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Old 2009-09-20, 13:20   Link #8241
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Thank you very much!

Well it was a pretty quick Idea I had, something like: "He... What if I make Rinya a sentoukijin?"

Also it's just a totaly out of place scene, as I have no idea myself how this could fit in one of my storylines (Well.. it could, but I was not really thinking about it. that's the reason I call it crack).
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Old 2009-09-20, 15:57   Link #8242
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Okay! I reworked this scene... I hated the way I did it the other night, so I scrapped that version and went with this.


Spoiler for Tia's Game:



Anyone who caught my last segment with the alternate introduction to Alexander Carrde... the scene involving Freid is still there. What I'm going to do, is have this be a double illusion to the Reader. Freid is actually fighting the illusion, and Tia got the Illusion trap... So by this scene, the reader should be a touch lost until they reach the next set of parts. (Lost as in "Wasn't abby fighting the dragon?") Unless of course, they catch the hints I set up and figure it out.

I spent about Four combined hours studying chess tactics to get this scene to come out right. I was originally looking for some kind of hidden double bluff technique, but found nothing good enough to match.
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Old 2009-09-20, 20:17   Link #8243
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Okay! I reworked this scene... I hated the way I did it the other night, so I scrapped that version and went with this.


Spoiler for Tia's Game:



Anyone who caught my last segment with the alternate introduction to Alexander Carrde... the scene involving Freid is still there. What I'm going to do, is have this be a double illusion to the Reader. Freid is actually fighting the illusion, and Tia got the Illusion trap... So by this scene, the reader should be a touch lost until they reach the next set of parts. (Lost as in "Wasn't abby fighting the dragon?") Unless of course, they catch the hints I set up and figure it out.

I spent about Four combined hours studying chess tactics to get this scene to come out right. I was originally looking for some kind of hidden double bluff technique, but found nothing good enough to match.
Oh dear. Knowing Tea, she's not going to take the conclusion of this very well unless something else in the future proves otherwise.
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Old 2009-09-21, 21:16   Link #8244
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Well this is my first time making a character for Nanoha... as well my first fanfic related piece in a long while.

Spoiler for Arthur Lightbringer:


I don't really know if i want him to stay in the military or not.... He feels as if he'd be a decent henchman.

edit: comments and critique appreciated.

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Old 2009-09-21, 23:35   Link #8245
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Generic character name conjures image of generic character... Uninteresting profile makes me yawn.

You HAVE FAILED.

Report to the Punishment Center for Punishment. Precia will be waiting...

*CRACK!*

"YEEEEEEOWWW!!!"


Oh... she's feisty today...

(No seriously. 'Lightbringer'? Come on now, have some creativity here.)
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Old 2009-09-21, 23:42   Link #8246
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Yeah, the first thing I thought when I saw the name was 'lightbright?'

Nanoha naming conventions use car names for non earth born characters. So you could go with say

Spoiler for names:


From there, I saw orion, octavia, or pulsar. Have fun with it ^^ (these are from the link in my sig btw)


Spoiler for more:


Starion? ooh
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Old 2009-09-22, 00:14   Link #8247
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Re: Bernkastel Hecate Hekate's OC

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*puts a las-bolt through ATC's head for offensiveness*

About time we put an end to this bloody attitude.

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However, his point stands. A more imaginative name would've helped. The profile itself... Nothing really bad, but could be better.

Descriptively, the character sounded like an ego-inflated Warhammer Fantasy generic (partly because of the banner on his back!) riding on a horse... That mental image really tickled. XD

He's charismatic? Yet an egotist? Something doesn't match up here.

I'd say he'd be dishonorably discharged for being an idiot one too many times, and then turn on the TSAB, which then gives the rest of the cast a chance to flatten him with pink firepower. If that's what you wish that is.

A mediocre start, but not exactly unsalvagable. Come up with a better name, and maybe work a little on his personality. If you like, make him something like a comedy character, a lordotic fool of blue birth. Don Quixote perhaps?
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Old 2009-09-22, 00:16   Link #8248
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DONNY!!! YES!!! I'd love a donny boy in this era and culture, that'd be so good haha
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Old 2009-09-22, 00:17   Link #8249
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I posted a version of this OC a while ago, and received no comments on him. I'm going to assume the lack of responses was because of the haxx OC posted right before mine. I would like some comments on him, thank you all.

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Old 2009-09-22, 02:35   Link #8250
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*folds out of Workspace*

Just a little something that i am working on at the moment, for an OC that is being rehauled back from cold storage.

Spoiler for Force Blade Reijin:


still waiting for a certain pair of people to finish their work so that I... i mean we can reveal what we have done- though the pic above is not related to it..

*disappears in a flurry of notes*
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Old 2009-09-22, 13:54   Link #8251
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*folds out of Workspace*

Just a little something that i am working on at the moment, for an OC that is being rehauled back from cold storage.

Spoiler for Force Blade Reijin:


still waiting for a certain pair of people to finish their work so that I... i mean we can reveal what we have done- though the pic above is not related to it..

*disappears in a flurry of notes*
You twit! You didn't border the green portion!

As for the other 2... Less stress more productivity. Patience, ye child.
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Old 2009-09-22, 14:00   Link #8252
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I believe the green portion is NOT SUPPOSED to be bordered. Just working on some inside info here...
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Old 2009-09-22, 14:25   Link #8253
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I poked the colors and added a ball, so it can be Reijin Heart *shot*

http://imgur.com/Fi85D.png
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Old 2009-09-22, 16:39   Link #8254
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I poked the colors and added a ball, so it can be Reijin Heart *shot*


*cycles chamber*
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Old 2009-09-22, 16:55   Link #8255
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spelled marines wrong (bottom left corner) *runs away*
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Old 2009-09-22, 17:52   Link #8256
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Old image copy actually. I actually updated the design to cut off the 'hook' over the shoulder. (It wouldn't be pleasant to have that in the Prone position)
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Old 2009-09-22, 18:09   Link #8257
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And people were concerned about Nena being overpowered?

I laugh.
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Old 2009-09-22, 19:02   Link #8258
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And people were concerned about Nena being overpowered?

I laugh.
Yeah I agree, seems a little thrown together haphazardly. Altogether, it looks like times are tough for potential OC posters at the moment. Oh well, i'm a stickler for pain

Spoiler for OC: Mimi:


Please R&R!

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Old 2009-09-22, 19:37   Link #8259
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And people were concerned about Nena being overpowered?

I laugh.
You're gonna keep laughing then, for Casey was a sign from the Kaiser to show that there are worse things to worry about.
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Old 2009-09-22, 19:45   Link #8260
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And people were concerned about Nena being overpowered?

I laugh.
Ehhh, there's a difference between "this should be addressed" and "HOLY MOSES 300x STARLIGHT BREAKER?!"
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