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Old 2009-03-04, 15:30   Link #61
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Well, I do sure hope it'll pass your requirements KiNA,
I think you need to move the face over to the right until you can't see his left eye. Cuz as it is, I'm pretty sure it won't qualify for the theme.
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Old 2009-03-04, 15:34   Link #62
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Well, for starters that's a 'she' I figured it's close enough with the cover considering other propositions here. Let's hear the big ol man
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Old 2009-03-04, 15:48   Link #63
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I think you need to move the face over to the right until you can't see his left eye. Cuz as it is, I'm pretty sure it won't qualify for the theme.
KiNA never said one eye needs to be covered just half of the face; see examples.
It may require a little zoom, to get in range of a confortable half.
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Old 2009-03-04, 16:10   Link #64
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Doubt ill use this one but just one i was playing with
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Old 2009-03-04, 20:10   Link #65
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this is just a stock, Ive done nothing to it, I just want to make sure it fits the criteria.
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Old 2009-03-04, 22:10   Link #66
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@Manju - I believe that would count as a profile shot, which KiNA strictly said was not considered 'half-face.'
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Old 2009-03-04, 22:31   Link #67
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Ok good to know. *goes back to looking for stock*
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Old 2009-03-04, 22:38   Link #68
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Well, for starters that's a 'she' I figured it's close enough with the cover considering other propositions here. Let's hear the big ol man
You called me an old man! I'm gonna DQ her!!!!

If you can drop a bit more so at least her nose is partly hidden, it would be much more preferable but as it is, its as far as I'm willing to be lenient with.



@ BunBun, Marina is right.

Even very very dark shadow counts .. pitch black shadows where the face melt into the BG.

Also, so far, Riker time and again spammed me with a lot of his old works, which fits this theme to a T, you might want to hunt his thread for inspiration
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Old 2009-03-05, 00:34   Link #69
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Well, I do sure hope it'll pass your requirements KiNA,
The design and colors look very good.
Hell that sig is Overall good

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Doubt ill use this one but just one i was playing with
Too bright although the border has a nice style.
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Old 2009-03-05, 00:59   Link #70
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Well, for starters that's a 'she' I figured it's close enough with the cover considering other propositions here. Let's hear the big ol man
Oops. My bad. I have no idea who that character is anyway.
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Old 2009-03-05, 07:37   Link #71
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I was not refering to the text (I'm not mean lol, text is fine). The "sticks" are what I percieved to be those five rectangles surounding "The Rising Sun" text.
The rectangles are actually "rays" since it's based on a variation of the japanese flag. I'll see what I can do to clean it up a bit.

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rawr my try for this time. I might look it over the following days tho :>
I like it. To pick something to critique, perhaps a very light border at the top and bottom so the black bar on the side doesn't look as out of place.

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My second attempt. Two versions, one with text and one without as Evil Rick suggested trying.

Opinions? Recommendations? Preferences? Does the concept of Lydia as a dream figure come across without the text's explanation?
I think the concept is fine, and KiNA doesn't seem to mind it either. To offer a critique, perhaps there is a bit more focus on the guy sleeping than on the girl he's dreaming. I can't really think of any way to bring more focus to her at the moment though.

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Well, I do sure hope it'll pass your requirements KiNA,
Minimalistic, but has a sharp look to it. KiNA says it's fine so no problem there, perhaps cut a little off the top and bottom for more emphasis on the eyes (not huge chunks removed, just a trimming. The text is a little confusing, since her look suggests anything but crying (unless you mean crying in another sense).

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I can't compete with the vets like KiNA and Solace anyway. Their signatures ALWAYS pwn mine.
I'm quite the novice, but I appreciate the kind words. ^^;

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Doubt ill use this one but just one i was playing with
It feels a bit washed out and the border could use some work (the black corners are distracting). Those petals beg for animation.
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Put a 1px border on top and bottom (notice also there is a 2px line on the left side of the sig )

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I'm quite the novice, but I appreciate the kind words. ^^;
Says the person who has six rep boxes, lol.
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Put a 1px border on top and bottom (notice also there is a 2px line on the left side of the sig )

Top and bottom border steal focus.
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Minimalistic, but has a sharp look to it. KiNA says it's fine so no problem there, perhaps cut a little off the top and bottom for more emphasis on the eyes (not huge chunks removed, just a trimming. The text is a little confusing, since her look suggests anything but crying (unless you mean crying in another sense).
Thank you for the insight. Well, the text may be something people watching the series will understnd,

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You called me an old man! I'm gonna DQ her!!!!
If you can drop a bit more so at least her nose is partly hidden, it would be much more preferable but as it is, its as far as I'm willing to be lenient with.
Ok, so I'll skip the headmaster part

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The design and colors look very good.
Hell that sig is Overall good
Thx, Evil Rick

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Trimmed version. Well, I don't think I'll reduce it further. Tried and didn't look good at all.
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Old 2009-03-05, 12:34   Link #77
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Q&D vers of my first draft


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Old 2009-03-05, 12:50   Link #78
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Q&D vers of my first draft


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Considering the character you chose I think it would be more suitable to present a black fog over lighter background or something that represents his abilities, though colored black as well. Black Getsuga would be great here. White colored fog lessens the impact of the character in my opinion
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Top and bottom border steal focus.
Yeah I don't like it that much either, it just is so much better without the top and bottom one :<

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Old 2009-03-05, 16:36   Link #80
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Put a 1px border on top and bottom (notice also there is a 2px line on the left side of the sig )

I agree with Cats, border doesn't look as good as I thought it would.

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Thank you for the insight. Well, the text may be something people watching the series will understand,
Who is she?

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Trimmed version. Well, I don't think I'll reduce it further. Tried and didn't look good at all.
I like this one, it has more focus.

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Q&D vers of my first draft


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Urei has the right idea here, the fog feels a little off. I like the choice though, I had pondered using it at one point too. ^^
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