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Old 2010-01-20, 19:33   Link #262
Mazryonh
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Bellissimo! Semplicemente Bellisimo!

Much better than the anime's ending, in my view. If this were inked and colourized, I would definitely buy a physical copy at a convention.

I know you didn't approach me to have this chapter edited, but I'm still here and would be happy to help with the following ones. I'm especially looking forward to how the OVA gets started.
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Old 2010-01-20, 19:54   Link #263
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Phenominal, bonzo.

Of course, having edited the text for you, I was aware of what changes you were going to make so it wasn't really surprising reading it, but it was still awesome. I love the art and text changes that you made, and overall I think it's a lot better than the previous one. Keep up the good work, bonzo.
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Old 2010-01-20, 20:53   Link #264
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Wonderful remake and i like the changes and additions.

Will u be redoing the other comics as well now or is that it?
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Old 2010-01-25, 12:49   Link #265
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Well, in the wait, a little preview about the side-story everyone waiting:

After the visit at fake lelouch grave, instead to return to the camper to take care of Lelouch, Kallen does a little detour, Stadfteld mansion...to face her father.
Kallen is wounded, dead beat (days without sleep) and emotionally unstable, a bomb ready to explode.

Spoiler for Kallen parents:



About the design, Kallen's stepmother was present in the anime, but I just remember her hairstyle vaguely, then maybe she can be enough different from the original, about Kallen's dad, I invented the character, I made a design of a serious man, but with physical features connected with Kallen, just the reader can say "he's her daddy".

Your opinion?
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Old 2010-01-25, 19:46   Link #266
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Only read it today. It was fun, i don't have any complaints about it. I think it got everything smooth and nice. Your drawings are getting really good, Bonzo.
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Old 2010-01-30, 07:28   Link #267
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The new comic is at 50%
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Old 2010-01-30, 09:26   Link #268
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i cant read the 23-24 chapter in the first page
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Old 2010-01-30, 16:27   Link #269
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i cant read the 23-24 chapter in the first page
I restyled and rename the pages, look here:
chp23
http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...&postcount=223

chp24
http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...&postcount=242

chp25
http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...&postcount=262
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Old 2010-02-18, 12:55   Link #270
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New comic complete! Kallen has her past now.

I hope tonight to write all the text and send to nobodyman9 for fix it.
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Old 2010-02-19, 15:03   Link #271
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In the wait of new comic, I'll update this one, with some art correction and text fixed, this appendix is directly connected with the new one, the event is about 30 minutes before.

Two days are passed from Lelouch's death, Nunnally visit his fake grave together with Cornelia and Kallen, but there's some tension in the air....

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.09enga.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.09engb.jpg

The grave must be fixed too. Lelouch is born in 1999.
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Old 2010-02-20, 09:58   Link #272
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And now the new story, after the vist at Lelouch's grave...Kallen, wounded, dead beat and emotionally unstable want close her last question with her family.

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1enga.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engb.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engc.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engd.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1enge.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engf.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn25.1engg.jpg

Good fun!

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Old 2010-02-20, 14:42   Link #273
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very nice good work
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Old 2010-02-20, 22:28   Link #274
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Great work as always bonzo. You're writing and art continue to shine. Oh, and I know you had that bit of trouble picking out school subjects for primary school, so I just wanna let you know that you did it just fine. That were very believable report cards for Naoto and Shirley. Good work

So, what project are you gonna be working on next?
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Old 2010-02-21, 05:28   Link #275
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Well, I just fixed another OAV page.

Next appendix is inside Royal family.
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Old 2010-02-21, 22:37   Link #276
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Excellent work Bonzo.
Looks good as always.
Love Kallen with long hair!
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Old 2010-02-22, 02:17   Link #277
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I loved the new chapter. It seems that Kallen's dad is happy to see Lelouch as his son-in-law.

Great work!
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Old 2010-02-22, 07:49   Link #278
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I loved the new chapter. It seems that Kallen's dad is happy to see Lelouch as his son-in-law.

Great work!
Well, after all, C.C "censored" his worst crimes and the world doesn't know the rest.
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Old 2010-02-27, 17:33   Link #279
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A "new" story....in the truth I just fixed the dialogue and three panels:

Inside Ashford Estate....

Nina live hided and under Ashford family protection, but there's a turning point for her:

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.59aeng.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.59beng.jpg
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...n25.59ceng.jpg
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Old 2010-02-28, 14:49   Link #280
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And now the new story, after the vist at Lelouch's grave...Kallen, wounded, dead beat and emotionally unstable want close her last question with her family.

Good fun!
Now that's what I call an addition that should have been part and parcel of the original series. Again, you can really see that Theodore's marriage to Romilda was purely political. The way you mention "after Naoto's birth" and "how he looked so Japanese" makes me think that Zoyo was pregnant with Naoto before Theodore met her, though.

I can't wait to see if Theodore will feature again in your OVA. If they can't get to Kallen or her children directly, the antagonists could always go after her father.
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