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Eva you bastard! You went and started writing a SG/Nanoha cross and didn't tell me?! I Have half a mind to kill you where you stand! But since it's acutally good and doing so would mean I wouldn't get more you'll be allowed to live, for now!
Calm down my good sir. There is no need for knee-jerk reactions around these parts :P
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Old 2009-01-25, 20:26   Link #12096
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mmkay then

Spoiler for Zafira:


Spoiler for Griffith:


Spoiler for Vice:
Ahh, the New Three Stooges
what other misadventures can they drag young, Still Innocent Vivio into next
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Old 2009-01-25, 20:28   Link #12097
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The only exception to the narration rule is 1st person but that is an entirely different beast where one must find a balance between dialog and narration. And I am not a meido... except on weekends.
Don't listen, Shiny has more Moe points than Vivio D:

and for first person views.... personally I find them to be the simplest kind to write. The main reason I did Vampire!Fate like that is because I can crank out parts constantly without even really trying :3
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Old 2009-01-25, 22:14   Link #12098
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I find first person to be the hardest myself. I feel awkward writing "I" and such
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Old 2009-01-25, 22:26   Link #12099
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I find first person to be the hardest myself. I feel awkward writing "I" and such
It really varies from person to person really. If the writer can bring out the character in the narration, good on them, as they are part of that group of few people who can do 1st person well.

It's a bit easier when it's an original character as the writer can just say, "This is how this character thinks, and does things, because I say so, and therefore it is so."

But at the same time, it's also a nice challenge to be able to do a character, and keep it in character, until such time the character is able to grow and be molded into something the writer is more comfortable with. But even then, certain key traits and thought patterns never really disappear from the character, which is the mark of a good, and bad first-person writer, since then they have to keep the narration to character, even if the character has changed this way, and that way, and such.
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Old 2009-01-25, 23:15   Link #12100
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On that note, may I ask what everyone thinks about my Vampire!Fate and Sick_girl!Nanoha first person POVs? Taking into consideration their AU personalities, of course.
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