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Old 2009-02-12, 03:08   Link #61
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The full text flashing should sync with his hand going upward then the scrolling matched with his movement =/
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Old 2009-02-12, 04:40   Link #62
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Hm, now that you pointed it out it seems more apparent, but I still think you can pass that off and fool someone if you just don't tell them :P
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Old 2009-02-12, 05:27   Link #63
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Old 2009-02-12, 07:14   Link #64
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Which better .. C&C please ..





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Old 2009-02-12, 08:28   Link #65
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Old 2009-02-12, 10:25   Link #66
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Old 2009-02-12, 11:29   Link #67
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Is it better now?
it's more visible now, yes

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so many options ._.
Okay well for starters, I noticed each one has some sort of grid pattern. My direct suggesiton would be to get rid of it because its very diruptive of flow. Any pattern can (doesn't have to) disrupt flow, especially one that is large and easily attention gained.

this one imo has the most flow so far (the color gradient overlay helped define the flow as well as half of the grid lines which helped the flow while the other half held it back) .... however the render doesn't match the entire global color spectrum :/ The render looks like it needs a dark background and surrounding and not one thats primarily made of whites and light color arrays.


This one has a background that closer matches the render than any of your other entries because it does not contain so much light.

This next one might actually be a better example of appropriate colors for your render
however it has that white stuff all around it and that is disruptive :/
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Old 2009-02-12, 11:54   Link #68
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In my opinion you should change the colours of the background from those colourful ones to more toned etc. It will give the siq a more serene (?) felling, right now those colours reminds me of disco lights, which isn't good considering the render you're using.

Btw. I made another changes, so please c&c




And a typical boring question: with or without text?
(but I think that I still prefer my ver. 2, which I made earlier...)
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Old 2009-02-12, 22:04   Link #69
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Well. . .got more of the render in it. . .and touched a few things up.

C&C?

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Old 2009-02-13, 01:29   Link #70
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Thanks for the C&C .. Ehko-san and Vibeke-san ..

And for Vibeke-san .. I think I prefer the new one with text but the color of the right image still little imo ..

Well, Because I'm so Confused .. this one is my Final Entry

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Old 2009-02-13, 05:22   Link #71
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Can't believe I actually managed to find a dancing pic. >=D

Three versions, I'm yet again undecisive. Any C&C+color pick highly appreciated and noted.






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Well. . .got more of the render in it. . .and touched a few things up.

C&C?

Nicely blended. Especially her hair, I like the used effects.

The only slightly disturbing element seems to be the "wave" in front of her. Looks kinda odd in front of her hair. A subtle blur (0,5-2 px) in that area may enhance the look. Just a thought, not necessarily an improvement.

Still, much better than the first version, suits the theme a little more.
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Old 2009-02-13, 08:56   Link #72
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Well. . .got more of the render in it. . .and touched a few things up.

C&C?

It looks better than the first version. And I like the way reimu( If I'm correct is in that postion like that and I stil don't see the dancing to it, but I guess you can call it dancing.

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Nice entry except that the colors don't look right to me. :3

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Is it better now?
Its very nice. Like the aniamtion andi t looks a little better.

Heres my entry its not my final but oh well. XD Any C.C



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Crap the border isn't on there. ><
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Old 2009-02-13, 10:15   Link #73
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@Vibeke
without text looks better

@Arceon
That's better. The movement is still pretty faded but it looks slightly more like dancing now.

@Larthak
:/ i cant decide...
Maybe something between

(right here)

The abstract light strokes in the back disrupt flow but I guess that's okay :|
Nicely balanced light based signature



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and now we dropped anime in general (lol)

Without border looks pretty good imo + likes the font, its blends well, though comparing it with her shirt, shouldn't it have an orange tint to match it too?

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Old 2009-02-13, 10:53   Link #74
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Good?, bad?, Dont do sig anymore?

OH SHI-.. it wont sync =.=.. I stopped making sig then ._.
A mask trick, right?

Looks really good and I must say, very original

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I like netter the first one, the colors and contrast are good, the text doesn't feets very well on the other sigs

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@ Katocchi
In my opinion you should change the colours of the background from those colourful ones to more toned etc. It will give the siq a more serene (?) felling, right now those colours reminds me of disco lights, which isn't good considering the render you're using.

Btw. I made another changes, so please c&c




And a typical boring question: with or without text?
(but I think that I still prefer my ver. 2, which I made earlier...)
My advice would be without text, the animation looks good but the colors on the right image (the static dancing girl) look a bit weird

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Well. . .got more of the render in it. . .and touched a few things up.

C&C?

Looks better, a lot, very good efects and render, like it a lot

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Can't believe I actually managed to find a dancing pic. >=D

Three versions, I'm yet again undecisive. Any C&C+color pick highly appreciated and noted.






The 3 versions are good, but I like better the colors on the first one

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Heres my entry its not my final but oh well. XD Any C.C



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Crap the border isn't on there. ><
It looks a bit simple, not much impact, trry to focus the image a bit more and mybe add some effects with brushes and/or lights (or anything that hits your mind )

I agree with Ehko, the sig looks goos without border
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Old 2009-02-13, 20:46   Link #75
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I dont know...Im really not loving it right now. I need to work on the stock color...
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Old 2009-02-13, 22:08   Link #77
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I dont know...Im really not loving it right now. I need to work on the stock color...
Looks really simple, doesn't impact a lot.

What about some ligh efects? (filter/ render/ lighting efects) This way you could focus the dancers and give the impression that they're in some kind of dancing contest, it's just a suggestion though
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Old 2009-02-13, 22:16   Link #78
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Cheater! How the fark you get her to dance so smooth @.@

The text animation could do with a bit more smooth out tho
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Old 2009-02-13, 22:42   Link #79
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I dont know...Im really not loving it right now. I need to work on the stock color...
I like it not just because i love blood+ but because it works
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Old 2009-02-13, 22:48   Link #80
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Erm.. I thought BunBun's sig is from Ouran Host club?
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