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Old 2009-07-23, 12:32   Link #21
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Not a lot to say about the chapter this time around. The art looks as if it has improved slightly. The pictures in the archive look especially good and clear.
Yay, thanks!

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I don't remember how it was in previous chapters, but I think it would be alright to use the actual swear words instead of @#$%. Makes evil people like Maligno look silly. Then maybe, it's funnier this way.
Well, AS rules wouldn't had allowed me to write it explisit anyway... and yeah, I find it funnier.

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Grammar wise, I didn't notice anything too bad. If I were to nitpick a little, on page 14 it should be 'people are' instead of 'people is' and you need to take care with using 'the' where it's not needed. ['the lunch' (page 4), 'the triple' (page 14)]
"Takes note"

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Evil Rick is quite powerful and awesome to be able to heal like that after getting hit by so many bullets. xD I wonder who (or what) the masked person who came to talk to Kagero is. He didn't look evil.
Actually is she

Evil Rick has healing abilities but deadly attacks can knock him out of combat for several time as you probably noticed.

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All in all, solid chapter and looking forward to more.
Thanks again, yay! Kai delurked to coment in my comic!
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Old 2009-07-24, 03:29   Link #22
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Hey, I've been waiting quite a while for this. I have nothing to say since Kai the Reaper had already said so. Anyway, it's good so far and certainly your artwork did improve. Keep up the good work, Evil Rick
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Old 2009-07-24, 11:09   Link #23
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Thanks Terran!
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Old 2009-09-03, 06:08   Link #24
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Coolness as always, Evil! I think I liked the sub-plot with Kagero a tad bit more than the main plot, which is good too.

Is it just me or did Kasumi become taller and thinner in the bio?

Looking forward to Issue #4!
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Old 2009-09-03, 10:12   Link #25
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Thanks Zhaxra, I think that the next week I'll be able to post #4 (19 pages, I have14 ready at this point)
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Old 2009-09-11, 21:40   Link #26
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As usual, it looks good but you still have some spelling errors. However, the story seems to be progressing quite nicely. I can't help but feel that Steve Stark look like Bumblebee in some way
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Old 2009-09-13, 14:39   Link #27
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As usual, it looks good but you still have some spelling errors. However, the story seems to be progressing quite nicely. I can't help but feel that Steve Stark look like Bumblebee in some way
Thanks Terran!

Eh... Bumblebee? O.o



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Old 2009-09-14, 18:28   Link #28
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Kagero's attitude in this chapter really raised the expectations towards the threat of the Master Light and what made her act so aggressively even towards her own daughter. I really liked that scene on the very first page.

DiaboloPanda looked funny, and those eyebrows and the beard really give him character.

Next chapter ought to be interesting.

Page 8 doesn't load for me anymore, although I could see it without problems yesterday. ><
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Old 2009-09-14, 22:35   Link #29
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Kagero's attitude in this chapter really raised the expectations towards the threat of the Master Light and what made her act so aggressively even towards her own daughter. I really liked that scene on the very first page.

DiaboloPanda looked funny, and those eyebrows and the beard really give him character.

Next chapter ought to be interesting.
Thanks for reading and comenting, I'm glad that you found it worthy of the time.

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Page 8 doesn't load for me anymore, although I could see it without problems yesterday. ><
Problem fixed, probrably a bandwith problem in imageshack. XP
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Old 2009-09-20, 23:31   Link #30
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Yo, guys! I made a little update on the index (very first post) on this thread, this to make the things more interactive and atractive for all of you! I hope you find it good.
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Old 2009-10-07, 12:38   Link #31
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Yes, all characters has its own characteristic and abilities, that's what i like from you, you can draw wide variation of character , which make the story exciting, can't wait for the next update
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Old 2009-10-07, 13:31   Link #32
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Thank you very much, many people say that one of the atractive aspects of this project is the aviety of characters, I'm glad that people feel pleased with this. (Coming soon and Aztec emperor and a banquished prince from the Atlantida XD)

Chapter 5 should come out this weekend.
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Old 2009-10-08, 03:00   Link #33
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Nice, I can't wait!
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Old 2009-10-12, 06:17   Link #34
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Heh, good show. You read my mind, Evil Rick. Bombs and Guns are what makes it fun .
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Old 2009-10-13, 22:35   Link #35
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Is it just me, or did this chapter come out quicker than the usual? Not that I'm complaining or anything!

Even though there wasn't anything surprising in it and the events turned out a bit predictable, the chapter ended on a nice, touching note. Those scientists really deserved what they got!
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Old 2009-10-14, 00:36   Link #36
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Heh, good show. You read my mind, Evil Rick. Bombs and Guns are what makes it fun .
I though you would like it!
Thankls for reading!

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Is it just me, or did this chapter come out quicker than the usual? Not that I'm complaining or anything!

Even though there wasn't anything surprising in it and the events turned out a bit predictable, the chapter ended on a nice, touching note. Those scientists really deserved what they got!
Well, yeah, for some reason I got more time than usual in order to bring this one out.

The chapter itself was all about the OC Markesellus because she's gonna be an important piece that will tell you more about Evil Rick and Satashi.

Next chapter will set up all pieces in order to start with the climax, the battle for the Master Light.

Thanks for reading also.
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Old 2009-11-18, 01:50   Link #37
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Thumbs up Good news!

For my followers who speak spanish, I have good news, the new web www.elcomicenlinea.com is hosting the spanish versions of the chapters of Master Light. This is a good option to read the chapters in a very original way an totally in Spanish. Also, here is available the "Wikistoria", a small Wikipedia in which you can find more information about Master Light and the characters, unfortunely. only in Spanish.

The good news is that the creator of the site, is seing the posibilities of adding an "english area", if this comes out, the english chapters of Master Light could be hosted in this web also and will save all of you from the loong charge times in this thread. Still, this is only a posibility, but it come out by request, if you want the chapters in english of Master Light posted in the original style of this web, post the request here!

In the main time, my spanish-spaeking followers can alredy enjoy the chapters of Master Light (Luz Maestra) in total spanish here!
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Old 2009-11-30, 05:10   Link #38
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Happy to see another chap of Master Light, keep it up
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Old 2009-12-01, 00:16   Link #39
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Thank you for entertaining me . That's a pretty good-looking Satashi if I may add.
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Old 2009-12-01, 02:25   Link #40
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Thank you for entertaining me . That's a pretty good-looking Satashi if I may add.
Thanks Terran

I'm glad you liked it.
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