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Old 2008-04-30, 23:40   Link #101
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Old 2008-05-01, 01:48   Link #102
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Old 2008-05-01, 01:56   Link #103
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The forefront pic feels like it was "put there" and it's making it look "out of place" from the rest of the sig or so to speak. But that's just me nyways
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Old 2008-05-01, 01:58   Link #104
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I like the better bg pic and the added word, but the teardrop animation is too fast, imho. (slow it down just a little bit)

Good job!



Also, is that a gradient line I see on her face near her nose and mouth?
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Old 2008-05-01, 02:18   Link #105
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I honestly didnt see the gradient line u point >.< edit: Ah.. good catch.. let me inspect why that line is there @.@

<- new
font change >.<
<-old

Which is better ?

I'll see if I can slow down the tears more.. Still got room for more frames ^^
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Old 2008-05-01, 02:27   Link #106
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@KiNA

Maybe you should try a more gothic font...
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Old 2008-05-01, 02:29   Link #107
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I honestly didnt see the gradient line u point >.< edit: Ah.. good catch.. let me inspect why that line is there @.@

I'll see if I can slow down the tears more.. Still got room for more frames ^^
Is that line related to the animation? (Like where the animation frame boundary is?)

And if the new font is your choice, go back to the old one...



Kayos has the right idea, methinks.
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Old 2008-05-01, 02:33   Link #108
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@KiNa:

I am loving the background and text, but like Cyz said, I still think Suigintou's face is too "put there." I know what you're trying to do, but maybe it's just me.
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Old 2008-05-01, 04:52   Link #109
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Total redone lol..

I'm done for today.. Too much emo tears ;_;


Dark BG was for the gloomy mood.. She got left out in there while Rozen finished her other sisters ..;_;
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Old 2008-05-01, 05:31   Link #110
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@KiNa - I'm really impressed that the quality is so good for a gif. But it seems like a different style for you.

Yay emo tears! Here's my first entry. I'm trying a new style.

Text:


No text:


Render ended up a little bit sharper than I wanted, but it's fixable. Kinda stuck on the text though, as usual. Anyway, was going for a "swallowed by darkness" kind of vibe. Either that, or a big blotch of color....one of the two.

Edit: Softened render -

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Old 2008-05-01, 05:47   Link #111
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I don't like the 3 lines. Well, not the actual lines, just the glow. Seems a bit weird, it being kinda diffused. The black shouldn't cover up as much space like that imo. But her eyes are really hypnotising, and the overall look is interesting.

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Render ended up a little bit sharper than I wanted, but it's fixable. Kinda stuck on the text though, as usual. Anyway, was going for a "swallowed by darkness" kind of vibe. Either that, or a big blotch of color....one of the two.
I think that would be a good text for it instead of somebody help me.
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Old 2008-05-01, 06:14   Link #112
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Good points. Here's a version 2:



And...I'm gonna stop spamming images and get some sleep.
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Old 2008-05-01, 07:06   Link #113
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Old 2008-05-01, 07:53   Link #114
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Hmm I think I'll try to think other animated theme >,<

KiNA I like how the tears flow but in the end it seems to defy natural physics :O
But still its a sad sig I say *thumbs up*
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Old 2008-05-01, 08:23   Link #115
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Broken Doll or Dont leave me.. Father..

2 peoples says style different from my normal.. o_O
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Old 2008-05-01, 09:24   Link #116
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Broken Doll or Dont leave me.. Father..

2 peoples says style different from my normal.. o_O

Don't leave me.. Father..
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Old 2008-05-01, 11:02   Link #117
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@KiNa: Much better in my opinion, mostly because her face is smaller. I agree that I like your old text better, or at least broken doll doesn't seem to invoke despair/sorrow in me. I'm not seeing how the tears defy the laws of physics either.

Yes, I did watch Ouverture, but I was just playfully commenting on that fact. It's one of the reasons why I don't completely hate Souseiseki.
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Old 2008-05-01, 11:35   Link #118
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Good points. Here's a version 2:



And...I'm gonna stop spamming images and get some sleep.
I dont know, there's just something odd about her expression.

As if she were sad and were about to start laughing, or laughing and about to get sad. >_< !

Or like me not making any sense......
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Old 2008-05-01, 11:35   Link #119
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Old 2008-05-01, 11:51   Link #120
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Total redone lol..

I'm done for today.. Too much emo tears ;_;


Dark BG was for the gloomy mood.. She got left out in there while Rozen finished her other sisters ..;_;
Much better!

What caused the line in the old version?

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Broken Doll or Dont leave me.. Father..

2 peoples says style different from my normal.. o_O
"Don't leave me... Father..." sets the mood a lot better (as KS points out).

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