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Old 2012-02-07, 04:05   Link #9461
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... Lowe posting a snippet after so long? UNPOSSIBLE!

Actually this one was a short snippet I wrote a long while ago, but only now did I manage to finish it. This one ties in to this particular chapter of ghazgkhull's Riot Force 6, leading into one of the conversations in that piece. The circumstances regarding the events described here are written in a previous chapter.


Spoiler for Divide:
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Old 2012-02-07, 23:38   Link #9462
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... Lowe posting a snippet after so long? UNPOSSIBLE!
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Old 2012-03-03, 07:21   Link #9463
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Happy birthday OCC-tan! You're 4! A real big girl now.

And we've haven't forgotten about you, Cadia Zwei. Our fics and profiles remain in deep freeze, but their spirits remain alive in our hearts.

Maybe someday, when the mangas get reanimated, we'll meet again...

(And by then, there might be real khracklings running around... )
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Old 2012-03-04, 09:14   Link #9464
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Happy birthday OCC-tan! You're 4! A real big girl now.

And we've haven't forgotten about you, Cadia Zwei. Our fics and profiles remain in deep freeze, but their spirits remain alive in our hearts.

Maybe someday, when the mangas get reanimated, we'll meet again...

(And by then, there might be real khracklings running around... )
4 years, huh? ...it's quite a long time >_>

...And I've yet to finish my fic (mostly due to my lack of concentration) >_<

Anyway, here's another piece of Chapter 25 (OC Index)

Spoiler for Chapter 25 - Second Date - Part 3:

That's it for now

Let's hope I can post another piece soon, before I get distracted again
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Old 2012-03-04, 10:04   Link #9465
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On the front of finishing fics... I'm no better.
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Old 2012-03-17, 18:03   Link #9466
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Well, one more piece of Chapter 25 done!(OC Index)

Spoiler for Chapter 25 - Second Date - Part 4:

Lots of plot-talk and foreshadowing in this piece
Also, this just might be the longest piece I've posted >_>
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Old 2012-07-21, 12:38   Link #9467
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On the front of finishing fics... I'm no better.
Could be worse, Kha. Hell, I've been considering for months if I should go about re-writing whatever I've already put up.

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Anyway, there was something biting at me after I'd been watching way too many cop shows... Will this work within the Nanoverse framework though? What kind of changes does it need?

... or the Sankt Kaiser forbid, did I just turn into kha? alright guys, go ahead and pile on the ridicule. =P

If anyone wants to add their own unit in the list, feel free to holler in OCC and we'll pass the editable link around.
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Old 2012-07-21, 18:34   Link #9468
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Just as planned... I think?

Good that someone's working on Midchilda. I have my hands full with life and Belka.
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Old 2012-07-26, 09:06   Link #9469
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There's TK's Special Operations and Contractor Command (SOPCC) which controls both the TSAB's special forces units (what few of them exist) as well as serving as a regulating body for contract mages and other Private Magical Contractors - which is why the OFM are disguised as a PMC under the umbrella of SOPCC, despite acting more like Section Nine/Delta Force.
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Old 2012-08-10, 11:31   Link #9470
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Could be worse, Kha. Hell, I've been considering for months if I should go about re-writing whatever I've already put up.

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Anyway, there was something biting at me after I'd been watching way too many cop shows... Will this work within the Nanoverse framework though? What kind of changes does it need?

... or the Sankt Kaiser forbid, did I just turn into kha? alright guys, go ahead and pile on the ridicule. =P

If anyone wants to add their own unit in the list, feel free to holler in OCC and we'll pass the editable link around.
Now I wish I had more time to holler.

Gah, some things just refuse to lie dead, don't they...even if the passage of time that separates those intermittent nostalgia-fueled spasms seems to lengthen ever so inexorably.

Though I suppose I'm just as guilty of that: the first thing I did was to tear my way through the whole spreadsheet...and then rue the fact that it's still woefully incomplete.

...and Kha, five months on your optimism strikes me as being very...well, you: and while some stranger part of me hopes that there will be successors proper, I wonder if any of the old bones around here would be up to see it.
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Old 2012-08-10, 13:01   Link #9471
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Seeing this thread reminds me that I made a FC at one point...and that it went nowhere.
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Old 2012-08-16, 03:43   Link #9472
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I think I will troll a little bit (because I am bored and run out of game to keep me occupied).


Spoiler for If you are interested:
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Old 2012-08-16, 07:49   Link #9473
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Seeing this thread reminds me that I made a FC at one point...and that it went nowhere.
Out of curiosity... What's an FC?

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I think I will troll a little bit (because I am bored and run out of game to keep me occupied).


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Hmm... Needs a tsundere to whack this guy with a giant flail.
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Old 2012-08-16, 07:51   Link #9474
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Out of curiosity... What's an FC?
"Fan character". Very rarely used, it seems...
Doesn't seem the OC/FC I made drew any attention, so I won't bother expanding upon him...

And it seems like there's an entire "continuity" here...and cliques...
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Old 2012-08-16, 09:59   Link #9475
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"Fan character". Very rarely used, it seems...
Doesn't seem the OC/FC I made drew any attention, so I won't bother expanding upon him...

And it seems like there's an entire "continuity" here...and cliques...
I think I missed that OC. Forgive me, I'm pretty damn busy IRL so things usually get forgotten... Could you link me to him?

Any semblance of continuity has been shattered to pieces. All that's left is my solo effort trying to tie everything back together. And that's progressing pretty damn slowly, as I'm trying to do that without profiles, and full stories instead.

Effectively, I'm doing a reboot of my fanon world, this time taking into account the lessons I've learnt while growing up as a writer, and bringing in + updating OCs both mine and others, and the no-longer-present.

Currently, I'm writing the first leg of these Rebuilt of StrikerS fics. Its a reboot of Kha, a prominent character both loved and loathed by the veterans in this thread. Returning to the roots of [An excuse to have magical girls masquerading as giant mecha smashing each others brains in in epic battle], Rebuilt of StrikerS Nf'r follows a farmer's boy through a piece of high adventure time-shifted into modern day, as he becomes embroiled in an ancient feud between Kaiser loyalist giants and the House of Loki.

Next would be Rebuilt of StrikerS Bhalkad. This reboots the character I first gave SaintX for his fic many many years ago, and fixes the problems canon created by revealing that Alicia died 26 years before 0075. The year is 0039, and Ordered Space is plunged into war by space nazis (fanonically a horde of Belka barons unified under a charismatic leader.) The protagonist Sai Kluger is blessed & cursed by the Whispers of the Ascended, allowing him to perceive magic at a level beyond normal humans. Taken in by scientist Precia Testarossa, the Bureau hope his talents, and the lost logia armor named Bhalkad, can turn the tide. It follows Sai's role in the war, as well as provide insight to how the older characters such as Graham, Midget, Leti, Claude and Lindy were like in their youth. Sai sacrifices himself at the end, and only wakes up 26 years later, thus bringing him into the modern era.

There would be a third fic called Rebuilt of StrikerS: The Sisters of Belka, which reboots Sister-Captain Sophia. Born Tokiha Ringo, she is scouted by the Ubermensch Convent and trained as a Sister in the most veteran of battleforces amongst the Saint Church knights. This would follow then-Sergeant Sophia on one of her missions where she collaborates with then-newly-converted Yagami Hayate to prevent a prophecy of Carym's gift from coming true.

Pretty damn long a journey; I'm still on the prologue.
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Old 2012-08-16, 10:40   Link #9476
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More trolling stuff:

Edited:

Idol of battlefield,
The Valkyrie who determine outcome of a battle,
Magical Girls who control time and space....

"What could possibility be worst?"

Full OC profile coming soon.
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Old 2012-08-25, 01:10   Link #9477
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More trolling stuff:

Edited:

Idol of battlefield,
The Valkyrie who determine outcome of a battle,
Magical Girls who control time and space....

"What could possibility be worst?"

Full OC profile coming soon.
Nothing to do with the Amities I hope?






~~~New Intelligence Data Updated~~~

Ah... I'm getting too old for this.

Spoiler for Magical Lyrical INNOCENT:


Hmm... Leave comments, evaluate, just don't kill me too much, etc, etc...
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Old 2012-08-25, 06:43   Link #9478
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I think I missed that OC. Forgive me, I'm pretty damn busy IRL so things usually get forgotten... Could you link me to him?
Hre you go: http://forums.animesuki.com/showthre...20#post3891320
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Old 2012-08-25, 07:12   Link #9479
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Nothing to do with the Amities I hope?
Even though it is based a little on Dark Magical Girls series....
They are still Pure Magical Girls....(Complete with Costume, Mascot and toy wand)

The problem is: They are magical girls in Nanoha-verse.... They have firepower....lots of it...

Considering how magical girls usually One-hit kill their enemies with their most powerful attack......

Yea... you really don't want to be at the receiving end.

Edit: I am trying to make their most powerful attack is as pretty as Quartz Cannon from Eureka Seven Ao......

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Edit: I really need to start typing out the full profile but............................................... .

DARKSIDER II :: :: :: ::

Will have slight delay....
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Old 2012-08-25, 10:32   Link #9480
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Ah well, I guess this thread is too dead to do character reviews. Then again, the darn manga is only 1 volume old lolz.

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Well, with some encouragement from a friend, here's my FC, according to the format at the start...


Spoiler for Nanoha FC Bio:


Hope I got the basics written at least...though I don't know how many people are interested.
And I haven't read through the FC threads here either...
What a wordy character. Looks like you got inspired by Touma's Unlimited Page Works a lot here. But its simple and short, which is good for people to refer to.

Any deal with the Rosetta stone?

Best way to work out the rest of the character is by writing the shorts he's in now.
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