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Old 2009-01-25, 23:22   Link #12101
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On that note, may I ask what everyone thinks about my Vampire!Fate and Sick_girl!Nanoha first person POVs? Taking into consideration their AU personalities, of course.
In the context of the story, I like it :3

In terms of in relation to their pre-established personalities in the series, I think they are not even in-character. Fate wouldn't be that outgoing, although she does have a series side as we've seen in StrikerS, which you have down fine. But she's most definitely not out going.

As for Nanoha, I have to rewatch the series to really make a comment on her XD
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Old 2009-01-26, 05:29   Link #12102
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Stop putting SG-1 and Nanoverse together, it works too well. Nice little shorts, but the timing is odd, but I like it. You have got to get the plot moving, it is getting a bit too much explanation heavy for my tastes.
Well at the point in Stargate when they introduced an earth space cruiser with an Alternate Reality Drive I just gave up and decided they WANT people to write crossovers about Stargate.
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Old 2009-01-26, 13:25   Link #12103
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Yep. Another double post.

Spoiler for Act 4:
Voting for The Machinator, on my part.
If there was something that caught my mind, it was the use of storytelling. It was more like the voice telling the events was there, involving himself in the events. Either I got confused on some parts or it was that good blended in.

For other aspects, a good source to gather more gore inspiration from. I'm still struggling with vocabulary and I saw a few words I can bend that I didn't know about, to evolve a bit.
Love the fight scenes, filled with power. I'm beginning to see the talk about Noland being thrown around here

Some points did confuse me though, things I have learned never to do myself, as for example including screaming or the like as dialogue. As you've certainly seen from IRC, I do not hold hard on grammar rules and want more freedom myself plus I tend to be flexible.
For my part, the use of grammar and words were no problem at all and just added to the events and feeling.

Also glad to see Chrono and Yuuno being awesome :3

Feel like I have something more to say, but can't think of anything more right now than: Want more delicious gore stories.
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Old 2009-01-26, 13:42   Link #12104
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Here's a play by play of my reactions.
Spoiler for the reaction:


Spoiler for confusion:
Heh, you should have been there when we were discussing these parts at Otakon. Oh the vivid imagery and talks of how to make it even more brutal

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Eva you bastard! You went and started writing a SG/Nanoha cross and didn't tell me?! I Have half a mind to kill you where you stand! But since it's acutally good and doing so would mean I wouldn't get more you'll be allowed to live, for now!
So I guess this means I shouldn't end this anytime soon, huh?

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Stop putting SG-1 and Nanoverse together, it works too well. Nice little shorts, but the timing is odd, but I like it. You have got to get the plot moving, it is getting a bit too much explanation heavy for my tastes.
It's not my fault Jack gets himself into these strange situations .

And don't go blaming the Stargate, either. It can't argue back
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Old 2009-01-26, 13:43   Link #12105
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Spoiler for Vampire Fate pt. 1:


Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.2 (Fate):


A.)Nanoha
B.)Fate
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Old 2009-01-26, 13:54   Link #12106
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So I guess this means I shouldn't end this anytime soon, huh?
Eeeeeeeh??? (C) Nanoha
Grrrrrr (C) jewelseeded dog from MGLN.
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Old 2009-01-26, 14:00   Link #12107
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*snip*
A.)Nanoha
B.)Fate
Hmm....I say.... B again
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Old 2009-01-26, 14:13   Link #12108
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Heh, you should have been there when we were discussing these parts at Otakon. Oh the vivid imagery and talks of how to make it even more brutal
I kind of found it a tad... worrying myself since the guy discussing it knew where I was sleeping and had a knife suitable for a psycho killer with him in his room.

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So I guess this means I shouldn't end this anytime soon, huh?
That depends entirely on how long you want to live.

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It's not my fault Jack gets himself into these strange situations .

And don't go blaming the Stargate, either. It can't argue back
It's not Jack it's anyone remotely associated with the SGC that entire organization is a gigantic weirdness magnet.

O’Neil: I knew it was magnet behind it all along!

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Old 2009-01-26, 15:04   Link #12109
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Spoiler for Lyrical Days cover:
Anybody remember this? D:

Whatever happened to this anyways? Did it get lost in the shuffle or something?
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Old 2009-01-26, 15:06   Link #12110
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It died. Just like everything else worthwhile.[/troll]
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Old 2009-01-26, 15:10   Link #12111
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It died. Just like everything else worthwhile.[/troll]
Isn't that such as the nature of this channel -.-

*whacks the troll out of Tempest*

Out, OUT I SAY!!
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Old 2009-01-26, 15:11   Link #12112
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It died. Just like everything else worthwhile.[/troll]
Hmm...well sometimes the dead don't stay dead . Just find the Necronomicon and you can bring it back.

Just...be sure to get the words right...
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Old 2009-01-26, 15:12   Link #12113
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Hmm...well sometimes the dead don't stay dead . Just find the Necronomicon and you can bring it back.

Just...be sure to get the words right...
Am I missing something?
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Old 2009-01-26, 15:21   Link #12114
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Am I missing something?
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Old 2009-01-26, 15:28   Link #12115
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Hmm...well sometimes the dead don't stay dead . Just find the Necronomicon and you can bring it back.
You can't revive the dead. Just ask Ed and Al's mother =O

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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.2 (Fate):


A.)Nanoha
B.)Fate
B for Fate seems the only possibility now, otherwise we should be missing part of the story.
Anyway it seems like I forgot who was Hayate in this fic. She appeared before this chapter, right? Was she a Nanoha's friend?

Cuídense y sigan sonriendo
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Old 2009-01-26, 15:35   Link #12116
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Clatto Verata Nicto

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You can't revive the dead. Just ask Ed and Al's mother =O
Oh, you can bring back the dead. Now if you want the original soul with that body, that's another thing
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You can't revive the dead. Just ask Ed and Al's mother =O
Keine'Thuzad is happy to say that you're wrong.

Yes, that's a genderbent Kel'Thuzad, yes she is claimed for OC purposes.
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Keine'Thuzad is happy to say that you're wrong.
...Gweh?!


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Yes, that's a genderbent Kel'Thuzad, yes she is claimed for OC purposes.
Wait...what? Claimed for...OC? The hell?
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Keine'Thuzad is happy to say that you're wrong.

Yes, that's a genderbent Kel'Thuzad, yes she is claimed for OC purposes.
Keine? KEINE?! KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNEEEEEE !!!

Keine-sensei... what happened? ;__;
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Keine? KEINE?! KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNEEEEEE !!!
I saw that one coming

I wonder if she'll be given a pet frost wrym...and what her 'loot drops' are
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