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Old 2008-03-03, 15:46   Link #281
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I'm currently leaning towards version 2.
Does the sig feel too cluttered or crowded?
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Old 2008-03-03, 15:52   Link #282
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I absolutely love the second one. The falling petals are beautiful and the band going across makes a huge difference. Awesome job
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Old 2008-03-03, 15:54   Link #283
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*sigh* finally bumped on an interesting picture, though the angle was hard to work on...
first draft


I had insane time to invest in transplanting her damn arm with the sword.
see by yourself with the source

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Old 2008-03-03, 15:57   Link #284
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i can see what u mean when ur askin if its crowded... it is a lil bit... but i really like the petals and the band effects, really cool feel to it. i think the weird thing i get from it is the glowy sword thingy... maybe make the whole figure on the right a lil bit darker or something?... i have no idea >.<
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Old 2008-03-03, 16:51   Link #285
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Does the sig feel too cluttered or crowded?
2nd one is better IMO since it has that emphasis on the eyes at the BG. Makes it look more serious and really had a battle feeling over it.
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Old 2008-03-03, 17:09   Link #286
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*sigh* finally bumped on an interesting picture, though the angle was hard to work on...
first draft


I had insane time to invest in transplanting her damn arm with the sword.
see by yourself with the source
really love the sig so far Klash *two thumbs up* That does look irritating, having to fit her and the sword to where it can be seen, but I have to admit that I really like that original image....it'd also look great as a wallpaper, no?
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Old 2008-03-03, 17:17   Link #287
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*sigh* finally bumped on an interesting picture, though the angle was hard to work on...
first draft


I had insane time to invest in transplanting her damn arm with the sword.
see by yourself with the source
You sure know where to find pretty pics

But the quality of the transplanted arm/sword sort of died in the process
And uhu, there is that strange line on her head. You could of done it on purpose. But i personally don't think it adds much to the whole.
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Old 2008-03-03, 17:58   Link #288
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I'm currently leaning towards version 2.
Does the sig feel too cluttered or crowded?
I go for the 2nd version ^^

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*sigh* finally bumped on an interesting picture, though the angle was hard to work on...
first draft


I had insane time to invest in transplanting her damn arm with the sword.
see by yourself with the source
Seems to be a hard work! nicely done ^^ work a bit more on colors
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Old 2008-03-03, 18:20   Link #289
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I had insane time to invest in transplanting her damn arm with the sword.
see by yourself with the source
Damn your source, just damn. Too much white space, need a little work on colors.
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Old 2008-03-03, 19:13   Link #290
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I definately like Version 2 alot more.
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Old 2008-03-03, 21:17   Link #291
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Ok, version two. Text was a horrible horrible...yeah.

But first, I'll get some mentions:

Riker - Hax. Sick animation...I'm scared to ask how the heck you did it. Second version imo.

Saphyre - looks good. A bit serene, but the reflected water is a nice touch. I agree with the others about the text.

CK - I think the first one works the best out of all of them, but I think you can make something better than all of them if you put your mind to it.

Klashi - It's lacking that "personal touch" your sigs usually have, but it's a first draft so understandable. That angle must have been a pita to work into the smaller canvas, but the results are good imo.

KiNa - border. Already told you what I think about the rest of the sig.

That should cover the last two pages. I don't normally comment on SOTM sigs, but since I'm posting my stuff for feedback it's only fair. I'll try and be a bit more helpful with feedback from now on.

Ok, version two:



Thoughts? Be gentle.
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Old 2008-03-03, 21:23   Link #292
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I really like it Solace. The blur is a nice effect and the words look good like that. they dont pop out but yet they capture my attention nice work
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Old 2008-03-03, 21:27   Link #293
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I really like the signature but I think that you may need to make the text on the right stand out a bit more. I didn't notice it the first time I looked. But as I've mentioned before, my monitor has horrible contrast so it may simply be that.
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Old 2008-03-03, 21:54   Link #294
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Riker: I like version 2!

Solace: Thanks for the tip ( ) though the ninja sig won out.

Thanks Sephi for the suggestions and the ninja sig wins out for my entry for the contest!

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Old 2008-03-03, 22:43   Link #295
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well, being the lazy git I am I'm hard pushed to finish anything for this month and thats all thanks to CrowKenobi for putting me into a Red Dwarf phasebeen absorbed in watching the show over and over again.........

and plus I can't seem to come up with any ideas what so ever for a sig....and thats all thanks to not having any creative spark what so ever......

but all in all its A OK

lots of useful info floating around in here!
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Old 2008-03-03, 23:03   Link #296
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Version 2





I'm currently leaning towards version 2.
Does the sig feel too cluttered or crowded?
Nope.. the band made her combat intend more clear IMO

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first draft
Hand kinda have weird placement.. And as Solace say, really dont feel like your work. AT ALL.

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KiNa - border. Already told you what I think about the rest of the sig.



Thoughts? Be gentle.
Even the current gradient border not enough?

As for your sig, erm, your well ran out of juice? :x .. Right ghost text dont add anything, if you wanted it to be read then make it clearer, if not.. lose it totally. Make the zoom in effect more clearer IMO.. right now, it look like she wanna cut a watermelon, not cutting peoples up Her name text , I dunno >.< Maybe make her hime symbol more prominent a bit.

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Old 2008-03-03, 23:58   Link #297
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well its been decided this will be the one. if anyone has any suggestions before i get to work on the helpful tips ive gotten that would be coolz
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Old 2008-03-04, 00:11   Link #298
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*sigh* finally bumped on an interesting picture, though the angle was hard to work on...
first draft


I had insane time to invest in transplanting her damn arm with the sword.
see by yourself with the source
phew.. i wanna use that picture at first, since i'm playing that game currently... quality seems a bit low, maybe u should use some CG inside that game instead^^[if u have it of course] there's some overkill artwork CG there
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Old 2008-03-04, 00:12   Link #299
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^ I guess I'll be using this one after all
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Old 2008-03-04, 01:40   Link #300
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I'm currently leaning towards version 2.
Does the sig feel too cluttered or crowded?
I prefer the second version, though, it does seem a tad bit cluttered. Maybe bcause the bg is too dark compared to the main render.

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*sigh* finally bumped on an interesting picture, though the angle was hard to work on...
first draft


I had insane time to invest in transplanting her damn arm with the sword.
see by yourself with the source
I personally like it. ^^ I'd probably suggest making it a bit more "dreamy", but maybe not. I must say, nice job on transferring the hand + sword to fit in the sig. And I agree with Sol and KiNa...definately does not looks like your work.

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Ok, version two:



Thoughts? Be gentle.
I don't know if im slowy loosing my eye sight or not, but I didn't notice there was text on the right of the sig after about 5 seconds.
Still feels a bit plain...maybe making the sig size smaller?

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^ I guess I'll be using this one after all
I like it. ^^ Fire seems to be 'in' the background...not with the render, ne?
I am not sure if that was your intention, though.
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