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Old 2013-09-27, 15:22   Link #5261
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I'm kidding Ferret, I'm kidding!

That's for later.
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Old 2013-09-27, 15:24   Link #5262
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<----Had his classes cancelled today.

2,000 words of hardcore AcceleratorxHamazura already. Ain't I a stinker?
Who is the uke and who is the seme?
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Old 2013-09-27, 20:38   Link #5263
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*paradrops in*

Sup, all. I was (admittedly rather narcissistically ) searching for discussions of In Memoriam around the web, and this thread turned up.

It's always nice to get a little unadulterated criticism, especially if it's something I can fix without having to alter or retcon existing material. That said, there were a couple things I wanted to address.

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I don't understand this. Touma felt the heat from the magically ignited flames? Shouldn't he felt resistant to it? just like innocentius which is 3000 degree Celsius that burns metal at close range. If touma isn't immune to this kind of side effects (as long as supernaturally conducted) then his dead already just in vol 1.

The after effect or damage to surrounding can't be negated but the side effect can't be lessen or completely negated by IB.
Just like Touma's passive IPD nullification in IM doesn't work quite the same way as Imagine Breaker does in canon, Stephen Magnus's fire spells in IM don't work quite the same way as Stiyl Magnus's do in canon. The fire spell in the IM chapter most definitely did not involve 3000-degree temperatures, which is probably a good thing, as it would have instantaneously killed Touma, Index, Stephen, and probably everyone within a few blocks! (Seriously, that's comparable to the temperature at the surface of a white dwarf, or the temperature of the air a couple hundred meters from a nuclear explosion. Convection effects alone should be practically vaporizing everything.) Instead, it warped the autoignition temperature of the materials in Touma's dorm building so that the entire thing would burn at relatively low temperatures.

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Let me clarify what I meant there.

In Index, we don't know how IB works, exactly. We know several things about it, but it parameters are still somewhat mysterious. Because of that, it exist in a state of flux.

What In Memoriam has done is provide exact parameters from the science side, but internally speaking they don't make sense.
What specifically doesn't make sense? I would be glad to clarify it if possible, or perhaps even alter it if you can convince me it's not internally consistent.
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Old 2013-09-27, 21:02   Link #5264
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First off, welcome to the TAMNI Fanfiction Thread, where we come up with crazy ideas and come up with even crazier crack.

It's nice to see another new face in this thread.

It seems like a whole bunch of people with big stories are here....
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Old 2013-09-27, 22:02   Link #5265
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FF.net's forums for TAMNI suck, very few places to go to converse about a franchise we actually enjoy.

I found it out of a combination of boredom and genuine curiosity.

Don't regret it one bit either.
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Old 2013-09-27, 23:07   Link #5266
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So...hum, hello Shockz, I guess?

That makes you the 2nd SpaceBattler I know being here, with Flere.

Kinda weird.

Anyway, welcome aboard, hope you will enjoy the ride. Like omega said, we are kinda running on crack as of recently, with a few big names in TAMNI fanfiction dropping by sometimes (and yes, Ferret, you are right, the forums on FF do suck, we might have to remedy to the situation). I'm pretty green myself, having signed in July.

All of this to say, well, greetings to you.
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But more important than any of these was the vast, accretive weight of small things, from planes which hadnít crashed to men and women who had come to the correct place at the perfect time and thus founded generations. He saw kisses exchanged in doorways and wallets returned and men who had come to a splitting of the way and chosen the right fork. He saw a thousand random meetings that werenít random, ten thousand right decisions, a hundred thousand right answers, a million acts of unacknowledged kindness.

For every brick that landed on the ground instead of some little kidís head, for every tornado that missed the trailer park, for every missile that didnít fly, for every hand stayed from violence, there was the Tower.

óThe Dark Tower, Wolves of the Calla
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Old 2013-09-28, 04:36   Link #5267
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Hmmm I think the problem I have now with Fremea is tat I'm not sure how I can make her come alive so to speak. Also, I can't imagine a scenario where Vento is teaching her how to perform a German Suplex.
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Old 2013-09-28, 08:50   Link #5268
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Hmmm I think the problem I have now with Fremea is tat I'm not sure how I can make her come alive so to speak. Also, I can't imagine a scenario where Vento is teaching her how to perform a German Suplex.
Revive her via magic/science,
Time-travel
Dimension hopping
Make it an AU or kill Vento.

It is a fanfic so there is lots of options.
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Old 2013-09-28, 09:39   Link #5269
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can anyone here write a good fremea?

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refined FSN/TAMNI xover

Kamijou Touma and his family are caught in the great Fukyuki fire. All around him, people die. But he survives with the power of his right hand. As everyone around him burns, he himself is miraculously untouched by the flames. Emiya Kiritsugu finds the boy passed out from inhaling too much smoke. Kamijou awakens inside a hospital, the man named Kiritsugu is here. Kamijou wonders where his parents and cousin are, but he remembers the fire, he remembers screaming, he remembers being the only one unhurt. And for for some reason, that thought pains him more than those flames ever would. Why did he survive? He believes that such a thing is misfortune. Kiritsugu tells the young man that surviving is not misfortune, even if the boy curses the fact he is alive, Kiritsugu makes it a point to let the boy know that there is at least one man who is grateful for his survival. weeks pass, Kiritsugu visits Kamijou often. Kamijou has been offered to be cared for by his aunt and uncle, but he refuses adamantly. He still feels guilt over not being able to protect his cousin, their daughter. He can't face them. In the face of living alone, Kiritsugu offer to be Kamijou's guardian for the time being, until those wounds from the fire heal. Kamijou grows up in the Emiya household, not knowing about what kind of person his guardian is. Kiritsugu realizes that Kamijou possesses a power that destroys magic after noticing his wards being eradicated whenever Kamijou passes by. He wants to say something, but relents in the end. He thinks this is as good a time as any to leave his life as a magus behind. And with one of the most powerful relics in history still planted inside him, it would be better to take everything with him to the grave. He signs a will to let Kamijou inherit his estate.

Kiritsugu eventually succumbs to cancer and leaves Kamijou alone. The boy is looked after by the local yakuza. Though Kamijou dislikes the yakuza, the boss who is a friend of Kiritsugu takes a liking to the young man's rambunctious attitude. Years later, Kamijou decides to visit his father's grave one day, unlike most japanese, Kiritsugu had specifically requested to be buried instead of cremated. But what Kamijou finds is a hooded figure digging up his benefactor's grave. A fight ensues with Kamijou overpowering the unknown bandit with his right hand despite the strange powers the bandit used. Kamijou resolves to bury the desecrated grave again, when a little girl's voice calls over his shoulder.

"Too late huh? With this, saber will definitely be that person. Emiya was truly a despicable man, don't you think so? Onii-chan."
Dude, you're forcing it too much. To begin with, I don't think there is a way to introduce Kamijou to the FSN setting and make it look credible. If you really want to make a ToAru-x-Fate crossover, I suggest something more along the lines of what they did in EXTRA: just take the basic ideas behind the Holy Grail War and create a whole new setting based on it.
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Old 2013-09-28, 09:44   Link #5270
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It was an idea bred out of curiosity. I was imagining a holy grail war where Kamijou Touma has to fight his way through the 7 magi, end up raising all the flags and keep them, and then face down full power Emiya Shirou and see whose conviction is superior.

Plus it's hilarious to imagine heroic spirits losing to a single hit. Ea meets IB.
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Old 2013-09-28, 09:52   Link #5271
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Ea is probably one of those things that can surpass IB's negation. Though he could more than likely use his "disruption" method to throw it off course from himself.
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Old 2013-09-28, 09:53   Link #5272
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A Certain Destructive Meltdowner Chapter 4 is up.

http://m.fanfiction.net/s/9670267/4/...ive-Meltdowner
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Old 2013-09-28, 10:08   Link #5273
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A Certain Destructive Meltdowner Chapter 4 is up.

http://m.fanfiction.net/s/9670267/4/...ive-Meltdowner
Am I the only one who doesn't like this fic?
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But more important than any of these was the vast, accretive weight of small things, from planes which hadnít crashed to men and women who had come to the correct place at the perfect time and thus founded generations. He saw kisses exchanged in doorways and wallets returned and men who had come to a splitting of the way and chosen the right fork. He saw a thousand random meetings that werenít random, ten thousand right decisions, a hundred thousand right answers, a million acts of unacknowledged kindness.

For every brick that landed on the ground instead of some little kidís head, for every tornado that missed the trailer park, for every missile that didnít fly, for every hand stayed from violence, there was the Tower.

óThe Dark Tower, Wolves of the Calla
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Old 2013-09-28, 10:11   Link #5274
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A Certain Destructive Meltdowner Chapter 4 is up.

http://m.fanfiction.net/s/9670267/4/...ive-Meltdowner
Yes! Thank you.
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Old 2013-09-28, 10:37   Link #5275
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Seriously, AcceleratorxHamazura funny as hell to write.

Spoiler for World's End C2 excerpt:

And yeah, forget about a chapter this week. I'm going to make the next one big to get this shit really going.
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Old 2013-09-28, 11:30   Link #5276
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With a finely tailored knife and good aim, Hamazura cuts bits of onions without getting a string in his eyes and throws a handful into the pan along with unnamed spices. Hamazura starts cracking eggs then mixing butter with them, all while stirring. He then asks offhandedly, ďYou want some, Accel?Ē

ďÖoi, whatís with the nickname all the sudden?Ē
It feels funny for a character to actually address him as "Accel" Like hearing someone say "LOL" out loud. I approve.
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Old 2013-09-28, 12:10   Link #5277
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Oh god, I actually typed "string" instead of "sting". OOPS MY HAND SLIPPED.
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Old 2013-09-28, 12:17   Link #5278
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Revive her via magic/science,
Time-travel
Dimension hopping
Make it an AU or kill Vento.

It is a fanfic so there is lots of options.
It's Fremea, the younger sister, not Frenda.

Kyon, lol at the snippet. Hamazura, the Emiya Shirou of this universe!
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But more important than any of these was the vast, accretive weight of small things, from planes which hadnít crashed to men and women who had come to the correct place at the perfect time and thus founded generations. He saw kisses exchanged in doorways and wallets returned and men who had come to a splitting of the way and chosen the right fork. He saw a thousand random meetings that werenít random, ten thousand right decisions, a hundred thousand right answers, a million acts of unacknowledged kindness.

For every brick that landed on the ground instead of some little kidís head, for every tornado that missed the trailer park, for every missile that didnít fly, for every hand stayed from violence, there was the Tower.

óThe Dark Tower, Wolves of the Calla
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Old 2013-09-28, 12:35   Link #5279
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Am I the only one who doesn't like this fic?
Might I ask why you don't like it?
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Old 2013-09-28, 12:48   Link #5280
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Ea is probably one of those things that can surpass IB's negation. Though he could more than likely use his "disruption" method to throw it off course from himself.
It can of its full powered destruction mode but if its the little attacks that its been using against saber on fate route then it could be negated. Plus if Touma can get near (if he can with gate of babylon) then he can destroy EA.

Now the problem is Gil won't be just standing there. It would be GoB and EA spam. His chains is useless because Touma isn't divine.

It would be a hard press battle just to come near the guy and he won't be just standing at one point though that could be possible because the golden king is just that arrogant.
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