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Old 2011-03-09, 12:07   Link #961
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^Interesting. However, two thing that bothers me about this fic:

1. Your use "Gakuen Toshi" instead of it's english name "Academy City". Just stick to it's English name.

2. Despite what the Railgun manga shows, it has not been confirm if Touma is able to block a Railgun (which lead to an internet backdraft on this forum). So for safety reason and to avoid another forum war, i suggest you make Touma was able to evade not stop the Railgun.

Except for these two, good work.
PS: When will the part where Touma and Mikoto meet Index come?
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Old 2011-03-10, 09:15   Link #962
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Man it's been ages since i last posted on this place... anyway I started a little side project a few days ago, the idea was to write about the most unlikely pairing I could think for Accelerator and after a little brainstorming session I came up with this...

Spoiler for A little drabble (Contains lots of foul language and tons of references to H stuff, it's Accelerator after all):


So what do you guys think? It's obviously not finished yet, but I'm not really all that confident on it and I'm not sure if I should try to make it a serious comedy or just a pure crack fic.
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Old 2011-03-10, 10:33   Link #963
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^ I can see a crack pairing there. And what scares me is how they look so much alike in terms of aggression.
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Old 2011-03-10, 11:01   Link #964
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Oh my... Oh my god... I need to know what happens next. Seriously, what did Aleister and Kihara-kun do to them? This is the best crack pairing ever.
Damn, now I wonder if Accelerator used his vector ability to do some bedroom acrobatics. Oh, and Vento must be skilled with her mouth considering the divine punishement cross

Poor Last Order really thought Accelerator was burning a kitty alive.
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Old 2011-03-15, 06:03   Link #965
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Poor Last Order really thought Accelerator was burning a kitty alive.
Well... he was lighting a kitten on fire... if you know what I mean

Anyway here's is the first complete chapter:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6825798/1/

Hope is enjoyable at least.
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Old 2011-03-15, 06:59   Link #966
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Well... he was lighting a kitten on fire... if you know what I mean

Anyway here's is the first complete chapter:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6825798/1/

Hope is enjoyable at least.
So much win
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Old 2011-03-15, 09:22   Link #967
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Well... he was lighting a kitten on fire... if you know what I mean

Anyway here's is the first complete chapter:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6825798/1/

Hope is enjoyable at least.
You're GOD dude.
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Old 2011-03-15, 20:27   Link #968
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You're GOD dude.
Thank you, it's good to see borderline insanity being appreciated
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Old 2011-03-17, 20:31   Link #969
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So I was working on my KakinexAccelerator CollegeAU one-shot when I had an ephiphany, and discovered the best crack Yuri pairing evar.

Enter WORSTxAwaki.

So right now it's: KakinexAccelerator (Main), ToumaxMikoto and WorstxAwaki (Side).

Spoiler for I think I came if just a little bit... :
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Old 2011-03-18, 10:55   Link #970
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Here I present A certain College drinking party, chapter 1. Seriously, what drug am I high on? Charlie Sheen?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6833873/1/
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Old 2011-03-18, 14:48   Link #971
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Read and reviewed over on ff but definately deserves an honorable mention here.

I doubt that when (yes when) the time comes that they find Charlie Sheen's bloated drug ravaged body washed up on a beach somewhere, that his level of high can even compare to what goes on in your head.

Bless you. Bless you and that holy mind that dreams up such wonderful stories.

But seriously love your To Aru (and K-ON) fiction they have me in stitches every time.
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Old 2011-03-18, 22:14   Link #972
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Charlie Sheen has flowed through my veins yet again! I'm the warlock!

Spoiler for Srsly WTF:
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Old 2011-03-20, 10:38   Link #973
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Since Fanfiction.net is broken right now, I have two AcceleratorxWorst one-shots waiting to be uploaded, and I'm already working on a third one.

And that one, grace god, is one heck of a beast.

Accel's gonna get some raep love XD

Spoiler for I can't help it!:
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Old 2011-03-20, 11:10   Link #974
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Hey guys , are there a symptoms when Rikou is losing control of her ability? I think she can be dr. House's patient and Accel who will be in House's team will try to stop him from killing her with some of his strange methods to heal his patients
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Old 2011-03-20, 21:22   Link #975
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I just released my fanfic hope you guys can enjoy it

To Aru Majutsu no Index : Alternative Testament
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Old 2011-03-20, 23:19   Link #976
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Okay twist, great start, horrible grammar.

You need a beta.

And please, don't jump Deep Blood. As horrible as the whole thing was, it did have it's highlights that a good writer can work with, Styl's nightmare inducing stripping, Touma WTFPWNing Aurelius, and Himegami.
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Old 2011-03-21, 00:07   Link #977
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Okay twist, great start, horrible grammar.

You need a beta.

And please, don't jump Deep Blood. As horrible as the whole thing was, it did have it's highlights that a good writer can work with, Styl's nightmare inducing stripping, Touma WTFPWNing Aurelius, and Himegami.
Imo you can skip Deep Blood, but you have to find a way to include the more important elements. Volume 2 included abit more details about the dangers of a Grimoire, as well as the introduction of the General Director Aleister and Himegami Aisa.

If it were up to me, Himegami's and Aleister's introduction could be brought forward to the Imaginary Number arc like what the manga did. Aisa's background would be much more simplified as just an exchange student, while you would have to pull back on Aleister's identity for a later period if only just for dramatic sake.

As for the all important Hidden Power of Kamijou Touma, if it were up to me, I would work it into the Angel Fall arc, to have both Kanzaki and Touma fight Misha.
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Old 2011-03-21, 00:34   Link #978
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Okay twist, great start, horrible grammar.

You need a beta.

And please, don't jump Deep Blood. As horrible as the whole thing was, it did have it's highlights that a good writer can work with, Styl's nightmare inducing stripping, Touma WTFPWNing Aurelius, and Himegami.
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Imo you can skip Deep Blood, but you have to find a way to include the more important elements. Volume 2 included abit more details about the dangers of a Grimoire, as well as the introduction of the General Director Aleister and Himegami Aisa.

If it were up to me, Himegami's and Aleister's introduction could be brought forward to the Imaginary Number arc like what the manga did. Aisa's background would be much more simplified as just an exchange student, while you would have to pull back on Aleister's identity for a later period if only just for dramatic sake.

As for the all important Hidden Power of Kamijou Touma, if it were up to me, I would work it into the Angel Fall arc, to have both Kanzaki and Touma fight Misha.
Hmm~ Actually I wanna to add Himegami during Sister Arc ... as she is at Touma's place for a moment before move to Komoe-place (according to the anime)

Aleister .. Yeah, I will put him during Imaginary Number Arc like what the manga did.

There are several reason why I skip Deep Blood Arc (Mainly cause I don't have quite good information about that arc and I can't follow the anime well)
But, I still put some important element to next chapter, I also will give some flashback about this during the chapter that I will be worked

And Grammar huh~ (Any suggestion or can you tell me the reason why my grammar bad or which part the mistake located? I probably can fix it after you explained it directly)

Another thing, beta reader huh~ How I contact them and asks for their help?
I have a friend that quite good in English, and I actually asks his help ... well if it isn't enough that ... I gonna look for beta reader (again how I contact them)

And please understand, English isn't my usual language that I use so ... you know

As for the all important Hidden Power of Kamijou Touma ... I actually can't follow the suggestion cause I also decided to skip that Arc (again ... I don't have good information about that Arc)
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Old 2011-03-21, 01:03   Link #979
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Hmm~ Actually I wanna to add Himegami during Sister Arc ... as she is at Touma's place for a moment before move to Komoe-place (according to the anime)
You can intro her as a minor character like Maika and you can scrap the whole transfer student idea and make her a classmate already. Though with they you have quite abit of characters in that arc.


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As for the all important Hidden Power of Kamijou Touma ... I actually can't follow the suggestion cause I also decided to skip that Arc (again ... I don't have good information about that Arc)
Angel Fall arc is deadly important, the events that happen in that story plays a ridiculous vital portion in the overall story. Not only with the introduction of Angels and Saints, but on a more character level it introduce Kaori's background and the Amakusa.

Though not as important, or maybe it is, it introduce the Kamijou family.
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Old 2011-03-21, 01:46   Link #980
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You can intro her as a minor character like Maika and you can scrap the whole transfer student idea and make her a classmate already. Though with they you have quite abit of characters in that arc.




Angel Fall arc is deadly important, the events that happen in that story plays a ridiculous vital portion in the overall story. Not only with the introduction of Angels and Saints, but on a more character level it introduce Kaori's background and the Amakusa.

Though not as important, or maybe it is, it introduce the Kamijou family.
I see~ Oh well~ I will add it as important chapter list, but I still not add Deep Blood one.

Now~ I still wonder what I gonna to do to last 4 OC (and there will be no more of them) that going to appeared after 3 story arc (LN Vol 5)

Ah later~

Again , What Misaka do when that part (Angel Fall come)? Don't have any clue ... as there is no info about it
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