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Old 2009-03-11, 04:59   Link #221
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this was the render I used
it just kinda looks that way in the sig
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maybe it's the color? or the position maybe?
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Old 2009-03-11, 05:03   Link #222
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Decided to try something new. Any suggestions?

New
Spoiler:
The text is hardly readable and the render seems to stand out too much. Some blending might help.

Your older sig looks better so far.

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*tries*
comments please :]
As others say, the mask is just strange in there...couldn't have found a better one? Other than that, all the lines on Shinji look too agressive.

Something positive for a change; that background (and the way he blends) is sweet...absolutely love it.


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this was the render I used
it just kinda looks that way in the sig
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@markesellus
maybe it's the color? or the position maybe?
Hmm, strange...the lines aren't that bad on the render. What did you do to it?

Still, the mask...maybe adding some effects over it...or something...
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Old 2009-03-11, 05:25   Link #223
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Thanks for the coments, it fmakes you feel that people really want you to improve

took in concideration all the coments and came up with this:

Version 2.


New text, fixed the red space on the bg and focused more on the covered face of the girl plus another style of border.

Also:

Version 3.


Exactly the same as Version 2, just that this one has a little animation on her eye, though that it could be a nice add. (edit: just noticed the quality but I can fix that )
Much much better. As said the animation is too quick but other than that it's good. I'd use 5 slices though, adding one full width slice at the top and the bottom, splitting the image at the top and the bottom of the eye as well as left and right edge. Gives you more room to play with as far as filesize is concerned.
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Old 2009-03-11, 05:33   Link #224
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Ok, had some time to think. First off, I like the background, however Rika is pretty blurry, and part of her hair is chopped off at the bottom. One of the first things a signature maker should learn is composition. Think of a signature like painting a picture. If you just slap random elements together it will look like....well, random.

So you have to think "what do I want this signature to look like?" Once you have an idea, you look up how to do it (or figure it out by experimenting). Blending the different pieces of your signature into one smooth signature is part of composition.

I'm not sure on what program you use (photoshop, gimp, paint, etc.), but we do have a tutorial thread stickied at the top of the forums that has a ton of links to check out.

Don't get discouraged though! If you have questions, feel free to ask them here, or in the tutorial thread, or in our Signature Creation, Discussion and Improvement Thread.

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I think the text should be clearer, and perhaps in a different font. The render is good, and I like the concept, but the future seems a little murky (no pun intended. ) If I'm looking at it correctly, it's past on one side, future on the other?

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Decided to try something new. Any suggestions?

Old


New
I like the old one, although the left side seems empty. The new one has a good image, but feels very empty and the text is hard to read. I like the bold color on both though.

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The render is very sharp and the mask doesn't look right. The background is interesting to look at and the side is pretty neat as well, although it took me a moment to realize that it was Shinji wearing his trademark hat.
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Old 2009-03-11, 05:57   Link #225
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I think the text should be clearer, and perhaps in a different font. The render is good, and I like the concept, but the future seems a little murky (no pun intended. ) If I'm looking at it correctly, it's past on one side, future on the other?
For the colors of the text, I picked a color from each other side. It's not my view of the future, it related to the serie ( texhnolyze) it's more at the surface on one side and Lukuss at the other.
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Old 2009-03-11, 06:01   Link #226
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For the colors of the text, I picked a color from each other side. It's not my view of the future, it related to the serie ( texhnolyze) it's more at the surface on one side and Lukuss at the other.
Ah ok, I see it now. It's been a long time since I've seen Texhnolyze so the image didn't ring a bell. ^^ I think this theme has produced more "who is that image" than any other theme so far.
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Old 2009-03-11, 08:18   Link #227
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so basically, I'll just have to move Shinji's position huh?
I'll finish it tomorrw
still have a lot things to accomplish
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Old 2009-03-11, 10:25   Link #228
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[EDIT]: @Frailty: The mask on Shinji's face needs work. More blending or something, it really stands out. It looks pretty cool over all. I was waiting for someone to use Vizards. I still can't believe no one used Kakashi yet...
I did...or does Ichigo not count that surprises me as well too. I still cant believe I didnt use Kagari

@Adrestea: who is the guy in your top sig!!! o_o
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Old 2009-03-11, 10:41   Link #229
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@Adrestea: who is the guy in your top sig!!! o_o
Manju-chan, I sent you TnC's CGs and you still didn't realize the guy in Adrestea's pic is from TnC?

Anyway, he is Gunzi from Togainu no Chi. *skips away nao*
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Old 2009-03-11, 11:46   Link #230
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here comes another draft!
Spoiler for draft 4:
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Old 2009-03-11, 11:48   Link #231
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Decided to try something new. Any suggestions?

New
I like the new one exeptf or the black line at the left. :?

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*tries*
comments please :]
Overall the BG is well executed and I like it a lot.
But I'm not a big fan of that render

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here comes another draft!
Spoiler for draft 4:
Jjust can say that I like it

Yay, currently working on V4 of mine
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Old 2009-03-11, 11:49   Link #232
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Manju-chan, I sent you TnC's CGs and you still didn't realize the guy in Adrestea's pic is from TnC?

Anyway, he is Gunzi from Togainu no Chi. *skips away nao*
OH!! I knew Id seen him before! you look at so many hot guys during the day its hard to keep them all in order...
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Old 2009-03-11, 11:50   Link #233
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here comes another draft!
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@Marina
lovely source but i dun like two things
border & text is a lil hard to read imo. overall,a wonderful sig as always marina!
Text works much better now. Purple gudge brush on the right is perhaps a bit too prominent other than that can't come up with any real complaints.
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Old 2009-03-11, 11:52   Link #234
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post fixed,sorry bout that.

back in fixin once again!
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Old 2009-03-11, 12:02   Link #235
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Cierra I would had keeped the '' Father'' on the other side but writed the ''look at me '' a little bigger

Thank everyone for the imput, this will be my Final Entry
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Old 2009-03-11, 13:13   Link #236
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Version 4.



Fixed the quality and worked with the Animation

Do you see anything else missing?
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Old 2009-03-11, 13:15   Link #237
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It is cute and pretty, but you should work on getting a more subtle natural blink, its too fast and frequent.
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Old 2009-03-11, 14:24   Link #238
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v5


Spoiler for v4 for comparation:
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Old 2009-03-11, 15:06   Link #240
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v5
The background on the left hand side seems bland compared to the background on the right hand side. Maybe add a few of the green and gray polygons on the left to make the two sides look more balanced?
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