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Old 2009-01-30, 06:50   Link #12281
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Brand spanking new one-shot!

(To be snarky: while it doesn't have a damn thing to do with the plot, there's NanoFate lurking all over the place in the background, so if the concept gives you hives or something, just pass on by, thank you?)


"It was just a simple errand. Pick up Fate's car from the mechanic. So why does Nanoha find herself at the center of four hostile mages?"



It's funny you should mention that, because it's exactly how I came up with the idea for this story:

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heehee that snort-out-loud material. How old do you place Vivio in that short? She sounds 14-17 to me.

Oh and slight typo in "Fate, though, was laughing so heard that tears ..."
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Old 2009-01-30, 07:22   Link #12282
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mmmmh, about Shields, That may help, Itanshi.

Didn't understand at all your mtg cross...it seems it was mtg people against TSAB? talk about Overkill...
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Old 2009-01-30, 07:35   Link #12283
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Brand spanking new one-shot!

(To be snarky: while it doesn't have a damn thing to do with the plot, there's NanoFate lurking all over the place in the background, so if the concept gives you hives or something, just pass on by, thank you?)


"It was just a simple errand. Pick up Fate's car from the mechanic. So why does Nanoha find herself at the center of four hostile mages?"



It's funny you should mention that, because it's exactly how I came up with the idea for this story:

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Reviewed.

(But darn it, how do you expect me to write angst when you write such hilarious humor?)
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Old 2009-01-30, 09:13   Link #12284
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Brand spanking new one-shot!

...


"It was just a simple errand. Pick up Fate's car from the mechanic. So why does Nanoha find herself at the center of four hostile mages?"

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Read and Reviewed! Thank you for the much needed smile
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Old 2009-01-30, 13:40   Link #12285
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Very interesting, pity its abandoned.
Yeah I know, but it gave me two fun characters to play with. I love the date scene in puncture bolt so much x_x and Dross is such a theatrical character. He's actually not that powerful.

I wanted to make it an epic story, but I didn't know how to expand it. Namely I didn't know what Orn knew about linker cores. I talked with MtG people, but they weren't much help. They tried quite a bit too.

I was going to make a character have both a linker core and a spark. Perhaps ambition surpassed me. I'll leave these as footnotes while SpaceBrotha makes fun of me :P. what was the phrase 'dropping Chthulu on a mouse' Planeswalkers were gods once. they are mortal now, but they have far more magic at their disposal than these battle mages. Remove from game, destroy all creatures, no regeneration. Stuff like that.

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mmmmh, about Shields, That may help, Itanshi.

Didn't understand at all your mtg cross...it seems it was mtg people against TSAB? talk about Overkill...
Yeah pretty much overkill, but planeswalkers are mortal. Makes the battle vicious, but not undoable. DIdnt understand at all? Interesting. Well I'm sure there is some quality control for me to figure out, but I'm not sure what to make of that.
past chapters or Fanfiction.net

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OK, I realize some problems with the direction of my story. I'd love more critiques, but the ones I m getting are good and meaningful which i greatly appreciate. So, thanks to Arkeus. Now then, Fury is a troubled child, I don't want to oversell how dangerous she is, but given her fighting style, personality, and upbringing, she will be reckless, careless, unthinking, and passionate. The military is many things to the youth they find. Troubled children with bad upbringings given a new life as a weapon honed by training under the TSAB. Letting the go as they please without training is a danger to everyone as opposed to a danger they can control and deal with.

Fury will push this control to its limit, that's my plan for the story.
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Old 2009-01-30, 21:56   Link #12286
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So, here's my side of my fic exchange with DezoPenguin. He requested a scene where Nanoha deals with having her limiter placed back on her. Here's hoping he likes it.

Fanfiction.net Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4829483/1/

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And I'm sorry, but I couldn't resist the Lu/Vi scenes.
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Old 2009-01-30, 22:36   Link #12287
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So, here's my side of my fic exchange with DezoPenguin. He requested a scene where Nanoha deals with having her limiter placed back on her. Here's hoping he likes it.

Fanfiction.net Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4829483/1/

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And I'm sorry, but I couldn't resist the Lu/Vi scenes.
Liked, reviewed, Lutecia/Vivio scenes cute. Hayate's last line, as they say, made of win.
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Old 2009-01-30, 22:42   Link #12288
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Liked, reviewed, Lutecia/Vivio scenes cute. Hayate's last line, as they say, made of win.
Thank you.
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Old 2009-01-31, 00:29   Link #12289
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Old 2009-01-31, 00:33   Link #12290
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You are cruel Satashi.
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Old 2009-01-31, 01:42   Link #12291
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I know. ^_^
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Old 2009-01-31, 03:02   Link #12292
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You are cruel Satashi.

You'll get used to it
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Old 2009-01-31, 09:14   Link #12293
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Spoiler for KOTR 25:

You have a chance to plan a defensive move. Look at this map and think about it.
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Spoiler for Briefing:

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Old 2009-01-31, 19:09   Link #12294
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A new idea of mine: The Many Masters of the Malevolent Manuscript

Part One: Darkness
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Old 2009-01-31, 23:00   Link #12295
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A new idea of mine: The Many Masters of the Malevolent Manuscript

Part One: Darkness
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Interesting stuff. I especially liked the glimpses into the Wolkenritter's minds in-between scenes, illustrating how significant a difference Hayate made.

@yuiseppe: Typo fixed; thanks!
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Old 2009-01-31, 23:10   Link #12296
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You have a chance to plan a defensive move. Look at this map and think about it.
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Spoiler for Briefing:

Spoiler for Battle of Avalon music:
I think that "Little Guardian" is a cool nickname for Vivio

An enemy ofensive that puts Nanoha on the need to set defense, uh?

I'm.... not vey good with Militar strategy, I think that I could spoild something if I choose one of the officers or one of the Super weapons so I better don't choose any

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A new idea of mine: The Many Masters of the Malevolent Manuscript

Part One: Darkness
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I had always said that the past of the Wolkis is something with lot of potential, keep going
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Chapter 5 of Vatican Knights 2 has been fixed

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Old 2009-02-01, 01:55   Link #12297
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Old 2009-02-01, 02:06   Link #12298
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A little something. There's possible pairings - if you look at it, I suppose you can see one-sided NF, as well as an alternative pairing.

In homage to Inigo Montoya

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Old 2009-02-01, 02:31   Link #12299
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You had me all the time wondering what was going on.
Then the realization came.
And I almost cried.

That was beautiful, Allquall. A really great short.
Thanks for writing this, and please share it with the rest of the people over ff.net, they can't miss this ^^

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Old 2009-02-01, 04:03   Link #12300
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Guess I'll say it here too. I'm calling the vote for Gospel. And what do you know, a complete tie!

This means that I get to choose!

Writing begins now~
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