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Old 2008-05-08, 11:01   Link #261
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Well, me and my sis agree with using this picture as a possible entry. We chose the pic, but I did the designing.




So any comments about this one?
Honest opinion?

Try a rework

The pink BG is too much of a contrast to the brown image (?). In fact...I can't even make out the facial features >_<
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Old 2008-05-08, 14:53   Link #262
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^ LOL really? The pink stuff suppose to be blood . But really, thanks for the honest feedback XD. Oh and the two guys supposely are Itachi And Sasuke on Naruto imao.
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Old 2008-05-08, 15:26   Link #263
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^ LOL really? The pink stuff suppose to be blood . But really, thanks for the honest feedback XD. Oh and the two guys supposely are Itachi And Sasuke on Naruto imao.
Hm, I agree with Deathie about the pink stuff. I see what you mean, about the pink splatters being blood, but it really doesn't give off that vibe. It does a little to fill the emptiness of the background, but not enough. I second the motion for you changing the colors around and trying some different combinations.
I however, do like the render. Although it took me a bit to realize what they were, I like the feeling they give. You should try to match the background more to them, more DESPAIR colors!
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Old 2008-05-08, 17:02   Link #264
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just tweaked a bit of my trial entry: C&C are much pretty appreciated.
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Old 2008-05-08, 17:29   Link #265
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@ mimi_girl ~ I had a hunch it was from naruto but pink blood XD

@ Pro_gamer ~ I actually like your version 1 better. The purple background colour suited better with the purple-ish cross (as the colours don't clash and works well together). If anything, I would change back to the original BG colour and just make the lighting on her face a bit softer (v2 is about right, maybe a bit more softer).
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Old 2008-05-08, 21:11   Link #266
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Trying a different style this month, but once again, the AS size limit (kb) really killed off the quality.
Props go to Fallen for supplying me with the perfect stock.

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Old 2008-05-08, 21:26   Link #267
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Trying a different style this month, but once again, the AS size limit (kb) really killed off the quality.
Props go to Fallen for supplying me with the perfect stock.

C+C Please
Wow, that looks almost exactly like the outcome of Fallen's tutorial that OceanBlue mentioned when referring to a sig using the same source by BearShare.
The use of C4Ds, the text, the little boxes by the text, the source, everything~

Other than that, I like the image, but it seems a bit messy with the addition of tear like shtuff by her face. If I were you, I'd try to deviate a bit more from the tutorial so as to claim it more for you own. Although I commend you on following it so diligently ^_^
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Old 2008-05-08, 21:37   Link #268
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just tweaked a bit of my trial entry: C&C are much pretty appreciated.
v2:


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Try sharpening the focus to make it more distinct from the background. It might also change the focal point from the text to the render [the focal point being the text bothers me].

Edit: Fallen's influence pervades everywhere, it seems.

To nammerboi: Change it up a little and make it your own. A rip-off of someone who does well may make your signature good, but it's not your idea and it's not your composition. All you did was copy the technique. The original maker spent a lot of effort into designing the composition and styling the signature; you might as well have taken his signature and placed it on here.

That being said, there isn't a problem with using techniques from a tutorial and applying it to your own signatures, since you're designing the composition then. Just don't do a copy of someone else's.
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Old 2008-05-08, 23:22   Link #269
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Hmm i guess u're right, ill try different methods.. Tomorrow
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Old 2008-05-09, 02:13   Link #270
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I'm kind of stuck on what to do with my Rena sig besides adding a border, so I started a new one.


This was my first time using C4Ds, so it's pretty messy. I think I took out all the sadness from the original picture. ^^;; I'm not sure about the text either; I might move it to the bottom left corner and change the font or something.

C&C is appreciated on both sigs.
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Old 2008-05-09, 03:14   Link #271
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Would anyone interested in this type of animation tutorial?



I dont want to spend time to write a tutorial if anyone dont want it. Should have post this question in the tutorial thread but seeing as its fits the theme, I figured I asked here instead :x
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Old 2008-05-09, 04:37   Link #272
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Gonna have to agree with 'Rina-chan on this one. Phail's one was darker, and the focal wasn't that big, but a stock manip with that should look all particularly the same. The c4d tears look very rough, though.
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Old 2008-05-09, 06:50   Link #273
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I changed some things, so here's version no.... 3 or 4?
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Old 2008-05-09, 07:46   Link #274
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just tweaked a bit of my trial entry: C&C are much pretty appreciated.
v2:


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hmmm... interesting image, Chaos;Head i pressume ? actually i want to go for that image a while ago. but it gives more than Sorrow feeling i think, which is the reason i gave up on that one, not to mention one of her hand got cut there.

looks good in sephia colors, but i think it need more appeal on the background, especially on the right side which is almost like a water glow on the other hand the left side was just a plain background. other than that it looks safe for now
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Old 2008-05-09, 07:51   Link #275
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hbut it gives more than Sorrow feeling i think, which is the reason i gave up on that one, not to mention one of her hand got cut there.
Heh, I didn't even notice that before you mentioned it, Runa.
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Old 2008-05-09, 13:52   Link #276
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Think this is more vector than abstract, a bit random, and the text is meh. Looks very artistic though. Quite a nice change
The original gave a sense of randomness with the abstract thingys, so I added some vectors to compliment it ^^

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Hmm dunno how much of it is sad, but I do like the Picasso-ness of it. It's nice to see a different sig style. Very interesting
Lol "abstract" feel of sadness xD doesnt really get through huh

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I like it too!

Just watch out for the size limit there!
stupid photobucket racked up the filesize of a png file xD



that should be better (also changed the text)
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Old 2008-05-09, 13:59   Link #277
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Old 2008-05-09, 14:10   Link #278
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Fixed. Changed up the effects in the background, color, and sharpness. I generally want to keep the font though.
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Old 2008-05-09, 20:25   Link #279
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Okay, here's my second try. I'm known for using Colette in sigs...so here's one of her. Comments are very welcome. I DO know the text is bad, I'm working on it.
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Old 2008-05-09, 21:30   Link #280
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here is my first entires



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*I am not very sure about the rule thingy and am very confused ?? so about entering we post our entries as much we want and when finish we put final ? sorry if I am not allowed to ask this question here*
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