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Old 2013-10-18, 22:12   Link #5581
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I was wrong D:

So off to germany we go!
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Old 2013-10-18, 22:18   Link #5582
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I liked it, but I kind of felt like Accelerator's awakened state was defeated too quickly.

@Demino: Good, keep it up. I'd love to see a full fic out of this.
Touma wanted to finish the fight quickly to minimize the damage that Accelerator could do after going through the Awakening.

Now I have a few possibilities as to how to start the next chapter...

1)Saten Ruiko finds out who the Sleeping Dragon is after Uiharu accidentally lets her see footage of Touma vs Accelerator.

2) Touma meets Aiwass.

Which do you guys think would be a better starting point?
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Old 2013-10-18, 22:21   Link #5583
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Saten professing her undying love to Touma and wanting him to father her babies XD
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Old 2013-10-18, 22:21   Link #5584
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I'd go with the Ruiko thing. Aiwass is a meaty subject, probably better to save it for later, especially since you've sped things up quite a bit, plot wise.
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Old 2013-10-18, 22:44   Link #5585
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@omega: yeah, like everyone else I suggest you go the Saten route, Aiwass is definitely for much later, introducing it this early could possibly make you run out of ideas, especially how it is possibly the answer to IT, IB, Aeons and the rest. Take your Myth Arc slowly, don't rush it, of course your readers are just waiting to know the Reveal, but after enjoying a few adventures and comedy.
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I was wrong D:

So off to germany we go!
Just want to point out that it's not really a problem for the Brunhild meeting when we think about it, I mean VWalkyries are also in Germanic mythology, especially in the Nibelunglied. You could also make Touma and co. chase after her to Scandinavia for whatever reason.

Now awful it is to be without,
as blood-red rack races overhead;
is the welkin gory with warriors' blood
as we valkyries war-songs chanted.
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Old 2013-10-18, 22:48   Link #5586
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That makes sense but a little continuation just to paint why Orianna and Kanzaki were so upset. Random harem violence isn't my thing after all.

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The lot of them got off the plane once it landed. The countless procedures that followed standard flight giving them time to think. Or more in Orianna's case, cool down. She was pretty angry after all. There wasn't a single moment she chould reach her hand over to the boy with mother hen sitting right next to him. Such fun she could have had! Ofcourse nothing lascivious, maybe just a few taps, rubs and leaning in the right places would rile him up enough to make him blush. She wasn't a floozy by any chance. Orianna just found the young man's infatuated face cute. She even had a plan to get him drunk by spiking his drink, but the tourist guide saw her and assumed she was trying to drink on the job. Needless to say she was very much in a foul mood from boredom and having her plans fall through.

Kanzaki Kaori was pretty much in the same way as Orianna. She stood with her arms folded, unintentionally pushing up her sizable bossom. She was waiting for her Shichiten Shichitou at the luggage conveyor. It was bad enough airport security kept her away from her beloved blade, but the nerve of that Orianna. Reaching for a person's inner thigh area is not proper under any circumstances even under pains of death! Okay maybe not pains of death but still! Kanzaki groaned as she held her face in both hands. It was warm, a sure sign she was blushing. “That Orianna...”, Kanzaki hissed. When she had initially been seated at the window, she'd been staring at Orianna the whole time the second she got wind of the blonde's attempts. Thankfully it ceased but only when she paid attention. Miss tour guide thought she was afraid of heights, despite her denials, and swapped their seats. It was an arduous hour and a half of having her nerves frayed.

Unbeknownst to both of them, they both had one common foe that they were thinking of.

Just who was that woman!? Getting friendly with Touma like that!
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Old 2013-10-18, 23:57   Link #5587
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You know what I just realized?

If I was to do a Judgment Touma with him and Gunha as partners; I know how their roles would be.

Touma would be the good cop, Gunha being the (unintentional) bad cop.

--Scenario--

*Touma and Gunha see someone getting harrassed by thugs*

Touma: Okay, let's try to do this without causing too much trouble.

Gunha: Got it! We'll put those guys on the right path without a problem and lots of guts!

Touma: *Sighs* I'll do the talking...

Gunha: *Thumbs up* I'll handle the guts!

*Approaches thugs*

Touma: Hey, you three, don't you guys have anything better to do than harass a middle-schooler?

Thug 1: *Sneer* You trying to pick a fight with us ya bastard!?

Thug 2: Piss off ya scrawny fuck.

Touma: *Nonchalontly displays armband* Can't do that, but if cooperate and leave her alone, nothing bad's gotta happen and you won't be taken in.

Thug 3: *Gives the bird* Fuck Judgment, fuck you, and fuck yer friend too.

Thug 2: *Chuckles* I would love to see you pieces of shit try to take us anywhere.

Touma: *Fukou-da-sigh* This is the last-

Gunha: *Points at Thug 2* You must have some guts to talk back to a Judgment officer; I like that! With guts like yours, you must be strong; so allow me to put it to the ultimate test!

Thug 1: What's that fuck yapping about?

Thug 3: *Shrugs* Dunno.

Gunha: Amazing....

Touma: *Sweating profusely* No, no, no, no, NO!

Gunha: PUUUUUUUNCH!

Touma: FUKOU-DA!!!!
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Old 2013-10-19, 00:06   Link #5588
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well... that escalated quickly O.o
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Old 2013-10-19, 00:06   Link #5589
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Touma would be the good cop, Gunha being the crazy cop.
Fixed because Gunha is Gunha. Nothing more needs to be said.
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Old 2013-10-19, 05:08   Link #5590
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Is there any indication to Brunhild's age?
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Old 2013-10-19, 13:33   Link #5591
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Is there any indication to Brunhild's age?
Nope, none.
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Old 2013-10-19, 13:52   Link #5592
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Another double post...

Beginning of An End Chapter 3 is up.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9748722/...ning-Of-An-End

Apparently, Touma can use Longinus from Evangelion now.
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Old 2013-10-19, 22:05   Link #5593
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can someone give me a list of any To aru helloween fanfic?
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Old 2013-10-20, 10:11   Link #5594
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Sadly I don't think there are any...

Hmm... I might have to take a break from Touma's Busy Day to fix that. Although I've been so busy I haven't even started the next chapter yet...

You know what? I'm going to do it. Hopefully I can get it out on Halloween day exactly.
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Old 2013-10-20, 13:09   Link #5595
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What is this I don't even...

I just read something that held enough crack to leave even Kyon frothing at the mouth...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9779320/...-Kamijou-Touma

Don't let the name fool you. I can only explain in two words.

Imagine Dere.

I now want to write something involving that...
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Old 2013-10-20, 13:11   Link #5596
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^^Chaos's fics, actually. Just remember that Halloween's fics for me are horror fics.
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Old 2013-10-20, 13:46   Link #5597
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Alright I need some help for the Halloween fic I'm writing. I've got the storyline already: Touma gets an invitation to a high class Halloween costume party from a unknown person and attends with Index, only to find the Railgun girls are also attending. Meanwhile GROUP has been given orders to infiltrate the same party in order to prevent a coming disaster.

I just need help picking costumes for everybody. I've got some: Touma is going to be a Mummy, Index will be a cat girl, Accelerator will be a vampire, and Musujime will be a bunny girl.

I just need costume ideas for: Misaka, Kuroko, Uiharu, Saten, Misaki, Itsuwa, Kanzaki, Tatemiya, Tsuchimikado, and Etzali.

I know that's a lot but I'd really appreciate any suggestions you can give me.

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What is this I don't even...

I just read something that held enough crack to leave even Kyon frothing at the mouth...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9779320/...-Kamijou-Touma

Don't let the name fool you. I can only explain in two words.

Imagine Dere.

I now want to write something involving that...
That was... I don't know what to say about that. No wait, yes I do, that was awesome
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Old 2013-10-20, 15:37   Link #5598
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Have Accelerator outfit sabotaged by Last Order in some way
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Old 2013-10-20, 16:25   Link #5599
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Itsuwa, Kanzaki
Look back to the canon (*hint-Volumes 16-18). That could be interesting.
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Old 2013-10-20, 16:34   Link #5600
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I thought about that, but their supposed to be undercover so they probably wouldn't choose to wear those. Would probably attract quite a bit of attention.
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