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[Satashi]

AlternativeS Chapter 1 (AS rough draft)

Spoiler for Alternatives 2-1:

I was awake before Bardiche rang out his alarm to tell me it was time to get up. In fact, I had spent the last little while staring at the ceiling of what I knew to be a forward room. Nanoha had given me my room number and Hayate set it to accept me sometime last night when I was having dinner with my friend. Although they called it a 'special room for important guests', I still couldn't help but feel awkward. Here I am, in my home base, laying in a bed that didn't belong to me. I was still slightly in shock from everything that had happened, but I knew that I had to put it behind me and look for a solution rather than mope around.

Alternatives II
By: Satashi

Fate walked down the hallway leading to Nanoha's room briskly. Having being given clothes to wear, the blonde found herself in a standard base uniform that didn't fit quite right but still felt better than her dirty enforcer attire. When she made it to Nanoha' door, she stopped herself from just entering now that she was stored in the device via password, and instead knocked.

"Come in!" A perky voice came from inside. The door swished open and Fate looked around, spying Nanoha at her tiny kitchen. "Good morning, did you sleep well?"

"No, but I rested enough." Fate told the truth, which got her a look that was mixed between sympathy and amusement. "Did you sleep okay? you didn't wake up too early did you?" The blonde smelt the freshly baked biscuits and bacon before she saw the pan on the stove and light in the oven.

"I woke up on my own, don't worry." Nanoha waved her hand over her wheelchair control orb and went to the refrigerator. "How do you like your eggs?"

"Scrambled... mind if I join in?"

"Some hostess I am, letting my guest do all the work."

"I like cooking." Fate moved by Nanoha and started cracking shells. "You want yours over easy with extra pepper, cooked in the bacon grease right?"

"That's kind of creepy." Nanoha mused, not sure if she was enjoying this or was weirded out by it. "Tell me, how did I make the biscuits?"

"If you're referring to adding in honey, I know your mother taught you to do that when you were young."

Nanoha hummed and simply watched the girl cook. "I'd really like to meet me in your world. It must be nice having someone know so much about you."

"You're about the same, from what I can tell..."

"...I'm sorry, I was being selfish. We'll get you back, don't worry. I'm sure Hayate-chan will want us to meet with her first thing this morning."

"What about your students?"

"Vita-chan can handle them for the morning lessons, this is more important. We have to get you registered while you are here so you won't be in trouble. Last night's battle will be covered by the civilian collaborator contract, but you need to be in the records for now on."

"Yeah..." Fate finished their breakfast while Nanoha removed the now cooked sides. "I just realized I won't have my rank anymore..." Her lips turned up into a small grin. "Should I salute you?" The joke made Nanoha giggle to herself and Fate took comfort in hearing the familiar sound.

Spoiler for AlternativeS 2-2:

Just as soon as the two sat down together, A beeping sound came from Nanoha's wheelchair. "Raising Heart, connect please." The command allowed a monitor to appear in front of the girl and Hayate's image formed on it almost instantly. "Good morning, Hayate-chan."

"Morning, Nanoha-chan." Hayate replied back in kind. "Could you please bring Fate-chan to my office this morning?"

"Already planning on it." Reaching up, she tiled the screen to show Fate was next to her. The blonde smiled and gave a small wave which was returned. "Do you have any idea on what could have put her here?"

Hayate shook her head. "I haven't had time to do anything other than talk to everyone in our room last night. Shamal seems to think she could have come through a dimensional rift, but the chances of that are so low it’s hard to believe. Anyway, I have some people on it. For now, I need her signed as a collaborator before the T.S.A.B swoop in and try to have her signed on. Is that okay, Fate-chan?"

"Yes, that is fine." Fate nodded at the screen. "Nanoha was just telling me that."

"I see," Hayate looked back over at Nanoha. "Well then, enjoy your breakfast. I'll ask Vita to train your students today for you."

"Please." The two friends nodded at each other and the communication was cut off. "See? Hayate-chan is always on top of things."

"She is." The blonde agreed and a small bit of silence passed over them as they ate, interrupted only by raising Heart's update on the weather, Nanoha's schedule, and the sounds of utensils tapping their plates.

Once breakfast was over, the two girls headed down out to take care of their business, stopping once they reached the front door. "Raising Heart wasn't kidding when she said high chances of rain today," Nanoha mused while looking out at the drizzling rain.

"Seems so," Fate brought up Bardiche and the device answered her silent call to allow an umbrella to form, casting a translucent yellow barrier above them. "Shall we?"

Nanoha gave Fate an amused look but still allowed girl to hold the shield over them both as they walked to the adjacent building. From there they went up to Hayate's office and the blonde found herself answering questions that both made her grin and sigh out at the same time. Once the paperwork was completed Hayate gave a satisfied nod and began ushering them downstairs once more so they could go give Fate her official ranking test. Their trip was interrupted just moments after they left the main building by Lexus standing in front of them, an umbrella held over his head by none other than a reluctant looking Teana.

Lexus greeted them with a smirk and stepped forward to Fate, making Tea move along with him. "Hello there, Blondie. I did some research and it appeaser you aren't with the T.S.A.B. yet."

"I am a civilian collaborator, and don't call me Blondie." Fate frowned at him but still let her eyes drift to Tea for a brief moment.

"My assistant, Teana." Lexus pointed to the girl. "Not worth anything on the field but she's helpful when I need someone to carry something for me." His words made the girl with him bite down a growl. "Anyway, Hot Legs, why not join my battalion? I have much better resources then these clowns. What do you say?"

"My name is Fate." The woman stated firmly.

"Ooh, my destiny, I like that."

Nanoha chose that moment to interrupt. "Don't hit on my friends."

"Jealous I've never hit on you? Can't see what fun you'll be without moving your hips arou-" His words cut off when a palm connected firmly with his cheek.

"Do not address my friends in such a manor." Fate told him, voice going from her usual soft tone to holding a faint edge to it. "I won't tolerate anyone insulting people I care for."

Lexus licked his lips and looked at Fate with a new interest, left hand going to touch his slapped cheek. "I want you even more now. Have you taken your mage exam test yet?"

"I have not," Fate answered simply.

"Tell you what," stepping closer to her, he forced Teana to lean the umbrella to keep him dry, even though her back was now getting wet. "Let me review you. If I win, you join my battalion, in more ways than one."

Fate felt her body grow stiff, red tinting her cheeks when she realized what the last part meant. Despite this, she still didn't move from him, and answered back calmly. "When I win, that girl with you will join our battalion, and you will address Hayate and Nanoha by their ranks."

Lexus laughed loudly at her. "Well spoken! Fine then. Wingless, we will be using your training field. Let’s go, Babe."

Fate nodded and began walking as well, ignoring the astonished look on Tea's face at her sudden involvement with people she didn't even know.

The training area, now free from its morning inhabitants, was quickly changed to form a fake city on it, leaving Fate standing on one building on the east side while Lexus was on the West. The blonde ran her thumb over Bardiche and felt her clothes shift and change around her before forming a barrier jacket to protect herself. 'I don't care if you harass me,' she thought bitterly as a monitor came up in front of her, informing her of how the ranking test would work. 'But I will never forgive anyone who insults my family or friends.'

On the sidelines, Hayate stood with crossed arms. Monitors floated all around her and a firm frown was on her face. "This isn't what I had in mind for today."

Nanoha nodded lightly, moving her hands out to make sure all the necessary information would be recorded and documented. "He is a triple-A plus mage. Fate-chan said she was S, but her performance last night would only suggest a double-A... Was she holding back so she could record for us?"

"... For her sake, I hope so..." Her eyes moved to look at Tea standing next to them. 'And why did she bet that that girl would be transferred to me...? I'm getting too laid back in my old age.' Smirking at the inside joke, Hayate finally pushed the screen to confirm the battle to start. 'Good luck, Fate-chan.'

Spoiler for Alternatives 2-3:

Fate looked out over the make-shift abandoned city from her position on top of a large office building. The screen by her stated that the test was now in progress and she gripped Bardiche a little tighter. "Bardiche?"

"Scan complete, sir." He spoke back calmly. "Enemy is across the field, coming at running speed. ETA is three minutes."

"How impatient, he should have waited for us to come to him." The blonde moved her hand out and placed several binding spells along the ground. "He isn't powerful enough to test us properly... Looks like we will have to be evaluated again once this is over."

"Sir," Bardiche's tone made Fate hesitate leaving the building. "Our situation is weird, please do not be careless."

"...You're right." Fate lifted her hand once more and focused, forming several daggers of energy around herself. "As weird as everything has been, I can not afford to be careless... Especially after he called Nanoha that."

"Yes sir."

Fate frowned to herself and leaped off the building, dropping down to the ground and darting forward. Lexus made it just as she expected and began dodging the sprung traps, twisting and jumping through the yellow binds. When the last one was sprung, his left leg was snared, making him look back in shock. Taking the opportunity, Fate engaged and swung her scythe down hard.

Lexus yelled as his barrier jacket ripped open and barely managed to block the next attack, leaving himself open for several yellow energy daggers to break his auto barrier. The male broke the bind on himself and jumped back, recollecting himself and staring at the blonde who didn't press her advantage. "What's the matter!? Scared you won't do as well after a surprise attack!?"

"Bardiche."

"Yes sir." The device was lifted and circles appeared around them, forming small darts of yellow energy that burst forth, triggering several trap spells that were placed as Lexus retreated.

"Che, you would be a smart one." Making a taunting motion, Lexus smirked at her. "I want you even more now. Tell you what, join me and I'll even let the whore come too."

"Sir." Bardiche's voice made the blonde stop before she lunged at him.

Taking a breath, Fate cooled down and spoke at the man again. "Why are you such a pervert?"

Lexus shrugged. "Guess its in my DNA." Fate twirled Bardiche and walked in a half circle on the mostly destroyed road. Lexus made the other half as they circled each other slowly. Their eyes met and each ran forward. Lexus reacted faster, drawing his device and pointing a gun at Fate and shooting. The magical bullet met it's target and hit the blonde square in the chest before ripping through her back side. "What-the!?"

Fate appeared behind the man as her after-image faded away. A small moment was taken to charge her attack before she slashed her scythe down, the blade pulsating larger than normal. As the man fell forward, Fate caught his collar and pulled him back so she could whisper into his ear firmly. "If you ever look at my wife in a perverted manor again, I won't hold back." When her words were done she let go of him and allowed him to fall onto the ground defeated.

As monitors appeared around Fate, Lexus smirked to himself through the pain in his back. 'So, she does have a weakness...'

Spoiler for AlternativeS 2-4:

~**~

"Fate-chan!" Nanoha's voice made the girl look up and smile at her.

The blonde walked up the ramp leading to the instructor observatory and stood next to Nanoha, red eyes scanning the video image feeds all around her. "Sorry for having to run earlier. Hayate needed me to fill out paperwork and schedule another testing time."

"No problem, she told me before she went to the field to get you. I had to deal with Teana's transfer anyway. Did you get an earful?"

Fate felt a small smile come to her face. "Yes, Hayate scolded me for making that deal and was going to turn it down but Lexus expelled Tea from his base."

"At least my work wasn't for nothing then. I already have her situated in my books."

Fate licked her lips as the screen came up. "Hey...can I ask a favor?"

"Mm?" Nanoha tapped the floating keyboards around herself to make the students training on the field have to swap tactics.

"Can you place Tea with Subaru?"

"Why?" Nanoha looked over at Fate curiously. "That would be a very awkward and inconvenient move for all of our parts. Subaru is a close combat mage while Teana seems to use a pistol. I need to consider Teana's points before I transfer away from where I placed her."

"...Please?"

Nanoha blinked and looked up at Fate once more. "...Why?"

"Its just... in my time, they are forwards... placed directly under your personal training. They improved more than anyone I've ever seen and... well, Tea is my partner when I go on long distance missions."

Nanoha leaned back in her wheelchair and rubbed the bridge of her nose. "The C-ranked mage you forced on me is now suddenly one of my best students who runs with a S ranked mage?"

"Yes."

"Hayate-chan was right, you're really annoying." With a grin, Nanoha glanced up at Fate before typing on her keyboards again. "However, your request will really throw me off. I can't justify this, it just doesn't make any sense."

Fate leaned against the guard rail and looked out over the training field with distant eyes. "I know the feeling."

The blue eyed girl stayed silent for a long moment before heaving out a long sigh. "Hayate-chan is going to yell at me for this."

"Thank you. I will train them myself."

"Nooooo, you're a civilian collaborator, not an instructor. Jeez, does the other Nanoha have to keep you on a leash as well?"

Fate smirked, a playful tint coming to her eyes as she turned to look over her shoulder. "Yes, yes she does."

'What have I gotten into?' Nanoha thought while tapping away on her keyboards. 'I was fine with it when she was just affecting me, but now she's barged into my work and... Maybe Hayate-chan was right, maybe she is here to throw us off balance for some reason...' Eying the blonde looking out over the field, she felt a small tear at her heart. 'But nobody can pretend to be that sad and confused... Even with that smile on her face, I can tell she is about to cry. Just like that girl so long ago, her feelings pour out through her eyes... as if she's screaming for help but can't form the words...'

"You're sighing an awful lot today," Fate told her softly before turning around completely to sit against the railing. "I'm sorry for being so selfish."

"No... I just... I don't know." Nanoha shook her head. "Fate-chan, I'm sorry but can we meet up later? I need to focus on my students."

"Yes, I'm sorry." Fate's tone turned sad almost at once.

'Aw, she probably came to me because she felt alone...' Before Nanoha could speak up again an new voice called Fate's attention.

"Fate." Signum walked to the bottom of the ramp and met the blonde's eyes. "I need you to come with me for a moment."

"Okay." walking down ramp, she gave Signum a curious look. "What is it, Signum?"

Signum stopped to get a drink from a vending machine and waved her device over it again, putting in enough credits for Fate to get one as well. "Mistress Hayate requested for me to accompany you to the bank to set up an account, as well as try and get some more information from you regarding your situation."

Fate picked her drink and smiled while bending over to get it. "You don't trust me."

"I don't."

"I understand." Fate fell into step beside her and walked along the sidewalk. "Later... Lets have a sparing match."

"Why?" Signum eyed her without turning her head.

"Because you and I both can feel someone's emotions when fighting them."

"How do you know that?"

"Because..." Fate whispered softly. "You're my role model. The one I always looked up to and sought advice from."

"... Fine, we will spar later."

"Thank you, Signum."

"Don't thank me yet." A small giggle made her look at Fate curiously. "What?"

"I'm just relieved... Everyone is the same."

"...We can get lunch while we're out too."

"Thank you."

Spoiler for AlternativeS 2-5:

~**~

"That was awkward." The understatement made Signum repress the urge to scoff at the blonde trailing her. "I'm sorry, really."

"You could have at least come up with a story before we got inside the bank." Signum spoke back flatly, clearly annoyed at the embarrassing act. "I thought Hayate and you would have surely discussed what you would put down on the paper. I'm sure Nanoha is thrilled."

"I can't help it, it was instinct!"

"Writing down that you are married and live with the top instructor on this planet isn't something that comes as instinct. You're lucky Nanoha played along with it. I'm sure you saw how embarrassed she was."

"...Yes." Fate sighed and sat in Signum's sports car, closing the door almost too softly to latch. "I've caused so much trouble since I showed up... I really don't know how to apologize for it all."

"Start by thinking more." Signum started the engine and looked over her shoulder to back out of the parking space. "Am I really your role model? I expected better."

"...You don't have to rub it in." Fate's tone made the older woman exhale a defeated breath.

"Okay... Okay, I apologize for getting upset. Don't get all whiny on me... How do I normally deal with you when you do this?"

"Honestly?" Fate inhaled deeply to calm herself down. "You ruffle my hair and tell me to get over it. If its really bad, you'll hold me and kiss my forehead."

"I wouldn't be caught kissing someone's forehead."

"I know." Fate felt a little of her energy come back. "You always hide the fact that you do it. Not even Vita knows, and you do it to her too."

Signum stiffened slightly. "That's very creepy. Knowing things about me that I do not wish you to is very unnerving."

"Yeah," Fate looked out the window. "I've been getting that all day. No matter how casual I try to be, it still freaks people out when I talk like I've known them forever... Tell me, Signum... If you were in my place, how would you handle it?"

The swordsman hesitated her response, rolling the question over in her head as she drove them down the roads in the capital. Finally, after contemplating it for several long moments, she answered. "I would tell you something that there was no way you could know unless we were as close as you say. Having people support you and take you seriously without doubt would be the best way to stay stable."

Fate nodded. "This is embarrassing."

"Say it."

"You have a cosplay fetish, and Shamal dresses you up when you make love. Hayate makes them for you, and you pose in them to satisfy her and not let her know what you two do with them... Also, you-"

"Okay!" Signum interrupted her, cheeks splashed red. "Did you have to pick something sexual? Why not say something simple like..."

"You have a mole on your inner thigh that looks like a star? Because anyone who bathes with you would know that."

"...You impress me." Signum nodded to herself. "But might I ask... How did you get that information?"

Fate grimaced. "When we were younger I caught you two doing it several times but I never understood it until after Nanoha and I made love the first time when we were sixteen... I couldn't look at you in the face for weeks."

"So we don't...?"

"No!" Fate almost shrieked, blushing herself now. "I'm dedicated to Nanoha! Fully!"

"Good..." Signum felt a small grin come to her face. "Well then, Fate, how do you feel now?"

"...Better." Looking at her lap, she played with her fingers. "I'm sure you will understand more when we spar tonight but... I'm glad you gave me a chance. I don't like it when you don't trust me."

"We'll discuss that topic more over lunch, where do you want to eat?"

"Well Fuji's isn't open yet so....."

"Fuji's?"

"Yes?" Fate thought about the bar. "Oh... That's right, I directly had an impact on that place... Since Nanoha isn't an Ace and I wasn't there to find it... Kuhn couldn't have opened his bar." Groaning, the blonde leaned back in her seat. "I don't know then, you pick."

"Okay." The woman flicked her wrist and turned on the car's blinker, moving over to take a turn. "I know a good place."

~**~

Hayate looked up from her monitor when a knock came at her office door. "Come in." Her words granted Fate access and she smiled at the woman walking up to her. "Ah, special collaborator Fate." Standing, she walked over to the front of her desk and saluted. "Allow me to officially welcome you to my base."

"Thank you," Fate saluted back before getting casual. "I'll do anything I can to help while I'm here. Thank you again for helping me as well."

"I have people on your case already, investigating where you woke up and searching for anything that could be related. We don't have much to work with so the best I can say is that I'll contact you the moment we find out anything."

"Thank you." Fate smiled lightly. "I really appreciate this, Hayate."

The shorter girl leaned forward, inspecting the cut on Fate's cheek. "What happened to you?"

"Signum got a lick in." rubbing the spot lightly, she smiled. "We had a little sparring match."

"As long as you don't get hurt. Do you need to go to Shamal?"

Fate shook her head. "I just need a bath. By the way, could I get a small advance on my pay? I need to buy a few things while I'm here."

"I'm sorry, but you're only stationed here. I don't have any control over you except for your duties. Your pay comes from the T.S.A.B directly. I can loan you some of mine though."

"Ah, I'd feel bad... Maybe I can just borrow some clothes from Nanoha until I get my first check."

"If you change your mind, don't hesitate. By the way, did you really put down Nanoha as your wife on the bank application?" The embarrassed look on the girl's face made Hayate put a hand on her hip. "I'm sure Nanoha won't mind, but please don't get her upset okay?"

"I won't."

"Nanoha is... very weird in that area." Hayate thought about how to word what she was thinking. All the time growing up she felt like she wasn't part of her family. Same with the times I've known her as well. People love her, I love her, but she has never truely felt love before. You know what I mean?"

"She desperatly wants someone to be in love with her. I know, she was like that with me as well."

"But you were there... you weren't for my Nanoha. Do you get what I'm saying?"

Fate nodded. "I love my Nanoha. I would never cheat on her, even if its with the same girl in another time line. She is Nanoha, but she's not my Nanoha."

Hayate smiled and gave a relieved chuckle. "Thank you, that makes me feel so much better. I was worried that when you left... it might hurt her."

Fate started walking with Hayate as she closed down her office and walked towards the door. "Don't worry, I don't think she'd fall for me that easily. Nanoha and I danced around each other for years before we started dating. In fact, it was you who brought us together."

"Really?" She tilted her head curiously.

"It was at a sleep over, you dared her to ask out her crush to the dance at school. You got her phone and called her crush and... my phone rang. I remember looking at it and slowly picking it up. I brought it to my ear and looked at Nanoha, who quickly turned away from me and looked down at her lap... Then she meekly told me hello and asked if I had a date yet. It was the cutest thing you would have ever seen. I thought she would pass out, her ears were so red."

With a giggle, Hayate shook her head. "That would be so amusing. Nanoha is so independent it is hard to imagine her all shy blushy."

"Blushy? Is that a word?"

"Its a technical term." Hayate smiled as they walked to the residential area. "Nanoha normally takes a bath in her room so I'm sure she won't mind you taking one there as well. She doesn't like people offering to help her, gets really touchy about it."

"Sounds like her."

"I know, right? One time I offered to carry her to the bathtub and she got really upset. She never lets anyone carry her anywhere, its like her pet peeve."

"Really?" Fate stopped walking and looked at her with a confused look. "I carried her to bed last night and she seemed rather pleased."

"You carried her?" Hayate shook her head. "No, no, nobody carries Nanoha. They would lose their arms."

Fate scratched her head before placing her hand on her hip. "Odd, maybe she was just too tired to say anything."

"Must have been being polite," Hayate agreed. "Anyway, I'll see you tomorrow."

"Okay," Fate nodded and left the elevator once it was on her floor. The short walk was made and she found herself standing in front of Nanoha's door. 'I hope she isn't upset about earlier...' Taking a breath to steady herself, Fate knocked on the door leading into Nanoha's loft. A call from inside bade her entrance and she made her way into the overly large room. "I'm back," she called testingly, seeing Nanoha move over from behind the kitchen cabinets and face her.

"Welcome back," Nanoha smiled in greeting "So, you're registered here, miss Takamachi?"

"I... didn't mean for it to turn out that way. I'm sorry..."

"I don't mind." Nanoha mused, turning her chair around and going back to the kitchen to finish preparing her drink. "You could have told me beforehand, though. I was contacted in front of all my students as I was dismissing them. Now they are all asking me weird questions."

"I'm sorry..." Fate looked down.

"Don't get all pouty on me. Like I said, I don't mind. I'm your wife after all, that's kind of neat. I've never even been on a date and now I have a wife. I should call my parents."

"Nanoha!" Fate felt herself blushing, a fact that the girl didn't miss. "A-anyway, um..."

"Make yourself at home. Want anything to eat or drink?"

"Uhm, a drink would be nice."

Nanoha smiled. "What would you like?"

"Don't suppose you have scotch?" The girl cocked an eyebrow at her. "I don't drink often, but I could use something to mellow me down right now."

"Sorry, don't have any. I have some frozen daiquiri mix and some rum?"

"Thanks but I can't handle the sweetness." Fate moved to the large couch and fell down on it.

Nanoha moved over to her and lifted her arms. The wheelchair shifted and two bars came out for her to grab, allowing the girl to easily move so she was sitting on the couch as well. "So," Once she was set, the wheelchair moved away from them. "Other than looking like a nervous wreck, how was your day?"

"Bad... Good... I'm not sure." Looking down, Fate moved her hands out in a helpless gesture. "I mean, everything is going okay and my day wasn't really that bad, it's just..."

"You're not where you want to be."

"Yeah... which is weird, because this is exactly where I want to be."

"Tell me," Nanoha picked up a pillow from the couch and sat it on her lap. "What do I normally do when you're upset?"

"Rub my back and make advances on me." Fate smiled at the thought. "You're really physical. I remember you telling me that you couldn't express how you felt with words so you tried to do it in a way that would show me."

"Wow, that's interesting." Nanoha leaned forward to make Fate look at her. "So a massage?"

"I- I couldn't-"

"Its okay, you're my wife after all." Nanoha laughed at the statement. "That's so weird to say, I like it. Come on, lets go upstairs and I'll rub your back. Its the least I can do for you fighting for me this morning. Besides, I heard what you said to Lexus."

"A-Ah, that was... Just instinct."

Nanoha smiled more, asking a question fondly. "Am I always in your instinct?"

"...Yeah, you could say that. Not a day goes by without me thinking about Nanoha."

The girl leaned to Fate more. "Then let me help you out for a change. Lets go upstairs... Carry me?"

Spoiler for AlternativeS 2-6:

Fate hesitated, blinking at the innocent eyes gazing at her. "Okay." Nanoha held out her arms and wrapped them around Fate's neck when the blonde shifted to slide hers under Nanoha's body. With ease, Fate lifted her up and stood, walking around the coffee table to avoid the girl's wheelchair. 'But Hayate told me...'

Nanoha leaned against Fate briefly before wrinkling her nose and pulling back. "Ew, you stink."

"I didn't have time to shower after my session with Signum," the blonde mused lightly. "I was hoping you would let me take a shower, as well as borrow some clothes until I can buy some for myself?"

"Sure, I don't mind." Nanoha felt herself being sat on the bed and she placed her arms behind herself to prop up. "Should I tell you where I keep my clothes?"

"Well, considering we split our drawers and closet and agreed on where to place them, I'm not sure. But then again, you kept the other stuff in that drawer, so I'm assuming nightgowns in here." Fate opened the top drawer of the nightstand and pulled out a pink button up. "I don't suppose you took interest in nighties did you?"

"They reveal too much." Nanoha replied simply.

"But you like showing off." She got a curious look and a blush. "Ah, you see, the Nanoha I know always... flashes..."

"I flash people!?"

"Not that much! Just like... short skirts and stuff..." Fate scratched her cheek. "It really makes me frantic... you told me you do it just to see me blush most of the time."

"...Most?"

Fate looked away. "Sure you're not uncomfortable?"

Picking up on the shy tone, Nanoha leaned forward with a grin and looped her hands under her knees to pull them up so her feet were on the bed and so she could rest her chin on her knees while holding them. "Is that why you got so upset about Lexus talking to me like that?"

"...Yeah, I'm.. just really protective... not really the best thing in the world when courting an exhibitionist." Fate flushed and shook her head. "I shouldn't-"

"Tell me more." Nanoha's words made Fate look back at her with a shocked expression. The girl on the bed simply smiled, eyes not wavering. "We're close enough to have sex, right? What is it like? What am I like?"

"Y-you're..." Fate stammered, closing the drawer and opening the one under it, getting a pair of sweatpants. "Its... I dunno... just..."

"You're really shy, aren't you?"

"...Yes, please don't tease me like this."

"Isn't that what I'm supposed to do?" Nanoha giggled to herself. 'No wonder my other self does that, she looks so adorable when she's stammering.' After letting the girl frantically try to think of something to say for a few moments, Nanoha continued. "So... Fate-chan?"

"Y-yes...?"

"If I wore a short skirt tomorrow... would you protect me?" Resting her cheek on her knee now, Nanoha simply looked up at the girl for an answer.

"D-don't say silly things." Fate finished raiding the drawer for clothes and made her way to the bathroom and the connected shower. "I'll be out in a bit, okay?"

"I'll be waiting." Nanoha watched her new friend close the bathroom door with a smile on her lips. 'How interesting...' Reaching over to Fate's discarded enforcer outfit, she placed it over her shoulders to get a little warmth. "Raising Heart, can you turn up the temperature two degrees?" The orb on her wheelchair flashed and confirmed the action. "Hmmm..." The though was vocalized as the sounds of the shower sprang to life behind her. 'She's such a cute girl, and very possessive.'

Closing her eyes, Nanoha allowed herself to fall to the side, plopping down on the bed while still hugging her knees. 'The other me is so brave... but then again, if it meant having someone honestly get flustered over me then...' An honest smile came to her lips. 'Someone getting protective because I belong to them... Wanting nobody else to see what is theirs.' A giddy laugh came from her as she thought about it. 'I'd love to see that. Just hearing her say that to Lexus today made me feel warm... And her claiming me as her wife...'

Rolling onto her back, Nanoha looked up at the ceiling with her arms spread out. 'I've always wanted someone to do that for me. To honestly be interested in me, to ask me how my day was all the time and not get bored of hearing the same stories...' Looking up at the white ceiling, Nanoha listened to the sounds of water hitting the shower floor. 'Fate-chan knows everything about me, even my most embarrassing things. She's seen me naked, made love to me, and still smiles that way whenever my name is mentioned.'

Letting her head fall to the side, Nanoha looked at her nightstand. 'I've waned to have this feeling for as long as I can remember... To be gazed at with love and acceptance... To be told I mean the most in their life.' Pushing herself up, she scooted so she could move her legs off the bed and sit by her drawer, opening it up and rooting around until she found a see-through white bra. 'If I put this on... would she look at me like that?' She ran the lacy fabric over between her thumb and forefinger. 'For some reason, I feel shy... like her seeing my body would make me really embarrassed... Is that what its like when wanting someone else to see you like that? This feeling... of excitement and happiness?'

Looking at the undergarment for a while longer, Nanoha shook her head and put it back into the drawer. 'I can't... My heart is beating so fast.' Holding her hands together over her chest, she stared at the floor with a dark blush. 'I want her to see me in it but... I don't. I'm scared she may not find me attractive... but I know she does! It's not fair, she knows me inside and out but know so little about her!'

Nanoha frowned and laid back on the bed once more. 'I want to know her more...I want to understand her like she does me... I want... I want her to refer to ME when she speaks my name.' A firm nod came at the thoughts. 'I was sent an angel out of nowhere, and I don't want to let this opportunity pass.' Gripping the enforcer jacket that fell off her shoulders, she moved it to become a makeshift blanket over her. 'She was sent here for a reason...I want that reason to be me.' Hugging herself, Nanoha closed her eyes happily as the water cut off from the bathroom. 'This is the feeling I've longer for, for so long.'

Spoiler for AlternativeS 2-7:

Nanoha looked over at Fate as the door opened, smiling to herself as the blonde walked into her bedroom. Slightly damp hair was still being dried and the black tank top Fate had picked out lightly flashed her stomach as her hands fussed with her hair. A pair of matching black shorts were claimed as well, completing Fate's evening wear. "You look nice in that," Nanoha said honestly. "You like black don't you?"

"Black, purple, and gold, my three favorite colors." Sitting on the bed, Fate went about combing her hair with the brush she had nicked from the bathroom. "If you're cold, you should adjust your heat or you may get sick."

"I did, it just takes a moment for it to happen. Besides, I like your jacket, it’s nice." The girl smiled innocently. "Enjoy your shower?"

"Yes, thank you. I needed one after today." Fate continued to mess with her hair until it was tangle free, then pulled it into a ponytail to stay out of her way until it dried completely. "What time is it?"

"A little past nine."

"Shouldn't you be doing your evaluations for today? Don't let me keep you."

"I had to take care of it earlier when I transferred Teana into Subaru's room. Turns out they trained together for a while. I accepted Subaru after she failed her B-rank mage test. Teana was accepted into Lexus' base as a low level cadet as well. She has been doing odd jobs around the base, but not much actual combat or training." Giving a light sigh, she shook her head. "This is going to be such a headache."

"I can help." The blonde shifted so she was sitting next to Nanoha. "I know I'm not an instructor, but I can still assist you. It’s not like I have anything else to do. Go over tomorrow's training plan with me, I can be on the field as you instruct."

"Do you normally help me out training?" Nanoha stretched out her upper half before moving to a sitting position with her legs out in front of her.

Fate glanced at Nanoha's legs before shaking her head. "No, I only sometimes go on the field. Maybe once a week or so for special training or a demonstration. Generally I'm too busy doing my office work or making rounds..." Looking at her friend, she finally let out a small sigh. "Can I ask something tasteless?"

"Go ahead." Nanoha leaned her hands behind herself and braced on them. "I know what you're going to ask anyway."

"... How are your legs? Is it painful?" Not being able to help herself, she traced a finger along Nanoha’s left shin. "I'm sorry, but it’s so sad seeing you in a wheelchair..."

The girl gave a small giggle at the questions. "No, no, no pain. I've been like this for several years now so it’s just common place now. Besides, I have this entire room customized just for me. All my shelves are the right height, and Raising Heart was incorporated into my Smart Chair. She can change shape to fit my needs, allowing me to do anything from easily getting from my chair to couch, bed, or even from the ground to my chair. She can move very fast, which is always fun to do. Honestly, it’s not much different from walking. Mid's handicap laws are a lot better than Earth’s and the technology is so great, it’s not really a hindrance at all. Besides..." Nanoha leaned forward and ran her hands down her legs, purposely catching Fate's finger between two of hers. "I got like this from magical damage, not physical. I still have active nerves in my legs, so I can feel everything just like normal; I just can't move my muscles."

"I...see." Fate thought about this while Nanoha played with her finger. "That makes me feel a little better." Her red eyed looked at the hand teasing her finger by running her's along it. "You're just like her."

"I am her," Nanoha countered simply with a smile, tugging on Fate's finger playfully. "I owe you a back rub."

"Ah, you don't have to-"

"Really, come on." Nanoha pulled on the finger between hers a few times, urging Fate to move closer to her. "On your stomach." She watched Fate reluctantly lay down and shifted herself so she was sitting beside her friend. Palms pressing against Fate's back, she began to contently rub. "Sorry, I'm not very good at this. If I press too hard let me know."

"I like it hard." Fate mumbled down into her pillow. "I'm weird like that."

"I see," Nanoha pressed down a little harder, getting an almost instant sound of pleasure. "Hey, Fate-chan?"

"Hmm?"

"Tell me more about yourself."

"Like what?" Fate rested her cheek on a pillow and closed her eyes.

"What do you like?"

"Mm?"

"Like..." Nanoha thought about how to expand on her question. "Your favorite food?"

"Roast chicken."

"Drink?"

"Dr.Pepper, on ice in a glass only. Scotch on the rocks for alcoholic."

"Clothes?"

Fate chuckled. "You're an inquisitive little thing tonight." The hands on her back pressed down and ran up her spine, making her almost fall asleep while answering. "Anything black. I like skirts, stockings and pantyhose. Denim is nice, and if I can get away with it, shoulder less, fuzzy shirts."

"Shoulder less?" Nanoha hummed. "And you say you don't like me being revealing?"

"You're different..." Fate yawned, moving her hands under the pillow and getting comfortable.

"Underclothes?"

"Black and lacy...I like frills." Fate started to mumble as Nanoha went to her shoulders.

The girl sitting on the bed smiled to herself, watching Fate's sleepy face slowly start to drift off as she rubbed. 'Well, now I know what clothes to buy you while you're here... It's not much, but it’s a start. I can make a run to town during lunch and have Vita cover for me if I'm a little late, she'll understand.' Several minutes passed by in silence before Nanoha heard soft snoring sounds. Her hands paused and she curiously leaned over to look at Fate, smiling happily at the cute sounds she was making. 'She's adorable when she's asleep... Well, sleep sweet, Fate-chan.' With that, she pet Fate's back twice before carefully shifting get in her wheelchair and then pull the covers over the girl.

[Alavon]

Spoiler for AlternativeS 2-7:

Nanoha looked over at Fate as the door opened, smiling to herself as the blonde walked into her bedroom. Slightly damp hair was still being dried and the black tank top Fate had picked out lightly flashed her stomach as her hands fussed with her hair. A pair of matching black shorts were claimed as well, completing Fate's evening wear. "You look nice in that," Nanoha said honestly. "You like black don't you?"

"Black, purple, and gold, my three favorite colors." Sitting on the bed, Fate went about combing her hair with the brush she had nicked from the bathroom. "If you're cold, you should adjust your heat or you may get sick."

"I did, it just takes a moment for it to happen. Besides, I like your jacket, it’s nice." The girl smiled innocently. "Enjoy your shower?"

"Yes, thank you. I needed one after today." Fate continued to mess with her hair until it was tangle free, then pulled it into a ponytail to stay out of her way until it dried completely. "What time is it?"

"A little past nine."

"Shouldn't you be doing your evaluations for today? Don't let me keep you."

"I had to take care of it earlier when I transferred Teana into Subaru's room. Turns out they trained together for a while. I accepted Subaru after she failed her B-rank mage test. Teana was accepted into Lexus' base as a low level cadet as well. She has been doing odd jobs around the base, but not much actual combat or training." Giving a light sigh, she shook her head. "This is going to be such a headache."

"I can help." The blonde shifted so she was sitting next to Nanoha. "I know I'm not an instructor, but I can still assist you. It’s not like I have anything else to do. Go over tomorrow's training plan with me, I can be on the field as you instruct."

"Do you normally help me out training?" Nanoha stretched out her upper half before moving to a sitting position with her legs out in front of her.

Fate glanced at Nanoha's legs before shaking her head. "No, I only sometimes go on the field. Maybe once a week or so for special training or a demonstration. Generally I'm too busy doing my office work or making rounds..." Looking at her friend, she finally let out a small sigh. "Can I ask something tasteless?"

"Go ahead." Nanoha leaned her hands behind herself and braced on them. "I know what you're going to ask anyway."

"... How are your legs? Is it painful?" Not being able to help herself, she traced a finger along Nanoha’s left shin. "I'm sorry, but it’s so sad seeing you in a wheelchair..."

The girl gave a small giggle at the questions. "No, no, no pain. I've been like this for several years now so it’s just common place now. Besides, I have this entire room customized just for me. All my shelves are the right height, and Raising Heart was incorporated into my Smart Chair. She can change shape to fit my needs, allowing me to do anything from easily getting from my chair to couch, bed, or even from the ground to my chair. She can move very fast, which is always fun to do. Honestly, it’s not much different from walking. Mid's handicap laws are a lot better than Earth’s and the technology is so great, it’s not really a hindrance at all. Besides..." Nanoha leaned forward and ran her hands down her legs, purposely catching Fate's finger between two of hers. "I got like this from magical damage, not physical. I still have active nerves in my legs, so I can feel everything just like normal; I just can't move my muscles."

"I...see." Fate thought about this while Nanoha played with her finger. "That makes me feel a little better." Her red eyed looked at the hand teasing her finger by running her's along it. "You're just like her."

"I am her," Nanoha countered simply with a smile, tugging on Fate's finger playfully. "I owe you a back rub."

"Ah, you don't have to-"

"Really, come on." Nanoha pulled on the finger between hers a few times, urging Fate to move closer to her. "On your stomach." She watched Fate reluctantly lay down and shifted herself so she was sitting beside her friend. Palms pressing against Fate's back, she began to contently rub. "Sorry, I'm not very good at this. If I press too hard let me know."

"I like it hard." Fate mumbled down into her pillow. "I'm weird like that."

"I see," Nanoha pressed down a little harder, getting an almost instant sound of pleasure. "Hey, Fate-chan?"

"Hmm?"

"Tell me more about yourself."

"Like what?" Fate rested her cheek on a pillow and closed her eyes.

"What do you like?"

"Mm?"

"Like..." Nanoha thought about how to expand on her question. "Your favorite food?"

"Roast chicken."

"Drink?"

"Dr.Pepper, on ice in a glass only. Scotch on the rocks for alcoholic."

"Clothes?"

Fate chuckled. "You're an inquisitive little thing tonight." The hands on her back pressed down and ran up her spine, making her almost fall asleep while answering. "Anything black. I like skirts, stockings and pantyhose. Denim is nice, and if I can get away with it, shoulder less, fuzzy shirts."

"Shoulder less?" Nanoha hummed. "And you say you don't like me being revealing?"

"You're different..." Fate yawned, moving her hands under the pillow and getting comfortable.

"Underclothes?"

"Black and lacy...I like frills." Fate started to mumble as Nanoha went to her shoulders.

The girl sitting on the bed smiled to herself, watching Fate's sleepy face slowly start to drift off as she rubbed. 'Well, now I know what clothes to buy you while you're here... It's not much, but it’s a start. I can make a run to town during lunch and have Vita cover for me if I'm a little late, she'll understand.' Several minutes passed by in silence before Nanoha heard soft snoring sounds. Her hands paused and she curiously leaned over to look at Fate, smiling happily at the cute sounds she was making. 'She's adorable when she's asleep... Well, sleep sweet, Fate-chan.' With that, she pet Fate's back twice before carefully shifting get in her wheelchair and then pull the covers over the girl.

*cries tears of joy*

"I am her," Nanoha countered simply with a smile, tugging on Fate's finger playfully.

Alts!Nanoha! Go for it! Grab that prize!!! XDDDD

[RadiantBeam]

I think people are rooting for the wrong couple in your story, Satashi. XD

[SulliMike23]

Sometimes you have to take things with an open mind RadiantBeam.

[deathcurse]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for AlternativeS 2-7:

Nanoha looked over at Fate as the door opened, smiling to herself as the blonde walked into her bedroom. Slightly damp hair was still being dried and the black tank top Fate had picked out lightly flashed her stomach as her hands fussed with her hair. A pair of matching black shorts were claimed as well, completing Fate's evening wear. "You look nice in that," Nanoha said honestly. "You like black don't you?"

"Black, purple, and gold, my three favorite colors." Sitting on the bed, Fate went about combing her hair with the brush she had nicked from the bathroom. "If you're cold, you should adjust your heat or you may get sick."

"I did, it just takes a moment for it to happen. Besides, I like your jacket, it’s nice." The girl smiled innocently. "Enjoy your shower?"

"Yes, thank you. I needed one after today." Fate continued to mess with her hair until it was tangle free, then pulled it into a ponytail to stay out of her way until it dried completely. "What time is it?"

"A little past nine."

"Shouldn't you be doing your evaluations for today? Don't let me keep you."

"I had to take care of it earlier when I transferred Teana into Subaru's room. Turns out they trained together for a while. I accepted Subaru after she failed her B-rank mage test. Teana was accepted into Lexus' base as a low level cadet as well. She has been doing odd jobs around the base, but not much actual combat or training." Giving a light sigh, she shook her head. "This is going to be such a headache."

"I can help." The blonde shifted so she was sitting next to Nanoha. "I know I'm not an instructor, but I can still assist you. It’s not like I have anything else to do. Go over tomorrow's training plan with me, I can be on the field as you instruct."

"Do you normally help me out training?" Nanoha stretched out her upper half before moving to a sitting position with her legs out in front of her.

Fate glanced at Nanoha's legs before shaking her head. "No, I only sometimes go on the field. Maybe once a week or so for special training or a demonstration. Generally I'm too busy doing my office work or making rounds..." Looking at her friend, she finally let out a small sigh. "Can I ask something tasteless?"

"Go ahead." Nanoha leaned her hands behind herself and braced on them. "I know what you're going to ask anyway."

"... How are your legs? Is it painful?" Not being able to help herself, she traced a finger along Nanoha’s left shin. "I'm sorry, but it’s so sad seeing you in a wheelchair..."

The girl gave a small giggle at the questions. "No, no, no pain. I've been like this for several years now so it’s just common place now. Besides, I have this entire room customized just for me. All my shelves are the right height, and Raising Heart was incorporated into my Smart Chair. She can change shape to fit my needs, allowing me to do anything from easily getting from my chair to couch, bed, or even from the ground to my chair. She can move very fast, which is always fun to do. Honestly, it’s not much different from walking. Mid's handicap laws are a lot better than Earth’s and the technology is so great, it’s not really a hindrance at all. Besides..." Nanoha leaned forward and ran her hands down her legs, purposely catching Fate's finger between two of hers. "I got like this from magical damage, not physical. I still have active nerves in my legs, so I can feel everything just like normal; I just can't move my muscles."

"I...see." Fate thought about this while Nanoha played with her finger. "That makes me feel a little better." Her red eyed looked at the hand teasing her finger by running her's along it. "You're just like her."

"I am her," Nanoha countered simply with a smile, tugging on Fate's finger playfully. "I owe you a back rub."

"Ah, you don't have to-"

"Really, come on." Nanoha pulled on the finger between hers a few times, urging Fate to move closer to her. "On your stomach." She watched Fate reluctantly lay down and shifted herself so she was sitting beside her friend. Palms pressing against Fate's back, she began to contently rub. "Sorry, I'm not very good at this. If I press too hard let me know."

"I like it hard." Fate mumbled down into her pillow. "I'm weird like that."

"I see," Nanoha pressed down a little harder, getting an almost instant sound of pleasure. "Hey, Fate-chan?"

"Hmm?"

"Tell me more about yourself."

"Like what?" Fate rested her cheek on a pillow and closed her eyes.

"What do you like?"

"Mm?"

"Like..." Nanoha thought about how to expand on her question. "Your favorite food?"

"Roast chicken."

"Drink?"

"Dr.Pepper, on ice in a glass only. Scotch on the rocks for alcoholic."

"Clothes?"

Fate chuckled. "You're an inquisitive little thing tonight." The hands on her back pressed down and ran up her spine, making her almost fall asleep while answering. "Anything black. I like skirts, stockings and pantyhose. Denim is nice, and if I can get away with it, shoulder less, fuzzy shirts."

"Shoulder less?" Nanoha hummed. "And you say you don't like me being revealing?"

"You're different..." Fate yawned, moving her hands under the pillow and getting comfortable.

"Underclothes?"

"Black and lacy...I like frills." Fate started to mumble as Nanoha went to her shoulders.

The girl sitting on the bed smiled to herself, watching Fate's sleepy face slowly start to drift off as she rubbed. 'Well, now I know what clothes to buy you while you're here... It's not much, but it’s a start. I can make a run to town during lunch and have Vita cover for me if I'm a little late, she'll understand.' Several minutes passed by in silence before Nanoha heard soft snoring sounds. Her hands paused and she curiously leaned over to look at Fate, smiling happily at the cute sounds she was making. 'She's adorable when she's asleep... Well, sleep sweet, Fate-chan.' With that, she pet Fate's back twice before carefully shifting get in her wheelchair and then pull the covers over the girl.

....Now I'm imagining Alt!Nanoha dressing up in black, purple and gold frilly lingere and waiting for Fate to come home.....

Alt!Nanoha, you shouldn't have told Fate that you can still feel your legs! Then you could have asked her to help "keep your leg muscles from atrophying" and get hours of hands-on massage!

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by SulliMike23

Sometimes you have to take things with an open mind RadiantBeam.

I'm just commenting on how everybody seems to support the AltS!NanoFate pairing when Satashi's more or less stated that Fate will go back to her Nanoha. It amuses me. Fan Preferred Couple!

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

I'm just commenting on how everybody seems to support the AltS!NanoFate pairing when Satashi's more or less stated that Fate will go back to her Nanoha. It amuses me. Fan Preferred Couple!

I never said that She could go either way ^^

[itanshi1]

<.<;


AlternativeS is reminding me of a certain writer's take on inuyasha.

Spoiler for dare to read this fandom wank:

She split him into two parts, demon and human and then a threesome ensued....

f/n/n ot3?

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by itanshi1

<.<;


AlternativeS is reminding me of a certain writer's take on inuyasha.

Spoiler for dare to read this fandom wank:

She split him into two parts, demon and human and then a threesome ensued....

f/n/n ot3?

It would get too confusing unless I did it from Nanoha or AltS!Nanoha's pov. And I don't think I'm that crazy

[Rising Dragon]

Besides, seeing a pair of naked Nanohas would make Fate would pass out immediately from massive bloodloss.

[Alavon]

Originally Posted by Rising Dragon

Besides, seeing a pair of naked Nanohas would make Fate would pass out immediately from massive bloodloss.

*nods*

True. Very true.

*takes out a sign that says 'Proud Alts!NanohaxFate shipper!'*

Alt!Nanoha, you shouldn't have told Fate that you can still feel your legs! Then you could have asked her to help "keep your leg muscles from atrophying" and get hours of hands-on massage!

Oh, the possibilities...

-

Part 2 of 7 (2/7) from Animal Instincts Chapter 3:

Previous:

Animal Instincts: Preface, Ch. 1, Ch. 2 and Part (1/7) of Ch.3

Spoiler for Animal Instincts-Chapter 3 part (2/7):

“Dammit, Arf!” I swore, untangling myself from the mess of blankets. “You just had to bark-What is it!”

Arf seem to be barking more then usual, her small, beady eyes wide like saucers. I was about to reprimand her for being rude but a strong, burnt smell engulfed my nostrils and I had to recoil in shock, my hands automatically covering my nose.

“Wh-what is-”

But I had an inkling feeling about where the smell was coming from and I looked up, and made eye-contact with a certain brunette-haired girl who was was smiling quite sheepishly. I quickly stood up and not bothering to put on my slippers, ran to the kitchen and turned off all the appliances, Nanoha looking away from the situation she had created with a red face. After making sure whatever Nanoha was trying to cook was not still burning like hell, I turned around to the culprit who sank on the couch meekly.

I sighed.

I just couldn't bring myself to get mad at her.

“Should I ask?” I said to her in a what I hoped was a playful tone.

Nanoha blushed. Looking away, she said embarrassingly,”I really wish you wouldn't...”

After looking at her for a good minute, I burst out laughing. Nanoha's head quickly looked up, eyebrows arched.

“You really are something,” I laughed, holding the counter for support.

Nanoha's face became even redder (if that was even possible) and she looked down.

“Mou! Fate, cut it out...”

I had to take a few minutes just to regain my breath but it was too hard to do when Nanoha was just sitting down in front of me looking like she was going to faint from all the blood rushing to her head.

“I-I'm s-sorry,” I said between breaths. “It's just, you know...I didn't expect to wake up to a burning house.”

“But I didn't burn down the house!” exclaimed Nanoha, finally looking at my eyes.

Chuckling, I sat next to her on the couch and knowing what was going to happen, allowed a small space so that Arf could jump on with ease.

Scratching Arfs exposed belly, I said,”I know. I was just teasing.”

Nanoha pouted and I couldn't help but giggle at her cute face.

Wait...

Did I just say 'cute'?

Spoiler for Author's Notes:

I'm really liking this chapter... :3

[DezoPenguin]

Get ready for it...

BACKLOG BREAKER!!!

Originally Posted by Satashi

BTW, who here wants Mercurian Angel to draw again?

Me! Me!

Originally Posted by 00-Raiser

Spoiler for I still can't think of a good title:

*snip*

It's Adult Form now, not Saint Kaiser Mode, just a note from ViVid; and "please allow me to date your daughter" sounds like a Japanese teenager rather than a non-Japanese thirty-year-old. That aside (and the nearly-dissolved-into-laughter at "I've developed a lot under your care"...which is probably just me), this is much, much, much better than last time. That was a cute comedy short, suitable as an omake. This is a story, and an enjoyable one.

“This is amazing, Yuuno-san!” Vivio cried in delight. “I never knew the ancient Nodos tribe had the power to over come black holes!”

“Yeah, they were impressive beasts to be sure.” Yuuno nodded. “If such powerful beings existed today, we’d all be in trouble.”

… The couple in question were too engrossed in their task to think of anything else.

I worry about myself when I start fanboying over NerdGirl!Vivio...

Spoiler for Because I just had to get this joke out of the way:

Nanoha glanced across the table at her daughter and her childhood-friend-turned-daughter’s-boyfriend and noticed their plates were empty.

“Do you want seconds?” She asked them.

“Yes please.”

“No thank you.”

“…” Nanoha paused as she reached for the serving spoon. “Please don’t speak at the same time, you two. If you do, I can’t tell who said what!”

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That one was just classic!!

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Rika pretty much calls everyone here 'Sempai'.

I'd better be careful or she'll be calling me "ojisan."

Originally Posted by Kaijo

I gather you like Yuuno/Vivio a lot, so I pounded out this short spamfic, just for you!

Spoiler for About Time!:

*snip*

Talk about taking something to a logical conclusion!

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

...

Spoiler for Nanoha Babies:

*snippety snip*

don't tell me I was the only one who watched Muppet Babies growing up

Before my time, I'm afraid. I'm so damn old, the introduction of Scrappy-Doo scarred my childhood.

Originally Posted by Kaijo

Just to show that I am equal-opportunity abuser, this is for all you NanoFate fans:

Spoiler for Pleasant Dinner Conversation:

*sniptacular!*

I really need to get back to real writing, now that I got this out of my head...

Funny crack is funny--all three endings worth!

Originally Posted by Satashi

RIP Geocities. I am only thankful I knew of this before it happened and backed up my old CCS fanfics that were never placed on FF.N....

Including the first lemon I ever wrote, Sakura/Syaoran. *shudders at re-reading some of it for the first time in about 10-some years*

You wrote your first lemon at 16? Oi...

RIP, Geocities. I owe many fun times, flashing animations, hidden midis you can't turn off, and java script mouse patterns to you.

*pauses for a moment of silence for Geocities*

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

I think people are rooting for the wrong couple in your story, Satashi. XD

I'm still rooting for the original-universe Nanoha. I mean, while AlternateUniverse!Nanoha may definitely be a woobie in need of love, she's basically trying to get her alternate self's wife to cheat on said alternate self. Soap opera drama, yes, but I despise adulterers.

[Alavon]

@DezoPenguin: Dezo...I think you're the only one who supports the 'Origina'l Nanoha...

Spoiler for DezoPenguin is a God...:

[Nita]

Originally Posted by Alavon

@DezoPenguin: Dezo...I think you're the only one who supports the 'Origina'l Nanoha...

Spoiler for DezoPenguin is a God...:

Hey! I'm with the original Nanoha too Fate belongs to her, but Alts!Nanoha need some love too... Oh.. teh drama...

LMAO at the picture, btw. I just came home and that was the first thing I saw xD

[DezoPenguin]

Originally Posted by Alavon

@DezoPenguin: Dezo...I think you're the only one who supports the 'Origina'l Nanoha...

Spoiler for DezoPenguin is a God...:

*snicker* At least somebody loves me. (Well, I think my wife does...which actually has a lot to do with why I'm pro-marriage. )

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Alavon

@DezoPenguin: Dezo...I think you're the only one who supports the 'Origina'l Nanoha...

To be fair, he does make a very good point. AltS!Nanoha is more or less throwing herself at Fate and hoping she'll be chosen over the original Nanoha, so I can see where he's coming from.

[Alavon]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

To be fair, he does make a very good point. AltS!Nanoha is more or less throwing herself at Fate and hoping she'll be chosen over the original Nanoha, so I can see where he's coming from.

I know, I know. I just wanted to have an excuse to draw something. But the drama, people! The drama!

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I'm still suppoorting Alts!Nanoha though...

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Alavon

I'm still suppoorting Alts!Nanoha though...

Honestly, after rereading in perspective, I'm on the middle ground of not knowing which Nanoha to support!

Doesn't help that in a RL scenario of this I was in Original!Nanoha's role, so.... >>;;

[TheShinySword]

I'm still for Alts!Nanoha (though Dezo's coolbeans for being a loyal husband and a promarriage guy, seriously) can't really explain why though. hmm...

[Nita]

The only reason I'd choose an ending with Alts!NanoFate pairing, would be cause seeing Nanoha like that, and actually ending up like that.. would be so heartbreaking i-i (though I'm no against of the drama there xd)

But then, I imagine the original Nanoha freaking out in another dimension. I mean, having your wife trapped in the middle of nowhere doesn't happen everyday, it would be unfair for her if Fate stayed with Alts!N