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Old 2009-06-02, 22:19   Link #141
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So I wrote the first chapter, made a Fanfiction account, then got slapped in the face. "Short 2 day waiting period" to upload stories? Short my arse.

It's getting posted to the forum here. Linkie linke!

http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?t=82294

Read and review. Give criticism and suggestions for where to go next or what to include later, and I will bear your children!

That being said, the next chapter will be the only canonical bend, the botched ambush on Squad 7 and the following pursuit, into the meeting of that Unit with 29-4... and the conflict... :3
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Old 2009-06-02, 23:37   Link #142
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Just read your story. Sounds like someone has read a few wartime novels. That's good; makes our fanfics that much more realistic.

When you upload it to fanfiction.net, though, rate it M. Definitely.

Oh, and it was good. Very good.
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Old 2009-06-03, 03:07   Link #143
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haha...decide against the game's censoring of gore?..well I agree with Runty about you read a few novels, the description is very realistic and well done. I'll definitely be looking forward to any new chapters.
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Old 2009-06-04, 22:20   Link #144
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It's uploaded to the Valkyria Chronicles fanfiction now, under the M rated section. :/

I've decided to go ahead and fully embrace the shipping. After all, what else am I supposed to do with that aspect of Isara? Make her a nun? (BOoooring.)

It hasn't shown up yet, but it apparently takes a few minutes, which I don't have to wait, so no linkie yet.

Read it! Review it! Love it!

And blast me with any hating you might have, I thrive on it.

I've deviated from my original course of action. It seemed a bit... forced. This seems a bit more natural, if a bit more along the lines of "the stars align just like this". But in the end, isn't that what all stories are about?
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Old 2009-06-04, 22:51   Link #145
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You know, working on my Lone Wulf fanfic has given me time to think up a few new ideas for another fanfic someone could write. I might end up writing this idea myself, but I wouldn't be starting it until AFTER Lone Wulf is done.
Spoiler for My idea:
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Old 2009-06-05, 00:17   Link #146
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I review somehow doing it though. Can provide links to those interested.
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Old 2009-06-05, 03:35   Link #147
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It's uploaded to the Valkyria Chronicles fanfiction now, under the M rated section. :/

I've decided to go ahead and fully embrace the shipping. After all, what else am I supposed to do with that aspect of Isara? Make her a nun? (BOoooring.)

It hasn't shown up yet, but it apparently takes a few minutes, which I don't have to wait, so no linkie yet.

Read it! Review it! Love it!

And blast me with any hating you might have, I thrive on it.

I've deviated from my original course of action. It seemed a bit... forced. This seems a bit more natural, if a bit more along the lines of "the stars align just like this". But in the end, isn't that what all stories are about?
Anyone knows who all the Darcen girl have same style haircut? Nadine/Isara and
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, all have the same hair style.
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Old 2009-06-05, 15:44   Link #148
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Just read your story. Sounds like someone has read a few wartime novels. That's good; makes our fanfics that much more realistic.

When you upload it to fanfiction.net, though, rate it M. Definitely.

Oh, and it was good. Very good.
Seconded; I'll be keeping an eye on this as it develops.

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You know, working on my Lone Wulf fanfic has given me time to think up a few new ideas for another fanfic someone could write...
No; that's a new one on me. Sounds interesting, certainly.
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Old 2009-06-05, 17:19   Link #149
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Anyone knows who all the Darcen girl have same style haircut? Nadine/Isara and
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, all have the same hair style.
Errrr, how does this relate? Hair, hair, hair... *peruses stories*

Oh, and I've a link now!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5112776/...saras_Survival

In further news, the story is definitely deviating heavily. I timed some events a little differently, but the outcome is going to be drastically different. Just what, though, will be... written soon. :3

I'll be updating at least one short blurb every three days. Send a huge KICK IN ARSE PM if I don't.

And thanks for all the watching! PLEASE comment, even if it's nothing more than "I like." Charismatic people thrive on any sort of response.

And as for the Code Geass thing, unfortunately it is my regret to say that I've not enough familiarity with it to give an opinion. Sorry. :/
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Old 2009-06-05, 23:36   Link #150
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Updates once again in FF.net

Especially with Edy's story.

Perhaps I should start talking about the proposed dark Welkin/Selvaria story I have in mind soon.
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Old 2009-06-06, 22:37   Link #151
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Perhaps I should start talking about the proposed dark Welkin/Selvaria story I have in mind soon.
I left my review.

And yes, yes, you should.
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Old 2009-06-07, 06:52   Link #152
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Finally i got some free time to do my fanfiction suggestions. For those of you wondering when will i continue my SelvaraixWelkin story don't worry, i write one soon once i figure out on what to do with the story.
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Old 2009-06-07, 17:04   Link #153
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I'm right now watching a Band of Brothers marathon on the History Channel, and it is a real inspirational source for people who want to write good war stories. One episode in particular, Episode 6: Bastogne, gave me a good fanfic idea.
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The idea for this story is highly inspired by a soldier in WWII, Eugene Roe (1921-1998). He was a medic, and Band of Brothers showed he went through some real s*** in the war (well, who doesn't?).
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Old 2009-06-08, 06:41   Link #154
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I left my review.

And yes, yes, you should.
Maybe soon.

Or maybe when they're a demand for it.
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Old 2009-06-08, 19:06   Link #155
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He was a medic, and Band of Brothers showed he went through some real s*** in the war (well, who doesn't?).

Ohho, stealing my ideas now are we? A medical man instead of a warrior... sounds like the entire premise behind mine... I see how it is...

On a more serious note, definitely do that. Band of Brothers is one of those "books" I've read, amongst plenty of others.

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Maybe soon.

Or maybe when they're a demand for it.
I DEMAND IT THIS VERY INSTANT. DO IT. DO IT NOW.
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Old 2009-06-08, 19:36   Link #156
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Ohho, stealing my ideas now are we? A medical man instead of a warrior... sounds like the entire premise behind mine... I see how it is...

On a more serious note, definitely do that. Band of Brothers is one of those "books" I've read, amongst plenty of others.
Oh, my bad. I actually didn't realize that I did that. I was just caught up in the idea while watching the HBO series.

Still, I think Fina could use the attention.
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Old 2009-06-08, 20:34   Link #157
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I DEMAND IT THIS VERY INSTANT. DO IT. DO IT NOW.
This you should do it.
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Old 2009-06-08, 22:29   Link #158
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Hmmm... just two?
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Old 2009-06-09, 01:24   Link #159
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Do it!!!!

Actually you won't believe how many books is published around Easy Company. I have two myself, but also ran across three more authored by different people in the company. So yea they are pretty famous to be sure.
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Old 2009-06-09, 15:18   Link #160
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Hmmm... just two?
Do you seriously want me to make alts just to make you do it <___<
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