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Old 2009-10-27, 15:43   Link #17761
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Now that's what I call a win-win situation

Oh Yuuno, you're far too pretty for your own good

... Still not as sexy as Vice, though >>

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Old 2009-10-27, 16:05   Link #17762
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Um... I'm not dead?

Sorry for being away, but I've been busy with some other things. Mainly working on my current Negima Story: PotM

I'm not going to explain it all, so this next one might be confusing, but I tell that this is a multi crossover story. That's all I'm going to give for now.

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Read this for understanding why.

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And no, I don't care about the time line, I just wanted her to be there.
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Old 2009-10-27, 16:08   Link #17763
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Being stupid is fun. Here's what me being stupid has resulted in this time!

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I've mentioned this in one of my other fics, but I have no sense of style. I'm the kind of guy who really perpetuates the stereotype that men know nothing about fashion. I don't know what looks good, and I have no idea what a lot of this stuff is called, so I can barely describe it either. I'm horrible with colours, too. I don't know which colour matches/compliments which, and I can't tell certain colours apart sometimes (I'm colour blind). But well, I did try this time! This is just something silly so it's a good chance to practice.
Hahahahahahahahahaha! *chuckling out loud, which is probably more impressive than net laughs* Ahhh, that was good crack.
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Old 2009-10-27, 16:09   Link #17764
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Being stupid is fun. Here's what me being stupid has resulted in this time!

Spoiler for The Dangers of Flirting:


I've mentioned this in one of my other fics, but I have no sense of style. I'm the kind of guy who really perpetuates the stereotype that men know nothing about fashion. I don't know what looks good, and I have no idea what a lot of this stuff is called, so I can barely describe it either. I'm horrible with colours, too. I don't know which colour matches/compliments which, and I can't tell certain colours apart sometimes (I'm colour blind). But well, I did try this time! This is just something silly so it's a good chance to practice.
*headdesks* Wow....that was awesomely amusing XD
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Old 2009-10-27, 17:55   Link #17765
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Now that's what I call a win-win situation

Oh Yuuno, you're far too pretty for your own good

... Still not as sexy as Vice, though >>

Page claim for Admiral Akbar!
lawl Vice. that's my motto for life

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The Vice likes

and I was thoroughly amused by Chrono's exploits.

@Satashi: Put that beast in spoilers love you're cloggin' my view
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Old 2009-10-27, 18:24   Link #17766
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was epic win :3

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@Satashi: Put that beast in spoilers love you're cloggin' my view
I did it at work before I left so I forgot spoilers >.< fixed now hun!
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Old 2009-10-27, 18:38   Link #17767
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To everyone doing the cross dressing fics, I thank you for cheering me up by making me laugh.
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Old 2009-10-27, 18:51   Link #17768
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To everyone doing the cross dressing fics, I thank you for cheering me up by making me laugh.
Hail stupidly, yet hilariously amusing crack? XD
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Old 2009-10-27, 18:53   Link #17769
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AlternativeS Chapter 1 (AS rough draft) AlternativeS Chapter 2 (AS rough draft)
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Old 2009-10-27, 19:11   Link #17770
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@Satashi Ha! That was good.
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Old 2009-10-27, 19:12   Link #17771
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Ahh, panty-shots, what would anime be without them?

What I actually find intriguing about this story is that AltS!Nanoha wasn't an exhibitionist until Fate told her that 6thDivision!Nanoha was one. It's almost like, AltS!Nanoha decided to try it out for herself and realized that, "Hey, this is kind of fun!" Very likely this will help once again with the message that Fate really knows her well, since here Fate is, in tune with things about Nanoha that even Nanoha herself didn't realize.
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Old 2009-10-27, 19:38   Link #17772
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AlternativeS Chapter 1 (AS rough draft) AlternativeS Chapter 2 (AS rough draft)
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Alts!Nanoha, you naughty, naughty girl...

Fate! Give her LOVE!!! XD

I was so excited about this new chapter that I literally dropped what I was doing and started to read this! By the time I was done reading, I realized that I was crying due to laughter. This story just keeps getting better and better, Satashi. KEEP 'EM COMING!!! XD
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Old 2009-10-27, 19:48   Link #17773
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Hmm. I'm bothered by the fact AltS!Nanoha becomes an out and out exhibitionist. It's kinda funny but doesn't really fit in with who's she's been up til now. It feels like it's more there because let's see how long we can drag the "exhibitionist!Nanoha joke out" There are other ways to show Fate can't really separate AltS!Nanoha from Nanoha in her head other than panty gags. It just doesn't feel like a good fit to me.

(First part was solid though. Liked the "grabby Fate feeling AltS!Nanoha in her sleep" I feel like Nanoha would be a little more "please stop touching me stranger" though. That's my major complaint for this fic actually XD everyone accepts and becomes familiar with Fate off the bat, their familiarity is waaaaay too quick imo.)
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Old 2009-10-27, 20:11   Link #17774
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Hmm. I'm bothered by the fact AltS!Nanoha becomes an out and out exhibitionist. It's kinda funny but doesn't really fit in with who's she's been up til now. It feels like it's more there because let's see how long we can drag the "exhibitionist!Nanoha joke out" There are other ways to show Fate can't really separate AltS!Nanoha from Nanoha in her head other than panty gags. It just doesn't feel like a good fit to me.

(First part was solid though. Liked the "grabby Fate feeling AltS!Nanoha in her sleep" I feel like Nanoha would be a little more "please stop touching me stranger" though. That's my major complaint for this fic actually XD everyone accepts and becomes familiar with Fate off the bat, their familiarity is waaaaay too quick imo.)

*scratches head*


Now that I read your response, Alts!Nanoha does seem a little off character...

*thinks*

But still funny...in a way...
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Old 2009-10-27, 20:19   Link #17775
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Ok, so I've posted the finalized version of "The Next Step" at FF.net. Just want to thank you all again for the assistance and support. I really am grateful. I only wish I had joined you guys here sooner!
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Old 2009-10-27, 20:19   Link #17776
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Honestly, if I may, I don't like how AltS!Nanoha is trying so hard to be like the Nanoha Fate left behind in the original world. That isn't love, that's using a person's memories of someone else to match their expectations of them. It might work in the short run to make Fate give in to her desires, but in the long run the relationship won't last if AltS!Nanoha is trying to be someone she isn't, IMO. Love is about loving a person for who they are, not loving them because they act like a person you loved before they came along.

Just my two cents.
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Old 2009-10-27, 20:24   Link #17777
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Honestly, if I may, I don't like how AltS!Nanoha is trying so hard to be like the Nanoha Fate left behind in the original world. That isn't love, that's using a person's memories of someone else to match their expectations of them. It might work in the short run to make Fate give in to her desires, but in the long run the relationship won't last if AltS!Nanoha is trying to be someone she isn't, IMO. Love is about loving a person for who they are, not loving them because they act like a person you loved before they came along.

Just my two cents.
I will answer your observation with a counterpoint.

I actually like how she acts because it shows how broken she is. Alt!Nanoha isn't altogether there; her experiences as a Cosmic Plaything in this world have seemed to have unhinged her to some extent.

She's not acting well-adjusted because she isn't well-adjusted. The injury and the lack of Fate's support, adding to the knowledge she gains through the original-timeline Fate she's got to be comparing herself to herself, the other her that lives a happy life filled with love.

That's how I see it. Alt!Nanoha is broken and because she is, she doesn't know what she's doing isn't terribly destructive and will not end well.
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Old 2009-10-27, 20:29   Link #17778
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Still doesn't change the fact that it won't end well.
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Old 2009-10-27, 20:30   Link #17779
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Still doesn't change the fact that it won't end well.
Probably won't, but I don't think synth was arguing that.
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Old 2009-10-27, 20:33   Link #17780
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I will answer your observation with a counterpoint.

I actually like how she acts because it shows how broken she is. Alt!Nanoha isn't altogether there; her experiences as a Cosmic Plaything in this world have seemed to have unhinged her to some extent.

She's not acting well-adjusted because she isn't well-adjusted. The injury and the lack of Fate's support, adding to the knowledge she gains through the original-timeline Fate she's got to be comparing herself to herself, the other her that lives a happy life filled with love.

That's how I see it. Alt!Nanoha is broken and because she is, she doesn't know what she's doing isn't terribly destructive and will not end well.
That's actually how I took the chapter, although like Shiny, I wasn't too fond of the sudden exhibitionism. I really see the situation hitting a climax soon, where something gives way. Alt!Nanoha seems really lonely, desperate and mal-adjusted inside, and she probably hid it very well for all these years if other people haven't noticed it very well. Now, Fate's arrival is getting it to come out, and in a way that might be good for Alt!Nanoha because then she can finally get the support that she needs from her friends.

I really can't see this ending well for Alt!Nanoha at all....and now I'm leaning towards Alt!Nanoha and Hayate, since after seeing this clearly having Alt!Nanoha and any version of Fate hooking up would be very bad, and an Alt!Alicia just might be a replacement Fate (wow, irony there!)
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