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Old 2008-07-03, 23:59   Link #61
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Heres another i just started on i cant decide on which to use....

This one..?



or this one?

C+C greatly appreciated
First one, yeah the render is too blurry and the animation is jerky, like the snow goes up and down instead of falling to the ground. Second one I think if you should put like an orangey overlay over the render or something to make it blend more into the background because right now it just looks too plastered on. I love the backgrounds of both though
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Old 2008-07-04, 00:22   Link #62
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Seasons uh? Okay, now it's time to get to work
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Old 2008-07-04, 01:00   Link #63
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Well, might as well up this up for thoughts.



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Old 2008-07-04, 01:02   Link #64
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Old 2008-07-04, 01:15   Link #65
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Because your background (which is really pretty) is so smooth and blended, the characters (er...Nanoha and Vita?) just stand out like they're being pasted on there. Maybe you should reduce contrast and sharpness on the characters at least, but I can see this working out.

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Old 2008-07-04, 03:17   Link #66
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I'm kinda leaning twords something like this.

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Old 2008-07-04, 03:23   Link #67
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Its oversized tho ^^
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Old 2008-07-04, 03:24   Link #68
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Its oversized tho ^^
I know >< I'm trying to fix it, thats just a rough edit, lol.
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Old 2008-07-04, 03:25   Link #69
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Old 2008-07-04, 04:34   Link #70
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(this is not my final) guys what do you think about this? (C&C appreciated)

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Old 2008-07-04, 06:18   Link #71
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lol yup i was trying to get the word out but i guess i didn't do such a good job ^^;;
Well in that case I'll join. Well hope you find members. Say are you like doing a touhou one too because seems like some of use might do a touhou one this time too. Not saying all though.

@Endrance: I think the fall sig is find without animation. Just change the quality of the text because the back and test quality looks quite poor. I really like the first one though.

@SweetSpring: Keep it like that. I don't think it needs any fixing up.
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Old 2008-07-04, 14:48   Link #72
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^Original.



^Modified version.

Which one is better? C&C please. <3
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Old 2008-07-04, 14:59   Link #73
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Prefer the second one ^_^ The only thing i would modify is the font, Autumn can't be seen well. Other than that, it's splendid.
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Old 2008-07-04, 15:04   Link #74
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The second one is nice, but I feel that it could use less sparkle/glowy thingys. They seem too clustered on the right.
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Old 2008-07-04, 17:05   Link #75
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My take on the theme.....hm, spring?



^ Winter?
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Old 2008-07-04, 17:44   Link #76
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My take on the theme.....hm, spring?



^ Winter?
I like the winter one better
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Old 2008-07-04, 18:30   Link #77
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Me likes the winter one too. It gives off a really calm feeling

Although I feel that the spring one is more original...decisions, decisions..
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Old 2008-07-04, 18:37   Link #78
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Tough choice, but I'll have to go with spring, the colous are beautiful
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Old 2008-07-04, 18:43   Link #79
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Spring! I vote spring! Reasons are posted on your thread Cyz
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Old 2008-07-04, 20:06   Link #80
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