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Old 2009-10-25, 01:39   Link #17561
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I still think there's something wrong with your master file.
Part 1: "If we could." Wendi laughed. "We've been trying to make stuff on our own, but everything we've been doing at home keeps reminding us of Ginga."[/QUOTE] Never mind, got fixed while I read part two.
As for Mach Calibur, I thought it was because the magic style is New Belkan, as opposed to Ancient Belkan like the Wolkenritter.

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Old 2009-10-25, 02:12   Link #17562
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Hmm.

Crossposting from OCT for anyone that cares.

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Old 2009-10-25, 02:19   Link #17563
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BWAHAHAHAHA

After a long Haitus. It returns! the Epic thriller of Jail's innocent and pure first love!

(Disclaimer: The following part does not actually include Jail)

Spoiler for Someone for Everyone part 12:


Spoiler for A/N:


Previously:

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11
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Old 2009-10-25, 02:24   Link #17564
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BWAHAHAHAHA

After a long Haitus. It returns! the Epic thriller of Jail's innocent and pure first love!

(Disclaimer: The following part does not actually include Jail)

Spoiler for Someone for Everyone part 12:


Spoiler for A/N:


Previously:

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11
BAHAHA! Funny, funny! Nove and Wendi! Hooray! Sette getting development?! WHOO!
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Old 2009-10-25, 03:13   Link #17565
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BTW, why is it that Subaru's magic style is Belkan but Mach Calibur speaks in English instead of German?
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Because the Neo Belkan style that Subaru and Erio use has Mid magic mixed into it. Hayate, Carim, Verossa, and the Wolkenritter (and possibly Vivio and Einhart) are the only users of true Belkan magic.
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As for Mach Calibur, I thought it was because the magic style is New Belkan, as opposed to Ancient Belkan like the Wolkenritter.
I think it has less to do with the style and more to do with the Device. Mach Calibur is an Intelligent Device, which we've only ever seen speaking English, synced with another Device (Is Revolver Knuckle an Armed Device? If it is, its probably what gives her the Neo-Belken magic style, while retaining an Intelligent Device as her partner). Erio, on the other hand, is armed with an Armed Device, and not an Intelligent Device.

Also, tea is serious business.
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Old 2009-10-25, 03:17   Link #17566
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BWAHAHAHAHA

After a long Haitus. It returns! the Epic thriller of Jail's innocent and pure first love!

(Disclaimer: The following part does not actually include Jail)

Spoiler for Someone for Everyone part 12:


Spoiler for A/N:


Previously:

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11
BAHAHAHA! Oh man, I missed this fic so much! XD

Sette gets some long overdo character development, and it's nice to see Cinque becoming the big sister she was supposed to be to her. And of course, Nove and Wendi continue to trip and stumble along through their odd relationship.

So totally worth the wait, Shiny. So totally worth it.
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Old 2009-10-25, 03:36   Link #17567
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I think I may have to put a hold on reading Alternitives. All I've been thinking as I've read the last few parts is "this can't end well"
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Old 2009-10-25, 04:59   Link #17568
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This is a different story then my Crisis series, where I plan to go into some backstory on the Wolkenritter and the Tome of the Night Sky. Although it can be considered a bit of a sidestory to my Crisis story.

Currently a rough draft, looking for feedback:

Spoiler for Recollections of a Lost Age, Chapter 1: Memory Reinforcement:


Edit: Fixed up some grammar errors and made a few parts easier reading. I think that draft was a bit too rough... Oh, also would appreciate if people let me know if this section felt too long or too short. I'm trying to get a feel for a decent chapter size.
Huh, now there's an approach I hadn't thought of before. It makes sense though, a sleeper program. If Reinforce could do it, why not others as well?

Good call.

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Hayate: Well if you want my professional opinion it would be more incest than anything.
AlternativeS!Hayate: Twincest to be precise.
Hayates: *Gasp*
Hayates: *Hand Clasp* Sister!
Fate: Oh god there's two of them!
And that is why Hayate > all.

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BTW, why is it that Subaru's magic style is Belkan but Mach Calibur speaks in English instead of German?
Somehow I don't think this is the last we'll see of Ginga's injury...
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Old 2009-10-25, 05:26   Link #17569
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Hmm.

Crossposting from OCT for anyone that cares.

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Very nice. Touching. It also got a fic idea I've had in my head for a while unstuck, so thank you for that.
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Old 2009-10-25, 07:58   Link #17570
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Fate: *evil grin* Personally, I just call it "a whole lot of fun."
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Incesterbation!!!
GAHAHAHHAHAHA!!

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Hayate: Well if you want my professional opinion it would be more incest than anything.
AlternativeS!Hayate: Twincest to be precise.
Hayates: *Gasp*
Hayates: *Hand Clasp* Sister!
Fate: Oh god there's two of them!
The more Hayate, the better, I say. I'm betting Hayate would call herself 'oneesama' just for the hell of it.

As for the fic itself:

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AlternativeS Chapter 1 (AS rough draft)
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*I* wanted to interrupt Fate from picking the worse from her Closet of Signum's Secrets (tm). Poor choice :P That's probably not something Fate should know even if she was close with Signum (I can't imagine Signum telling Fate any of that), so it only helps to paint Fate as a freaky omnipresent perv. Granted, you can argue that Fate wouldn't have had the chance to walk in on the 2 Wolkies unless she was close to them, but it's still probably not what you'd say to gain a good impression. Felt like fanservice was forced there.

Oh, and reocurring spelling mistake that cropped up in the previous 2 chapters: manner, not manor.

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BWAHAHAHAHA

After a long Haitus. It returns! the Epic thriller of Jail's innocent and pure first love!

(Disclaimer: The following part does not actually include Jail)

Spoiler for Someone for Everyone part 12:


Spoiler for A/N:

*throws tea at Shiny* Can't believe you had to google the tea making process!
I'm actually growing fond of Cinque - honestly I did not care for the Numbers at all during Strikers. It wasn't just because they were named after numbers (at least they managed to pinned that on Jail's lack of creativity/care), but rather it seemed like the Numbers were spawned just for the sake of covering every character cliche and fetish out there.

And lol @ Nove's act of desperation.
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Old 2009-10-25, 09:12   Link #17571
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Hmm.

Crossposting from OCT for anyone that cares.

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Anyone that cares - oh, how you hurt me so.

A touching short of Noland revisiting a past long ended (like most of your emoshorts, the form is pretty fair)...

...And how can it be, that a knight of the Saint Kaiser still mourns for his lost family after so many years? O good knight...

For kings we mourn a summer,
For heroes grieve a year
But mourning left from kin bereft
Shall aught but disappear.


...But on from the brevous leaden weights...oh, ho, what have we there? I wonder, what was Kaon expecting from Noland, then, if not simply assent to dine?

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Somehow I was expecting this to happen...

...and the story goes on.

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BWAHAHAHAHA

After a long Haitus. It returns! the Epic thriller of Jail's innocent and pure first love!

(Disclaimer: The following part does not actually include Jail)

Spoiler for Someone for Everyone part 12:
Four Things To Do Before You Read What's In The Spoiler Tags:

1. Please check the spelling of the first few lines of your post
2. Note this: No Jail, No Problem, Will Travel!
3. I think you requested this before - I shall oblige: I HATE YOU.
4. And Welcome Back to the show.

Spoiler for nwcnebuchadnezzar:


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This is a different story then my Crisis series, where I plan to go into some backstory on the Wolkenritter and the Tome of the Night Sky. Although it can be considered a bit of a sidestory to my Crisis story.

Currently a rough draft, looking for feedback:

Spoiler for Recollections of a Lost Age, Chapter 1: Memory Reinforcement:
Oh, this is fine by me. I've seen chapters anywhere from 1000 to 16 000 words in length.

Interesting Mind Trip is Interesting. About writing bits of the history of the Tome of the Night Sky, though, asking a certain Nightengale might help you formulate 'em ideas.

First off...you're not making Reinforce...a TRAP, are you? For if you do...prepare to die, heretic.

Alright, I was kidding.

You want feedback?

Aye, Luigi, that's one Frickin' Freakily Fast n Furious Flummoxing Feedback - Fabolously Fun-Sized...(Though I'm hard up on time here, let's see what I can say.)

Spoiler for nwcavertingyoureyes:
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Old 2009-10-25, 09:45   Link #17572
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Four Things To Do Before You Read What's In The Spoiler Tags:

1. Please check the spelling of the first few lines of your post
2. Note this: No Jail, No Problem, Will Travel!
3. I think you requested this before - I shall oblige: I HATE YOU.
4. And Welcome Back to the show.

Spoiler for nwcnebuchadnezzar:

1. When I write at 3 AM my grammar goes out the window (alas I write my best content at 3 AM. So I'm ignoring all grammar and structure problems as actual grammar and structure problems and just things to be fixed up.

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Old 2009-10-25, 09:46   Link #17573
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I think I may have to put a hold on reading Alternitives. All I've been thinking as I've read the last few parts is "this can't end well"
In a bad way?

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*I* wanted to interrupt Fate from picking the worse from her Closet of Signum's Secrets (tm). Poor choice :P That's probably not something Fate should know even if she was close with Signum (I can't imagine Signum telling Fate any of that), so it only helps to paint Fate as a freaky omnipresent perv. Granted, you can argue that Fate wouldn't have had the chance to walk in on the 2 Wolkies unless she was close to them, but it's still probably not what you'd say to gain a good impression. Felt like fanservice was forced there.

Oh, and reocurring spelling mistake that cropped up in the previous 2 chapters: manner, not manor.
I couldn't think of anything else to put there Seems like others liked it so I'm not really concerened it took away from the story much. As for Fate knowing, she said she caught them a few times but never understood what was going on until she was older. Which means it was probably Signum and Shamal "babysitting" Fate when it happened. Besides, Signum asked for something that nobody else could know, and that generally implies the love life.

Manner, manor....... ugh. I hate that word.
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Old 2009-10-25, 12:29   Link #17574
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Well...I just uploaded Animal Instincts chapter 2 on ff.net if anyone is interested... :3

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Old 2009-10-25, 12:45   Link #17575
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BWAHAHAHAHA

After a long Haitus. It returns! the Epic thriller of Jail's innocent and pure first love!

(Disclaimer: The following part does not actually include Jail)

Spoiler for Someone for Everyone part 12:


Spoiler for A/N:


Previously:

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11
SHINY!

Short chapter but good! Sette's developing humanity could take a whole story all by itself; it's nice to see Cinque being a good sister and trying to help her expand her existence beyond combat training (which could be rather important. After all, if Jail is going to be retiring from the Evil Mad Scientist routine, he's not going to need combat cyborgs who don't know how to be useful around the house. Wendi and Nove can provide hours of entertainment as they stumble through their budding romance, but we don't want to have to trade Sette to JAIL for a minion to be named later.

The way you wrote the Nove/Wendi scene, it almost seemed as if Nove's budding affection for Wendi was a computer virus steadily affecting certain of her subsystems one by one...

MORE!!
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Old 2009-10-25, 14:39   Link #17576
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...

Well, this is awkward.

Okay, so... I've actually been thinking about this for quite awhile, but some things happened last night that, for me, confirmed that this is something I have to do, at least for the moment. Because if I don't do this, then I might do something I regret, and I don't want to do that.

Basically, I'm taking a little break from writing. I just... I can't do it, not right now. It's not a matter of time, my spark has just.... gone out. Died. For the first time, I don't want to write anything, not even little shorts. So, as of right now, BtBR, "Sisters", and my ViCia series are officially on hold until I can step back and figure out what the hell's going on with me.

As for "Day", well, that's something I have to discuss with Nanya, because it isn't fair to him for us to put the series on hiatus just because I'm going through a bit of a mental breakdown right now. I know you can't force writing, but at the same time, it isn't fair to him or to the people who like "Day" for me to just drop it because of personal issues, so... I'll talk to him about it and see what he has to say.

This is only temporary. I know I'll definitely write again. I just don't know when, because... my spark is gone, and nothing I've tried can get it lit again, not right now.

I'm really sorry about this. I know I'm letting a lot of people down...
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Old 2009-10-25, 14:48   Link #17577
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...

Well, this is awkward.

Okay, so... I've actually been thinking about this for quite awhile, but some things happened last night that, for me, confirmed that this is something I have to do, at least for the moment. Because if I don't do this, then I might do something I regret, and I don't want to do that.

Basically, I'm taking a little break from writing. I just... I can't do it, not right now. It's not a matter of time, my spark has just.... gone out. Died. For the first time, I don't want to write anything, not even little shorts. So, as of right now, BtBR, "Sisters", and my ViCia series are officially on hold until I can step back and figure out what the hell's going on with me.

As for "Day", well, that's something I have to discuss with Nanya, because it isn't fair to him for us to put the series on hiatus just because I'm going through a bit of a mental breakdown right now. I know you can't force writing, but at the same time, it isn't fair to him or to the people who like "Day" for me to just drop it because of personal issues, so... I'll talk to him about it and see what he has to say.

This is only temporary. I know I'll definitely write again. I just don't know when, because... my spark is gone, and nothing I've tried can get it lit again, not right now.

I'm really sorry about this. I know I'm letting a lot of people down...
I know the feeling, as its happened to me before. I'm sure everyone respects your decision as well :3 I hope whatever is holding you back leaves soon. If I can help in any way, I'm just a PM away ^_^
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Old 2009-10-25, 14:51   Link #17578
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You've burned yourself out from the sounds of things.
Looking at your project set, you have four differrent projects going on at the same time. Believe it or not, that's a LOT of thinking.

Mental exhaustion takes its toll.

So relax for a few weeks and let your mind sort itself out.
I do this on a regular basis really. I'll hit this roadblock where it's not a matter of inspiration, but a matter of motivation.
All you want to do is vegiate.

I've noticed that for me, it tends to synch with the lunar cycle. I get my most motivated in the days leading up to the full moon and then right after it I burn out and go down for a week or two. Sometimes I really burn out and go down for months.

No biggy. Creative work is not something that should be rushed.
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Old 2009-10-25, 14:52   Link #17579
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Psst don't worry about it. My spark comes and goes like a bipolar monkey. You just take your time gettin' your stuff together then write some more if ya feel like it. I'm here too if ya ever need to talk.
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We're only human, so we can't fault you for getting worn out. I think everyone in this thread's experienced such a thing.
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