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Old 2009-08-29, 20:25   Link #15541
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Hi everyone, after ages of lurking I've finally come up with the courage to de-lurk myself. I'm a big Nanoha fan, and the great fanfics written by many of the people here made me fall in love with the series even more!

With so much good stuff out there, I'm completely intimidated with dipping my pen into this field! So I tried to come up with something a little different to add to the fics out there already.

Here's my entrance offering, inspired by an entry on Tv Tropes about alternate character interpretations...

Spoiler for Last Wish:


Spoiler for Author's Note:


Once again, hello to everyone for the first time!
Welcome to the forums and a really well written short of Precia you posted. i really liked how you portrayed her thoughts and feelings towards Fate.

BTW I noticed you're from Vancouver So am I >:3 HAIL VANCOUVER!!!

p.s. Page claim :3
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Old 2009-08-29, 20:27   Link #15542
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And now, a special extra chapter, in which we get to explore the technical details of being dead! It's not really a side-story, and not really a part of the real story either, and it's too long to be considered a VHFMT omake, so I'm calling it an "Extra"...kind of like it was something hiding in the Special Features of the DVD release along with the voice actor commentary and the previews for the my next My-HiME fic.

Spoiler for Blood & Spirit--Extra:


Edit: I'd hoped that this would end up right after the previous chapter, but ghaz saved me from a double-post and the page number flipped, so...

Previously:
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
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Old 2009-08-29, 20:30   Link #15543
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@Shiny: Reviewed @ ff.net...and favorited, for that matter. But you probably know that already.

@deathcurse: Welcome to the thread, Oh Ye Of Ominous Name. Heh, that KannaMiko pic was part of my wallpaper for the past three months up until last week. Nice opening entry about Precia, speaking of characters who really don't get enough fic attention.

@Nanya: Yay for Chrono getting Yuuno off the front lines! But um...did you notice that he actually took Amy's clothes off twice...? As a married man, I have to say that when my wife gets dressed while we're having sex, I've learned to take that as a subtle clue that I should keep my hands to myself if I intend to use them again.

And, at long last, the finale of "Blood & Spirit" where we get an epilogue on the plot:

Spoiler for Blood & Spirit--chapter 15:


Oh, and if there really is an Administered World 11 in canon, I'll change the number to avoid screw-ups.

Previously:

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
A very fitting finale. I wish I could say more, but I'm worn out from orientation. Sorry.
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Old 2009-08-29, 21:19   Link #15544
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Dezo, great job there. :3

As for the part with Chrono... Eh heh... Missed a couple words to make it make more sense. My bad.
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Old 2009-08-29, 21:30   Link #15545
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and when I recognized that the familiar you were fighting, Arisa, was a familiar, I linked Morris's picture to our image database,
I think if you change the first "familiar" here to "figure" or "person", the sentence would flow better.

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Arisa exists autonomously, but without the raw power of the Tome of the Night Sky, she only expresses a magical existence, not a physical one.
There's hope then, that she can express a physical existence someday. Even before that, it's possible to build a robot body for her to magically interface with.

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Because she's constantly projecting a low-grade telepathic image of her existence to the living creatures around her.
Make that an omnidirectional broadcast. Otherwise, you'd have the situation where someone doesn't "see" her because she isn't aware they're around and isn't projecting to them.

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Oh, that's easy enough. As I said, she doesn't have a physical existence, and the mana construct that is her 'body' doesn't interact with visible light, or even into the infrared or ultraviolet spectrum. So she doesn't cast a reflection, or have a shadow, or show up on camera.
Put it that way, Arisa sounds like a perfect candidate for learning illusion spells.

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"Glad!" Arisa exclaimed. "She basically just said I'm sucking away your life to preserve my own!"
One can imagine Suzuka say, "And I can suck someone else to preserve mine too."
On a related note, if Arisa can tap cartridges, it'd take the load off Suzuka somewhat.
If you're interested, you can add Shamal explaining why magic damage is lethal to Arisa. Another reason to build a robot shell for her.
Great job coming up with so many ideas and possibilities for just one short piece!
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Old 2009-08-29, 21:46   Link #15546
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Well, RadiantBeam and I did another session... Just some final wrap-up here of this little plot...

Spoiler for Chrono PT II:


RadiantBeam is so much fun to work with.

Wow, this series "Relationships" really has gone far, hasn't it?
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Old 2009-08-29, 21:48   Link #15547
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I feel like it's time for some... Inglorious Khrack.

Spoiler for Once upon a time, in TSAB occupied space...:

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Old 2009-08-29, 22:09   Link #15548
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Uh... I'm not sure what to think of that!
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Old 2009-08-29, 22:12   Link #15549
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Uh... I'm not sure what to think of that!
It's crack, what do you expect?
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Old 2009-08-29, 22:31   Link #15550
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I feel like... I have a Crack bug! Must get it out...

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I...

I think my brain exploded...
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Old 2009-08-29, 22:45   Link #15551
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Go see Inglourious Basterds and you'll know.
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Old 2009-08-29, 22:54   Link #15552
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I like this.

This reminds me very, very much of the point where the Black Knights mutinied against Zero, and how Lelouch told Kallen that he didn't care for her at all to prevent her from standing with him and getting gunned down.
I didn't think about it until you said, but yeah, kind of like, huh? Glad you liked it.

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Welcome to the forums and a really well written short of Precia you posted. i really liked how you portrayed her thoughts and feelings towards Fate.
Thanks, I was trying to stay in canon but maybe make some guesses to Precia's thoughts and potential future plans for Fate. Gave me the shivers to write; (potential?!) kind end act aside, Precia is just an awful person.

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BTW I noticed you're from Vancouver So am I >:3 HAIL VANCOUVER!!!
Most beautiful city in the world

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@deathcurse: Welcome to the thread, Oh Ye Of Ominous Name. Heh, that KannaMiko pic was part of my wallpaper for the past three months up until last week. Nice opening entry about Precia, speaking of characters who really don't get enough fic attention.
The ominous name came from my HP days

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And, at long last, the finale of "Blood & Spirit" where we get an epilogue on the plot:

Spoiler for Blood & Spirit--chapter 15:


Oh, and if there really is an Administered World 11 in canon, I'll change the number to avoid screw-ups.

Previously:

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Yay for the happy ending! I have to admit, I was looking forward to more fluff parts with Arisa/Suzuka but loved the action and fast plot. The omakes are the best! (especially anytime Hayate opens her mouth!)
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Old 2009-08-29, 23:04   Link #15553
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@DeathCurse: Welcome to the thread and nice piece . I myself love reinterpretations of characters (as well as recreations if my recent tackling of Jail is any standard to go by it seems)


And speaking of Jail, it's that time again~

Spoiler for Someone for... everyone?:


Spoiler for A/N:



Previously

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5
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Old 2009-08-29, 23:15   Link #15554
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@DeathCurse: Welcome to the thread and nice piece . I myself love reinterpretations of characters (as well as recreations if my recent tackling of Jail is any standard to go by it seems)


And speaking of Jail, it's that time again~

Spoiler for Someone for... everyone?:


Spoiler for A/N:



Previously

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5
Another great chapter Shiny and wow Maria kicks ass. It looks like Jail could be in a bit of trouble if he doesn't explain himself. Poor Nove though, at least she has Wendi to look after her though.
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Old 2009-08-29, 23:30   Link #15555
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Shiny... That was great!

Maria, awesome there!

Poor Nove. Girl never catches a break, does she?
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Old 2009-08-30, 02:08   Link #15556
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@DeathCurse: Welcome to the thread and nice piece . I myself love reinterpretations of characters (as well as recreations if my recent tackling of Jail is any standard to go by it seems)


And speaking of Jail, it's that time again~

Spoiler for Someone for... everyone?:


Spoiler for A/N:



Previously

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5
Maria, a master of self-defense?

must... stop... seeing her... as the Sanzen'in... head... maid... *dies*


and oh...
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And speaking of Jail, it's that time of the month again~
fixed it for you xD
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Old 2009-08-30, 02:16   Link #15557
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And speaking of Jail, it's that time again~
Must......resist..... west.....side.... story..... parody....

I can so see Jail snapping his fingers *shot*
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Old 2009-08-30, 08:30   Link #15558
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Oh, and if there really is an Administered World 11 in canon, I'll change the number to avoid screw-ups.
In comparison with retired Lindy, who in canon isn't retired at all, this thing is SO minor...
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Well, with some edits, I hope that they're better at any rate...

Chapter 3 of "Day in the Life" is up on FF.Net

Nakajima

Enjoy!
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Old 2009-08-30, 11:46   Link #15560
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@DeathCurse: Welcome to the thread and nice piece . I myself love reinterpretations of characters (as well as recreations if my recent tackling of Jail is any standard to go by it seems)


And speaking of Jail, it's that time again~

Spoiler for Someone for... everyone?:


Spoiler for A/N:



Previously

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5
Good to see Maria can defend herself. She'll probably need that in the future.

I hope Jail isn't in too much trouble, poor guy. He's been trying so hard, too.
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