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Old 2009-10-25, 21:38   Link #17661
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A fic I promised 00-Raiser but completely...uh...forgot. The first part of this short series, Good-Bye, is up on ff.net but I'm not expecting anyone to go and read it so...meh.

I'm only going to post the first part because I want to see what kind of reactions this is going to cause...I'm evil...

Enjoy this short... :3

Spoiler for Comatose:
Finally! The return! When Nanoha and Yuuno meet again, they'll be enemies and she's carrying his child and oooo, the drama!

Page claim for Yuunoha drama!
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Old 2009-10-25, 21:40   Link #17662
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Omigod SECRET BABY. And possibly comas. Maybe even BABY COMAS.
It's like all my favorite Romance Novels/Soap Operas in one.
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Old 2009-10-25, 21:41   Link #17663
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Omigod SECRET BABY. And possibly comas. Maybe even BABY COMAS.
It's like all my favorite Romance Novels/Soap Operas in one.
Yeah! BABY COMAS!

...

Wait...huh?

Shiny, are you being sarcastic?
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Old 2009-10-25, 21:42   Link #17664
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As the mother gives birth to her child she falls into A DRAMATIC COMA. And then THE BABY FALLS INTO A DRAMATIC COMA! But the baby gets better, cause everyone loves babies
Except for people who don't
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Old 2009-10-25, 21:48   Link #17665
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[QUOTE=Alavon;2729085]A fic I promised 00-Raiser but completely...uh...forgot. The first part of this short series, Good-Bye, is up on ff.net but I'm not expecting anyone to go and read it so...meh.

I'm only going to post the first part because I want to see what kind of reactions this is going to cause...I'm evil...

Enjoy this short... :3

Spoiler for Comatose:


The Yuuno fangirl in me rejects your concept of reality and replaces it with my own.
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Old 2009-10-25, 21:49   Link #17666
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As the mother gives birth to her child she falls into A DRAMATIC COMA. And then THE BABY FALLS INTO A DRAMATIC COMA! But the baby gets better, cause everyone loves babies
Except for people who don't
...

Ooookaaaay...I'll...go with...that?

*laughs*

Too much, Shiny! Too much! XD

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Go right ahead.
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Old 2009-10-25, 21:51   Link #17667
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WHO SENDS THESE BABIES TO FIGHT?!

ENTIRE TEAM IS BABIES.

KEEP CRYING, BABY.

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Old 2009-10-25, 21:53   Link #17668
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WHO SENDS THESE BABIES TO FIGHT?!

ENTIRE TEAM IS BABIES.

KEEP CRYING, BABY.

- HWGuy
Tempy, I never knew you wrote poetry...
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Old 2009-10-25, 21:55   Link #17669
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with this whole baby thing, I wonder what happens if the whole Nanoha's cast turns into toddlers?
....................chaos

then again, chibi-signum?
....*hold laughter*
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Old 2009-10-25, 21:57   Link #17670
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Spoiler for @ 00-Raiser's fic:


Um, well, since I reviewed it this much, I'll make it official.

I give this story (as it stands) three and a half stars out of five. The flow was nice, the characters seemed to represent themselves, and the cliche outburst were at a minimal. It gives a nice way for the reader to imagine how things go, without really leaving them hanging. Short and to the point, but also having an emotional build up that was nice to see being resolved.

Extra points for the odd couple. 00-Raiser played his cards right and wasn't afraid to fold and be re-dealt before finalizing his story. Taking the advice from a reader and fellow author shows the respect that I was looking for and, in this reviewer's eyes, makes up for what happened so long ago.

The pairing may sound strange, but it was well played. I'd recommend this to anyone who has an open mind about pairings.
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Old 2009-10-25, 22:00   Link #17671
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Spoiler for Nanoha Babies:


don't tell me I was the only one who watched Muppet Babies growing up
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Old 2009-10-25, 22:01   Link #17672
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@Satashi: Satashi, this must be a new record for you...
@Shiny: *laughs* S-Shiny...y-you're...k-killing me h-here....
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Old 2009-10-25, 22:09   Link #17673
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don't tell me I was the only one who watched Muppet Babies growing up
No you aren't. *Raises hand with a guilty look*
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Old 2009-10-25, 22:12   Link #17674
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don't tell me I was the only one who watched Muppet Babies growing up
My childhood called. It's suing for damages.
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Old 2009-10-25, 22:17   Link #17675
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don't tell me I was the only one who watched Muppet Babies growing up
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*slowly raises hand* I watched that show growing up.
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Old 2009-10-25, 22:17   Link #17676
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Funnily enough, I didn't.
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Old 2009-10-25, 22:17   Link #17677
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Just to show that I am equal-opportunity abuser, this is for all you NanoFate fans:

Spoiler for Pleasant Dinner Conversation:


I really need to get back to real writing, now that I got this out of my head...
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Old 2009-10-25, 22:19   Link #17678
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don't tell me I was the only one who watched Muppet Babies growing up
One of my favorite shows while growing up.
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Old 2009-10-25, 22:21   Link #17679
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don't tell me I was the only one who watched Muppet Babies growing up
I did! I did!
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Old 2009-10-25, 22:28   Link #17680
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Just to show that I am equal-opportunity abuser, this is for all you NanoFate fans:

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I really need to get back to real writing, now that I got this out of my head...
Oh, that was way too much!
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