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Old 2009-12-02, 21:33   Link #241
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Finally, chapter 24 of R2Remake is fixed, a lot of modifies, in fact from 16 pages, the chapter now is 25 pages, thanks to mazryohn and nobodyman9 for to fix the english translation, I know, the difference between the old art comic and the new one is like a abyss....be patience:

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Old 2009-12-02, 23:30   Link #242
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Currently reading ch. 24. I'm loving it....
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Old 2009-12-03, 00:17   Link #243
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Great work, Bonzo. I swear if this was translated, colourized, and put up for sale at Comiket in Japan, you'd be one of the top sellers!
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Old 2009-12-03, 17:42   Link #244
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Awesome as always bonzo. I think this revised version is definitely better than the original. I always love expansion on the characters and story, and I think you did a good job with it. Also, as I've said before, your art has really improved from when you first started this project. It just keeps looking more and more authentic. Also, good choice on the new font style.

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Old 2009-12-03, 20:01   Link #245
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The newer version is better than the old one. heck, I love to see Nunnally as an angry little lamb.
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Old 2009-12-06, 11:13   Link #246
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A couple of appendixes, old works, but now with a fixed english text thanks to nobodyman9 and some modifies, chp 24 changed, then all the rest must be evolve:

Turn 24.4:
After the final battle in the evening, something happen:

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.4enga.jpg
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Turn 24.5:
Few days after, Kallen is dead inside, her duty is the only strenght give her the will to live, finally she says to Lelouch what she feel, but for the terror to hear every possible reply, she do it...during Lelouch's coma.

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn24.5aeng.jpg
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Old 2009-12-09, 00:03   Link #247
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Wow. The improvements are great. The art, the story, and the characters themselves. Pretty much everything that Nobodyman9 said, though after this I would have kissed Kaguya if she had exiled Chiba from Japan for her outburst, but let Tohdoh stay.

Kallen's expression in the third panel of page 14 was absolutely heartbreaking, I really mean that. Bravo.
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Old 2009-12-14, 17:12   Link #248
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New comic work in progress.
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Old 2009-12-21, 20:17   Link #249
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Very well.

Ladies and gentlemen, another of the appendix everyone waited, a pregnant kalulu story and the christmas card together:

Note, a topless inside:

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.54eng.jpg
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http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.54engc.JPG
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Old 2009-12-23, 16:59   Link #250
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Great work as always bonzo. My only complaint is that some of the dialogue is a bit shaky. For example, when Kallen lies to Lelouch telling him she forgot to take the morning-after pill Lelouch catches her and asks her to be honest and then she immediately admits yes, she wanted to have a baby. There seems to be no transition there. Usually people are a bit hesitant when they get caught in a lie, but we didn't see Kallen react at all.

Other than that it was great. Can't wait for your next work.
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Old 2009-12-23, 19:27   Link #251
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I know, some adjustment was necessary.

Tomorrow I'll start to fix chp 25 seriously.
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Old 2009-12-23, 23:45   Link #252
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Sounds good. But are you gonna get us that Christmas pic, right? You know the one
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Old 2009-12-24, 08:15   Link #253
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The pregnant story IS the christmas pic.
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Old 2009-12-25, 21:18   Link #254
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The pregnant story IS the christmas pic.
What about that pic with...

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Old 2009-12-26, 14:36   Link #255
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Quote:
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What about that pic with...

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Oh, you right, but my idea to draw it for christmas changed with the appendix story, however, I'll draw that art too.

Like a little surprise added on chp 25.
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Old 2009-12-26, 23:14   Link #256
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Gotcha. Can't wait
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Old 2009-12-31, 09:48   Link #257
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First 6 pages of chp 25 are fixed, be patience
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Old 2010-01-08, 09:11   Link #258
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80% of job done.
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Old 2010-01-13, 23:03   Link #259
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Just finished reading ur work, and i love it. it rare i get moved by reading or watching media but i must say u have my respect and gratitude for such an amazing piece of work. Best remake of code geass ending ever...
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Old 2010-01-15, 04:03   Link #260
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I'm happy you liked it, but wait to see the last chapter after the modifies.
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