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Old 2008-05-11, 23:11   Link #9101
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so.. i heard you liek mudkip crotch grab?

*sorry.. jsut really really bored right now *
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Old 2008-05-11, 23:14   Link #9102
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You really need to calm down bro.
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Old 2008-05-11, 23:24   Link #9103
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... save the "RAGING LESBIAN ITSUKO" stuff for the parts in later stories where Itsuki would make Kyon feel uncomfortable by getting "too close" and kill two birds with one stone...

*e* and it's "herd"
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... well at least it's consistent...
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Old 2008-05-11, 23:25   Link #9104
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... save the "RAGING LESBIAN ITSUKO" stuff for the parts in later stories where Itsuki would make Kyon feel uncomfortable by getting "too close" and kill two birds with one stone...
That's what I was going to do anyway.

There's a part in Charmed at First Sight Lover where Koizumi offers to hug Kyon from behind for warmth... here, Itsuko can actually do it.
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Old 2008-05-11, 23:27   Link #9105
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That's what I was going to do anyway.

There's a part in Charmed at First Sight Lover where Koizumi offers to hug Kyon from behind for warmth... here, Itsuko can actually do it.
and not even bother saying it! GOOD JOB!
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Old 2008-05-11, 23:30   Link #9106
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and not even bother saying it! GOOD JOB!
Oh, shut it.

I'm trying to remain relatively faithful to the original story, and there are very few FLAMING HOMO moments from Koizumi in Vol. 1.
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Old 2008-05-11, 23:39   Link #9107
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... main problem being that Itsuki only brought it up because Haruhi had done the same with Mikuru and started teasing Kyon about it. Of course... Itsuko could just do it for the hell of it. Only problem is making it seem more "SECRET LEZBO ACTION" than "OMG TEH KYUUUUUTE."
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... well at least it's consistent...
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Old 2008-05-11, 23:48   Link #9108
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... main problem being that Itsuki only brought it up because Haruhi had done the same with Mikuru and started teasing Kyon about it. Of course... Itsuko could just do it for the hell of it. Only problem is making it seem more "SECRET LEZBO ACTION" than "OMG TEH KYUUUUUTE."
Why bother? "OMG TEH KYUUUUUTE" is awesome too.
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Old 2008-05-12, 00:23   Link #9109
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Anyway, more rewrites:

*snip*

This one needs serious work. I can't write shit for Itsuko...

Jintor, Dkellis, when you read this, I'd like you to edit this.
Does that mean I shouldn't bother to do anything yet (or at all)?
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Old 2008-05-12, 00:34   Link #9110
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I think he just misses them. They've haven't shown up in a while after all...
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Old 2008-05-12, 00:37   Link #9111
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Why bother? "OMG TEH KYUUUUUTE" is awesome too.
True enough. I really can't argue with that.
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... well at least it's consistent...
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Old 2008-05-12, 00:51   Link #9112
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Does that mean I shouldn't bother to do anything yet (or at all)?
Sure, you can help. That'd be great, actually.
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Old 2008-05-12, 04:37   Link #9113
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Old 2008-05-12, 04:38   Link #9114
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Well that's always good to know.
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Old 2008-05-12, 04:41   Link #9115
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But not tonight. Need to finish a comic for my tournament.
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Old 2008-05-12, 09:08   Link #9116
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Hmmm, you go away for a week and there's so much topic necromancy - err, 'replying', to do ...

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Unless someone could write a convincing instance of Haruki using some crazy ass reverse psychology on Kyon-chan, possibly involving the other members of the SOS-dan as well. Call me up when that happens.
Heh ... a challenge. Let me think about this.

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dkellis isn't updating the archive... <_<
Perhaps someone should do it during dkellis's absence? Just copy the currently available archive and add the things that have been written since dkellis had to go? Are there any volunteers for this monumental undertaking? And more to the point, any candidates to pinpoint the moment dkellis stopped archiving, making the registering of new material easier?

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you made Mitsuru carry both Yuuki and Itsuko!? lol
thou you made it so that Yuuki is being carried by Mitsuru but failed to edit that only itsuko's weight is being carried by mitsuru.
Hmm, I see ... Oh, well. ^^ Work for a future editjob, then.

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oooh! nice addition to kyonko's "dream" of the past iterations. good job! *re: Koizumi cuddling up to Kyonko* even gooder job!
Spoiler for to aebliss:
^^ I have been praised by 'Densetsu no shoujo A'? Wow. I never thought the day would come! As always, it's nice to be appreciated.

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*snip*I know the "good idea" was sarcasm and I don't think my edit changes that.

Perverted old people is all fine and dandy, but when they start talking about how long they think a guy can go on for or how good he is at it... it's a weeeee bit excessive, it goes past comedy and into the yuck factor.
*sigh* Apparently I was a bit too unspecific. My addition of 'he can probably work up a good sweat both day and night, if you know what I mean' was meant to reflect that Haruki would probably be a good worker, i.e. provider, for Kyonko as well as able to 'keep her happy' in the evenings. I wonder why you removed the bit about inviting Ryou and Haruki in for tea. That bit was a nice bit of comedy, if I do say so myself, especially as it served to briefly discomfort Haruki.

Moving on: I made a few small edits in selected bits of Kaisos Erranon's Itsuko infodump:

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This one needs serious work. I can't write shit for Itsuko...
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I think he just misses them. They've haven't shown up in a while after all...
Heh ... I wonder what kind of dire punishments Haruhi/Haruki would unleash upon them for slacking ...?
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Old 2008-05-12, 10:53   Link #9117
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Aebliss, good job on working in the 'looking up the skirt line' into the text, though you didn't put in 'up' in Kyonko's dialogue:
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Itsuko's body started to glow blue, and a blast of force erupted from her which drove me a few steps back and caused her clothes to flutter. As she started to glow blue, Itsuko briefly turned to look at me and ... winked?

"Please, no peeping," she said playfully.

Who would look at up your skirt at a time like this?!

Soon, her glowing body was covered in a blue glowing sphere. Standing before me was no longer a human girl, but a large glowing ball.
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Old 2008-05-12, 11:15   Link #9118
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*snip*
YOU. ARE. AWESOME.

Thank you for figuring out ways to work everything in.

Now it would be great if you could help with the very last line... somehow, it looks stupid to me...
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Old 2008-05-12, 14:14   Link #9119
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Spoiler for Chapter 6, Final: Closed Space:
As requested, a little rewrite of the end of the Itsuko infodump, with a bit of original material thrown in for fun. Is this kind of what you had in mind? ^^
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Old 2008-05-12, 14:16   Link #9120
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As requested, a little rewrite of the end of the Itsuko infodump, with a bit of original material thrown in for fun. Is this kind of what you had in mind? ^^
Again, they don't have a mother. But thanks.

Edit: Ladies and Gentlemen, Genderbending has now extended to even include Jason Miao:


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