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Old 2013-08-31, 21:00   Link #4421
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What is ''WHITE''? Could you spoil me?
Let me put up some quotes from Chapter 4 of my story first.

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"'Chosen of WHITE'? You mean her?" Kamijou blinked, looking down at the bruised girl in his arms. He could feel that ITS eyes (or whatever passed for ocular organs to the incomprehensible being in his right arm) lock onto the unconscious swordswoman.

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"Wait a minute," Kamijou requested. His mind worked, wondering what IT meant by 'WHITE'. He remembered Tsuchimikado talking about people that were born with blessed bodies who were dubbed as Saints. He could feel an abnormal aura that was, dare he say it, holy rolling off Kanzaki. The final pieces in his mind clicked as Kamijou finally realized what 'WHITE' was.

'Well, I guess that explains why Christianity exists,' Kamijou thought, as he finally obtained an important revelation about Christianity. The identity of 'WHITE' was rather easy, when presented with the facts. He knew that each and every being with a disposition similar to IT had a Symbol defining their existence.

And he now knew that WHITE's Symbol was a cross.
If that doesn't give enough hints, then I'll just put it in spoiler tags below.

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Does that elaboration in the spoilers help?
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Old 2013-08-31, 21:01   Link #4422
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Misaka…. just started challenging him to duels.
from chapter 3. ugh. My mistake sorry. I misread it.

What's the change with Touma in electrode? its just doesn't seem to click on the audience if there is nothing more to it. The electrode for Accelerator allows him to use his abilities but Touma doesn't have any abilities.
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Old 2013-08-31, 21:02   Link #4423
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from chapter 3. ugh. My mistake sorry. I misread it.

What's the change with Touma in electrode? its just doesn't seem to click on the audience if there is nothing more to it. The electrode for Accelerator allows him to use his abilities but Touma doesn't have any abilities.
Meh, don't worry about it. I put that exposition in one big damn wall of text so it's easy to misread.

As for Choker!Touma, he still has all his memories about his life. Instead of losing his memories to the Feather of Light, the feather crippled his brain.
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Old 2013-08-31, 21:08   Link #4424
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What's the change with Touma in electrode? its just doesn't seem to click on the audience if there is nothing more to it. The electrode for Accelerator allows him to use his abilities but Touma doesn't have any abilities.
Motor functions; things like speech, movement, things of that nature I guess. It was an idea someone came up with in regards to if the Feather of Light didn't wipe Touma's memories and instead caused severe brain damage to where he couldn't function without something like the electrode.

I'm did it in an attempt to help out Demino with how Mugino's personality worked and such. I'm bad at explaining things, so I figured just showing how I would do it would be easier to interpret.

So omega, what did you think of it?
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Old 2013-08-31, 21:10   Link #4425
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@ferret: awesome...



I really need more practice with writing her angry version. You capture her essence very well.
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Old 2013-08-31, 21:14   Link #4426
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You flatter me too much....

I think it's kinda scary how I can nail her personality so well...and also makes me wonder why I'm good at it.
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Old 2013-08-31, 21:14   Link #4427
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Motor functions; things like speech, movement, things of that nature I guess. It was an idea someone came up with in regards to if the Feather of Light didn't wipe Touma's memories and instead caused severe brain damage to where he couldn't function without something like the electrode.

I'm did it in an attempt to help out Demino with how Mugino's personality worked and such. I'm bad at explaining things, so I figured just showing how I would do it would be easier to interpret.

So omega, what did you think of it?
It was quite nice. I kind of imagine what would happen if all of that occurred in front of Touma's school. I'm just kind of obsessed with Touma's school seeing his more serious and resolved side.

And Mugino needs her illusions broken badly. As the rest of ITEM. Takitsubo can stay with Hamazura though.....

I got this crazy idea in my head for a Hamazura fic. You would need to see the action movie, Wanted, to understand what I'm thinking, though.
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Old 2013-08-31, 21:21   Link #4428
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@ferrret: mind doing the second scenario I posted?

@omega: he's gonna have a shoot out with morgan freeman?
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Old 2013-08-31, 21:25   Link #4429
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I got this crazy idea in my head for a Hamazura fic. You would need to see the action movie, Wanted, to understand what I'm thinking, though.
I've seen wanted, so what do you have in your head?

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And Mugino needs her illusions broken badly. As the rest of ITEM.
Ahem, that's liable to happen. *points at signature*

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@ferrret: mind doing the second scenario I posted?
Sure; give me a few.
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Old 2013-08-31, 21:26   Link #4430
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@ferrret: mind doing the second scenario I posted?

@omega: he's gonna have a shoot out with morgan freeman?
No, but that would be badass.

I meant, he comes from a bloodline of superhumans with enhanced reflexes. Hamazura already fairly knows his way around a gun, so I thought 'Why the hell not?' I'd amused the idea because Hamazura shooting bullets that curved to their targets was really badass.

It's also part of the reason that Aleister wants to get rid of him. He's a powerful, unstable person that Crowley can't control.

I'm on the borderline of making this Hamazura for To Ascend, but I don't want people pissed at me for taking away his charm as a completely normal person being able to beat a Level 5.
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Old 2013-08-31, 21:33   Link #4431
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I believe Kamachi wrote that Hamazura was already beyond a normal level 0 since he beat a level 5. It's just that Hamazura does not recognize that fact. Doesn't make him any stronger though
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Old 2013-08-31, 21:38   Link #4432
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That's the same charm that Touma has, the difference between them is that Hamazura was able to do it with only his whits and guns. He didn't get help beating Mugino, and while the idea of gaining that is nice, it would kinda stain the image of his 'bad-ass normal' trope.

By all means, though, I'm sure there are ways to make it work. But I'd just tread carefully and things should be done at a gradual pace, something he needs to work into before getting good at it. If you just throw him out like that, the charm is lost. Ease your way in with it, you have the build up, gradual leverage to work with, and eventually make him into a bad-ass through those hardships of developing that ability.
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Old 2013-08-31, 21:39   Link #4433
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I never said he was stronger. I just said enhanced reflexes. As in being able to shot a fly's wings off and still keep them alive because the shot he made was just that accurate.

And yeah, I see what you guys mean. I feel like I'm way out of my depth with this writing.
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Old 2013-08-31, 21:43   Link #4434
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If Hamazura was spouting cool lines off Max Payne style, he'd be perfect! After all, I can totally imagine him saying this:

"I couldn't understand it. I just went against the best army in the world, with a Level 5 to boot, and survived."

"I'm in an anime. There's no other explanation."
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Old 2013-08-31, 21:58   Link #4435
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If Hamazura was spouting cool lines off Max Payne style, he'd be perfect! After all, I can totally imagine him saying this:

"I couldn't understand it. I just went against the best army in the world, with a Level 5 to boot, and survived."

"I'm in an anime. There's no other explanation."
That latter line... That would probably be if he had gone crazy and decided to break the fourth wall.... Fffffuuuuuuuuu-

Now I have yet another idea.

Deadpool!Hamazura. That is all.
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Old 2013-08-31, 22:37   Link #4436
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Hamazura that has active Hysteria mode without the need for arousal.

Hamazura that is like Kinji. I like hidan no aria but when they introduce stupid fantasy on it. It lost its edge. But still badass gun wielding and dagger user Kinji is badass.

Hamazura with a desert eagle and a butterfly knife.
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Old 2013-08-31, 22:47   Link #4437
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Hamazura that has active Hysteria mode without the need for arousal.

Hamazura that is like Kinji. I like hidan no aria but when they introduce stupid fantasy on it. It lost its edge. But still badass gun wielding and dagger user Kinji is badass.

Hamazura with a desert eagle and a butterfly knife.
.... People seem to be reading my mind lately. First, someone commented in a review about wanting me to make High!Kanzaki a running gag when I was thinking about that just the hour before.

Hamazura with Hysteria mode, huh.... He would have a trigger, but it wouldn't be arousal. His trigger is actual hysteria and panic. He gets into a situation that is so out of his depth that it makes him snap and go into Hysteria Mode.

Can anyone else imagine a crazy, screaming Hamazura jumping around like a monkey while chucking knives, shooting desert eagles, and (this is just my rule of cool talking) somehow catching bullets in his teeth?
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Old 2013-08-31, 23:29   Link #4438
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Here is the second snippet for you demino and anyone else who wanted to read it. It's longer though, but I'm sure at least someone will get some enjoyment out of it.

Spoiler for Second Snippet for A Certain Highschool Student:
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Old 2013-08-31, 23:38   Link #4439
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Here is the second snippet for you demino and anyone else who wanted to read it. It's longer though, but I'm sure at least someone will get some enjoyment out of it.

Spoiler for Second Snippet for A Certain Highschool Student:
.... That's it. You need to make MOAR.
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Old 2013-08-31, 23:40   Link #4440
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I need to save my humor for my own fic, you know.

Can't use all my material in these snippets; I just do it to give you guys some inspiration.
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