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Old 2013-10-25, 20:24   Link #5621
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So.... I decided to do a Accelerator/Kazari fanfic...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9791313/...-in-the-Leaves

Because.. why not?
Uugh, that fic...you are making me doubt in the WorstxAccelerator pairing! My faith is wavering! In all seriousness that was really good, reminded me of another unusual pairing fic, AcceleratorxFukiyose. Oh, and I really liked the covert pervert Uiharu

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It may have been more accurate to say that she -really- wanted to thank him properly and do very very nice things (to him)
Best lines ever!
And when she talked about a ''secluded spot'', I litteraly lol'ed, she sounded so much like a rapist
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But more important than any of these was the vast, accretive weight of small things, from planes which hadnít crashed to men and women who had come to the correct place at the perfect time and thus founded generations. He saw kisses exchanged in doorways and wallets returned and men who had come to a splitting of the way and chosen the right fork. He saw a thousand random meetings that werenít random, ten thousand right decisions, a hundred thousand right answers, a million acts of unacknowledged kindness.

For every brick that landed on the ground instead of some little kidís head, for every tornado that missed the trailer park, for every missile that didnít fly, for every hand stayed from violence, there was the Tower.

óThe Dark Tower, Wolves of the Calla

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Old 2013-10-26, 00:59   Link #5622
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Here's Chapter 15 of To Ascend for you people.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9605098/15/To-Ascend

Admittedly, this chapter feels rather lackluster in both length (around 4k) and quality (the last segment of the chapter, mostly), considering I didn't really have much creativity this week...

Give some feedback, please. It's always appreciated.

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Old 2013-10-26, 05:04   Link #5623
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Uugh, that fic...you are making me doubt in the WorstxAccelerator pairing! My faith is wavering! In all seriousness that was really good, reminded me of another unusual pairing fic, AcceleratorxFukiyose. Oh, and I really liked the covert pervert Uiharu
Well I think Saten said early in Railgun that Uiharu a rather passionate person who most of time keeps her emotions in strict check and I also concluded that Accelerator saving her life might have just woke up her lust ....

So covert pervert fitted best
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Old 2013-10-26, 08:19   Link #5624
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Here's Chapter 15 of To Ascend for you people.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9605098/15/To-Ascend

Admittedly, this chapter feels rather lackluster in both length (around 4k) and quality (the last segment of the chapter, mostly), considering I didn't really have much creativity this week...

Give some feedback, please. It's always appreciated.
Kamijou's reaction to the Kamijou Faction was hilarious
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Old 2013-10-26, 11:40   Link #5625
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Buahhhhh! It's actually writing! My hand is writing down stuff! WILL I REACH BETA TODAY?!

<---- Is experiencing a good writing day from 10h+ of sleep and water fasting.
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Old 2013-10-26, 16:12   Link #5626
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^Glad to hear it, I want more of that story.

I just finished my Halloween story. It's 15k words. Easily the longest chapter I've ever written. I can't even break it up since there are no natural breaking points.

Now I just need to think of a title and proofread it before Halloween.
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Old 2013-10-26, 16:43   Link #5627
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Considering how my new chapter ends, it's going to fit Halloween...
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Old 2013-10-27, 09:05   Link #5628
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And my Halloween story is up.

That's two holidays I've done Toaru stories for. I might have to do some more.
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Old 2013-10-27, 09:13   Link #5629
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Rubix-chan, you better be ready for beta soon.
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Old 2013-10-27, 12:20   Link #5630
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And my Halloween story is up.

That's two holidays I've done Toaru stories for. I might have to do some more.
That was kind of nice, truthfully. Would've preferred some more shiptease between Touma and the Amakusa girls, but it was good.

Index kind of pissed me off, though...

Ah, Twist of Fate 11 is up.

www.fanfiction.net/s/9539513/11/Twist-of-Fate
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Old 2013-10-27, 12:30   Link #5631
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And my Halloween story is up.

That's two holidays I've done Toaru stories for. I might have to do some more.
Approx halfway through.

Just a heads up, you start calling Misaki Misaka during her and Touma's second scene, when the Employee's attack the pair.

And I'm pretty sure you've made a mistake with the whole Mana-spell-death thing... but I'll finish the fic before getting into that.
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Old 2013-10-27, 12:43   Link #5632
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Approx halfway through.

Just a heads up, you start calling Misaki Misaka during her and Touma's second scene, when the Employee's attack the pair.
Yeah, someone reviewed telling me that. I really should have proofread it another time, but it's so long I just didn't want to

Guess I should go fix that....

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And I'm pretty sure you've made a mistake with the whole Mana-spell-death thing... but I'll finish the fic before getting into that.
Keep in mind it's not supposed to be an immediate thing. Eventually, some esper will cast some sort of magic and it will kill them. That's what he wants. He isn't intending to kill all of them like that.

He also had plans to make a couple of them cast spells but he was already monologue-ing enough so I left that out.

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Index kind of pissed me off, though...
Was it the biting, or the food obsession? I couldn't think of any other way to do humor with her, other than those. She's kind of a 2 dimensional character.

That's why she's missing from Touma's Busy Day
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Old 2013-10-27, 12:48   Link #5633
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Rubix-chan, you better be ready for beta soon.
Hold on. Let me find my grammar hat.
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Old 2013-10-27, 12:51   Link #5634
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@Ilidsor:

Kind of just the whole way she acted, really.

And I suppose you've got something right about the whole 2-d character thing.

It's a good thing I gave her some character development in my fic...
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Old 2013-10-27, 13:09   Link #5635
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Hold on. Let me find my grammar hat.
Get ready, I might reach 8k words on this. Just a little bit left...!
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Old 2013-10-27, 17:55   Link #5636
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Old 2013-10-27, 22:07   Link #5637
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Mugino: End of the line you little fucker. Now we'll see if your dark matter can stand being ripped to shreds on a sub-atomic scale.

Kakine: Pff... Idle threats from someone two ranks lower than me.

Mugino: You seriously want to die don't you? Fine by me dick for brains. I'll show you what the insides of your ass looks like before you die.

Kakine: Oh? And how do you suppose you can do that with your meager powers? That strength only has one application, destruction. Dark Matter is the opposite, it is creation. The power to become eternal and recreate an endless cycle. Dark Matter is a power that far exceeds your imagination. What's more, this endless gap between you and I has been further extended by a simple rumor I've heard and confirmed here and now. *points to Mugino's collar* You lost to a level 0.

Mugino: What of it?

Kakine: As a fellow level 5, I can't imagine the shame you must live through to be beaten by a level 0. what did you call them before? Oh yes, "Shit worth less than trash of those who scavenge trash.". And yet here you stand before me not only with the loss but a symbol of that loss wrapped right around your neck. Much like the number 3 and 5 who are still below me.

Mugino: Tch. For someone who thinks he's so smart you sure are stupid. Dick for brains suits you just fine. All you must think about is boning that Measure heart bitch anyway.

Kakine:... hardly. Though your S&M antics seem to be rubbing off on your choice of wear.

Mugino: How about a little wager savvy?

Kakine: Hmm?

Mugino: You said that losing to a level 0 is worth all the shame of the world but I doubt you'd understand everything I have to say when you're sitting from so far up in your high chair you little baby bitch.

Kakine: Are you telling me to waste my time fighting a level 0?

Mugino: Exactly what I'm saying.

Kakine: There is nothing you can offer me that will make me consider. Even your stop of this inane pursuit isn't worth my time.

Mugino: Then what about my cooperation?

Kakine: Oh?

Mugino: I don't know what your objective is nor do I care. The whole of ITEM is just a puppet of the directors anyway so it doesn't really matter which side we're fighting on, it's enemies on all sides. So I'll say this. You win, ITEM will assist you to its fullest for one mission. Just one.

Kakine: And what if I lose?

Mugino: *sadistic smile and taps at the electrode on her neck* You wear one of these lovely S&M collars too.

Kakine: That is all?

Mugino: That's all.

Kakine:... I suppose giving you the mission details now would save time since my victory is assured. There is no way that a level 0 can overcome my ability, especially with my mastery over it.

Mugino: Mastery? hmhmhmhmhahahahahaa If you think your mastery of your ability will help you then you'll definitely lose to that guy. Let me tell you this. Fighting him is like facing a mirror. Everything about you will be scrutinized, everything ugly and beautiful about yourself you will see. Not your power, yourself. I've given you free advice now show me a good fight. Gahahahaha!

Kakine:...Who is that level 0? For that foul-mouthed MeltDowner to not insult him once even in passing mention.
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Old 2013-10-27, 22:14   Link #5638
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Now that, my good sir/madam, was magnificent.

A good continuation to that chat might involve an awkward Kakine wearing the collar and Mugino wearing a troll grin.
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Old 2013-10-27, 22:23   Link #5639
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Really awkward what if...

kakine's dark matter network split his consciousness into multiple fragments right? There is a psychological theory that every person has a female and male thought patterns. If you are male then your male thought patterns are dominant but you still have female thought patterns, and if you are female you still have female thought patterns. So since Kakine dark matter is spread so thin... what if the female thought patterns of Kakine turned into an individual unit? Then runs into Kami-yan?

Fukou da?
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Old 2013-10-27, 22:33   Link #5640
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Well...

You just found a viable way to pair Female Kakine to Touma without actually genderbending the original.

Hmm...

There's also the possibility that the female unit is what's left instead of Beetle 05 after the chaotic events of NT 6.

demino_hellsin, you just opened up a new (under)world full of possibilities.
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