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Old 2009-08-11, 16:22   Link #41
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New shooting star and a person. (Thanks for the advice, vandakiara.) Comments?
I agree that it looks better with Arawn standing there but he sticks out too much, what I mean is to me you can tell he's been dropped in, (ok weird when I looked down to Topic Review to study the sig more, Arawn isnt there.... New tab!) I really like the star though, you did better then me at animation.

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Old 2009-08-11, 17:54   Link #42
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I agree that it looks better with Arawn standing there but he sticks out too much, what I mean is to me you can tell he's been dropped in,
Hm, I'll see what I can do for that.

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(ok weird when I looked down to Topic Review to study the sig more, Arawn isnt there.... New tab!)
Am I supposed to understand what you're talking about here??

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I really like the star though, you did better then me at animation.
Your first try is far superior to my first try. I couldn't even show my first try. It was that bad.

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Or maybe "a man's home is his castle"?
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Old 2009-08-11, 19:24   Link #43
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First attempt for this month just a rough draft still working alot more on it



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Old 2009-08-11, 19:27   Link #44
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@Endrance - well I like it but his right arm moving too is a bit awkward... on the other hand, I'm not really good at C&C about animations so it might be just me x.x
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Old 2009-08-11, 20:15   Link #45
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Yeh i just noticed that i didnt even see it before thanks

Heres the version without the moving arm

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Old 2009-08-12, 08:22   Link #46
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@vandakiara & ganbaru
v4?


removed the pyreflies and I kept the color style of v3
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Old 2009-08-12, 08:28   Link #47
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@Frailty - ah now that looks better only... will it be like that in the end? with no border or text? it seems great as it is but it feels something is missing...
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Old 2009-08-12, 09:17   Link #48
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@Frality the best version so far, but adding a botder and a (small) text should improuve it
@ Endrance, not being a animator myself, I canMt really advice you on the animation but V2 seem better to me .
@LKK I would try to make fit more the guy on the picture, maybe by darkening it ?

2 others verion of my sig , both short, one with more color. C&C would be welcome.






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Old 2009-08-12, 09:29   Link #49
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@Frality the best version so far, but adding a botder and a (small) text should improuve it
@ Endrance, not being a animator myself, I canMt really advice you on the animation but V2 seem better to me .
@LKK I would try to make fit more the guy on the picture, maybe by darkening it ?

2 others verion of my sig , both short, one with more color. C&C would be welcome.






I like the second one more but how can I say it?... it still seems too yellowish... and I don't think the disappearing name looks good... sorry x.x I feel the only thing I can do is criticizing ._.
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Old 2009-08-12, 10:36   Link #50
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2 others verion of my sig , both short, one with more color. C&C would be welcome.






I definitely like the color vers better but yeah some parts to appear to be a bit yellow, mostly just by her ear/hair. I do like the disappearing text though I dont know if you can crop her hair in the transparent area better, or maybe blend but it looks a little rough to me
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Old 2009-08-12, 10:53   Link #51
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Yeh i just noticed that i didnt even see it before thanks

Heres the version without the moving arm

This version is better. : D

The text placement feels a bit out of place though.
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Old 2009-08-12, 11:31   Link #52
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New shooting star and a person. (Thanks for the advice, vandakiara.) Comments?
Hmmm... well, the animation looks like a very good add, but about the person in the lower right corner, I don't know, he jumps oit of the sig but I can't tell exactly why... maybe blending him a bit more with the bg would had a better efect.

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The animation is good, but the text doesn't convince me at all. :?

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@vandakiara & ganbaru
v4?


removed the pyreflies and I kept the color style of v3
C&C?
It still looks great.

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This one looks better.
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Old 2009-08-12, 11:34   Link #53
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Thanks, thankfully working on ver 2 was better since I had a pretty good idea of what I could cut to save on file size. I still have a headache though

Ok worked on the timing of the lightning and changed its position based on what LKK-Sensei said.

Ver 2


Ver 1 for comparison



Hmm need to make the sky darker...

Edit: urgh imageshack why do you hate me lately...
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Old 2009-08-12, 12:05   Link #54
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Thanks, thankfully working on ver 2 was better since I had a pretty good idea of what I could cut to save on file size. I still have a headache though

Ok worked on the timing of the lightning and changed its position based on what LKK-Sensei said.

Ver 2


Ver 1 for comparison



Hmm need to make the sky darker...

Edit: urgh imageshack why do you hate me lately...
The concept is quite nice but the lightning isn't very good.
Maybe these will be of some help.
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Old 2009-08-12, 12:15   Link #55
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The concept is quite nice but the lightning isn't very good.
Maybe these will be of some help.
I was using the lightning tutoral But I think I can fit in those brushes 8D Thanks!
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Old 2009-08-12, 12:29   Link #56
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and now, my turn... can't decide on what to do D: and I'm really in love with ilya and berserker so... Solace, you talked about big and small...

would this image work for example?

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or this? *have to post the link cause it's HUGE resolution*
Yes this works.
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Old 2009-08-12, 13:49   Link #57
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Thanks, thankfully working on ver 2 was better since I had a pretty good idea of what I could cut to save on file size. I still have a headache though

Ok worked on the timing of the lightning and changed its position based on what LKK-Sensei said.

Ver 2
I like the new positioning much better. But I agree with escimo that the bolt itself could use some work. Maybe one with a few branching arms??
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Old 2009-08-12, 14:58   Link #58
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Version 3.

I worked on blending Arawn into the picture better and added text. Comments?

Spoiler for Version 2 for reference:
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Old 2009-08-12, 15:05   Link #59
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@LKK - that's much better - love the way the render blends with the bg now however I only noticed the text when you pointed it out... maybe it shouldn't blend so much...
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Old 2009-08-12, 15:32   Link #60
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I had real trouble making this AS safe as a result lost bunch of chunk on left and the right side. Anyhow any C&C? please?
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