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Old 2008-06-04, 02:15   Link #801
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Oh Kyral knows German? could you do me a favour and check the following if the German is correct?

Rückstoß durchbohren (Blowback Pierce)
Sturmwelle (Storm Wave)
Geistillusionen (Ghost Illusions)
Himmel-Tänzer (Sky Dancer)
Grosse Knall-Faust (Big Bang Fist)
Eisen Wird (Iron Will)
Rüstung Heiligen (Saint’s Armour)
Himmlisches Schild (Heavenly Shield)
Schirmherrschaft Heiligen (Saint’s Aegis)
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Old 2008-06-04, 02:16   Link #802
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"Rote Flügel" :3
Right, thanks.
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Old 2008-06-04, 05:53   Link #803
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Bwahahaha!!!





W000t! ID Cards! :3

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*pops in*

Quick present then.

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Wordier than I expected but I felt like it so what the heck.


*pops out*
Aaaawww!
That's uber cute!

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~MSLN GenerationS~
Chapter 3
Part 1
[/CENTER]

Spoiler for GenerationS: Chapter 3.1:


Well. That ended up longer than expected.

But that's not the end of it!!!

Please wait for the second part of my assortment of presents for Hayate!
Great Wolkenritter interaction! I love stuff like that!

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Eh, close enough I guess.
[Ja!]

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Oh Kyral knows German? could you do me a favour and check the following if the German is correct?

Rückstoß durchbohren (Blowback Pierce)
Sturmwelle (Storm Wave)
Geistillusionen (Ghost Illusions)
Himmel-Tänzer (Sky Dancer)
Grosse Knall-Faust (Big Bang Fist)
Eisen Wird (Iron Will)
Rüstung Heiligen (Saint’s Armour)
Himmlisches Schild (Heavenly Shield)
Schirmherrschaft Heiligen (Saint’s Aegis)
I'm not holding the titel "Belka Scriptor" for nothing!
(<- And I did put Germany into my location )

Ok lets see...

Rückstoß Durchbohrung (Blowback Pierce)
Geister Illusionen (Ghost Illusions)
Himmelstänzer (Sky Dancer)
Urknallfaust (Big Bang Fist) (if you mean "Big Bang" like in "Big Bang Attack")
Eiserner Wille (Iron Will)
Rüstung des Heiligen (Saint’s Armour) (Or "Rüstung des Sankt Kaisers" if you mean the Saint King's Armour)
Himmlischer Schild (Heavenly Shield)
Schirmherrschaft des Heiligen (or again "des Sankt Kaisers")

"Sturmwelle" is good as it is.
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Old 2008-06-04, 11:56   Link #804
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...Lily?!

Aaron's latest Khrack REALLY inspired you didn't it?
Never underestimate t3h crack

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*is sent flying from the second blow of WAFFiness*

How do you guys DO these things?! I am not worthy!!!

I do hope I can measure up.
Wait...you're worried? I should be the one worrying here...
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Old 2008-06-04, 12:28   Link #805
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First draft of the Lyrical Babel timeline. I'm just putting this up here so I can link to it.

Key:
Canon Timeline (taken from Nightengale's official post)
Lyrical Babel (Lyrical Melancholy, Lyrical Rage, Lyrical Envy)
Lyrical Elemental
Lyrical Coda
Lyrical Legend
Miscellaneous

Spoiler:
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Old 2008-06-04, 13:11   Link #806
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Well I got inspired today and went on a bit of a writing binge managing to pound out quite a bit so I present:

Chapter 3.2: SNAFU Part 2 (the big text makes it harder to miss!)

Spoiler for SNAFU Part 2:


That one was a bit heavier then the last but not much about 5,400 words total though it's not over yet obviously! But at least at long last the fight scene has begun! Took my ass long enough to get it rolling. Given that I've already got a few thousand words done for the next segment it should come quicker god willing.
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Old 2008-06-04, 13:30   Link #807
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Thunder and Flash? I spy a WW2 ref.

And eagerly awaiting sniper vs sniper.

....wait i just realised if Macmillan is here surely Price and Soap are around as well....
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Old 2008-06-04, 14:06   Link #808
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W00t! New photoshoped image!

Hm... I'm getting better...

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Old 2008-06-04, 14:22   Link #809
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Well I got inspired today and went on a bit of a writing binge managing to pound out quite a bit so I present:

Chapter 3.2: SNAFU Part 2 (the big text makes it harder to miss!)

Spoiler for SNAFU Part 2:


That one was a bit heavier then the last but not much about 5,400 words total though it's not over yet obviously! But at least at long last the fight scene has begun! Took my ass long enough to get it rolling. Given that I've already got a few thousand words done for the next segment it should come quicker god willing.
I have to say, this chapter had me tilt my head and wonder "More drones?" Dunno, I know it makes sense and all (though I do wonder as to their powersource) but it just ad that 'eh?' feeling.

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First draft of the Lyrical Babel timeline. I'm just putting this up here so I can link to it.

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I see more norse references. :3

And I see you're going to mess with Caro. That's going to be interesting, not many authors do that.

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W00t! New photoshoped image!

Hm... I'm getting better...

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Niiiiice. You really did a good job on turning Yuuno's suit into a uniform.

Small hint, you may want to ty experimenting with soft-brushes and blur tools for hair too, it can help make the girl on the left have less jagged hair.
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Old 2008-06-04, 14:44   Link #810
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Niiiiice. You really did a good job on turning Yuuno's suit into a uniform.

Small hint, you may want to ty experimenting with soft-brushes and blur tools for hair too, it can help make the girl on the left have less jagged hair.
Thank you!

And thanks for the hint. I will try so next time. At least as good as I can wth my good ol' PS 5.5 here.

And I just reuploaded the picture. I saw that there was a wrong layer on Rinyas (the girl on the left) eye. Somehow a piece of skin color was shoved over it... O_o;
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Old 2008-06-04, 15:14   Link #811
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I have to say, this chapter had me tilt my head and wonder "More drones?" Dunno, I know it makes sense and all (though I do wonder as to their powersource) but it just ad that 'eh?' feeling.
I acutally do have a plan and there presence is part of the plot the characters are going to want to know where the hell they came from too. Anyway Like you said it makes sense and besides they’re they do make lovely cannon fodder and we’re still in round one AKA the “bash your way through the small fry to get to the boss” phase of the battle.

Sorry if it seems a tad pedestrian, but I've always sort of fancied this as a "Real magic girl" fic. So the enemies aren't going to be eleventh dimensional demons from hell led by Lucifer himself that can only be defeated by the power of love and cute little girls, and the crack and outside canon content will be fairly low.


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I see more norse references. :3

And I see you're going to mess with Caro. That's going to be interesting, not many authors do that.
I don't think I've seen Caro play a major role in any fic... um ever.

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Thunder and Flash? I spy a WW2 ref.
I have my fun where I can and try to keep it inconspicuous the guys that get it get and the guys that don't aren't bashed over the head with it... usually. (and it certainly had nothing to do with me re-watching Band of Brothers recently...)

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And eagerly awaiting sniper vs sniper.
It acutally won't be too long in this chapter more of a teaser the big sniper duel is planned for later in the fic.

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....wait i just realised if Macmillan is here surely Price and Soap are around as well....
Yeah you used them (well Soap) in the OFM twit. You mention him in that capture fic you posted way back when. Though rather ironically this version of Macmillan is heavily based on another version of Soap from my crack fic after he gained magical powers... Hey there's a reason it's crack.
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Old 2008-06-04, 15:37   Link #812
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So can I assume that nobody else has found any problems with Rex besides the AoE of Barret Shell?
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Old 2008-06-04, 15:49   Link #813
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Thank you!

And thanks for the hint. I will try so next time. At least as good as I can wth my good ol' PS 5.5 here.

And I just reuploaded the picture. I saw that there was a wrong layer on Rinyas (the girl on the left) eye. Somehow a piece of skin color was shoved over it... O_o;
Ah, layers.

Anyway, Hayate sure is clingy with him...

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I acutally do have a plan and there presence is part of the plot the characters are going to want to know where the hell they came from too. Anyway Like you said it makes sense and besides they’re they do make lovely cannon fodder and we’re still in round one AKA the “bash your way through the small fry to get to the boss” phase of the battle.

Sorry if it seems a tad pedestrian, but I've always sort of fancied this as a "Real magic girl" fic. So the enemies aren't going to be eleventh dimensional demons from hell led by Lucifer himself that can only be defeated by the power of love and cute little girls, and the crack and outside canon content will be fairly low.
True, but after the first few chapters I was expecting... dunno... human oponents.

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I don't think I've seen Caro play a major role in any fic... um ever.
Shows how much of an impact she made.

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So can I assume that nobody else has found any problems with Rex besides the AoE of Barret Shell?
If we did, don't you think we'd have torn into them by now?
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Old 2008-06-04, 16:12   Link #814
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Just making sure.

For the record, the only changes being implemented into the final version are the addition of a new spell with grenade-launcher properties and a five-second charge time, and the toning-down of Barret Shell's explosive power to approximately the level of incendiary rounds or somewhere below the level of a Swallow Flier.

Once I post Rex's final revision I'll be getting to work on my next project, Operation De-Shaft Hayate, and an OC strongly related to said project.

Spoiler for Meet my unnamed Steel Mage. For real, this time.:


Wish me luck.
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Old 2008-06-04, 16:50   Link #815
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And here it is, my first completely successful de-haxxed character post!

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Old 2008-06-04, 17:40   Link #816
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So the enemies aren't going to be eleventh dimensional demons from hell led by Lucifer himself that can only be defeated by the power of love and cute little girls, and the crack and outside canon content will be fairly low.

.
Wait, he's still alive?!


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Old 2008-06-04, 18:13   Link #817
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Wait, he's still alive?!

Yeah, He's still alive...

He ain't gonna be leading any legions eleventh dimensional demons out of hell any time soon, though....

Hild-Sama took care of That



remember, Hell hath no fury?... with Hild it's the worst of Both worlds...
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Old 2008-06-04, 18:26   Link #818
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Wrong, when the nine circles of Hell are on the loose, when despair has overwhelmed humans' hearts, well when everyone are royally screwed up, you call...

Spoiler for The badass undead-slaughtering demonassbeater:
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Old 2008-06-04, 19:00   Link #819
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*spreads some crack in here, too*

Spoiler for Battle Speech:


*RUNS LIKE HELL*
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Old 2008-06-04, 20:04   Link #820
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Wrong, when the nine circles of Hell are on the loose, when despair has overwhelmed humans' hearts, well when everyone are royally screwed up, you call...

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Oh lawd LOL XD

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*spreads some crack in here, too*

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*RUNS LIKE HELL*
........................*facepalms*

Oh lawd LOL XD
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