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Old 2010-09-30, 11:27   Link #241
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collapse or easter fantasy fanfic also updated.

chaoz the new chapter look shorter for me than the past one. Well great update.
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Old 2010-09-30, 18:56   Link #242
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chaoz the new chapter look shorter for me than the past one. Well great update.

Actually, it was 200 words more

But I can see what you mean, my intention was to speed up the process as I'm sure you all have noticed- Alot of this is the same formula. I want to get out of this House as soon as possible and move on to the next part of the story Don't worry, the next chapter would complete this 'hour', and if you played the game, you'll know what's coming

As for a reference, what do you think is better? Less but Longer chapters, or More but Shorter chapters?
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Old 2010-09-30, 23:31   Link #243
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hmmm I don't know. Though for me the chapters about touma running wild trying to find the key and index solving the case inside the mansion feels longer.

Its just when I start reading it...... it's already finish. That kind of feeling.
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Old 2010-09-30, 23:50   Link #244
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hmmm I don't know. Though for me the chapters about touma running wild trying to find the key and index solving the case inside the mansion feels longer.
That's because they are. I written about 4000-6000 words for them, 2-3 times as much as the recent two

Then again, it could also be contributed to the fact that I was still introducing the 'world', I doubt people would like to know the details about every dark and creepy room, and every dark and creepy encounter right? Cause they're really alot of them

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Its just when I start reading it...... it's already finish. That kind of feeling.
Hmm, I understand. I'll see what I can to return to the original format for the second half of this fic.
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Old 2010-10-03, 06:45   Link #245
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Managed to some how complete it over the weekend... 5000 words, should be enough I hope

End of the Fourth Hour


The investigation is now over, the tempo will change.
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Old 2010-10-04, 07:28   Link #246
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Old 2010-10-04, 07:44   Link #247
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Old 2010-10-04, 09:04   Link #248
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I think this should go under the fanart section, but it's connected to the Collapse of the Eastern Fantasy. So, I was undecided. Compared to my first Nue/Touma pic, this really looks epic.
Spoiler for for fanart:
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Old 2010-10-08, 02:20   Link #249
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I think this should go under the fanart section, but it's connected to the Collapse of the Eastern Fantasy. So, I was undecided. Compared to my first Nue/Touma pic, this really looks epic.
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I still think Touma x Scarlet sisters is effing hot...
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Old 2010-10-08, 07:37   Link #250
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I still think Touma x Scarlet sisters is effing hot...
I can work on that next, if you want.
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Old 2010-10-08, 07:53   Link #251
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I can work on that next, if you want.
Yeah.......more gothic loli is always win
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Old 2010-10-10, 13:54   Link #252
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New project by me:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6387903/...ersion_Project

Its only a short first chapter/prologue.

Hope you enjoy.

Also, Shiro and Kuro update:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6013204/3/Shiro_and_Kuro
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Old 2010-10-12, 10:58   Link #253
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Yeah.......more gothic loli is always win
For Flere's chapter 8 of collapse of eastern fantasy. and Cosmic's request I guess.

Spoiler for remitouma:
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Old 2010-10-20, 12:41   Link #254
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Going to pimp my own story:

Title: Akihabara
Summery: Onee-sans, Tsundere's, Dominatrix ladies, oh my! Who shall win this fight? Who will win the heart of the spiky-haired boy? *Warning: This may contain some High Octane Nightmare Fuel and the writer will not be held responsible for any mental images.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6413055/1/Akihabara

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Old 2010-10-20, 13:24   Link #255
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rofl!! Best. Fanfic. ever!!!
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Old 2010-10-20, 13:41   Link #256
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I leave a review their.

It gone longer but a lot funnier.

I wish you would continue it but the event end with tsuchimikado getting bed slap.

btw I use tsun on other site.
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Old 2010-10-20, 18:41   Link #257
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Going to pimp my own story:

Title: Akihabara
Summery: Onee-sans, Tsundere's, Dominatrix ladies, oh my! Who shall win this fight? Who will win the hart of the spiky-haired boy? *Warning: This may contain some High Octane Nightmare Fuel and the writer will not be held responsible for any mental images.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6413055/1/Akihabara
Just to correct: It's "Kanzaki". I was wondering for a while when I saw it as "Kanazaki" o_o


anyways.

I almost fell out of my chair laughing
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Old 2010-10-20, 19:26   Link #258
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*looks at fic* *bangs head repeatedly against the wall* I'll go fix that now. Thanks for pointing it out... Sorry that I missed that.

Anyways,

I'm glad you like I do try hard.
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Old 2010-10-20, 22:26   Link #259
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Wow... that was a good laugh, if ignoring that those people will probably never meet up like that in Akihabara...

Still, a good read, thanks =D
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Old 2010-10-20, 22:36   Link #260
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You know I'm now actually worried about walking alone in Akihabara should I ever vist Tokyo....
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