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Old 2008-10-01, 11:53   Link #61
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Well, here is version 3



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Old 2008-10-01, 11:59   Link #62
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Those moving bars look mighty familiar!

It would look better without those lines in between. You can probably do that by just setting it on lighter.
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Old 2008-10-01, 12:18   Link #63
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Cheers for the comments and C&C guys.

I've tried the same bold layout with a different image and colour and even managed to keep the curved edges without losing to much quality when i optimized it.


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Which one do you think i should stick with ?
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Old 2008-10-01, 12:20   Link #64
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Those moving bars look mighty familiar!

It would look better without those lines in between. You can probably do that by just setting it on lighter.
Yep! Your tuto

Version 4



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Old 2008-10-01, 13:18   Link #65
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It would be nice if you could see the instrument she was holding. How 'bout tilting it?
the render's guitar is behind the render so i choosed to focus on the head phones
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Old 2008-10-01, 13:25   Link #66
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Affix you could edit in the guitar head behind her right sholder so it looks like she's slung it. Should look ok since the strap is already there.

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Old 2008-10-01, 13:27   Link #67
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exactly thats a good idea tho it might kill the flow of things, ill test it out.



Thanks Drake
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Old 2008-10-01, 13:55   Link #68
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Much better =D
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Old 2008-10-01, 14:02   Link #69
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This is what I've come up with so far. C&C please.
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Old 2008-10-01, 16:16   Link #70
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Faeyice - very nice, I love the faded/retro feel to it (I hope that's what you wanted!), but I do want to know what the black squiggle is on the very left...

Evil Rick - Those bars look much better than your original version. Someone already mentioned this, but have you tried getting the bars to move separately? Like, while one is moving down, the other is moving up?

Drake - I think both of them look good, but I have to honestly say I still lean towards the original blue just because I like the render better. I might change my mind if the red one were fixed a little because as of now the render is a bit blurry, especially around her face.

AffiX - looks good! I love that particular render, I have it, just haven't gotten around to doing anything with it >.<

PG - also another render that I really like. My only thing with it is that the way it is now, I'm reading it "listening music." Are they supposed to be separate phrases like "listening" and then "music," or are you aiming more for "listening TO music?"
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Old 2008-10-01, 16:24   Link #71
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Tried speeding up the animation just a lil bit but i dunno if it should be faster or slower.....C&C peez
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Old 2008-10-01, 16:28   Link #72
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Evil Rick, How about making the bar animation in 4 separate slices with different frame delays, if you use delays that are not dividable by each other it'd make it almost random.
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Old 2008-10-01, 16:47   Link #73
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Faeyice - very nice, I love the faded/retro feel to it (I hope that's what you wanted!), but I do want to know what the black squiggle is on the very left...
LOL, I don't even know how I managed to get what I have now with what I started making. It was gray when I started out. 8D;

Oh, that's a brush I used. It WAS part of a tape cassette brush, but I only had the part that showed the film coming out of it. I guess I should remove it.


^Version without the tape, and Final Entry unless stated otherwise.
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Old 2008-10-01, 17:03   Link #74
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Didnt really notice the any initial blurring myself but i've give it a bit of a sharpening anyway.

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Old 2008-10-01, 17:25   Link #75
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Bah, I abandoned the anime idea and instead did something else.

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Very nice. That's my kind of style. Though there is something i just can't put my finger on..
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Old 2008-10-01, 17:38   Link #76
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Well, guess I'll post something as well. Probably will not enter this though.

Funny, got to pick the theme and now I'm struggling to find inspiration. Oh well, oh well...

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Old 2008-10-01, 17:44   Link #77
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Very nice. That's my kind of style. Though there is something i just can't put my finger on..
If I could make a guess, it would be the text. It's the only thing I'm not happy about, but I didn't come up with anything else.
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Old 2008-10-01, 18:44   Link #78
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I can't find any good "anime" renders to use ):
Anyone want to help?
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Old 2008-10-01, 19:06   Link #79
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I can't find any good "anime" renders to use ):
Anyone want to help?
Here's a few I found yesterday when I was looking for some.

http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o...nders/Aoi2.png

http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o...s/guitar-5.png

http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o...tarockstar.png

http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o...itarristas.png

http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o...icismylife.png
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Old 2008-10-01, 19:29   Link #80
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I ran across a new render. . .and well I had to use it:



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@Haku: I dunno the spazzy look actually gives it a pretty cool feel to it. . .(Man I feel like such an outcast. . I got no animated sigs >>) Edit: Post Baleted D:
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