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Old 2011-01-26, 15:31   Link #621
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The lack of Sakura is pretty much because this is based off of the Good End of UBW. Not as much well anything of Sakura in that route at all.
She still exists, though, she's still being tortured by Zouken and she's still Shirou's friend and Rin's sister.

I don't hold out much hope for her involvement, though, because I don't think Gabriel Blessing had even played FSN until recently, and I'm still not sure if he's finished it.
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Old 2011-01-26, 16:08   Link #622
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I'm under the impression that he went through it quickly. I kinda think he's main concern was some of the mechanics of Magecraft and other things.
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Old 2011-01-26, 20:09   Link #623
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And if I remember right, Hill of Swords was based off a combination of Fate and Unlimited Blade Works, though my memory is foggy as to how he linked the two.
He gave an explanation of the fate/UBW hybrid route at the start of this chatper here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6154638/...Hill_of_Swords


And just putting it out there, I thought In Flight's Shirou wasn't too OOC... but then again, it's been a few years since I played through F/SN UBW Route too
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Old 2011-01-26, 20:29   Link #624
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Just skimmed through In Flight, and I have to admit while I find it interesting, a lot of it is lost on me because I've never watched or read the series it's been crossed over with.

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Old 2011-01-28, 11:18   Link #625
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So, I've been putting this together for a while now, and finally sat down and actually wrote it. Action really starts in "Chapter 1", but a prologue is needed, and thus a prologue it shall get!

Hrmm, guess this means I should to make an ff.net account, huh?

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Old 2011-01-28, 21:41   Link #626
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Okay, now that is interesting...
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Old 2011-01-28, 23:14   Link #627
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Having read through this before you posted, all I have left to say is, I'm very curious as to where you'll go with this, considering the time period it's set in and the Servants you've chosen to have involved in the War. I have no doubts that the outcome will be an awesome thing.
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Old 2011-01-28, 23:46   Link #628
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Going to have an update to Last Forge up by tomorrow night at the very latest. Woo.
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Old 2011-01-29, 01:44   Link #629
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Since Chapter 0 didn't have much (or really anything) in the way of action, here's chapter 1, featuring the first battle of the story.

Second Grail War:
Chapter 0

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Spoiler for Author's Note:
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Old 2011-01-29, 10:19   Link #630
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Going to have an update to Last Forge up by tomorrow night at the very latest. Woo.
Your enthusiasm makes me look forward to this story with breathless anticipation. Woo.


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Since Chapter 0 didn't have much (or really anything) in the way of action, here's chapter 1, featuring the first battle of the story.

Second Grail War:
Chapter 0

Spoiler for Second Grail War - Chapter 1:

Spoiler for Author's Note:
Thief! Give me back my Author's Notes!

I mean, um... interesting so far. The Servants thus far introduced seem to have a great deal of promise, and just in general I like the thought of taking a look at the Second War and seeing what all happened. Interesting premise; if you ever need a proofreader or want to run a concept by someone, shoot me a PM, I'm happy to help.
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Old 2011-01-29, 11:53   Link #631
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Story Idea

While it is true this has been done before, I think there needs to be a a time loop story for FSN. While I am working on some details, I do have a loop I want to post. If anyone can think of better loops, please feel free to post them on here. I'd be interested to see other scenarios that screw Shirou over.

Spoiler for Looped Minor: Loop #1:

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Old 2011-01-29, 14:47   Link #632
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Going to have an update to Last Forge up by tomorrow night at the very latest. Woo.
WOO!

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What? One of us has to be enthusiastic about it, or nobody will be!
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Old 2011-01-29, 20:06   Link #633
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While it is true this has been done before, I think there needs to be a a time loop story for FSN. While I am working on some details, I do have a loop I want to post. If anyone can think of better loops, please feel free to post them on here. I'd be interested to see other scenarios that screw Shirou over.
OK, seriously, you have Rin turning against Shirou, gaining two servants and trying to kill him, and you have Sakura gaining two servants, allying with Rin and also trying to kill him. Of that, only the first is really plausible, and perhaps also Rin trying to kill Shirou. Sakura would never turn against Shirou, except perhaps if she was Dark, and in that case she would sure as hell not be allied with Rin. Further, it is not really possible for a master to support two servants in the way you're thinking here, and they would not even try, because it weakens their servants to the point that they're better off with only one. Plus, I can see no way of having Sakura get Berserker.

So, it's a nice try, but in trying to screw Shirou over you've thrown in so many Diablous Ex Machinas it's just plain ridiculous.
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Old 2011-01-29, 21:23   Link #634
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Isn't a ridiculous situation the point of a loop?
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Old 2011-01-29, 22:02   Link #635
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Don't bother trying to reason with Cherry Lover on the subject of Sakura, it's pointless.

I think it was a great story, we don't see enough of those. Keep up the good work.
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Old 2011-01-29, 22:10   Link #636
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So, it's a nice try, but in trying to screw Shirou over you've thrown in so many Diablous Ex Machinas it's just plain ridiculous.
Those were supposed to be Diablous Ex Machinas?

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I guess I wasn't supposed to be laughing so hard, then. My bad.
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Old 2011-01-29, 22:13   Link #637
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While it is true this has been done before, I think there needs to be a a time loop story for FSN. While I am working on some details, I do have a loop I want to post. If anyone can think of better loops, please feel free to post them on here. I'd be interested to see other scenarios that screw Shirou over.

Spoiler for Looped Minor: Loop #1:
That. Was. Hilarious.
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Old 2011-01-29, 22:13   Link #638
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That. Was. Hilarious.
Glad I'm not the only one who laughed.

Will there be more? This was very funny!
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Old 2011-01-29, 22:18   Link #639
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Will there be more? This was very funny!
Speaking of, around what month of next year should we expect the next chapter of In the Rain?
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Speaking of, around what month of next year should we expect the next chapter of In the Rain?
It's Into, not In.
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