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Old 2009-11-15, 17:59   Link #19081
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So it's not my computer? Thank God!
Nah, FF.net has fits every now and again where you have login errors or the alerts stop working properly for some reason or another. They usually get fixed pretty quickly, depending.

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Old 2009-11-15, 18:26   Link #19082
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Ok, so the newest chapter of Vivid has inspired me to write this. It's a little graphic, so be warned.

Spoiler for Shattered Dreams:


Spoiler for Notes:
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Old 2009-11-15, 18:35   Link #19083
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Ok, so the newest chapter of Vivid has inspired me to write this. It's a little graphic, so be warned.

Spoiler for Shattered Dreams:


Spoiler for Notes:
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I have never read such a story where I was totally consumed by the characters life and emotions...at least in an fantasy/angst/hurt fic. I would not be surprised if all that you wrote turned out to be canon....
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Old 2009-11-15, 18:38   Link #19084
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Ok, so the newest chapter of Vivid has inspired me to write this. It's a little graphic, so be warned.

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Hmm
Interesting but it loses most of the emotional impact for me because there's no build up ^^;; not your fault since it's a one off short but without anything to build off it's kinda like just showing me one scene of a movie from the end. It's still interesting but since I don't really care about the characters (or know Volvo from Adams since I haven't read RotDK) I don't get the omph.
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Old 2009-11-15, 18:42   Link #19085
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Hmm
Interesting but it loses most of the emotional impact for me because there's no build up ^^;; not your fault since it's a one off short but without anything to build off it's kinda like just showing me one scene of a movie from the end. It's still interesting but since I don't really care about the characters (or know Volvo from Adams since I haven't read RotDK) I don't get the omph.
BLASPHEMY! BLASPHEMY, I SAY!

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Just kidding with 'ya, Shiny!

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Old 2009-11-15, 18:44   Link #19086
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BLASPHEMY! BLASPHEMY, I SAY!

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Just kidding with 'ya, Shiny!

*hugs Shiny*
*hugs back*

'course I wanna make it clear I'm not saying it's bad or anything.
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Old 2009-11-15, 18:51   Link #19087
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Hmm
Interesting but it loses most of the emotional impact for me because there's no build up ^^;; not your fault since it's a one off short but without anything to build off it's kinda like just showing me one scene of a movie from the end. It's still interesting but since I don't really care about the characters (or know Volvo from Adams since I haven't read RotDK) I don't get the omph.
A fair assessment, definitely. Yeah, I don't have much to actually build off of, since Olivie and Ingvalt are thus far just names in a history book. We're only familiar with their clones/descendants.

Of course using one of my OCs will be lost on those who haven't read the story he's from, but that's a gambit you always take when using OCs. Like how I know nothing about Syn, so I can't get much out of the fics she's in.

Volvo's not a hard character to understand, though. He just has fun being evil ^^
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Old 2009-11-15, 18:56   Link #19088
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*shrug* I don't blame you. Her profile is here if you're interested though.

I myself mostly get to know characters by reading the stories people write about them.
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Old 2009-11-15, 19:19   Link #19089
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*shrug* I don't blame you. Her profile is here if you're interested though.

I myself mostly get to know characters by reading the stories people write about them.
Syn is awesome, plain and simple :3
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Old 2009-11-15, 19:30   Link #19090
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Wow, away for a few days and I'm backlogged by 20 pages @_@!

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And... another ViCia short. Wow, new record for me. From Victor's POV, not fluffy but.... not angsty, either.


Spoiler for When a Shadow Sleeps:


Was listening to "Tragic Memory" from Zero no Tsukaima's OST when I wrote this. Wonder if that influenced anything about how it turned out.
Cute, I really like how Victor's such an awesome guy . Nanohaverse has tons of great guys, they just don't get enough screen time . Like Dezo, I like the distinction made between "napping" and "sleeping" for poor Lutecia.

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WAFFy fics versus exploding ones, I think... And speaking of hopefully semi-humorous fluff:

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Aww, so Nanoha's pasta obsession is explained! Like everyone else, I love how well you write the married couple scenes Dezo .

LOL, those video screens sure are creepy...so Big Brother-ish, there's no privacy anywhere!

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New short. Third in two days, whoa, a record. Anyway... Lutecia-centric, more focused on Miranda and the Shadows than her relationship with Vivio. Explains why she had Miranda's key-chain in "Sunrise" when Miranda asked her to give it to her boyfriend in "Bleeding Shadow".

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I also thought that Kellen was...a bit of a jerk before, but this really changes my perception of him. I wonder if he and Lutecia still keep in touch? Miranda mattered so much to both of them, after all. The ending was effective, but I dunno, it seemed a little cliche to me...I've read some great endings from you before, and that one just seemed a little weak...

Awesome short though, I really like how Miranda wasn't just some partner who got offed to give Lutecia an angsty-past. You can really tell that she made a huge impact on Lutecia's life.

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People, that's not how sex goes. Except in really bad porn.

If Nanoha and Fate did ever go at it, it'd look more like a National Geographic documentary on the eating habits of lions than 'gentle lovemaking on a bed of roses'. Which'd be really scratchy anyway.
....I don't think I've ever read "documentary on eating habits of lions" and "gentle lovemaking" anywhere near each other in a sentence before . Awesome analogy!

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I thought about my shorts and I realized that I'm pretty good at doing these than fics... >.>

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Spoiler for Emo Nanoha:



Spoiler for How Nanoha's name was chosen:


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LOL, you're awesome at these . I like the first one in particular

And I think that Satashi had a mother challenge somewhere? If it's not too late, here's a short that I debated continuing, but decided to post as is...It was supposed to be a "sort of" continuation of my first short "Last Wish"--set between Nanoha and Nanoha A's.

It's short, blink and you'll miss it!

Spoiler for Night by Night:
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Old 2009-11-15, 19:35   Link #19091
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Awwww, Lindy/Fate mother/daughter love. It's sweet, DC, really sweet and sad when you think of Fate keeping silent despite her worst fears because of what Precia did to her... it's a good thing Lindy was there for her, explains how their bond started.
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Old 2009-11-15, 19:40   Link #19092
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Very, very touching <3
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Old 2009-11-15, 19:42   Link #19093
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Wow, away for a few days and I'm backlogged by 20 pages @_@!

LOL, you're awesome at these . I like the first one in particular

And I think that Satashi had a mother challenge somewhere? If it's not too late, here's a short that I debated continuing, but decided to post as is...It was supposed to be a "sort of" continuation of my first short "Last Wish"--set between Nanoha and Nanoha A's.

It's short, blink and you'll miss it!

Spoiler for Night by Night:
*bows*

Thank you. Nanoha's Tactics is also my favorite, second is Yukari and Nana are at it again. :3

Your story on the other hand:

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Old 2009-11-15, 20:00   Link #19094
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Awwww, Lindy/Fate mother/daughter love. It's sweet, DC, really sweet and sad when you think of Fate keeping silent despite her worst fears because of what Precia did to her... it's a good thing Lindy was there for her, explains how their bond started.
Thanks for the review! Glad you commented on that, that was the part that broke my heart to write . Also reminds me to wonder what bad dreams Fate had in Nanoha A's episode 8 when she had her nightmare that Lindy soothed by holding her hand ...

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Very, very touching <3
Thanks! I try . I really like Lindy, she needs more fanfics about her!

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*bows*

Thank you. Nanoha's Tactics is also my favorite, second is Yukari and Nana are at it again. :3

Your story on the other hand:

I liked those ones too ! And thanks, I'm glad I rate 3 in a row!
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Old 2009-11-15, 20:19   Link #19095
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All I can say about the mother/child fics that people have posted, is that they've been cheering me up after having thoughts of my mother. Thank you. I might write a short to fit in with this as well, but it'd be a while.
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Old 2009-11-15, 20:33   Link #19096
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I'd like to too, but godammit, I've got too much homework, and I have two crossover plot bunnies rattling around in my head. Not conductive to good critical thinking.
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Old 2009-11-15, 21:33   Link #19097
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Wow, away for a few days and I'm backlogged by 20 pages @_@!




And I think that Satashi had a mother challenge somewhere? If it's not too late, here's a short that I debated continuing, but decided to post as is...It was supposed to be a "sort of" continuation of my first short "Last Wish"--set between Nanoha and Nanoha A's.

It's short, blink and you'll miss it!

Spoiler for Night by Night:
No joke, I checked the thread last night and there's about eight pages to go through.

I liked all of these of course, but I said that before. For the new one, I'm impressed. It's a shame that neither the series nor the manga ever showed much about the 10 year gap between A's and StrikerS. But in the mean time, this might not be canon, but it should be.
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Old 2009-11-15, 21:52   Link #19098
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Ok, so the newest chapter of Vivid has inspired me to write this. It's a little graphic, so be warned.

Spoiler for Shattered Dreams:


Spoiler for Notes:
Hmm, it's just me or that your stories becames even better since you joined here? . Like it.

... you don't forget your rider crossover aren't you?
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Old 2009-11-15, 22:34   Link #19099
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Hmm, it's just me or that your stories becames even better since you joined here? . Like it.

... you don't forget your rider crossover aren't you?
Thanks ^^ I can't say I've explicitly changed my methods since coming here, but I certainly go into writing with a more positive attitude now, knowing that I can post here and people will be receptive of it.

Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about my Decade crossover. I write mostly on whim, and the whim to write other stuff has just been stronger.
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Old 2009-11-15, 22:54   Link #19100
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Thanks ^^ I can't say I've explicitly changed my methods since coming here, but I certainly go into writing with a more positive attitude now, knowing that I can post here and people will be receptive of it.

Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about my Decade crossover. I write mostly on whim, and the whim to write other stuff has just been stronger.
Yeah...like the next installment of Remembrance...

*remembers something*

@Satashi: Now that I think about it, there hasn't been any new AlternativeS...
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